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Sord
Jun 1, 2008, 02:06 PM
Ok, I'm doing an FKL Tourny, and this one should be finished unlike all the others, as it is going to be a small one (and I'm not playing by shligger stupid rules ;/) THERE WILL ONLY BE 8 FIGHTERS. Also, this is not first come first serve. I am choosing which characters are used, because I don't want to put up with idiot character BS (ex. the damn robopenguin from the last one, or hugely mismatched matches.) Characters MUST be able to fight, you can get creative with your characters and have strange powers (for example Ian could use some sort of dice power, or have dice themed weapons like explosives that he throws and rolls, and the number determines explosion or something.) But no characters that are completely useless for the most part, or just pathetically weak without an item (NO BARDS! or character who don't know how to fight and rely on luck, etc.) Magic, explosives, guns, whatever weapons are fine, so long as they actually can be used as a decent weapon. Give yourself something to fight with up close as well as far away (cause I don't need any sole gunners fighting sole melee wielders.)

Do not overpower your characters, if I choose to use them, I will just nerf them regardless (no instant wormhole, cosmic C4, uber 1337 ninja shit, no random pocket dimesnions with items, gigantic robots/mechs, etc.) I do like detail, if you just give me some basic list like name, sex, weapons, powers, and then little to no physical description, screw it. And make it more than a few damn sentences D<

You can post or PM your character, I will give you feedback as to wether or not your character is a definite no go or something.

3 day time limit, unless I'm not satisfied with character selection or something, or in the event I actually don't have enough submissions.


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ok, as it stands currently, slots so far are


Ast
Nitro
Shligger
Talon
Ian
Ronin
EJ
-Z

order here is of no particular importance

Out_Kast
Jun 1, 2008, 02:51 PM
Does that mean Jesus MKV is out of the running?

TalHex
Jun 1, 2008, 02:55 PM
how do you want me to submit it (PM or post it here)?

astuarlen
Jun 1, 2008, 03:12 PM
Hmm, I might have to reclaim and tweak some ideas I used in PD's unfinished tournament (love my tiny robot, though I don't know if that's within the rules...?).

What's the deadline for posting?

-Z
Jun 1, 2008, 03:24 PM
I may re-submit an old crowd favorite, but unless there's a lack of ample fighters, I'm afraid I'll stick to the stands for now.

To those who do join, though, you can find me in my VIP box. Do try to meet my approval. ~_o

Sgt_Shligger
Jun 1, 2008, 03:37 PM
Do you want us to PM you the characters?

Sord
Jun 1, 2008, 06:26 PM
You can post here or PM, I frankly don't give a care either way. And I'm afraid I don't even remember your character Ast, you didn't get much spotlight. I should have the thing in my subscribed threads, so I'll go check it. If I don't have it in my subscribed, then I damn well should and need to go to the thread anyways. Just post or PM, and if you want, I'll give feedback on the character (this goes for everyone.) I'm not being a total dick and kicking you all out on your own.

It also appears I somehow lost a third paragraph, as the third one contained the time limit. I accidently posted in the B4R first, as I still have the habit of thinking there's a "post new thread" button in the inside of a thread, but in the new theme it's only outside other threads. Must have not copied the third paragraph. I had said three days (though I suppose if I don't have enough characters by that time, it might be prolonged or something.)

Sayara
Jun 1, 2008, 06:32 PM
Do you do all the actioning or what? I never been seen any of these!

Sord
Jun 1, 2008, 06:40 PM
actioning? I write the movements and attack, based on who wins (this has been chosen in a variety of ways in the past, from asigning people AIs in SSBM and making them fight, to just a coin flip, which is usually what I do.) But if you have a prefrence to attack a certain way, that is actually welcomed if you give such a description. I of course won't use it all the time, as it would look dull if you did the same thing for 3 matches.

TalHex
Jun 1, 2008, 06:42 PM
alright i'll go ahead and post mine here then
[spoiler-box]
Name: Tal
Species: Kitsune
Gender: male
Age: 17
Weapon: katana, left handed mechgun
Weapon Description: a long thin katana style blade, white metal but reflects with a bluish mist, the katana itself is a magical focus as well as a melee weapon
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r168/talonshadowfox/weapons.jpg
Secondary item: low yield impact grenades (explode upon impact with object, after pin is removed)
Abilities (primary): Kitsune-bi (blue fireball), and kitsune-bi support (adds flame type attack), shift to natural fox form
Abilities (secondary): illusion
Armor Type (Clothes): Red Over Coat (symbol[back]: Kanji [kitsune]), black pants, black shirt, leather gauntlets with steel capped knuckles
Hair: Long, Black, white tipped, Pointy (justs out at random angles), back braid ending tied around a silver ring
Tail fur: black, white tip

elemental excel: fire
elemental lag: water
physical excel: speed/magic
physical lag: strength/stanima

