PDA

View Full Version : FanArt: Just a quick little doodle


Omega-chan
11-17-2007, 11:06 AM
Okay, this requires a little backstory.

I'm currently writing a story in which my character Omega (or Lily, as she's known in this story) is one of Mirei's bodyguards, and on occasion has the mission of using disguise TECHNICs to make herself look like Mirei to mislead anyone who might be trying to make another attempt on the Divine Maiden's life. Well, see, Lily has a bodyguard of her own, from where she's in the Guardians as well as being affiliated with the Communion - his name is T'laren, and he tends to guard her when she's out and about as Mirei.

So I was drawing Lily as Mirei, and this came out.

http://www.weblogimages.com/v.p?uid=Umegaki&pid=579734&sid=vMV96inOX1

I know the proportion looks wonky at first glance, but T's walking in front of Lily. I will move him a bit closer to her if I do a final inked version, so it would look more like that. This is also my first time attempting to draw muscles; it's a bit easier than I thought it'd be. And I really, really hate trying to draw non-human ears sometimes. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif

Overall though, I'm pretty happy with it. Should I go ahead and complete it with inking/coloring?

DanMalak
11-17-2007, 12:39 PM
The newman looks really well drawn, it's just that something about the beast looks a little funky. I know he's more infront but he looks disproportional, like his neck is to long and legs to short. I dunno =

Omega-chan
11-17-2007, 01:45 PM
I'll probably end up redrawing T, yeah. I still have yet to find a good way to make sure my proportions are even. XD;

Ultie
11-17-2007, 01:56 PM
yep the newman is well done http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif so is the beast mainly. the neck looks long because its to thin, and a bit off center towards the left.

Omega-chan
11-17-2007, 02:02 PM
Off-center I can fix. Thanks for letting me know exactly where it was off. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Omega-chan
11-17-2007, 03:45 PM
http://www.weblogimages.com/v.p?uid=Umegaki&pid=579789&sid=dOS91dgpK8

And here's the inked version. I added a bit more detail to T'laren as well as correcting his neck/legs, fixed an error in Lily's outfit that I didn't even notice, and moved them a bit closer together. Any better?

JenJen902
11-17-2007, 05:42 PM
love it but the necks creeping me out http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_eek.gif

Omega-chan
11-17-2007, 06:19 PM
How is it creeping you out?

JenJen902
11-17-2007, 06:20 PM
Its so long and to the left lol

Omega-chan
11-17-2007, 06:24 PM
And which version are you talking about exactly, the inked or the penciled? I centered it in the inked one. I'm not seeing how it's off at all compared to the penciled one.

JenJen902
11-17-2007, 06:25 PM
they look same to me

Omega-chan
11-17-2007, 06:29 PM
They're not. I honestly don't see how they'd look the same if you compared them.

omegapirate2k
11-17-2007, 07:10 PM
SO FIRST YOU STEAL MY NAMESAKE AND THEN YOU START DRAWING MY CHARACTER WITH YOURS.

STOP
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s302/Sychosis777/pr0n/0422040317.jpg

STALKING
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s302/Sychosis777/psu20071024_114051_094.jpg
ME
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a3/omegapirate2000/MyPSUChar17.jpg

Joking, of course, fanart of me is always welcome. Good stuff http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

JenJen902
11-17-2007, 07:27 PM
I dont see one drawing of you and omega is a common use in most games ive played so cool your jets

omegapirate2k
11-17-2007, 07:29 PM
On 2007-11-17 17:27, JenJen902 wrote:
I dont see one drawing of you and omega is a common use in most games ive played so cool your jets



THE COOLEST ICE WATER WILL NOT COOL MY JETS, THAT IS MY CHARACTER IN THE PICTURE AND I WANT HIM BACK

[spoiler-box]Not really[/spoiler-box]

Omega-chan
11-18-2007, 08:46 AM
I've been Omega Forscythe since Blue Burst. This character's been inhabiting my headspace for years. Chill the fsck out.

omegapirate2k
11-18-2007, 10:06 AM
On 2007-11-18 06:46, Omega-chan wrote:
I've been Omega Forscythe since Blue Burst. This character's been inhabiting my headspace for years. Chill the fsck out.



AS SAID BEFORE, I WILL NOT BE CHILLED, NO MEDICATION WILL ACCOMPLISH THIS. I WANT JUSTICE

Again, a joke.