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mr_rubbish
10-22-2003, 12:38 PM
Studying the read patterns for my fan-fic Minor Transformation (http://www.pso-world.com/viewtopic.php?topic=67095&forum=12&65) it looks like I have about six regular readers. This is a fifty percent increase over 'Last Survivor'.

Unfortunately 'extenuating circumstances' mean that I will be out of the country until the 11th of November. The destination country is unlikely to have a net-enabled PC for me to access so I will have to go cold- http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/turkey.gif for over two weeks.

I've accelerated my posting schedule to make sure that I leave my faithful on a nice cliff-hanger till my return (but I'll be posting chapters daily when I get back anyway).

ANYWAY.... The reason of this poll is that I want to know what the readers think. This story has consumed about 70 hours of time to write and the fate of my 'North Tower' fiction hangs in the balance. I write my stories, firstly to get them out of my head, but more importantly so that others will enjoy them. If no one is enjoying them then I have failed in some way as a writer.

As a result I wish the people that vote here explain their choice and more importantly are BRUTALLY HONEST (please note all criticism MUST be constructive). I would rather people tell me what I'm doing wrong / my weak points than be heaped with hollow praise (which feels nice anyway http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif ). If you can't be honest with me then it's hard to be friends. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

This is what I think of Minor Transformation:

M_BlackHawk
10-22-2003, 02:31 PM
I've been reading "Minor Transformation", on my free time (which is rare these days), and have been enjoying it. I just haven't had a chance to post anything, because the minute I finish reading, I've got to go do something else.

Keep writing, pal. Can't wait to see the next chapter.

later

M_BlackHawk

Sagasu
10-22-2003, 08:22 PM
Your leaving me all alone!!! NOOOOO!!!!

damn, damn, damn, damn........


Its a great story and you should write more! ^_^
BTW: What country are you going to? [[small]yes I'm very nosy]

deathreaper
10-22-2003, 08:40 PM
pretty good but just not my type thing to read in my spare time