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Weeaboolits
Jul 1, 2007, 01:27 AM
-Foodstuffs & Floppy Disks-

Episode One:

"Where the hell am I?" I wondered aloud as I trudged through the desolate wasteland; nothingnss spread in every direction, as far as the eye could see. Scattered along the ground there lay pairs of small metal tubes, countless in number.

Flashlights? I thought to myself at first, however; upon closer inspection , they were lacking bulbs, though a few of them exuded a faint blue glow from one end, further adding to their mystery.

Suddenly, there sounded a loud screech from behind me, I whirled around to see what source of the sound could have been, and what I saw next confounded me to no end.

When I turned around, I came face-to-face with a pub. I knew for a fact that it hadn't been there a moment ago, perhaps I was loing my mind.

"Let go!" shouted a voice from within the pub, "It's my turn, dammit!"

Next, I heard a thunderous crash, followed by another loud screech; I could hear muffled shouting from within the pub, I wondered whether or not I should go in, but in the end, curiosity got the better of me.

The moment I stepped foot into the pub, I wished that I hadn't.

"'Children behave!' That's what they say when we're together!" sang the voice from before in a tone so terrible off-key that I could swear that I felt blood dripping from my ears, "And watch how you play!" he continued as I chanced a glance at the source of this abomination to music, he was clad in all black, save for a small blue pin on the front of his hat, from his expression, he seemed completely oblivious to how soul crushingly terrible his singing was.

I ventured another step into the pub, only to trip and fall headlong into the nearest table.

"Trying to get away, into the night..." he trailed off as the mic died, I realized that I must've tripped over the microphone wire.

"Oh, thank God..." muttered a blue-haired man clad in all white who was sitting at a nearby table.

"What!" the black clad singer from before cried, throwing the microphone out the window, "Who the hell ate my sammich?!" he shouted vehemently, his eyes aflame with rage "Was it you?!" he demanded, rounding on me.

"Huhwha?" I stammered, taking a step back, "What sandwich?"

"My sammich!" he shouted, "The most epic sammich in all of recorded history!"

"Was it ham?" asked an odd feline looking fellow in the corner.

"Huh? Yeah..." he muttered, somewhat calmer now, "Why?"

"I ate it."

"Noooooo!" He cried, blowing up a table, "That was my lunch! I've been looking forward to that all day!"

"Lunch? It's past eight."

"I had a large breakfast."

At this point, I decided I should leave, but when I took a step toward the door, I found that there was nothing there for my foot to land on.

"Oh, shi-" I cried as I fell into the abyss, what a lame way to be written out of the story!

End/ep1






Notes: Yeah, I wrote the narrating character out in the first ep, I went there. T_T

This ep didn't quite turn out how I'd liked, I don't normally write in first person, in the next episode it'll be in third. I'll probly just throw everyones names in off the bat instead of trying to introduce them properly, as I'm not very good at that kind of thing yet. ._.

Airalean
Jul 1, 2007, 01:38 AM
Interesting. I liked it http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Weeaboolits
Jul 1, 2007, 01:39 AM
http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Airalean
Jul 1, 2007, 01:41 AM
Good Job! http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

HAYABUSA-FMW-
Jul 1, 2007, 01:42 AM
You should go into the loli base next and explode it Resident Evil style complete with non innocent-giganto loli-Tyrant last bosses with rocket launchers. Kickass fighting games with action missiles.

Wonder who was the guy singing karaoke. And if those flashlights were just bottles of GOD, empty and otherwise.

Chuck_Norris
Jul 1, 2007, 01:42 AM
eh it was ok, but you need a guy named bob in it.

Weeaboolits
Jul 1, 2007, 01:43 AM
Umcle might be in it later. ._.

Airalean
Jul 1, 2007, 01:47 AM
On 2007-06-30 23:42, HAYABUSA-FMW- wrote:
You should go into the loli base next and explode it Resident Evil style complete with non innocent-giganto loli-Tyrant last bosses with rocket launchers. Kickass fighting games with action missiles.





I agree http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif



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Weeaboolits
Jul 1, 2007, 01:48 AM
On 2007-06-30 23:42, HAYABUSA-FMW- wrote:
You should go into the loli base next and explode it Resident Evil style complete with non innocent-giganto loli-Tyrant last bosses with rocket launchers. Kickass fighting games with action missiles.I may do something to that affect in a later episode.


On 2007-06-30 23:42, HAYABUSA-FMW- wrote:
Wonder who was the guy singing karaoke.http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w8/Ronin_Cooper/Forum/ronincooperthumbsupcolortransg.gif


On 2007-06-30 23:42, HAYABUSA-FMW- wrote:
And if those flashlights were just bottles of GOD, empty and otherwise.They were Yamatos, actually. ;]

HAYABUSA-FMW-
Jul 1, 2007, 01:52 AM
Ahaz, I would have (the discko now) known if they were thrown all over the place, or maybe not since the GOD bottles also get thrown all over the place.

Weeaboolits
Jul 1, 2007, 01:55 AM
I thought that the fact that they had a blue glow and were in pairs would give it away. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime2.gif

HAYABUSA-FMW-
Jul 1, 2007, 01:56 AM
But they aren't lightsabers, they don't get turned off right?

Weeaboolits
Jul 1, 2007, 02:00 AM
They do run out of power when they've been laying there on the ground with no maintenence for god knows how long, though. 'specially when you go slingin' 'em about all willy nilly.

HAYABUSA-FMW-
Jul 1, 2007, 02:07 AM
Freakin' Schligger.

Zorafim
Jul 1, 2007, 03:22 AM
I don't know what I just read, but I liked it.

Sord
Jul 1, 2007, 11:50 AM
wow, your writing capability is much higher than I was expecting >_>

you actually do a good job of first person there, your vocab isn't utterly dull either (like a lot of other people's stuff I read : / .)

hell, I'd say the biggest thing wrong with it would be it's to short and not enough happens. I'd give you some "I approve" picture but I don't have one currently (or rather, one I like.)

Weeaboolits
Jul 1, 2007, 12:12 PM
Thanks, I don't usually write in first person, and I haven't been writing much lately, so I'm a tad rusty. I'm a bit busy today, so I may not be on much, and I certainly won't have time to work on ep2 today. ._.

Tact
Jul 1, 2007, 12:30 PM
Haha, I stole the sandwichsammich. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif

Sgt_Shligger
Jul 1, 2007, 01:09 PM
Hey, I insulted someone!