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HUnewearl_Meira
04-06-2004, 04:14 PM
This really just rolled right along. I was kinda worried about whether or not I'd actually have any idea of what I wanted to do with this, but I just kinda started with the first thing that came to my mind, and ran with it.

So, anyway, you guys asked for it, so here it is. The Recollection of Dragoon!

EDIT: How'd I forget the "FanFic:" tag?

Enjoy, folks!




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It jiggles when I poke it. I will poke it again. Poke. Poke poke poke.

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I had a tragic battle with a tube of shoe goo, that morning. I looked at it, and it angered me. I saw it, and wanted to read its directions label, but even though the tube was made of some sort of aluminum alloy, the contents made it squishy. I had to kill it. So I did. I am now banned from Jolly-Marts all over the city. I did manage to pick off most of the merchandice that got stuck to me, however. I believe there's still a box of plastic spoons stuck to my back, however. BUT DANGIT, THAT TUBE OF GOO WAS ASKING FOR IT!! Grrr.
I think Scejthe is mad at me. She's banned now, too. Actually, I'm a little annoyed at her, myself. Every time we came near the pet section, she started pushing me away from it. I ONLY WANTED TO LOOK AT THE FISHIES!! THE FISHIES! Fishies. I mean really, you strangle a stray dog ONCE and all of a sudden the world thinks you're incapable of looking at fishies.
We were in the miscellaneous repair section. "What's this?" I said, as I looked at a fat, metal tube. It said "Shoe goo". "Shoooo... Gooo?" I said. I was intrigued. It was goo for shoes! What a marvel!
I picked it up, and Scejthe immediately told me, "Please put it down, Dragoon! You're going to get us in trouble. Let's just get the bolt plate thingies and go."
I ignored her, and picked it up, anyway. As I lifted it, I realized that not only was it a metal tube, but it was filled with something squishy! SQUISHY!! I started to get excited. I was starting to feel overwhelmed with the joy of knowing that there was something squishy in the middle of this aluminum construct! "Scejthe!!" I yelled, "IT SQUISHES!!"
"Please, Dragoon! Put it down before you get us in trouble," she said. Ha. Put it down, indeed.
"But... I want to kill it, Scejthe," I replied.
"Dragoon, you can't kill it! It's an inanimate object!"
"BUT IT SQUISHES!!"
"It's not alive!"
"IT SQUISHES!!!"
"Put it down, Dragoon!"
"I'm going to kill it."
"No you're not! Put it down! Please!"
"I SAID I'M GOING TO KILL IT!" Then I made a grunting noise, and I looked straight at the thing in my hand, shaking it, "I WANT TO KIIILLLLLL YOU!!!" Saying this enabled my Judgement Algorithm.
Initial results read, "INDIFFERENT. More data required."
So I read the instructions. "Clean sole of shoe before applying. Apply liberally to inside surface. Hold for 15 minutes or until dry."
I continued the algorithm. "INDIFFERENT +2. More data required."
So I read the warning label. "DO NOT INHALE FUMES. IF INGESTED, CONSULT A PHYSICIAN IMMEDIATELY. AVOID CONTACT WITH EYES. IF CONTACT IS MADE WITH EYES, FLUSH EYES WITH WATER IMMEDIATELY, AND CONSULT A PHYSICIAN."
The algorithm finished, and output, "KILL IMMEDIATELY."
"I'm going to kill it, Scejthe," I said.
"Dragoon, no!"
"It's going to DIIIIIE!" So I violently ripped it apart. Then I found myself covered in the stuff, and my first thought was, "It's fighting back!" So I struggled to throw it off of myself. The more I struggled, the more entangled I became. Scejthe screamed.
I leaped into a roll, out into the main aisle, where I made a loud, electronic howling noise, not unlike a fog horn recieving a sudden jolt of power. I beat my chest, and began to rampage, trying to deal with the goo. Scejthe chased after me, but I only ran.
I tripped over a display, and began to roll. By the time it was over with, I'd knocked down six shelves, and broken a refridgerated aisle thing. By the time the security guards approached us, I had calmly taken residence on the ice, which I discovered could cool down the goo enough for me to break it off. I had achieved victory.

