DonRoyale
Aug 9, 2007, 05:28 PM
I think a few of you remember back almost a year ago when I wrote Seishou No Kamigami, right? The original creator, now a PSOW member, consulted me on it, and I decided to rewrite it, make it better, and drop the title he thought "gay".
Regardless, one thing I want to clear up is that I'm sorry for saying "I'm the most creative storywriter you'll ever meet." I was on a cloud http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif
Regardless, without a title, I give you our story.
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Chapter 1
Creation. An anomaly to all living creatures, its origin, the location of what was, is, and ever will be, is still to this day argued.
Even the avatars to creation itself, the gods, question their leader’s authority as the almighty creator at times. However, their inquiring is not to be confused with their unwavering loyalty. With most gods, anyways.
The almighty creator thought it a beautiful thing to make humans. Humans that would live together in peace. Or so they thought.
When the creator blessed his creations with a great power in the form of a relic that would remind the humans of the creator’s power, some began to question him. The gods had always understood their task-to oversee the humans and ensure there is peace and balance in the world. However, when the creator gave the humans power to restore peace to a violent world, some of them began to question his decision. Some thought that power would never solve anything. Others thought that the divine should intervene. Some even went so far as to think that creating creatures of rational thought was a mistake, a mistake that needed to be corrected.
The gods all inquired the creator, who simply answered “The answer will come in time.” For some, that wasn’t good enough. Some gods began to plot against the creator, turning to the dark side.
Those still loyal to the creator stuck by his side, and the creator attempted to have the heretics reconcile with him, but to no avail. It just got worse at that point, because when he tried, the heretics decided to take the action that they felt the creator didn’t. They created hideous, lethal creatures called demons. These demons began killing the humans one by one, and the gods and the creator began to take notice.
The creator and the gods had different agendas, though. While the creator wanted to let the humans run their course, the gods wanted not only to destroy the heretics, but to save the humans from the demons by fighting back against them. However, the gods themselves were disallowed to exist in the human world, by order of the creator. Despite this bitter order, the gods remained unwaveringly faithful to their creator. Besides, the gods knew that the creator could give the humans a link to them and their power. The gods somehow knew that the creator’s relic to the humans would be that link.
In addition, the gods had been observing the devils who had been in the human world, and noticed they had paid little attention to the relic. Devising a plan, they took action quickly.
The gods sent two operatives disguised as traitors to create demons that would retrieve the relic and bring it to them. They would then slip the relic through the devils and reunite with the creator, relic in hand. That way, the devils would never be able to seize the relic and use it for their own purposes.
However, something went horribly wrong…
Regardless, one thing I want to clear up is that I'm sorry for saying "I'm the most creative storywriter you'll ever meet." I was on a cloud http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif
Regardless, without a title, I give you our story.
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Chapter 1
Creation. An anomaly to all living creatures, its origin, the location of what was, is, and ever will be, is still to this day argued.
Even the avatars to creation itself, the gods, question their leader’s authority as the almighty creator at times. However, their inquiring is not to be confused with their unwavering loyalty. With most gods, anyways.
The almighty creator thought it a beautiful thing to make humans. Humans that would live together in peace. Or so they thought.
When the creator blessed his creations with a great power in the form of a relic that would remind the humans of the creator’s power, some began to question him. The gods had always understood their task-to oversee the humans and ensure there is peace and balance in the world. However, when the creator gave the humans power to restore peace to a violent world, some of them began to question his decision. Some thought that power would never solve anything. Others thought that the divine should intervene. Some even went so far as to think that creating creatures of rational thought was a mistake, a mistake that needed to be corrected.
The gods all inquired the creator, who simply answered “The answer will come in time.” For some, that wasn’t good enough. Some gods began to plot against the creator, turning to the dark side.
Those still loyal to the creator stuck by his side, and the creator attempted to have the heretics reconcile with him, but to no avail. It just got worse at that point, because when he tried, the heretics decided to take the action that they felt the creator didn’t. They created hideous, lethal creatures called demons. These demons began killing the humans one by one, and the gods and the creator began to take notice.
The creator and the gods had different agendas, though. While the creator wanted to let the humans run their course, the gods wanted not only to destroy the heretics, but to save the humans from the demons by fighting back against them. However, the gods themselves were disallowed to exist in the human world, by order of the creator. Despite this bitter order, the gods remained unwaveringly faithful to their creator. Besides, the gods knew that the creator could give the humans a link to them and their power. The gods somehow knew that the creator’s relic to the humans would be that link.
In addition, the gods had been observing the devils who had been in the human world, and noticed they had paid little attention to the relic. Devising a plan, they took action quickly.
The gods sent two operatives disguised as traitors to create demons that would retrieve the relic and bring it to them. They would then slip the relic through the devils and reunite with the creator, relic in hand. That way, the devils would never be able to seize the relic and use it for their own purposes.
However, something went horribly wrong…