[Moving Comic] This time we NEED translation!

[Alis-Landeel]

It's online the second chapter of Moving Comic.

It's very long... and there are many dialogues. This time I didn't understand so much.



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[EspioKaos]

Once I get home from work this evening, I'll get started on it.

[Ultie]

ild translate a bit, i'm not the best at translating tho

-Chapter 2-
謎の伝言
The puzzling message

president: So...
we could not grasp?
(i wassent to sure bout what the president said realy =/)

Ethen: Simply being, it's becomeing a matter of concern.

President: What is it?

Ethen: The amount of terrorism, as the civilans moral crumbles.

...So saying, it has increased.



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[Alis-Landeel]

On 2007-09-07 04:28, EspioKaos wrote:
Once I get home from work this evening, I'll get started on it.

Don' t hurry. Drive slow and respect the speed limits. We can wait. Thanks.



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[landman]

It's not very hard to understand

President says something (see? piece of cake http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif ) provably about the next scenes

An image of a terrorist attack on Parum, Leo interrogating the suspicious but that one doesn't say a word but then he speaks to Ethan (so he provably does not speak to Leo because he is a Beast, or maybe because they share the same haircut, so he is racist or he is envious of his pony tail, either way he is an Illuminus) and tells him something important and he dies

Then Ethan goes to Moatob and from here no more secrets, just look at the pictures http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif

[Immortal44]

Ill get started working on the flash side of things. I cant start any of the dialog yet but it shouldnt be hard to add that in after I have all the images set up.
Im thinking of making the flash all one file as alot of the music is the same as in the previous comic. So it will have a comic select screen at the front so people can choose which comic to view. (This isnt hard to do)
Also, Alis-landeel would it be possible to put the link to the comic in the first post of this topic once it is finished. Otherwise well end up with people not being able to find the translation like last time.

Edit: wow, this is a long chapter as far as dialog goes, but most of the images are repeated several times. The flash part of this will go very fast.



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[EspioKaos]

OK, I'm home. I've begun translating, so I expect to have the full script ready a little later this evening. I'll keep you guys posted.

[Sha Sha]

Thanks so mUch EspioKaos
we all really appreciate it

[Alis-Landeel]

On 2007-09-07 15:15, Immortal44 wrote:
Also, Alis-landeel would it be possible to put the link to the comic in the first post of this topic once it is finished.K!

Thanks to you and thanks to Espio!
Thanks from the far Europe.

[EspioKaos]

Took a little longer than expected, but I'm finally finished. Enjoy!

(Just like before, I've broken up the lines between each speech bubble that's present in the original comic. That's why some of the line breaks are a little weird.)

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Chapter 2: Mysterious Message

DALLGUN: So...

DALLGUN: There were no clues left behind...

ETHAN: Correct, sir. However, something concerns me.

DALLGUN: What's that?

ETHAN: The terrorist said that...

ETHAN: the civilization of Gurhal will soon crumble.

DALLGUN: ...

NAV: They... can't be serious.

DALLGUN: Hmm...

ETHAN: Do you have any idea what he was talking about?

DALLGUN: Yes...

DALLGUN: There is a story that I must tell you.

DALLGUN: The SEED aren't our only enemy.

LEO: Wh... who else is there?
ETHAN: Eh!?

DALLGUN: When we analyzed the recent terrorist incidents,

DALLGUN: their methods and organization resembled a certain group.

DALLGUN: Their name is...

DALLGUN: The Illuminus!

DALLGUN: They are a secret organization of human supremacists

DALLGUN: that formed over 600 years ago.

DALLGUN: Following the 500 year war, they went into hiding.

LEO: I thought... the Illuminus were destroyed.

ETHAN: You know about them?

LEO: Yeah... a little.

DALLGUN: They feigned destruction so they could stay hidden.

DALLGUN: In fact, they were even manipulating the Endrum Collective.

DALLGUN: Just like the Illuminus...

LEO: What do you mean?

ETHAN: If that's the case...
ETHAN: ...then Magashi was a part of the Illuminus?

