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qoxolg
Apr 3, 2008, 03:44 PM
HOORAY! I thought: Fanworks needs more PSO stuff.. since uh.. I just like PSO more than PSU.. and I haven't done any Phantasy Star related stuff lately (which of course doesn't mean I will stop with the freaky fairytails.. HELL NO!).

enough talk..

uh.

Anyway:
It's my favorite big breasted (I am sorry Sayara.. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif) FOnewearl (actually my main character is a HUnewearl).. and a Soniti.. which imo is still one of the coolest mags.. it just got overshadowed by Sato I guess.

I did some little enhancements to the standard FOnewearl outfit.. the thing around her (for us) right arm is just a simple barier.. (which of course is invisible http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif) and in here left hand she holds just a basic rod (which was freakin hard to draw).

and uh.. Soniti is enjoying a umm uh.. monomate.. or just whatever item.. that made me realize we don't know what mates, fluids and atomizers look like.. oh well whatever..

I didn't draw the skirt because I think it would have ruined the picture..

I am not sure about coloring it.. :/ cause I also wanna start on a new fairytale freak.. what ya think?

I made two versions: one with the original colors and the older one with adjusted colors.. I think I like the original colors more..

click click for high res
http://jojo.sappusx.com/ok13s2.jpg (http://jojo.sappusx.com/ok13b2.jpg)

adjusted:

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http://jojo.sappusx.com/ok13s.jpg (http://jojo.sappusx.com/ok13b.jpg)
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Dhylec
Apr 4, 2008, 07:01 PM
Nice. I find Soniti even cuter then the fonew. Color this if you can, colors brings more life. ;]

qoxolg
Apr 4, 2008, 09:29 PM
I know! that's why I started with coloring today http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Sayara
Apr 4, 2008, 09:53 PM
There are those lips, becareful to how you put them together.

DC_PLAYER
Apr 5, 2008, 05:59 AM
i only have 1 thing to say.
it's awsome http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif

qoxolg
Apr 5, 2008, 06:07 PM
@ Sayara:
I think I did the lips better this time while shading.

@DC_PLAYER:
thanks http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

anyhow.. I did some coloring.. it's a mix of my usual "old" style and the style I use for the creepy pics..
The line work could have been cleaner.. but I was lazy, and used illustrator to trace the original sketch..

Background will be added tomorrow.

Rust
Apr 5, 2008, 06:18 PM
It completely owns (though i'm not very fond of the huge breasts, but it's only a matter of tastes).

GutsGO
Apr 6, 2008, 12:04 PM
Her hands are very akward, almost like some of her finger joints are broken.

For instance her right hand, her pointer finger looks like it's pinching her thumb....when holding a rod like that it isn't very natural.

On her left hand it looks like she is snapping her fingers, with how the thumb and middle finger are positioned.
Other than that it's pretty nice, I'm not really a fan of how you draw faces, they look creepy and chubby, but it's your style and atleast it stands out. I think your coloring is improving as well.

qoxolg
Apr 6, 2008, 01:19 PM
@Rust:
Thanks http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif yeah.. big breasts.. I always say to myself: "The next time I'll draw the breasts smaller".. but I always end up not doing it xD

@GutsGO:
Hands are still hard to draw.. but this time I was also to lazy to use pictures of my own hand.. but I will try harder next time..

Anywho..

Background added.. couldn't decide on what to draw.. CCA Seaside or Seabed.. I was lucky I found a few tiny images of seaside that I could use as reference..

The shading on the BG is not bad.. its just that the flats should have been more clean.. it's clearly visible that I used way to big brushes to make the flats.. the grass looks like shit.. >_>

ah well.. not to bad.. but I think it could have been better.

Dhylec
Apr 6, 2008, 11:09 PM
Well, I won't get into the technical stuff, I'll leave that to fellow artists. I just like the nice colors & the atmosphere. ;]

Jingo
Apr 10, 2008, 12:38 AM
Hey good job! I really like the background and i prefer the original colors than the adjusted one.

qoxolg
Apr 10, 2008, 01:38 AM
Thanks http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif
when you work like umm 8-12 hours on a single pic, it gets really hard to judge if it looks good or not..

Rust
Apr 10, 2008, 10:00 AM
The background looks decent to me. It doesn't really matter if it isn't "OMFG awesome @o@=b", a nice job like this one is already good enough.

qoxolg
Apr 10, 2008, 10:52 AM
Well.. I always try to improve with each drawing I make.. and I think it could have been more "ZOMFG awesome BBQsauce" if I did a better job on the grass..I mean.. it looks just completly out of place.. for me it breaks the clean/soft look of the rest of the pic..

I am pretty satisfied about the rest of the background, especially the water and the leaves on the top-right tree http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Kelvie
Apr 10, 2008, 04:35 PM
I am not too fond of the face, but you sure got talent. The Soniti is indeed very cute, and I like the rod.
No cliff reflexion in the water ?

qoxolg
Apr 10, 2008, 04:58 PM
hmm never thought about the reflexion.. since it's also not in the game itself.. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif

Rust
Apr 10, 2008, 08:18 PM
No, but if you're basing your art on PSU graphics, then you forgot the lens flare through the cliffs.

qoxolg
Apr 11, 2008, 03:19 AM
haha.. I will keep that in mind when I'll do some PSU request again http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif (I am not much of a PSU player >_>)