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Jaks
Nov 3, 2003, 07:47 PM
All right I said 6 was the finale, but I got bored so
I'll keep writing these. This time it's real short.
I have nothing against Ep.3, okay?


Morning on Ragol:
The Hunter-Arks battle has begun... sorta.
Jaks a hunter is fighting an Ark, who is named Bob.

Jaks: you will die against my Kerazy Sword!
Bob:Oh yeah? I summon, Delsaber and Hildebear!
Jaks: Uhh, don't you think thats a little Yugioh-ish?
Bob:Shut up! Sil Dragon! Arise!
Jaks:Haha! you Kaiba wannabe!*kills the Delsaber*
Bob: Sil Dragon attack!
Jaks:I equip Kama MAGs.
Bob:Go Sil Dragon kill him!
Jaks: Ha! Photon Blast Pilla!
Bob:Nooooo!
Jaks:Now I get to rip up your cards!
Bob:No, not that!
Jaks: STFU! BTW, I thought there were no boss cards?
Bob:Actually no one can be sure. Our game hasn't been
out anywher for that long.
Jaks:Works for me!

END

Jaks
Nov 3, 2003, 09:35 PM
Please respond...

Spartan117
Nov 3, 2003, 09:51 PM
7 is 2 short and its kinda stupid. Youre other six are good. i suggest making a new fic thats not what a crazy noob

Hikosaka
Nov 3, 2003, 10:21 PM
Don't bump your threads with requests for response. If people want to respond, they will.

As for the fic, it is quite short, and doesn't have much substance. It's hard to respond much to something that's not much in the first place. The others before had the merit for being somewhat amusing. If you want to continue with more WACNs, that's fine, but try putting more effort into it. You'll get more of the responses you ask for.

Jaks
Nov 4, 2003, 07:29 PM
All right I'll make a different Fic.
Not a funny one though... I have no comedic ideas...

Spartan117
Nov 4, 2003, 07:48 PM
oh theres tons of comedic titles available.

Just think harder.