Attacks
Up attack (ground)
Kitsune-bi barrage: rapidly throw balls of foxfire to burn an enemy attacking from above, not a vary strong attack but can burn, light cloth on fire, and break an enemy's concentration

up attack (aerial)
flame smash: ignites palm with foxfire, grabs enemy and throws them into the ground, can be followed through with either a mechgun attack or down aerial strike

forward attack
foxfire slash: ignite the katana's blade with foxfire, and charge in with a series of quick slashes followed by a retreat

down attack (aerial)
burning impact: gather foxfire flames together into a concentrated burst and slam them into the enemy

down attack (ground)
counter: replace self with an illusion and strike the enemy quickly from behind

other attacks
illusion: temporarily create illusions to distract the enemy
transform: return to the form of a natural fox, (speed/magic boost, strength lag)
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Randomness
Jun 1, 2008, 06:49 PM
Well, since Talon posted, I pretty much have to...

[spoiler-box]Description:Slightly tall at 6 foot, dark hair, dark clothing, covered by black cloak. No visible weaponry. Combat preference is medium to long range with spells and various throwing weapons. Concealed pair of main gauches for close-in defense. Very well-read, with wide magical knowledge, but less experienced in melee combat. Capable of stealing memories and converting into large amounts of magical energy, which can leave the victim insane. Preference for large, flashy spells, as well as temporal manipulations. (Haste, slow, etc... Quick/Stop are too potent to be fair) Has an irrational dislike of kitsunes, but it stops at making trouble for them, though said trouble has the potential to be deadly.[/spoiler-box]

Sayara
Jun 1, 2008, 06:54 PM
you answered my question thanks.

[spoiler-box]
Name - Sayara
Age - 21
Female/Newmen (or elf whatever)
Appereance: Long wild purple hair, cream skinned rather lanky and thin. Tiny yet long body frame. Purple streaks of face paint on her left eye (it makes a daisy of sorts)
Clothing Shirt and jean skirt with stripped leggings underneath. Shirt has the detail of a Sigma symbol.

Weapon: Unkept finger nails (theyre long!) and a butterfly knife
Fight style: Distract and strike, sneaky attack, Scratches as opposed to punching.

Ability 1 (Treasure x Star) 1+2 combo, Kicks opponenet to the sky, then follows with knife or nails

Strengths: odd/unpredicatable fight style, speed
Cons: No element, otherwise very weak
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TalHex
Jun 1, 2008, 06:55 PM
so how do the fights in a tourney work anyways?

Tact
Jun 1, 2008, 07:06 PM
actioning? I write the movements and attack, based on who wins (this has been chosen in a variety of ways in the past, from asigning people AIs in SSBM and making them fight, to just a coin flip, which is usually what I do.) But if you have a prefrence to attack a certain way, that is actually welcomed if you give such a description. I of course won't use it all the time, as it would look dull if you did the same thing for 3 matches.

I think it would pretty much work like this. However, if you're question's different, I'm sorry I couldn't tell.

TalHex
Jun 1, 2008, 07:35 PM
oh, thanks

Nitro Vordex
Jun 1, 2008, 07:39 PM
Here's the one I used when we were making up movesets for SSB.
[spoiler-box]Old newcomer- Nitro!

With his funky hair and wireless headphones, he might not look like a threat, but he's an exceptional staffsman!
His metal tipped staff weighs a good 70 pounds, and he can whip it like a kite!
Stats:
Longish brown wavy/curly hair.
5'7"
170 lbs.
Medium/general build, although legs are a little more muscular.
Wears: Black shirt with white long sleeves under black shortsleeves. Grey cargo pants, and a black sweatshirt.
Staff is steel tipped. Standard Redwood quarter-staff.
B-NUNCHUKU chug
This will give him a random attack, depending on the attack, it can be between half or double! Anywhere between, even 1.4!

B+Down-Transform
Nitro changes into a green Kitsune, which he still has yet to master, and his moveset changes! See more after this. Note: changing does not affect damage or lives. Being hit WILL interrupt transform.

B+Smash- Green Crescent
Nitro brings his staff up, hits the ground and is propelled forward, doused in green flame! If done in midair, he can slightly change direction. Being hit by this will send opponents skyward! Be careful though, if used in midair, you will fall and not be able to move, although you can change direction.

B+Up- Green Ascent
Nitro uses his powerful legs for this, and is sent flying upward in green flame! About the same as Green Ascent, except enemies are sent downward!

