FanArt: fanart mia and deja pictures

[mia_viola]

several of my drawings

line art "lost mia"
http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd273/mia_viola/drawings/lostmia.jpg

mia new outfit
http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd273/mia_viola/drawings/lineartmiacopy.jpg

deja new outfit
http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd273/mia_viola/drawings/lineartdejacopy.jpg

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[Ezodagrom]

really great drawing :3

[mia_viola]

triple post >.>

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[mia_viola]

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[mia_viola]

will somebody plz give some constructive opinions plz http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_frown.gif

[jcm5]

the outline in her eyes was too dark stands out.. and the mountains look like hills

[Sayara]

It is kind of good for a rough idea for an image. Either develop the rest of the contour lines to make the image a line-art or apply shading, or color or any of that sort to give it a sort of more finished look.

Mia herself has no bottom or crotch. Take a gander at some female figures doing that bent position to get a little bit better understanding of what to do.

[mia_viola]

ok ty for your opinions, the background was bound to be crappy as ive never practiced drawing many backgrounds, but i liked the eyes the way they are i doint really see whats wrong with them http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif

[Sayara]

The problem is (that i can see) that the entire picture is so light, and her eyes are so well defined.

Its alittle unbalanced.

[DamonKatu]

*hugs her and rushes her to the hospital* T.T Really great drawing but it dose need little touch or two...

[mia_viola]

new line art version posted :3

[mia_viola]

curse double posting x.x

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[qoxolg]

- Eyebrows can't go trough hair.
- When drawing a nose, don't use just a single line (anime style), draw either a nosehole or nosewing to give the nose a bit more shape.
- Don't be affraid to draw female characters a bit more curvy. The best way to do that is using photo's of real life models, cause the PSU character models are not really exciting to look at.
- If those are tears on the face: don't forget the trail a tear leaves behind on the face.
- The face can use a bit ore shape (cheeks are missing).
- Most important: When drawing characters from games, try to keep your own style!

hope I am not to late >_>

[mia_viola]

just posted two new pictures one of mia and one of deja

[Balthasar]

Deja Pic: lulz were had. Thank you very much!