Sagasu
06-04-2003, 07:25 PM
This has nothin to do with my story, or makin another one. I just want to see how some people judge, or what they think what sets a story apart from another.
Myself, I can understand most works, I can see the thoughts behind the words, but I really find enjoyment in a well developed plot, that flows smoothly, that doesn't make me think that I missed somethin.
Another thin, chars. Yo chars really, most of the time, what you, or what you wan't to be like, would do if you were in a certain situation. But thats makin another copy of u, its nnot really makin a char, a char is thought out, she/he/it have its own personality, not yours, it has its own thoughts, not yours. I made a bad mistake when I first started to write stories, you could see the same thought, my own, behind all of the chars, and I sent it to my dad/who is a writer/ to evaluate, and he asked me a question,
"what would Dameon do if he was asked to dance"
"Problably tell her to piss off{I cuss in front of my father}"
Them he asked me what I would do, and I found myself sayin the exact same thin.
Myself, I can understand most works, I can see the thoughts behind the words, but I really find enjoyment in a well developed plot, that flows smoothly, that doesn't make me think that I missed somethin.
Another thin, chars. Yo chars really, most of the time, what you, or what you wan't to be like, would do if you were in a certain situation. But thats makin another copy of u, its nnot really makin a char, a char is thought out, she/he/it have its own personality, not yours, it has its own thoughts, not yours. I made a bad mistake when I first started to write stories, you could see the same thought, my own, behind all of the chars, and I sent it to my dad/who is a writer/ to evaluate, and he asked me a question,
"what would Dameon do if he was asked to dance"
"Problably tell her to piss off{I cuss in front of my father}"
Them he asked me what I would do, and I found myself sayin the exact same thin.