Final Smash- Kaos uprising
Nitro focuses his metal-tipped staff, and spins it at tremendous speed, unleashing a tornado of green fire at his enemies, and slightly powering him up for a short while after. He can walk slowly forward while doing this, but cannot change direction once started.

*Kitsune moveset

B- Summon
Nitro-Kitsune summons a random FKLite's power and uses it against his enemies with same or double attack power!

B+Smash- Crescent Flip
Nitro-Kitsune uses his powerful legs and does a backflip to harm enemies, with green and blue fire emerging from his feet. Can be used in air multiple times, although not good for recovery.

B+Down- Transform
Changes back into Human form.

B+up- Dashing
Nitro-Kitsune focuses quickly and dashes at high speed. You can hit walls and bounce off of them with this attack! Use control stick to aim, great for recovery, especially with double walls. However, increased percentage will limit the distance, and at 100%, he can't go off of walls.

Final Smash- Perfect Beast
Nitro-Kitsune grows to twice his size, flashes many colors, and becomes half white and half black. He attacks like normal, except his attacks are increased three-fold! Cannot change back into human while in this; Down+B will act as Down+A attack for the time being.
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If you need anything narrowed down, or changed, let me know.

astuarlen
Jun 1, 2008, 08:11 PM
Ach, well, since everyone else posted, I guess I will, too. Decided to go for something entirely different than my last, as I was inspired. By god. Burning flower bed and whatnot.

[spoiler-box]Ladies and gentlemen, allow me to introduce to you a most extraordinary woman--a woman of passion, grace, and dangeously seductive intent.
Straight from the pages of mythtory, I give you: Salome, Mistress of the Seven Veils.

You may have heard tales of this damsel and her dance, but, friends, as with so many figures of the past, that's less than half the truth. You see, Salome could snare more than a man's heart by her graceful steps; she was, in fact, a great assassin--one of the best, but her enemies, though they could not bury her body, clothed her reputation in a shroud of lies which I must now lift.

It's true she worked her magic with seven veils, but these were not just slips of cloth; they were weapons, tools in the art of death. Each had a function, which I will now reveal:

-One veil was made of night, and could blind her enemy's eyes.
-One was woven from mirrored threads, and could reflect light.
-One veil was completely ordinary, so nondescript it could conceal, temporarily, whatever it covered.
-One veil was crusted with the sands of sleep, and if wrapped around an opponent's head could steal him swiftly to the Dreamworld (though the sleep was light and easily broken).
-One was embroidered with the glyph of Sunfire, and could blaze hot and bright.
-One was stitched with a mother's love, and could heal with its caress.
-One veil was imbued with a Lover's scent, and could distract the enemy with sudden passion.

The origin of the veils' magic remained an unbroken secret, and Salome's enemies--and, in truth, her allies and friends--were never able to reproduce their enchantments. Interestingly, though each veil would regain its power over a short time, it seemed they could only be used once apiece in any given encounter. Their effects were, of course, not permanent, but a few moments of dazed blindness or confused lust were often sufficient to shift the advantage. Once their power was spent, the veils could be used to strangle or suffocate, but being a practical fighter, Salome of course brought concealed daggers to engage the target up close or throw from a reasonable distance.

Now, you might wonder why the myth of Salome's sinous dance was so successful and enduring. It would not be dishonest to say that she was a very striking character (and, in truth, she sometimes posed as a dancer for her cover in missions to other lands), so the story is feasible. If her sharp face and athletic build defied the feminine ideal of the time and place, her confident agility and expressive face could more than compensate. [/spoiler-box]

TalHex
Jun 1, 2008, 08:15 PM
damn... pity its only one character submission, i just remembered one of my favorite books, sabriel (Garth Nix), man that book had some badass stuff in it...

Sord
Jun 1, 2008, 11:01 PM
Oh, for those who PMed me, I will not discuss your character in here at all, so if it doesn't show up, that's why. I'll PM you back.

Someone did Sabriel in the last one, and The Old Kingdom Trilogy is one of my favorites series for well over 5 years now, and I will not have it tarnished by your ilk D<

Props to Ast and Nitro, the only two to really give something that's nicely thought out. Ast could use more physical description, but the fact she's doing something that hasn't really been done here is nice. Nitro's is great in that it gives plenty of moves and details of them, even if I don't like some of them, there's still plenty enough that his character is perfectly fine. Talon's your's is fine, though plain as hell, easily overridden if given something better. Same for Tingle's.


Well, since Talon posted, I pretty much have to...

