Thesuperloser
05-31-2003, 06:44 PM
ok guys this is my first fan fic u hope u like it if not u mean.
Prolog
Brian looked to the left and saw a Racast in bule and white armor on the ground. Then when he looked right he saw a Humar with white armor and lightbule hair on the ground not moveing. When he looked up he saw a hooded shadow standing over him then yelled "Fool you though your group could stop us?" Then another shadow came in and siad "We are masters, unstopable. Now for your treason againest the super one you will die." Right in front of Brian's face he saw a foie blast comeing right at him and all he could think was "Is this the end"
Chapter one
What is this
What you were reading happen will happen will let me start. Brian is a 14 year old Ramar in red and black armor with green eyes and blode hair. He loved to go around ragol and see the things on it. Today eveything was as nice as a plant were evil is found eveywhere could be.
Then Brian heared a low yelp. Brian pulled his raygun out just in case that thing is not friendly. Than Brian felt a great pain in his back to see he just was attack. "O great not a group of wolves they are to annoying." Then he turn around and saw another wolf going for a back attack. Brian siad "O well if they want to play then lets play."
Then with in a flase of photon all the wolves where dead. Brian was looking around at the when he saw something shiny on the ground. He went over to it and saw it was a gun. But this gun was unlike any gun Brian had seen any before.
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Hello im your host Zeke and this is "Pain for upgrade." Here we puyt Robots to the test to see if they can take the pain, if they do they get a free upgrade. Lets meet our fool im mean Robot. His name is B.O.C. any hopful not your last words before we start, "Yea lets do this." Ok here we go todays weapon is mechguns ready go. One round was shot at B.O.C. After the round was over B.O.C. siad is that all you have." Nooo this is just the first test of many. Now next weaks poll is Frying pan, Broom, OR Twin Psycho guns. So untill next time keep killing.
Ok will thats it for the first chapter tell me what u think and that poll is for real just wirte with your reply what weapon you want them to use.
<font size=-1>[ This Message was edited by: Thesuperloser on 2003-06-02 17:49 ]</font>
Prolog
Brian looked to the left and saw a Racast in bule and white armor on the ground. Then when he looked right he saw a Humar with white armor and lightbule hair on the ground not moveing. When he looked up he saw a hooded shadow standing over him then yelled "Fool you though your group could stop us?" Then another shadow came in and siad "We are masters, unstopable. Now for your treason againest the super one you will die." Right in front of Brian's face he saw a foie blast comeing right at him and all he could think was "Is this the end"
Chapter one
What is this
What you were reading happen will happen will let me start. Brian is a 14 year old Ramar in red and black armor with green eyes and blode hair. He loved to go around ragol and see the things on it. Today eveything was as nice as a plant were evil is found eveywhere could be.
Then Brian heared a low yelp. Brian pulled his raygun out just in case that thing is not friendly. Than Brian felt a great pain in his back to see he just was attack. "O great not a group of wolves they are to annoying." Then he turn around and saw another wolf going for a back attack. Brian siad "O well if they want to play then lets play."
Then with in a flase of photon all the wolves where dead. Brian was looking around at the when he saw something shiny on the ground. He went over to it and saw it was a gun. But this gun was unlike any gun Brian had seen any before.
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Hello im your host Zeke and this is "Pain for upgrade." Here we puyt Robots to the test to see if they can take the pain, if they do they get a free upgrade. Lets meet our fool im mean Robot. His name is B.O.C. any hopful not your last words before we start, "Yea lets do this." Ok here we go todays weapon is mechguns ready go. One round was shot at B.O.C. After the round was over B.O.C. siad is that all you have." Nooo this is just the first test of many. Now next weaks poll is Frying pan, Broom, OR Twin Psycho guns. So untill next time keep killing.
Ok will thats it for the first chapter tell me what u think and that poll is for real just wirte with your reply what weapon you want them to use.
<font size=-1>[ This Message was edited by: Thesuperloser on 2003-06-02 17:49 ]</font>