DALLGUN: To them, CASTs and beasts

DALLGUN: were seen as nothing more than slaves for humans.

DALLGUN: They viewed CASTs solely as cheap labor.

LEO: Damn bastards...

ETHAN: So, where are they hiding now?

DALLGUN: We aren't sure at the moment.

DALLGUN: However, an investigation is currently underway.

DALLGUN: I ask that you help us continue our search.

LEO: Yes, sir!
ETHAN: Yes, sir!

REPORTER: Another explosion shook Holtes City today.

REPORTER: With the assistance of the GUARDIANS, the Parum police have arrested

REPORTER: a suspect in the terrorist bombings.

REPORTER: The offender is 32-year-old Macda Millian.

REPORTER: An interrogation is pending

REPORTER: as the investigation of his involvement in this incident continues.

LEO: What were you trying to do?

MACDA: ...

LEO: Say something!
LEO: Come on, talk!

MACDA: ...

ETHAN: Wow... he still hasn't said a word.

TONNIO: Maybe he has nothing to confess.

TONNIO: Oh... is he giving up?

TONNIO: What's wrong, Leo? Want me to give it a shot?

LEO: He...

LEO: ...said he wants to speak with Ethan.

TONNIO: Eh!?

ETHAN: To me?

MACDA: You're Ethan Waber, right?

ETHAN: Why did you want to speak to me?

MACDA: Because you're my friend.

ETHAN: What?

MACDA: You're human, so you'll understand.
MACDA: This world is ours to control!

ETHAN: What, with people like you!?

MACDA: Your father, Olson, is also a friend of mine.

ETHAN: Liar!

MACDA: No, honest...
MACDA: Go to Bistonia, then you'll understand...

MACDA: Ugh!

MACDA: Gaaah!

TONNIO: What the!?
LEO: What's going on!?

MACDA: Gaaah!

ETHAN: Hey! Calm down!

LEO: What happened?

ETHAN: Hurry, he's in pain!

TONNIO: Someone call a medic!

LOU: His heart and lungs have already ceased functioning.

TONNIO: Ethan! What did you do?
ETHAN: ......

Moatoob

Dagora City

LOU: Ethan!
ETHAN: !?

LOU: Where are you going?

ETHAN: Back off, Lou! None of your business!

LOU: You may be walking into the enemy's trap.

ETHAN: I know, but...
ETHAN: I've got to find something about that terrorist group.

LOU: And about your father?

ETHAN: Wha-!? How did you know!?

LOU: I was able to read your lips from the other side of the glass.

ETHAN: Guess there's nothing you can keep from Lou...

LOU: An autopsy was performed on the terrorist's body

LOU: yielding very interesting results.

ETHAN: Really?

LOU: Allow me to accompany you and I will explain further.

ETHAN: Eh!?

LOU: Inside the terrorist's body
LOU: we discovered many nanomachines.

ETHAN: What!?
ETHAN: Do you think the Endrum Collective might be involved, then?

LOU: I am certain...
LOU: ...that another organization must be manipulating the Endrum Collective.

ETHAN: The Illuminus!
LOU: Correct.

ETHAN: Do you know where Bistonia is?

LOU: Yes.

LOU: Bistonia is located in the abandoned mine just ahead.

ETHAN: Wonder why they chose this place for a hideout?

ETHAN: There's smoke coming out... Are you sure this place is abandoned?

LOU: It is unusual. This mine was supposed to have been abandoned 100 years ago.

ETHAN: Huh?

MAN #1: Hands up!

MAN #2: Who are you?

ETHAN: I'm Ethan Waber of the GUARDIANS.

MAN #3: What are the GUARDIANS doing here!?

ETHAN: I want to see your boss.

MAN #2: Not a chance, bub!

ETHAN: Gah!

???: Well, look at what we have here.

ETHAN: That voice...

ETHAN: Ma... Magashi...!?

???: Welcome to the Illuminus...

???: ...Ethan Waber.

ETHAN: ......

Next episode: Name of Death

[SuperChoco]

Wow. Very nice. Thank you Espio!

