A COMIC :o (aware, giant pics)

[TenebriS]

Well, I was working on something just for fun, dunno if it is the right place here, but i guess i post and if it's wrong you wil tell me anyway :P




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Hope you like it :)

[Sayara]

The type and the pictures suffer sharply from the size reduction im afraid :<

[TenebriS]

i know, but i dunno how to upload anywhere my pics, they are 2902x730 and everywhere i tried upload it sizes them down :S

[Mike]

Try making the strips smaller then.

[TenebriS]

im about to do that :o
just havent had time last days, i'll do my best get it done soon :S

[Ce'Nedra]

Why did i had the feeling it was Amy the first time i saw her XD

It's a nice entertainment though. Would be nice to see more off it sometime ^^

[Sayara]

Try a 2 x 2 frame vs a 4 x 1 frame. Sure it'll extend the page more vertically; but you have better control of the sizes that way.

[TenebriS]

i uploaded them all single, hope it works better now :o

[Mimo]

They look fine to me :3 Nice story btw, this is a good beginners mini guide(?) -could of sworn i said this before- XDD I want those guardian uniforms ;.; lol nice job on the angles, you must have taken so many.. x.x

[TenebriS]

thanks mimo :3

i made loads of screens, but was worth it ^-^

this guardians uniforms arent that hard to get :O you on JP PSU? i can give ya one :D

[Mimo]

REAlly????? :O I didn't know they were easy to get... well I'm kind of new so that could be it. XD Hmm I'd like something that could match my chocolatey neuman <3

[TenebriS]

well, i have so much spare ones, since i love clothes so much and try get em all XD

tell me which gender, and which color you would like most and i look if i ave one of them ^-^
http://phantasystaruniverse.jp/shoppingmall/gcshop/gcgachan/

after all just tell me where you wanna meet and i can give and we can do a run or twice :D

[Xefi]

great job on the pictures! the female cast is hot, dood. :penguin:

you guys didn't ran into polties? that's too bad.

[W0LB0T]

To be perfectly honest, that comic was just plain bad. Its just a series of uninteresting conversations being spouted from cardboard cutouts. Using apporpriate emotes can realy help put emotion to what the character is saying. While on the sjubect of characters, they have basicaly no personality or anything that makes them a character.

The story, or there in lack of has almost no sense of direction, it just hastialy jerks from one bland converstion to another. Its better to focus on a smaller and more focused storyline, rather than cram what looks like to be someones whole life story in one big load.

[Mike]

The story, or there in lack of has almost no sense of direction, it just hastialy jerks from one bland converstion to another. Its better to focus on a smaller and more focused storyline, rather than cram what looks like to be someones whole life story in one big load.

I'm terrible at creative writing so I wasn't going to say anything but W0lbot has got it right. Though if this is your first, I suppose it could be forgiven. It's likely better than anything I could whip up anyways. W0lbot's comics are really amusing. Check them out. This site (http://www.associatedcontent.com/article/112552/tips_for_plotting_how_to_create_a_fascinating.html ?singlepage=true&cat=4) might be helpful as well. Google thinks it might be helpful, at least.

[TenebriS]

if you say so, gimem a link to one of his fabolous comics and i will read em.

and well, i made this not to be funny, it should have been the story of Karen Erra, her first school days, maybe you understand one day....

[Sayara]

Also try this: http://www.pso-world.com/forums/showthread.php?t=73920

[TenebriS]

alright, i looked for his comics, and i really dont understand how anyone could like that...
sorry, i dont say my comic is sooo good, but to be honest, better than his for sure, what he made is nonsense, nothing more, do not tell me mine is bad, when you do stuff like you done and call that comic <.<

[GH499]

If your Karen Erra is the same one as PSU main female character. Then the story is incorrect. Try play the offline episode 1 again. He brief a bit on her child student life and how she become guardian. It is not like this.

[W0LB0T]

alright, i looked for his comics, and i really dont understand how anyone could like that...
sorry, i dont say my comic is sooo good, but to be honest, better than his for sure, what he made is nonsense, nothing more, do not tell me mine is bad, when you do stuff like you done and call that comic <.<

Don't tell me you tried to read Dhylaw. Don't ever expect to understand unless you understand FKL. I've done alot more than just that.

Secondly, how does putting down my work somehow negate my obversations. It's not a matter of who's work is better, its a matter of personal oppinion.

[Sayara]

and in this sense, each person's style is different too. While you are using PSU screenshots to make your comics; Wol uses those action figures (?) to make his. Furtherly I use scribbles to make my comics. The point is; if you got a good story; then you got a good comic.

[TenebriS]

true :o