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Meyfei
Jan 2, 2008, 01:38 AM
Anyone know, or have some poems? I'm feeling interested in reading something, and nothing I found in google seems to satisfy me.

Solstis
Jan 2, 2008, 01:42 AM
Posted as a note on Facebook, which probably means that I don't own it anymore:

I will make a myth of my persona

Textualize the physical

As it were

Add another link to the chain

Indeterminate location, indeterminate sign, indeterminate

Origin is best unknown, best indecisive

The truth is only as free as the cage, only as free as the text

Meyfei
Jan 2, 2008, 02:12 AM
http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif that's a good one.

As you may have noticed, i have alot of grammical errors in my typeing, and thats one of my many reasons why i dont write poems.

I also find it to overwhelming to find the right words, aswell as mixing them in a sensible fashion, and with that being the case i enjoy reading them.

Please let me know if you find, or make more k?

DizzyDi
Jan 2, 2008, 02:25 AM
On 2008-01-01 22:42, Solstis wrote:
Posted as a note on Facebook, which probably means that I don't own it anymore:

I will make a myth of my persona

Textualize the physical

As it were

Add another link to the chain

Indeterminate location, indeterminate sign, indeterminate

Origin is best unknown, best indecisive

The truth is only as free as the cage, only as free as the text




I don't get it. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_confused.gif

Wait on second though, I kinda sorta get it.

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Mewnie
Jan 2, 2008, 03:11 AM
Nose Rings

Oh, what a heinous thing to do;

take a nose and run it through.

To pierce a hole where flesh once was;

is this not what a madman does?

Your nostrils bleed,

your nostrils swell;

and when you sneeze, it hurts like hell.

So wear a nose ring if you will;

you stupid fucking imbecile.

Meyfei
Jan 2, 2008, 03:37 AM
nice one.
I must admit, I agree nose rings are awful.

amtalx
Jan 2, 2008, 09:01 AM
http://www.derekhail.com/wp-content/uploads/2007/07/scarlett-johansson-nosering0a2.jpg

FAIL

Solstis
Jan 2, 2008, 03:45 PM
I never thought that the point of poetry was to be sensible or to find the right words.

I just vomit words
Modify language
The trick is to twist it
Hardly ever works
Most things I write aren't worth a second visit
Free-flow, free-fall, free to try if you please
Failure, bad flow, poor design
Things happen, especially if try to rhyme

AlexCraig
Jan 2, 2008, 03:52 PM
I was told by a creative writing teacher that poetry was to express yourself. Then she got all Nazi and said "You're doing it wrong!" and told me to redo my poems about 5 times.

Mewnie
Jan 2, 2008, 03:59 PM
A haiku

I dream of large breasts.

Big, ripe, disembodied tits.

I awake, turgid.

geewj
Jan 2, 2008, 04:17 PM
"A courtesy call"
In the hall
Points the hand.

VanHalen
Jan 2, 2008, 04:20 PM
I am a Protranser here me roar.

With this shotgun I bought from Tenora.

When it shoots people they light up like a Menorah.

With my bow grinded to 10, how come I can't one shot this C ranked men?

TalHex
Jan 2, 2008, 04:24 PM
sorry you wouldn't be interested... my poems don't contain any self angst

DizzyDi
Jan 2, 2008, 04:55 PM
Blank Verse by Ernest Hemingway

" "
! : , .
, , , .
, ; !
,

(goddamn forum won't let me space it the proper way!)

UnderscoreX
Jan 2, 2008, 05:02 PM
MY MIND FLIES THROUGH THE SKIES
COLLIDES THEN DIES
WHY?
NO CLUE - DO YOU?
MY HEAD HURTS, BEEN WORSE
BUT I'LL COMPLAIN ANYWAY
MAYBAY IT'S THAT ANDRE 3000, POUNDIN'
ON MY STEREO, ROSA PARKS

Meyfei
Jan 2, 2008, 05:10 PM
Has anyone still got some poems they had to do as class projects, that they wouldnt mind posting?

DizzyDi
Jan 2, 2008, 05:34 PM
I SEE WHAT YOU'RE UP TO.
I KNOW YOUR GAME BUDDY!
DO YOU OWN SCHOOL WORK YA LAZY BUM!

Mewnie
Jan 2, 2008, 05:35 PM
lawl

Meyfei
Jan 2, 2008, 05:37 PM
Sorry, havent went to school sence late september.