[Kion]

Nice translation Espio, you beat me to it. Ofcourse i was just going to fill in joke bubles and see if anyone fell for it.

[Immortal44]

Thanks EspioKaos, I completely finished all of the images now, I just have to add in the speach bubbles and Ill be done. When I made the comic this time I did it slightly differently so adding the speach bubbles will be alot easier. I can also have moving backgrounds well speach bubbles are visible which I wasnt able to do the old way.
Should be done soon. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

[Zorafim]

Wow. There's... There's actually story here. That's amazing.

[Immortal44]

translated flash version probably wont be done till tommorrow night. sorry, Im going to be a bit busy tommorrow. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_frown.gif dont worry. Its nearlly finished.

[Finalzone]

Very interesting, that comic will explain why Ethan seemly leaves the Guardian. It appears his father is alive. Ethan's father apparent death was just a ruse to perhaps infiltrates the Illiminus

In PSU where Mirei did the parade, the androide kamikaze that Ethat knocked down was a part of Illuminus

[Alis-Landeel]

There was a lot more than I had expected hidden in the bubbles.

Thanks Espio!

[MushiKuro]

Great Translate Espio and great Movic Comic, but, why don't put all the translations in a only topic?

See ya!

X.X

[Turbobrain]

I thought Dallgun dies in Chapter 10....???

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[relentless]

Yes, I agree.

Oh, and great translation, Espio! A bunch of information, I can't wait to see more. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif

[PALRAPPYS]

On 2007-09-08 07:23, Turbobrain wrote:
I thought Dallgun dies in Chapter 10....???

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I'm taking the assumption this may actually be before Ambition of Illuminous...

[EspioKaos]

Right. All of this happens just a month or so after the end of Episode 1 and before the beginning of Episode 2.

[littleman2347]

where do i find this

[EspioKaos]

http://illuminus.phantasystaruniverse.jp/comic/chapter_02.html

[Alis-Landeel]

On 2007-09-08 07:23, Turbobrain wrote:
I thought Dallgun dies in Chapter 10....???
Next time you say that is a spoiler of the last episode of the online storymode, otherwise "someone" could think that refers to episode 2 of the Moving Comic.

Thanks!

[EspioKaos]

On 2007-09-08 07:04, MushiKuro wrote:
Great Translate Espio and great Movic Comic, but, why don't put all the translations in a only topic?

Actually, I think that's a good idea. It would be much better to have everything on Arkguard in one spot as opposed to multiple threads each time a new chapter is released.

[Alis-Landeel]

On 2007-09-08 09:07, EspioKaos wrote:

On 2007-09-08 07:04, MushiKuro wrote:
Great Translate Espio and great Movic Comic, but, why don't put all the translations in a only topic?

Actually, I think that's a good idea. It would be much better to have everything on Arkguard in one spot as opposed to multiple threads each time a new chapter is released.

It would be the better solution. But how you would give visibility to the release of a new episode, on a topic old and with several pages? To change the title of the topic every time wouldn't help. They already make it on the official site's board and the visibility is too low anyway.

[Dhylec]

On 2007-09-08 09:07, EspioKaos wrote:

On 2007-09-08 07:04, MushiKuro wrote:
Great Translate Espio and great Movic Comic, but, why don't put all the translations in a only topic?

Actually, I think that's a good idea. It would be much better to have everything on Arkguard in one spot as opposed to multiple threads each time a new chapter is released.

Then I guggest starting a new thread just to post chapter translations (& scanlation if any). I'll have it noted as a floaty to bump whenever there is to update.

[EspioKaos]

Cool; I'll go ahead and get that started.

[Turbobrain]

On 2007-09-08 08:51, Alis-Landeel wrote:

On 2007-09-08 07:23, Turbobrain wrote:
I thought Dallgun dies in Chapter 10....???
Next time you say that is a spoiler of the last episode of the online storymode, otherwise "someone" could think that refers to episode 2 of the Moving Comic.

Thanks!



I did'nt know myself. First time I'd seen or heard of this comic... seemed to have not noticed for some reason.