Emotions

[Solstis]

We are caged
In a web of our design
And we only allow
One escape

(YOU SEE WHAT I DID THERE! IT IS SAD)

And 'lo the mighty warrior came over the hill.
And the housewives did clutch their hands to their timorous chests
And swooned upon the feet of such a magnificent nature

(OH MAN SO EPIC)

Love ain't no sort of thang'
To be lettin' go like that, ya hear?
You grab hold like nothing matters
And never let go!
You hear me!
Never let go!

(IT IS LIKE CHICKEN SOUP, BUT FOR LOVE AND NOT COLDS)

Inspired by Leviatha(n)'s DeviantArt thread

[Weeaboolits]

I'm too tired to make sense of that, but the topic title made me recall the time me and a friend of mine stayed up all night discussing the possible advantages of certain emotions that would have lead to their development.

[Nitro Vordex]

I'm too tired to make sense of that,
FOCL.

[Solstis]

I'm too tired to make sense of that, but the topic title made me recall the time me and a friend of mine stayed up all night discussing the possible advantages of certain emotions that would have lead to their development.

It is basically me posting crappy poetry/prose that I wrote without thinking too much. The kind of stuff you see in a creative writing workshop.

The kind of stuff that does REALLY well.

I am paralyzed by my own creativity (and OCD).

I am! A *pathetic artist!

*Not really an artist.

Also, I bet that was an amazing conversation. I love that sort of stuff.

[Leviathan]

Inspired by Leviathan's DeviantArt thread

Fixed. :wacko:

Glad to see I inspired some art...

[pikachief]

i thought nitro stole your sig for a sec. :(

[Weeaboolits]

You finally caught that n?

[Tessu]

omg solstis
no u
i can write poetry better

I challenge you.

http://archives.bulbagarden.net/w/upload/0/0d/025Pikachu.png

[Outrider]

Solstis,

I was a Creative Writing major at college.

HOLY CRAP does that stuff ever go over really well.

Then again, it's great fun once you've become a super cynical critic in the later workshops.

Man, in one of my classes, a girl read her crappy vampire fiction to the class. It was agonizingly good, if you get what I mean. I had such a laugh about that afterwards.

[Sord]

god, more vampire fiction :disapprove:

also, read like generic crap as far as I'm concerned. Need to burn down those workshops.

[Outrider]

Hey, let's not go knocking writing workshops in general. I've heard more than a few genuinely good pieces of writing in them before. It really varies from group to group.

But in general, any beginner's level workshop or anything along those lines is going to be mostly terrible.

[Sord]

Hey, let's not go knocking writing workshops in general. I've heard more than a few genuinely good pieces of writing in them before. It really varies from group to group.

But in general, any beginner's level workshop or anything along those lines is going to be mostly terrible.

those, not all. having just come back from a 4 hour reading session at Borders, I certainly wouldn't want to kill off potential great writers in the world.

[Moo2u]

...vampires?
http://bookreviewsandmore.ca/uploaded_images/YouSuck-795835.jpg

[UnderscoreX]

Step 1 in writing good creative poetry, make sure it doesn't really mean anything but still sounds deep at the same time.

"They keep trying to pick apart life, common sense says it's just an f' in lie."

[Sayara]

Thousands of sorrow has fallen in this world.
What am i fighting for?
I lost love a long time ago...