Bomber's little comic. Enjoy. :)

[Bomber The Cosmonaut]

Lol, with Panels and everything.

I got bored, and I installed PSU into my Laptop a couple days ago.
I know. It looks like I just pasted stuff and put them wherever.
Because that's exactly what I did. /Rant

Anyway. Took me an hour or 2 to do 3 pages. I thought it came out pretty good.
Honestly, it was kind of a test strip to see if it actually works.
Hope you enjoy. :o

http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e28/bombahead2k6/PSU%20Stuff/TestComic1.jpg
I kinda went to the 5th floor, seeing as there was a crowd of people. And just took pics of my character in that crowd.

http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e28/bombahead2k6/PSU%20Stuff/TestComic2.jpg
It's really cliche` But.. That's how it was meant to be.

http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e28/bombahead2k6/PSU%20Stuff/TestComic3.jpg
I know it needs alot of work, but I think it came out really good. For a first try.

Thanks to the 10's of people that were just crowds of people in this little project.

If you guys think it's good, I'll definitely do more stuff. And feel free to ask if you wanna be in it, or even help out with it!

[Whitewarrior52]

Not bad. Keep up the good effort.

[ZyphNeko]

Fun stuff. Even for a test strip. Hah...looks like I'm not the only one to take a bunch of screenshots at complete random.

Let's hope for more~.

Neko~

[W0LB0T]

Lets see...things that are wrong.

1: All the images blend into each other, making it really hard to distinguish between each one. Might I suggest a border between each image.

2. the structure of the first panel just doesn't work. You really need to have all the text read left to right. The other 2 panels do have this correctly though.

3. Might I suggest putting in those little arrows in the speech bubbles, to avoid them looking bland. If you don't know what I mean, open the spoiler box for an example.
[spoiler-box]http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p106/W0LB0T/StickZ2.jpg[/spoiler-box]

4. Black as a background...nah! it clashes too much with the screenshots.