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MarkIII
Aug 17, 2003, 04:00 PM
hey guys would anyone mind reading my story of chapter one the 'blood brothers' i'd like some input on what you think of it

MAGusZ87
Aug 17, 2003, 04:07 PM
sure, but only cause ur brother's cool lol

Kadou
Aug 17, 2003, 04:13 PM
I took a look at it. That's far too short to be called a chapter, that is, unless you're writing a short story (5-10 chapters, more or less).

You're not supposed to post anything related to Fan Works in the General section, so this will likely be moved.

MAGusZ87
Aug 17, 2003, 04:23 PM
OMG that sounds just like how Neverwinter put it lol the big bad ranger saved by a caster hehe write more so far i love it =)