Del and A'rath remake

[Garanz2]

OK, my 1st try at a fanfic turned out to be utter bollocks. I rushed straight into it and made myself look like a fool. So, I'm COMPLETELY remaking it, with a total storyline overhaul and a lot more planning. The new version is going to be much easier to understand and to follow, with more dialogue and characters. This is where you come in. If you want your character to appear in this new (and vastly improved) version of my 1st fic, please post your character's details here. I need:
Name
Level (optional)
Appearance
Personality
Likes/dislikes
Strengths/weaknesses
e.t.c.
Would you also please include what role you would like your character to play in the story. I need:
Pioneer 1 hunters: Brave and heroic but fated to (mostly) die.
Pioneer 2 hunters: Trying to find out what the hell is going on.
Renegade hunter who eventually befriends A'rath (the delsaber)
I also need strong leader figures such as (but not limited to) Squad leaders, shock troops, etc

Give me another chance to write a decent fic and i promise you won't be disappointed.

[SlashEdgewind]

although I realize that I'm overusing this character name... I like it.. but I change the character.. whee!

Name: Slash Edgewind

level:140 *yeah I'm really only at 41.. but let's keep that between us okay? okay*

appearance: well, I would say Vash like.. from Trigun.. but if you don't know that, then Blonde spikey hair, red armor, and I liked the face with the mask over the mouth.

Personality: yeah.. he's a badass.. but at sometimes he's a complete klutz, he always makes friends wherever he goes, he's kind of an idiot, but at some times he's serious, and he doesn't like hurthing people

Likes/Dislikes: Slash likes the ladies, fortunatley he has a thick skull.. so he doesn't get to hurt when they kick the crap out of him, he also likes hangin out with friends.. he dislikes anybody who goes out of their way to hurt people, especially when they go out of their way to hurt his friends.

Strengths: mastery of his blade arm.. a really powerful blade arm, not to mention he's very fast

weaknesses: the ladies.. he always goes after the ladies.. and usually ends up with a broken arm *his only real one*, he also goes out of his way to avoid killing other hunters.. even if they're trying to kill him

I'd like him to be from Pioneer 1.. but if that means he dies.. then probably he could be like a renegade Hunter.. unles you make him not die.. which would be cool.

oh and he's a HUmar

if you want a history.. well... I'll think about it

Slash

[Garanz2]

Is del and a'rath so unpopular to have only had 6 views so far? come on! I'm not that bad...

[Garanz2]

Okayyyy then...

Slash edgewind, welcome to the story. If you don't like your part please tell me. You will be a hunter from p1, and as the lucky 1st submision, you will get to survive!

If i dont get any more character submissions soon, i may have to use my own characters.

[SlashEdgewind]

YAY!! I WILL LIVE!!!!... it's kinda depressing when you realize that most people wanna kill you off.. I said that out loud didn't I... *loads shotgun* hold still

Slash

[Garanz2]

bear in mind that your character will probably be mentally/physically scarred, seeing his comerades torn apart by the very creatures they created...

[SlashEdgewind]

oh.. well... as long as I'm alive... I dun care

Slash

[Garanz2]

I've started to write the story now, but please bear in mind that i don't have a lot of free time, because i have to go to school and in the evenings i have to revise for the upcoming end-of-year exams. When i get a bit of free time i will try to get this done, but it may take quite a while before it is finished.

I know you can't wait!

If you can, tell me why please