I remember when I met Scejthe. As a perogative, I needed to identify her, so that I could assign a death value to her. So I ran up to her and shouted, "I WANT TO KIIIIILLLLLLL YOU!!!" She was rather small, as she still is. I gathered more data, noting that her hair was blueish, and tied up in a bonnet. Dark red garments. As I stood over her, sucking and blowing air in and out of my olfactoral sensor array, she began to cry.
My Judgement Algorithm stopped after six lines of code and told me, "DO NOT KILL!! DO NOT KILL!!" It's kind of rare that I get that sort of reply from the algorithm, so I heeded it immediately.
So I continued, "But I won't. It's nothing personal. I want to kill everything." Then she ran. She was rather scared of me, until I pounded that guy that attacked her. Since then, she doesn't feel safe in certain areas of the city without me. That's why I was with her, that day.
We walked through the park on the way to the Bull's-Eye shopping center, Jolly-Mart's chief competitor. Some young fleshy people were playing with a ball. They were kicking it back and forth. I presume that they were practicing some Go-Go Ball tactics. My Runtime Judgement algorithm read them as "INDIFFERENT" so I ignored them.
Then the ball hit my head. Runtime Judgement Algorithm immediately registered, "KILL," so I immediately killed the ball. I shouted some strange noise, grabbed the ball, tore it in two, and stomped on a few times, before continuing on down the path.
Scejthe grabbed my hand as I stepped around afterward, looking to see if any of it was still moving. "Dragoon!" she said, "It's okay! It's just a ball!"
"But I killed it!"
"Yes... Yes you did. We're all safe from it, now." Then she gestured something at the kids, and they backed off, whistling. I guess she warned them.

After our walk through the park, and after I'd beat a few small rodents with a tree, we got back out to the street, and walked a block to Bull's-Eye. I saw another tube of that shoe goo stuff, and eyed it. Scejthe wasted little time in pushing me forward. As we moved on, I pointed angrily at it, and said, "I'll get you, you little freakish thing. You'll pay. Oh yes, you'll pay. Hrrrmmmm."
Right about then I bumped into something tall and skinny. So I reached out and grabbed it. When I put my face in front of his, I came across a pair of eyes. My sensory equipment did their things. My olfactoral facilities were telling me that there was the distinct smell of engine grease on this fellow. I was also detecting balogna. And Newman flesh. I chose to do an indepth scan. Laser scanning tools ran down his face, giving detailed data on the pale skin my optical devices were identifying.
"I know you." I said.
"You don't say?" he replied.
I took a good strong intake into my olfactoral sensors and said, "You smell like balogna and engine grease."
"Yes, I'm very tall."
I let go of him, and he immediately rubbed his arms where I had ahold of him. He checked his spikey blue hair, and stared blankly at me.
Scejthe asked, "Dragoon, who is this?"
My immediate response was, "Someone that I want to kill. I won't though, because he's my friend."
Crankshaft pulled his finger out of his ear when he realized that Scejthe was there. "Oh, hi!" he said, then offered that same hand to her. Scejthe declined to shake his hand, choosing to curtsey, instead. So I took his hand and shook it vigorously.
Right about then, I saw a short woman with yellow hair step up next to Crankshaft. "You have a small woman with you, too," I said.
Crankshaft nodded, "Yeah, Laya wanted to get some hair curlers, so I volunteered to go with her."
Then the small woman hit Crankshaft on the hip. "YOU talked me into coming here with you to get some sort of clamps, then we were going to get lunch!"
Crankshaft blinked. "Oh yeah, clamps, that's what I was here for," then he wandered off quickly. Laya looked at me, shrugged and followed. I quirked my head. Crankshaft makes Dragoon confused.
So I shouted the first message at him that I could generate, "CONSULT A PHYSICIAN IMMEDIATELY!" Then I stood around for a while, until Scejthe came back to me, carrying a fairly small, dirty cardboard box.
"I found the thing they sent us after," she said. I slowly reached out, put my thumb and index finger on either side of it, lifted it from her hand, then abruptly pulled it back to myself to examine it.
I looked at each side twice, then opened up the box. Inside was a stack of metal plates with 3-millimeter holes in the corners. Further checks confirmed that they were within tolerance limits. I closed the box up, returned it to her and said, "Avoid contact with eyes."
She looked at me funny as she took the box back, and said, "What the heck is THAT supposed to mean?"
To this, I replied most sensibly, "If ingested, consult a physician, immediately."
"Whatever you say, Dragoon. Let's go pay for this and leave."
"Flush eyes with water!"
At the checkout counter, I informed the cashier that I wanted to kill her, but that I would refrain from doing so. We got a discount. On the way out, I snapped and pointed cheerily at the guy in the red vest standing next to the door and said in passing, "I want to kill you!" He declined to check our receipt.

