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Deucer
Oct 28, 2007, 07:34 PM
And no, not an in-game screen cap comic. I will be drawing it in flash and, if I'm feeling industrious enough, assembling it as a moving webcomic like the Phantom of Arkguard.

Oh hey, some (unfinished) proof:
Just a link, because the white clashes hard. (http://i153.photobucket.com/albums/s227/iDeucer/PSG/psgtitle1.png)

The setting will take place in the Gurhal system, shortly after the 500 Year War closes with the Alliance Treaty - essentially 100 years prior to the events of current PSU. The Seed will not be involved as an antagonist or otherwise, but rather the AMF.

The plot will mainly follow the three in my little drawing above.
I haven't named the Beast. He needs more facial hair.
The female Cast is named Eddie. I really need to detail her boots.
The male Cast is simply The Beholder (hence the freaky eye). He needs a redesign terribly.

I draw infrequently (college, PSU, etc) and I'm not likely to color this, so don't expect it to be updated frequently yet. I just knew I had to post something to get the ball rolling or I'd never do it (lazy, procrastinator, etc).

... To be honest, this all started from my room mate and I agreeing that, at some point, a transformed Beast needs to wrestle a dragon to the ground and give it noogies.

EDIT: Delayed for winter break. College, disinterest, etc.

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Sgt_Shligger
Oct 29, 2007, 05:04 PM
Thank you for making this drawn out and not another God-forsaken screen shot comic.

I can't critique much about the picture since most of it is done well. The beasts face seems a tad off compared to his CAST partners whom have more "realistic" faces (unless it's a style you intend to go with.) Also, may I suggest you give The Beholder legs XD do redesign him but only slightly. The height seems to work with a title like that though his eye should be larger or have more emphasis put on it since it is supposed to be a defining feature.

Deucer
Oct 29, 2007, 05:11 PM
The Beholder's not really that tall, I just hadn't finished his legs (*guilt*) and threw him behind and above. And yeah, I intend to make the eye more prominent. His outfit I like, but the head no.

I see what you mean about the Beast, thank you. I'm hoping what I intend to do with facial hair will improve that, but I've always had a rather stark differences when it comes to profiles versus mugshots.



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Audron
Nov 2, 2007, 03:25 PM
haha nobody cared about your art so you crossed it all off and went emo

Audron
Nov 2, 2007, 03:29 PM
not to sound mean or anything sorry

Deucer
Nov 2, 2007, 05:56 PM
...
Updated for the heckler's sake. (http://i153.photobucket.com/albums/s227/iDeucer/PSG/phucket.png)
I like the male Cast's new head design now.
I'm still not going to be working on this seriously, until winter break.

Sgt_Shligger
Nov 4, 2007, 06:30 PM
I like how you cheated and just cut off the other two characters' legs instead of drawing in the Beholder's http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif

Weeaboolits
Nov 4, 2007, 06:37 PM
Neat, though the beast dood's arm appears to be broken. >.>

Deucer
Nov 4, 2007, 07:22 PM
On 2007-11-04 15:30, Sgt_Shligger wrote:
I like how you cheated and just cut off the other two characters' legs instead of drawing in the Beholder's http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif


It's just zoomed in a bit, though I haven't drawn the Beholder's legs yet either.
I was focusing more on fixing the head.


On 2007-11-04 15:37, Ronin_Cooper wrote:
Neat, though the beast dood's arm appears to be broken. >.>


Hahaha, damn you're right! Thanks!
XD I'll fix that sometime.



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