please comment my work!

[Manticore]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y192/gondolion/Humar4realcopy.png

here is a quick line art of a humar I had met, I cant remember his name though. -_-
any comments critiques? or... requests? http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

[Manticore]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y192/gondolion/Hucast-1.jpg

and here is a sketch of a hucast. I tried coloring him in, but... it looked horrid. >:U

[qoxolg]

The HUmar is looking a bit to anime-ish for my taste.. but if that was your intention then it's not bad!

The HUcast is actually pretty good http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

[SabZero]

Hm, post you references please. Makes it easier to comment.

[darkante]

Humar, well i think it´s well made.

Hucast, now that is awesome sketch. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif
I would love to see more of the style of what you use to make teh Hucast. =)

[Rust]

Love the HUcast. Well, i've always been quite fond of this kind of sketchy style (i'm talking about this style in general).
I like less the HUmar ; it's well drawn but looking at the lineart, it looks like me when i tried to use that graphic tablet for the first time. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif (YEAH, i know this is a quick sketch DAMMIT ! *shakes fist*)

[Manticore]

lol, the humar was my first lineart sketch with a tablet. :3

[SabZero]

Small tip for tablet use and squiggly lines: keep it away from CRT monitors or other radiation sources.

[McLaughlin]

I like the HUmar. The HUcast is pretty awesome too.

[ColonelPiFace]

great job on the cast

[AlexCraig]

I'd frame the HUcast. That was VERY well done.

[qoxolg]

Small tip for tablet use and squiggly lines: keep it away from CRT monitors or other radiation sources.

I'd like to add: First sketch, then start lining with zoom on 200% for very clean linework.. or 100% when you use fat brushes. If you use Photoshop, set the flow of the brushes to 70% and the hardness around 80% for smoother lines.

[Manticore]

On 2008-04-27 12:13, qoxolg wrote:

Small tip for tablet use and squiggly lines: keep it away from CRT monitors or other radiation sources.

I'd like to add: First sketch, then start lining with zoom on 200% for very clean linework.. or 100% when you use fat brushes. If you use Photoshop, set the flow of the brushes to 70% and the hardness around 80% for smoother lines.



thanks for the hints!(i dig your art, too) :3 I didnt think photoshop would be such a difficult program to use.
hopefully you will see some more fanart from me in the distant future!

[qoxolg]

Photoshop is actually very simple if your using it for drawing and coloring.. I only use normal brushes and some blending layers.. and the rest is just my own creativity and imagination. If you need any help with coloring feel free to ask. In my topic there are also 2 examples of how I color if your interested http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

[Seority]

<3 em both
like the cast more http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif

[KiiLoo]

On 2008-04-26 23:29, Manticore wrote:
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y192/gondolion/Hucast-1.jpg

and here is a sketch of a hucast. I tried coloring him in, but... it looked horrid. >:U



hmmm seen this before... why do you try and take credit for others work? its really not nice

[Manticore]

Nice try, you prolly saw it when I posted it up on my deviant art account, or my myspace.(or both if you are stalking me, I wouldnt blame you though because I am so awesome.)

maybe you should get some kind of proof someone is stealing something before you go throwing accusations, yeah?

I hope you get face cancer. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

[qoxolg]

He's already banned from the boards http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif

[SabZero]

Well, where are the references?

[Rust]

Even if it was copied from an original picture, still you need to have some talent to do a sketch like that, whether there is a reference or not.
Anyways, qoxolg is right ; this guy and his thousand clone accounts have been banned. http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif

[SabZero]

Well, it's a copy of the HUcast on the CD cover of PSO. That's where people saw it before. It's not a problem, except when the artist tries to hide it. Just saying.

http://www.phantasy-star.net/art/covers/coveromain.jpg

[Manticore]

its not like is a blatant copy, and Hadnt even thought of the hucast on the cover when I drew this. xD i guess it was just from looking at my pso cover so much or something. D:

[Zorafim]

I like your style, even if it is common. Just keep what you do simple, I doubt it'd look good if you tried going over the top.