When we got back to the Post-Bortevo building, we were walking down hallways. Some guy said to me, "Hi, Dragoon!"
And I replied, "I want to kill you!"
Then someone else was just, "Good morning, Dragoon!"
And I replied, "I want to kill you, too!"
Then someone said, "Good afternoon, Dragoon!"
So I grabbed him, and yelled, "IT'S NOT THE AFTERNOON! I WANT TO KILL YOU!" Then I put him down and said, "But dont worry, I won't." Scejthe just kinda watched.
Then we found Paladin, and Scejthe presented the bag with the box of bolt plates in it. "Here you go, Sir," she said.
Paladin took them, and examined them. Meanwhile, I was secretly plotting a plan to kill the stuffed Rappy sitting on the computer monitor of the computer in the office we were standing next to. Paladin was saying something. Then he grabbed my shoulder and said, "Dragoon?"
I looked at him and said, "Do not inhale fumes?"
"Right," he said, then continued, "Look, be more careful when you go into stores, okay? There tends to be a lot of people in those places that don't deserve to die, and we may feel the need to send you out on errands again, okay?"
I saluted him and said, "Kill a physician immediately!" Then I thought about what I had just said, and wondered why I said it for a while.

Three hundred beats later, I lowered my arm, and left the building. It was time to kill things. I went to the Hunters' Guild, and after informing the lady behind the counter of my intentions to resist the urge to kill her, I looked over the quest listings. I found one that sparked my interest. "Endless Nightmare #4," it said. The description described a lot of killing, so I took the quest. I was getting excited.
A soldier briefed me. He said, "First of all, don't ask who I am."
So I replied, "Why? Who are you?"
He shook his head and said, "I only want you, hunter, to accomplish this particular quest. Now I'll explain why I want you to do, today."
"Get to the part where I kill things."
"Go down to a specific area in the Ruins. Eliminate the monsters until no more appear. There will be an almost endless stream of monsters, so be careful."
"So you want me to just kill things, right?"
"That's right."
"And you say they'll just keep coming?"
"That's correct."
"They'll just keep coming and coming?"
"An almost endless stream of monsters, yes."
"Because if they don't, I'm going to be very upset."
"Report to me when you defeat all the monsters."
"Okay, but I'm going to kill them."
Then I went down to the Ruins as he requested, and started killing. I threw Dimenians, I threw claws, I threw Delsabers, I broke doors, I used parts of the floor and walls as weapons, and the only thing on my checklist that I was unable to check was the nearly endless stream of monsters. I mean, yeah, there was quite a few, but it just kinda ended after a while. Squish.
So I went back to the soldier, and quite angrily, I yelled, "DO NOT INHALE FUMES! IF INGESTED, CONSULT YOU IMMEDIATELY!! IF CONTACT IS MADE WITH WATER, FLUSH EYES WITH PHYSICIAN AND AVOID INGESTION!"
Then, while he was still bewildered and trying to figure out what just happened, I collected my money from the guild and left. I decided it was time to visit Meira.

