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Out_Kast
Mar 15, 2008, 02:45 PM
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh85/Adalia999/Drawing03-2.jpg

Sorry if it's kinda big.
Constructive criticism, please? :3 I don't want another argument to start, like in many of my last artwork topics... http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif


Edit: Sorry about all the pencil-smudge marks... I'm not very good at keeping clean http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif


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Nitro Vordex
Mar 15, 2008, 03:19 PM
*Pouts* I wish I could draw like that.
qoxolg
Mar 15, 2008, 04:28 PM
It all depends on what your aiming for.. judging on your picture you used the proportions and anatomy of the ingame models in PSO. if that was what you were aiming for, than there is not much wrong with it.
Only the arm is a bit long, even for PSO proportions.. the elbow is at the height of the crotch, which of course is impossible.
Out_Kast
Mar 15, 2008, 04:32 PM
I drew it directly from a screenshot, so that's kinda what I was aiming for http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif
Yep, I just noticed that. Long arm ._.
Sgt_Shligger
Mar 15, 2008, 04:39 PM
Not a bad job but you might want to try a different angle. The drawing doesn't truly reveal much about the character and looks somewhat flat because of it.
Out_Kast
Mar 15, 2008, 05:08 PM
Yeah, I usually draw from the front or just off to the side. I was just seeing what a complete side-drawing turned out like http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif
qoxolg
Mar 15, 2008, 05:48 PM
Just make sure you don't let the ingame models restrict you, since PSO was a bit low-poly http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif

maybe a tip for your next drawing: Try to use a bit of your own imagination when drawing PSO stuff. Try to give it a more unique flavor of your own style. The problem I always have when I draw from a screenshot, is that the pic will look empty and emotionless. It's because the facial expressions and dynamics of PSO/PSU ingame are just completly boring.
Out_Kast
Mar 16, 2008, 05:58 AM
Ha ha, I don't have a style http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif
I need a lot of work with faces. When I become more confident, I'll throw some expression into my next internet-work (: