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Shake
Aug 26, 2003, 11:51 AM
copy and paste the url below into your url bar...

http://www.geocities.com/shinmunky123/psocomic2.JPG



if you want to check out the other comic, or check out the snapshots I have copy and paste this...

http://www.geocities.com/shinmunky123

I hope you like it.

Neoluke12
Aug 26, 2003, 12:03 PM
thats good!!!!!!! I wont ruin it, i think you need movement between pics though!!!! but still funny

Shake
Aug 26, 2003, 12:10 PM
Heh, thanks.

Yeah, I was thinking about that. The next one will be more of a story I think.

It just takes time to snap, upload, snap new one, upload, snap new one, upload...

HUnewearl_Meira
Aug 26, 2003, 12:19 PM
lmao... Quite amusing... That second to last panel really catches one off guard.

A couple of quick tips, though.
First, paint-bucket the balloon before writing the text.
Second, need some arrows on the balloons to indicate who's talking to who...

BOC
Aug 26, 2003, 02:26 PM
funny stuff dude, but u could do with a bit more movement between the pics http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wink.gif

PEACE!!!

Sunblast
Aug 26, 2003, 03:46 PM
Hehe, that was pretty good. Really does need the arrows on the speech bubbles so you can tell who's talking, though. Also, can't wait for the next Sprite Comic. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif Anyway, good stuff!

Shake
Aug 26, 2003, 05:37 PM
I had to redo this comic like, three times because my pc froze up. I must have forgot the arrows, sorry about that.

Yeah, I didnt feel like going ack the third time and making the bubbles all nice and pretty, sorry. Lol, thats my laziness.

Sunblast
Aug 27, 2003, 10:24 AM
Don't sweat it. Just remember to put them in next time. We all have laziness, especially me!