I walked up to the nurse behind the desk at the entrance to the hospital. "I want to kill you. I'm here to see Meira Bragwin. Is she still in the same room?"
She looked up at me a little started and said, "Er, you must be Dragoon, aren't you?"
"Consult physician immediately," I said.
"Um, right. Anyway, she's still in the same room, but not for long, she's due to be release in a hundred beats or so."
"Thank you, flush eyes with water."
I walked down the hall a distance, and poked my head into the wrong room. I saw an old man on an oxygen machine, with some serious life-support machines going. "Oh, I'm sorry, wrong room. I want to kill you."
The old man looked at me and said, "Please do."
I replied to him in a mildly angry tone, "Don't tempt me, Old man; 'cause if I do, I won't regret it later."
Then I pulled my head out from that door, wiggled it around a little bit, and walked across the hall to Meira's room. "Sorry, Meira, I just threatened your neighbor across the hall."
"Hi, Dragoon! Don't worry about Mr. Jenkins, he's chronically depressed, and wants to die, anyway."
"Don't tell me that."
Then Zeirom showed up. "Ready to get your stuff packed up, Meira?"
She smiled and nodded rather excitedly. "Yep!" she said, "I'm quite anxious, in fact! I'm gonna get out there and find a way to save Randon!"
Zeirom opened up a closet, pulled out a suitcase and started carefully putting things into it. He stopped when he came to a lacey pair of underwear, with a little nylon bow on the front. He held it up and said, "My my, Meira. I never knew."
She threw a plastic cup at him and yelled, "Oh shush, Zeirom!"
Zeirom seemed to chuckle, and returned to the task he'd been performing. "So did you finish your story?" he asked.
"Yes, I did, actually. I wrote all the way up to when I woke up here."
"Good," he replied. "Now people can read of my strength and heroism!" He posed dramatically, flexing his arms as he said that. Then he returned to packing his things.
"You wrote a story, Meira?" I asked.
"Yeah! I figured that since I had so much time just sitting around in here, I'd use it to recount how I got here," she replied.
"Oooohhh, do not inhale fumes!" I proclaimed. And that is how I was inspired to write this.

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navci
04-06-2004, 04:31 PM
Right about then I bumped into something tall and skinny. So I reached out and grabbed it.


Took me to register this is indeed a person. Rather than... well, a stick of some sort. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif


At the checkout counter, I informed the cashier that I wanted to kill her, but that I would refrain from doing so. We got a discount.


I might need to do that more often. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

This is great. I love it. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif
The world just REALLY need to see more of Dragoon. Teee heeee. Darn, now I want to write my fic and have Dragoon appear in it.

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You deserve both of this for an excellent short, as well as being an excellent short that is funny, and excellent funny short of my favourite character. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Scejntjynahl
04-06-2004, 04:39 PM
I love the way you begin it, and he is true to his word "KILL KILL KILL", only Dragoon would get upset at the lack of enemies in EN4, I personally fear it *shivers*

Nice very nice. Cant wait for more http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

BOC
04-06-2004, 06:49 PM
today is indeed a good day to be a recollection fan!

first the 10th and final chapter of VG

and this most excellent short.


"DO NOT INHALE FUMES. IF INGESTED, CONSULT A PHYSICIAN IMMEDIATELY. AVOID CONTACT WITH EYES. IF CONTACT IS MADE WITH EYES, FLUSH EYES WITH WATER IMMEDIATELY, AND CONSULT A PHYSICIAN."
The algorithm finished, and output, "KILL IMMEDIATELY."
"I'm going to kill it, Scejthe," I said.
"Dragoon, no!"
"It's going to DIIIIIE!"


^ priceless! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

honestly i haven't laughed as much as i did reading this for a long time!! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif and thats saying something!

if u ever feel the urge to write another dragoon short between paladin and the one after it, give in the urge! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Excellent! Every dragoon fans dream.

PEACE!!!

navci
04-06-2004, 06:58 PM
I wanna go on a date with Dragoon. I think that would be so incredibly horrible it'd be amusing.

HUnewearl_Meira
04-06-2004, 07:00 PM
On 2004-04-06 16:58, navi wrote:
I wanna go on a date with Dragoon. I think that would be so incredibly horrible it'd be amusing.



Don't be giving me ideas I might regret. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_mad.gif



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navci
04-06-2004, 07:04 PM
On 2004-04-06 17:00, HUnewearl_Meira wrote:
Don't be giving me ideas I might regret. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_mad.gif


http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif
No. Seriously you need to set Dragoon up with a date. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif They can go to the zoo or something.