I'll give another look in google, and possibly see if i can find something interesting for you all.

astuarlen
Jan 2, 2008, 05:44 PM
I missed the ground
far away from you
Stressed, but still in one piece

ShinMaruku
Jan 2, 2008, 05:51 PM
Be a witness, as I exorcise my exorcism
The evil that lurks within the sin, the terrorism
Possessed by evil spirits, voices from the dead
I come forth with gravediggaz in a head full of dread
I've been examined ever since I was seamen
They took a sonogram and seen the image of a demon
At birth the nurses surrounded my with needles
and drugged me all up with the diseases of evil
Grew up in hell, now I dwell, in an Islamic Temple
I'm fighting a holy war in the mental
Look deep into my eyes, you'll see visions of death
Possessed by homicide is what I'm obsessed
Giving n brain dimples
Dragging they asses on my hook by they temples
The cause of death is unknown to the cops
Cause when I kill them, I'm not leavin one element to a cop
First I'll assasinate em
And them I'll cremate them
and take all of his fucking ashes and evaporate em
Or creep through the graveyard and hunt down your tombstone
Dig up your skeleton and stomp all your f**king bones
You try to haunt me n, I ain't trying to hear it
Bup,Bup,Bup, I'll give your ass a holy spirit.



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geewj
Jan 2, 2008, 05:58 PM
I based my life
On all the wrong things
For my dreams
Never rendered me here

But at least I can sleep
Knowing full well I keep
Out of mind
What I find
Insincere

astuarlen
Jan 2, 2008, 06:12 PM
The womb
Firmly attached to Sil'fer's boobies
Bubblegum forest

MetaZedlen
Jan 2, 2008, 06:12 PM
I'd have to say that this is my best so far, and I write quite well in the romanticism...

Your heart's past has been painfully spoken,
Your heart's past has been severely broken.
How dare they act in such terrible ways,
How dare they leave you scarred to these days.
Their days will be worse than your's can be,
Their days will be lead in misery.
Things happen, be a forgetter,
Things happen for the better.
I will guide you through this horrible maze,
I will guide you through those despicable days.
The pain will ease, even if you cry,
The pain will ease as time goes by.
Yes, I will curse at you never,
Yes, I will be kind forever.
Caring for your problems whenever you are blue,
Caring for your problems is what I wish to do.
Our relationship will be more than a beautiful fashion,
Our relationship will be more than you can imagine.
Strong love and connection, again you will be feeling,
Strong love and connection, the devotion to your healing.

ShinMaruku
Jan 2, 2008, 06:14 PM
Raac

Solstis
Jan 2, 2008, 06:27 PM
On 2008-01-02 14:58, geewj wrote:
I based my life
On all the wrong things
For my dreams
Never rendered me here

But at least I can sleep
Knowing full well I keep
Out of mind
What I find
Insincere



http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_frown.gif

Meyfei
Jan 2, 2008, 06:38 PM
On 2008-01-02 15:12, Zedlen wrote:
I'd have to say that this is my best so far, and I write quite well in the romanticism...

Your heart's past has been painfully spoken,
Your heart's past has been severely broken.
How dare they act in such terrible ways,
How dare they leave you scarred to these days.
Their days will be worse than your's can be,
Their days will be lead in misery.
Things happen, be a forgetter,
Things happen for the better.
I will guide you through this horrible maze,
I will guide you through those despicable days.
The pain will ease, even if you cry,
The pain will ease as time goes by.
Yes, I will curse at you never,
Yes, I will be kind forever.
Caring for your problems whenever you are blue,
Caring for your problems is what I wish to do.
Our relationship will be more than a beautiful fashion,
Our relationship will be more than you can imagine.
Strong love and connection, again you will be feeling,
Strong love and connection, the devotion to your healing.



That was amazeing!
And I must admit i'm really into the romantic stuff. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime2.gif

MetaZedlen
Jan 3, 2008, 03:33 PM
Well, like I said, it is my strong suit, and it is quite easy to write about if you have actually experienced some of it.



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DizzyDi
Jan 3, 2008, 03:36 PM
I am a gentleman
Shiny suit and all
I require
cave meats

LOL I'M CREATIVE!