[spoiler-box]Description:Slightly tall at 6 foot, dark hair, dark clothing, covered by black cloak. No visible weaponry. Combat preference is medium to long range with spells and various throwing weapons. Concealed pair of main gauches for close-in defense. Very well-read, with wide magical knowledge, but less experienced in melee combat. Capable of stealing memories and converting into large amounts of magical energy, which can leave the victim insane. Preference for large, flashy spells, as well as temporal manipulations. (Haste, slow, etc... Quick/Stop are too potent to be fair) Has an irrational dislike of kitsunes, but it stops at making trouble for them, though said trouble has the potential to be deadly.[/spoiler-box]
now this, this is precisely what I don't want. In general, it's nothing but an incredibly vague pile of shit. You're essentially a tall dark hooded figure... great, go join the damn Kingdom Hearts troupe. Well read? We do not read in combat. Stealing memories to make someone go insane? NO, overpowered, and the closest you'll ever be getting to a "temporal manipulation" is a short range teleport. The only good lines in here are "Combat preference is medium to long range with spells and various throwing weapons. Concealed pair of main gauches for close-in defense." and personallity stuff where you might as well just say "hates talon." No random crap like "various throwing weapons," either. List your damn weapons, and preferably your actual spells, at the very LEAST give elements as Talon did.

TalHex
Jun 2, 2008, 06:55 AM
okay, so do you need specific attacks now? i can do those fairly easily too

Sord
Jun 2, 2008, 06:59 AM
okay, so do you need specific attacks now? i can do those fairly easily too

yeah, that would be appreciated, though not entirely neccesary

Nai_Calus
Jun 2, 2008, 02:34 PM
Bored so:

[spoiler-box]
Name: Ian, God of Dice
Race: God, duh.
Height: 6'2
Weight: 147(Not even close but this is the internet goddamn it)
Hair: Curly dark brown, mid-back, pulled back in low ponytail with no bangs.
Eyes: Blueish-greenish-hazelish.
Skin: Paler than the fucking moon.
Clothing: Black jeans, black t-shirt with Rati on it, black tennis shoes, incongruous white socks.
Equipment: Rati(Acts like Ep3 Rati card, enables him to hover several inches off the ground), longsword made out of dice(The edges are d4s, so it is in fact sharp), longbow made out of dice, quiver with 23 arrows tipped with razor-sharp d8s, two small pouches of razor-sharp d4s, bottle of TEA.

STR: 11
DEX: 15
CON: 8
INT: 21
WIS: 9
CHA: 18

Abilities: Able to summon any number of dice of any number of sides and to have them roll whatever he wants. Can keep any dice thrown at him from hitting him. Can cause dice to fly through the air and pelt people, though this is only of marginal effectiveness.

Combat style: Prefers to hang back from his opponent and use his dice creation powers and his sharpened d4s to block the enemy off from direct combat or to try to immobilize the enemy in a pile of several thousand d20s, then attack with his bow or by making dice fly at his opponent. If forced into close quarters uses the sword and tries to back off again as soon as possible.

If victorious: Drinks bottle of TEA, materializes a large d20 in his hand, tosses it a couple of feet into the air, catches it and makes it vanish again.

If defeated and conscious: Shrugs, drinks TEA and takes his dice and goes to watch from the sidelines.

If knocked unconscious: Doesn't do anything, he's unconscious, duh.

If somehow killed: Disintegrates into a pile of dice, which then vanishes.
[/spoiler-box]

Sord
Jun 2, 2008, 08:35 PM
If somehow killed: Disintegrates into a pile of dice, which then vanishes.
[/spoiler-box]

BLOOD! WTF IS BLOOD, I BLEED TINY DICE :wacko:

yeah, cool, your fine

TalHex
Jun 2, 2008, 08:37 PM
I BLEED TINY DICE :wacko:


O.o painful... specially those d4s

Nitro Vordex
Jun 2, 2008, 08:42 PM
Gambling isn't in his blood, it IS his blood.

4.4

Sord
Jun 2, 2008, 08:58 PM
O.o painful... specially those d4s

we'll say the dice are small enough and of a round shape (d12 or d20 perhaps)

TalHex
Jun 2, 2008, 09:00 PM
oh did you get a chance to take a look at my updated profile yet sord?

Tact
Jun 2, 2008, 09:02 PM
You know, something inside of me wants to make a casino-themed character to fight in this tournament. It would be a good match with Ian the Dice God.

Nitro Vordex
Jun 2, 2008, 09:09 PM
Blackjack.
Nah, too obvious.

Snake Eyes.

I'm not doing really good, am I? :disapprove:

Randomness
Jun 2, 2008, 09:11 PM
Make it a robot named 3-7. As in a jackpot.