HUnewearl_Meira
04-06-2004, 07:08 PM
QUICK! HIDE THE ORANGOOS!!

FreedomJu
04-06-2004, 08:16 PM
100% Dragoon, and that means more laughs you can shake a......... a Dark Force at!

HuBBsDoctor
04-06-2004, 09:09 PM
OMG I love it all! This is hilarious s***! keep it coming.

Nai_Calus
04-06-2004, 09:16 PM
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAa

http://www.iankunx.net/n0lz0r3d.jpg

I dunno, I'm with Dragoon on EN4. There need to be more monsters. :3

Jared_T
04-07-2004, 01:07 AM
So I went back to the soldier, and quite angrily, I yelled, "DO NOT INHALE FUMES! IF INGESTED, CONSULT YOU IMMEDIATELY!! IF CONTACT IS MADE WITH WATER, FLUSH EYES WITH PHYSICIAN AND AVOID INGESTION!"


I'd hate to see what he'd do if he got a hold Shakespeare. RUN AWAY http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_lol.gif http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_lol.gif

Good stuff.

HUnewearl_Meira
04-08-2004, 10:04 AM
On 2004-04-06 23:07, Jared_T wrote:

I'd hate to see what he'd do if he got a hold Shakespeare. RUN AWAY http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_lol.gif http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_lol.gif

Good stuff.


I can see him reciting lines from Hamlet with a Hildebear's Head in his hand.

KaFKa
04-08-2004, 10:23 AM
http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_lol.gif http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_lol.gif http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_lol.gif http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_lol.gif http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_lol.gif http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_lol.gif http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_lol.gif

thats the best chapter ever made, meira http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

"consult physician!!!" and here i though crankshaft was random.

but yeah, this is dragoon. although i must say, i was slightly let down. for dragoon, he is amazingly composed. i kinda expected him to be more childish and less vocabulary *shrug*

either way, i made the mistake of reading this at work.

HUnewearl_Meira
04-08-2004, 11:24 AM
On 2004-04-08 08:23, KaFKa wrote:
but yeah, this is dragoon. although i must say, i was slightly let down. for dragoon, he is amazingly composed. i kinda expected him to be more childish and less vocabulary *shrug*



Well... He is a robot. His AI might be relatively simple, but he's still got the necessary resources to support an internal dictionary.

Garanz2
04-08-2004, 12:09 PM
http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_lol.gif Psycho droids!

Damn, I couldn't stop laughing. Great stuff!

Robo47
04-08-2004, 12:14 PM
http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif roflmao

DezoPenguin
04-08-2004, 02:06 PM
That was cute! Also intriguing...Scejthe sounds like a fun character, and of course I'm immediately interested in anyone who's actually an ongoing friend of Dragoon's!

Something else struck me, though. From a third person perspective, Dragoon seems...well, a couple of steps up from moronic. But he's not, is he? He's just so utterly focused on one basic subject ("kill!") both as a source of pleasure and an ethical issue that he has trouble diverting his attention to any other topic for any meaningful length of time. Monomania has rarely been so well-expressed!

Now, if you'll pardon me, I'm going to strut a bit for being the one who started this poll to create this story in the first place. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

KaFKa
04-08-2004, 02:12 PM
On 2004-04-08 12:06, DezoPenguin wrote:

Now, if you'll pardon me, I'm going to strut a bit for being the one who started this poll to create this story in the first place. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif



strut away!

HUnewearl_Meira
04-08-2004, 02:42 PM
On 2004-04-08 12:06, DezoPenguin wrote:
Something else struck me, though. From a third person perspective, Dragoon seems...well, a couple of steps up from moronic. But he's not, is he? He's just so utterly focused on one basic subject ("kill!") both as a source of pleasure and an ethical issue that he has trouble diverting his attention to any other topic for any meaningful length of time. Monomania has rarely been so well-expressed!