Meyfei
Jan 3, 2008, 04:10 PM
Thats better then anything i'd be able to come up with, and i'm being serious! http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_lol.gif

TalHex
Jan 3, 2008, 04:19 PM
La renarde...
Elle danse avec la neige
L'heure? minuit...

haiku that i did for french class

Ma_Navu
Jan 3, 2008, 05:43 PM
Haiku by Odin

I murdered a man.
He had a wife and two kids.
I slept peacefully.

Leviathan
Jan 3, 2008, 06:08 PM
It's censored.

You're not very nice and I don't think i like you
You're not very nice 'cause you made me cry
You're not very nice and i don't wanna see you
So why don't you just <expletive deleted> off and die

Why? cuz I caught you with another guy

Once i used to say "I love you"
What a <expletive deleted> joke you <expletive deleted>
I thought you loved me too

If i had a dime for every <expletive deleted> you <expletive deleted>
I'd be a millionaire
Makes me so damn <expletive deleted> sick
To have thought you'd ever care

I gave youn my heart, I gave you my trust
I even got down on my knees
I even gave you my keys
I gave you all I ever had, I gave you everything
But guess what b-word
I never really loved you

Now I can finally say "I'm over you"
Besides you weren't worth half the <expletive deleted>
You <expletive deleted> put me trough

My frieds said i was <expletive deleted> <expletive deleted>
But I was just naive
Best thing I ever did was
Turn around and leave

MetaZedlen
Jan 3, 2008, 09:27 PM
Okay, here is my dark-minded concept...

Where I live my future,
I throw it to the shadows,
While suffering in my hate,
This hell is but a picture.

These feelings are disgusting,
Ridiculously horrible,
Nothing but disgrace,
A victim of a strangling.

The worst is being ignored,
Off it has been broken,
A greatness is occuring,
It is feeling so abhorred!

I sense your evil presence,
Now I know this cause,
My troubled dues are owed,
All to your ignorance...

Dragging in my present,
Still a downed feeling,
But the suffering is gone,
Drifted into a descent.

Your life is now in fear,
It shall be bound and gagged,
While hanging in your danger,
Seemingly the end is near.

A weed planted in your life,
It will grow like a parasite,
This hell will be unbearable,
Your pain has become a strife.

I laugh at your demented presence,
Feeling satisfaction of revenge,
My troubled dues are paid,
All to your ignorance...

Solstis
Jan 4, 2008, 01:51 AM
There's stuff you can write in highschool/middleschool that you'll never be able to write again.

Pump out as much as you can before you graduate.

astuarlen
Jan 4, 2008, 01:57 AM
On 2008-01-03 22:51, Solstis wrote:
There's stuff you can write in highschool/middleschool that you'll never be able to write again.

Pump out as much as you can before you graduate.


I recommend writing it in a secret, locked journal so no scoundrels can steal your soul's precious outpourings.

Mixfortune
Jan 4, 2008, 03:21 AM
Old stuff.

http://www.pso-world.com/fanfic.php?op=viewstory&id=103
http://www.pso-world.com/viewtopic.php?mode=viewtopic&topic=72728&forum=12&start=0

ShinMaruku
Jan 4, 2008, 01:19 PM
On 2008-01-03 22:57, astuarlen wrote:

On 2008-01-03 22:51, Solstis wrote:
There's stuff you can write in highschool/middleschool that you'll never be able to write again.

Pump out as much as you can before you graduate.


I recommend writing it in a secret, locked journal so no scoundrels can steal your soul's precious outpourings.


Tasty. Good goal fo me WAAAAGGGHH



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DizzyDi
Jan 5, 2008, 12:45 AM
There was an old person whose habits,
Induced him to feed upon rabbits;
When he'd eaten eighteen,
He turned perfectly green,
Upon which he relinquished those habits.

-Edward Lear

MetaZedlen
Jan 6, 2008, 08:23 PM
On 2008-01-04 21:45, DizzyDi wrote:
There was an old person whose habits,
Induced him to feed upon rabbits;
When he'd eaten eighteen,
He turned perfectly green,
Upon which he relinquished those habits.

-Edward Lear

...

There once was a man from Peru,
Who dreamed he was eating his shoe,
He woke with a fright
In the middle of the night
To find that his dream had come true.

-Spongebob



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Weeaboolits
Jan 6, 2008, 08:49 PM
http://pooshlmer.com/touhouwiki/images/thumb/6/6d/Touhou9_5.jpg/614px-Touhou9_5.jpg