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I would have just copied and pasted, but I guess that method doesn't like quotation marks. Sorry.
01-17-2003, 08:05 AM
Flows nicely, but the character "Spy" is thrown in too quickly without any description. To a first time reader, this could get confusing, perhaps?
Quotation marks... " " ?
I figure most people know enough about Spy already so I skipped all that intro crap.
The ""s get turned into ?s when they get parsed by the server. *shrug*
01-17-2003, 09:57 PM
A picture is worth a thousand words. Or something.
One description can't hurt!
*considers doujin of PSO, but frowns, knowing Snap and Cienna will force him to make it H*
The character Spy is pretty cool except for the fact that he smokes.
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