Nitro Vordex
Jun 2, 2008, 09:17 PM
Make it a robot named 8-4. As in a finished game.

Fix'd.

Sord
Jun 2, 2008, 09:42 PM
ok, as it stands currently, slots so far are


Ast
Nitro
Shligger
Talon
Ian
Ronin
unfilled
unfilled

order here is of no particular importance

Randomness
Jun 2, 2008, 09:48 PM
Meh. Which is apparantly too short of a post now.

Nitro Vordex
Jun 2, 2008, 10:23 PM
So is mine okay, or what?

Sord
Jun 2, 2008, 10:59 PM
yeshttp://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z121/feisord/workaround.gif

Nitro Vordex
Jun 2, 2008, 11:04 PM
3 LETTERS?
I CALL HAX.

Sord
Jun 2, 2008, 11:37 PM
I actually bother to use my workaround

astuarlen
Jun 2, 2008, 11:53 PM
Sord can type in invisible ink. Letters. Pixels.

Nitro Vordex
Jun 2, 2008, 11:53 PM
I had just looked at this thread a second before Ast posted.

o_O;

NPCMook
Jun 3, 2008, 04:20 AM
I think I will sit on the sidelines this time to watch and learn how this works o.O

Sord
Jun 5, 2008, 02:11 AM
bump, guess I'll be PMing -Z for a char, and be buggin out_kast or Van

astuarlen
Jun 5, 2008, 02:17 AM
Looking forward to this.
Ach, I was going to draw my character, buuuut now I have actual work to do.

EJ
Jun 5, 2008, 03:10 AM
Name: Priest
Species: Human
Gender: male
Age: 23
Weapon: single claw weapon which looks like vega's claw from street fighter on the right hand, long range weapon throwing cards

Weapon Description: the claw is used for close combat while the throwing cards is use for long range or to distract the opponent.

Attacks: Fake out - creates a false image of one self if successful lands a powerful blow to the opponent if it fails will leave user very open.

Rapid slash - quick successful slash attack first strike is strong but if use to long will get weaker if use too long.
:wacko: shield - summons a :wacko: for protection for one attack.

Last Hope - last minute move it's all or nothing if successful wins if it fails :wacko: and :disapprove: attack owner. Chance of success is less than 1% >.>

Abilities: ;o Summons Dhylec to do a quick attack and disappears, Dhylec appears when he feels like it though. ;3

Appearance: Has the long ponytail look of a fomar with the glasses on also, a long coat with the :wacko: on the back, blue t-shirt and black jeans with blue and silver sneakers. (what wearing simple clothes is best for fights >.>) Has a Nidra flying beside him does nothing but for show.

pro: has good strength and speed
cons: can't last very long and attacks fail a lot

Side note: Sometimes when summoning Dhylec they will do a o; ;o combine attack chance of this happening depends on situation. If it is use in beginning nothing will happen except awkward silence, if use toward the end chance of success is about +-5%.

Sord
Jun 5, 2008, 04:02 AM
hmm, ya know, there are about a hundread freaking varieties of claws, be more specific D<

Nitro Vordex
Jun 5, 2008, 04:29 AM
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b26/Ka7/nail2.jpg

:wacko: o_O'

EJ
Jun 6, 2008, 02:02 AM
hmm, ya know, there are about a hundread freaking varieties of claws, be more specific D<
I know i like being vague for you sord :wacko:

Sord
Jun 6, 2008, 02:29 AM
fuck you EJ >:U

I'll just give you the silence claw or whatever it was in PSU, white gauntlet, blue blades, special was either one-hit-kill or the sap certain fraction of HP thing. Okay, submissions are closed, I should have a chapter up sometime tomorrow. Probably late evening, as I've already been up over 24s (and most of that has been spent playing Neverwinter Nights.)

astuarlen
Jun 6, 2008, 10:12 AM
(and most of that has been spent playing Neverwinter Nights.)
Multiplayer?
I've been trying to get my brother to join me but no dice. :(

Nai_Calus
Jun 6, 2008, 10:51 AM
*hands Ast a d20*

Nitro Vordex
Jun 6, 2008, 12:32 PM
*facepalm*

astuarlen
Jun 6, 2008, 02:25 PM
Wasn't expecting that.

Nai_Calus
Jun 6, 2008, 02:26 PM
Yes you were.

Weeaboolits
Jun 6, 2008, 02:27 PM
*forcepalm*

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Sord
Jun 6, 2008, 02:33 PM
Multiplayer?
I've been trying to get my brother to join me but no dice. :(

With anyone in this house, like hell. Been playing community made modules.