Doomed2k
06-26-2003, 03:39 AM
This is my first ever Fanfiction and I wanted to know how it turnned out for the first chapter.
A FanFiction By Anthony Angel
The Doomed Project
Chapter One - The Birth of a Doomed Angel
Seifer and Jenova were both hunters hired by the principle himself to go to Ragol. They were expected to find the cause of the explosion on Ragol and reconnect Pioneer 1 to Pioneer 2. Together this team was unstoppable, Seifer weild the legendary Yamato blades while Jenova held in her hands, a Dragon Slayer. These two exposed the emptiness of the forest, defeated the altered beasts inside the cold, damp caves, took control of the mechanical mines by force, and finally defeated the Dark Falz. Or did they?
Seifer and Jenova had one child which they called Angel. Angel excelled his parents in many points including speed and strength but not limited to intelegence and accuracy. He enrolled into the hunter's acadamy to graduate as a force. He graduated at age 15 which is about 3 years earlyer than his parents. His parents finally noticed his full power and decided to bring him to the ruins to show their son how to fight rightfully. Angel donned a saber at the time so his fighting did little good. His parents did more of the work until the arrived at the area where Dark Falz was defeated. The area was hideous with a living clay ground and pieces of a shattered monolith scattered around.
Angel stepped forward to the cold area of the ruins when he turned around to see his parents on the floor shaking. The look in their eyes were one of fear. Angel started to get scared, he tried to cast ryuker but the spell wouldn't cast. He took a telepipe off of his father and tried to use it but to no prevail. His parents then stopped breathing and Angel then heard a sound. He turned around to see the supreme darkness himself, Dark Falz. Dark Falz let out an evil laugh and attacked Angel and he passed out.
Angel was found nearly dead and needed donated parts to survive. The parts that were donated came from his parents. Angel was now an experimental hybrid of a hunter, ranger, and force. He donned android parts on his left arm and in his torso, newmen and human muscles that let him still cast spells. He was burdened with the experiments of the Doomed project.
The Doomed project consisted of three people: Angel, Demon, and Mist. They were all "built" similar and had unique skills. Angel could inbue his weapons with spells, Demon consisted of superhuman strength that could shatter even titanium, Mist was probly the most unique of them all being able to summon familars with spells like foie or barta. The Doomed project sent the three of them on a training mission to test these skills.
The mission consisted of being able to reach the end of the mines without a telepipe or mag type item. Can the team survive the mission? Find out in Chapter Two of The Doomed Project.
A FanFiction By Anthony Angel
The Doomed Project
Chapter One - The Birth of a Doomed Angel
Seifer and Jenova were both hunters hired by the principle himself to go to Ragol. They were expected to find the cause of the explosion on Ragol and reconnect Pioneer 1 to Pioneer 2. Together this team was unstoppable, Seifer weild the legendary Yamato blades while Jenova held in her hands, a Dragon Slayer. These two exposed the emptiness of the forest, defeated the altered beasts inside the cold, damp caves, took control of the mechanical mines by force, and finally defeated the Dark Falz. Or did they?
Seifer and Jenova had one child which they called Angel. Angel excelled his parents in many points including speed and strength but not limited to intelegence and accuracy. He enrolled into the hunter's acadamy to graduate as a force. He graduated at age 15 which is about 3 years earlyer than his parents. His parents finally noticed his full power and decided to bring him to the ruins to show their son how to fight rightfully. Angel donned a saber at the time so his fighting did little good. His parents did more of the work until the arrived at the area where Dark Falz was defeated. The area was hideous with a living clay ground and pieces of a shattered monolith scattered around.
Angel stepped forward to the cold area of the ruins when he turned around to see his parents on the floor shaking. The look in their eyes were one of fear. Angel started to get scared, he tried to cast ryuker but the spell wouldn't cast. He took a telepipe off of his father and tried to use it but to no prevail. His parents then stopped breathing and Angel then heard a sound. He turned around to see the supreme darkness himself, Dark Falz. Dark Falz let out an evil laugh and attacked Angel and he passed out.
Angel was found nearly dead and needed donated parts to survive. The parts that were donated came from his parents. Angel was now an experimental hybrid of a hunter, ranger, and force. He donned android parts on his left arm and in his torso, newmen and human muscles that let him still cast spells. He was burdened with the experiments of the Doomed project.
The Doomed project consisted of three people: Angel, Demon, and Mist. They were all "built" similar and had unique skills. Angel could inbue his weapons with spells, Demon consisted of superhuman strength that could shatter even titanium, Mist was probly the most unique of them all being able to summon familars with spells like foie or barta. The Doomed project sent the three of them on a training mission to test these skills.
The mission consisted of being able to reach the end of the mines without a telepipe or mag type item. Can the team survive the mission? Find out in Chapter Two of The Doomed Project.