You've pretty much got it. His AI was initially made with relatively simple instructions: If you see it move, find a way to kill it. When the inherent problem was discovered in this logic, they had to patch his operating system with Judgement algorithms, that would stop him before killing something, so that he could decide whether or not it was something he really needs to kill. There were also some rudimentary social skills included in the patch, to make him somewhat sociable (it mostly just serves as a trigger for the Judgement Algorithm, but we enjoy the results, don't we?). Thus, we have Dragoon's very simple personality.

MQuantum
04-08-2004, 02:58 PM
Eheheheh... Hahaha! That was hilarious, and truly... Dragoon-y... http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

I should try to go around everyday shouting at people that I want to kill them, then calmly walk away... I think I'd be arrested for either breaking the peace or threatening physical harm, though.

I love Dragoon. You need to let him kill things much more often. *nods*

I am quite looking forward to Paladin's Recollection. I believe he shall be a most interesting character, with the noble factor and the constant fight with Akolyte and all.

It's going to be a very nice read. I can hardly wait... *hint hint, When's it coming!?* http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Skuda
04-08-2004, 02:59 PM
I wanna be Dragoon's friend! he's so naive and fun! hrm.. am I squishy?

HUnewearl_Meira
04-08-2004, 03:14 PM
On 2004-04-08 12:58, MQuantum wrote:
I am quite looking forward to Paladin's Recollection. I believe he shall be a most interesting character, with the noble factor and the constant fight with Akolyte and all.

It's going to be a very nice read. I can hardly wait... *hint hint, When's it coming!?* http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif


At the moment... I expect to be posting Chapter 1 of The Recollection of Paladin sometime on Monday. If I skrew up and slack off, or fall asleep at my computer, or accidently do something productive at work, then it might be Tuesday, but I'm shooting for Monday.
And... Judging from my current plans that I've laid out... Indeed... The Recollection of Paladin should be quite intriguing. I've got a few ideas I plan to experiment with.

I feel that I should note that I do expect chapters to start popping up much much quicker. Writing VanGarrett's really long chapters has allowed me to learn to write a bit more quickly, and at this point, the 2,000 - 3,000 word long chapters I'm intending for Paladin should be a piece of cake. I mean, just look at how fast I pumped out Dragoon's story, up there. I went into that with no purpose or direction, and had it finished within a few hours. The length of that chapter is about the average length I'm aiming at for Paladin's chapters.

The real difference in technique here, is that for Paladin, I've done more planning ahead, and I know exactly what events are going to happen in each chapter at this point, so since I've got something of a frame to work with, things should be VERY fast. I think I'm going to try to see how many chapters I can finish within the next week or so. Hopefully, I can have one done at least every two days. We'll see what happens.



On 2004-04-08 12:59, Scott_Kuda wrote:
hrm.. am I squishy?


Yes.



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navci
04-09-2004, 01:53 AM
On 2004-04-08 12:59, Scott_Kuda wrote:
I wanna be Dragoon's friend! he's so naive and fun! hrm.. am I squishy?


Yes.
And he definitely would want to kill you.
I can see it now.

HUnewearl_Meira
04-09-2004, 10:11 AM
On 2004-04-08 23:53, navi wrote:

On 2004-04-08 12:59, Scott_Kuda wrote:
I wanna be Dragoon's friend! he's so naive and fun! hrm.. am I squishy?


Yes.
And he definitely would want to kill you.
I can see it now.



It doesn't necessarily mean that he would... But he would definitely want to.

Zzzzzz
04-09-2004, 11:56 AM
On 2004-04-09 08:11, HUnewearl_Meira wrote:

On 2004-04-08 23:53, navi wrote:

On 2004-04-08 12:59, Scott_Kuda wrote:
I wanna be Dragoon's friend! he's so naive and fun! hrm.. am I squishy?


Yes.
And he definitely would want to kill you.
I can see it now.



It doesn't necessarily mean that he would... But he would definitely want to.



He wants to kill everything.
"Consult a flush immediatly!"
Wait...He didn't say that.

navci
04-09-2004, 01:54 PM
On 2004-04-09 08:11, HUnewearl_Meira wrote:

It doesn't necessarily mean that he would... But he would definitely want to.



It would prolly mean you will have to stand there and listen to him yelling about how he wanted to kill you in gigantic voice.

Ya know, that might kill you already. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif