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Sanjifire
04-12-2004, 06:49 AM
I was really bored playing on my fonewm in the forest and I started talking to my weps and actualy acted this whole thing out. The quotes are all Orcrist,they're divided up,because thats how they were acted out in the game.
Anway presenting the premiere of Beats of Our Lives!
Episode 1: Pioneer General Scandal
The episode opens with orcrist,a fonewm in his late tweens,gazing over the ledge in forest 1 with his chu chu mag. Suddenly he smells a fowl odour.
"chu chu" "did you let one man?" "It wasn't me!" "hilde!" Orcrist equips his hildebears cane."what did I tell you about eating burritos?!" "come now,""don't be like that" "ok...""I'll hug you" Orcy huggles the cane."what do you mean?" "oh course it was sincere." "ok,you can go now..." Orc unequips the hildecane. The stentch returns...
"alright chu,that one had to be you." "well-I-that is""ok,it was me..." "Do you think I was too hard on hilde?" "hmm,maybe..." "but how am I supposed to apologize?" "a hug you say?" "perhaps" Orcy puts his cane back on. "I'm sorry!" He hugs the cane. "I love you!" Hilde doesn't respond. "hilde?" no response"HILDE?!" Then he realizes it. "NOOOO! Hildes in a coma!"
Orcrist rushes through a freshly baked telepipe and to Pioneer General(aka the medical place). Orcrist sits teary eyed at hildes bedside. "oh hilde!" "what have I done?" "I've driven you into a grief induced coma!" The oddly manish nurses speakes to Orcrist."NOO!""The nurse says you might have amnesia!" Striken with grief Orcy hears a gunshot from afar. "What was that?!" "It came from the bank!" Orcrist sprints to the bank. He falls to his knees,"NOOOOO!" "Your sister blue's been shot!" He holds the injured hildeblue cane in his arms and weeps. Then he dashes back to the Pioneer General. Later Orcrist sits next to the hildeblue canes bed,his arm around it. "It's alright now blue..." An overwhelming feeling of releif comes to him when blue opens her yellow eyes. "Oh blue,"he hugs her"I love you!" Orcrist looks up to see hilde on the other side of the bed,mouth agape. "It's not what you think!"

Stay tuned for scenes from the next
Beats or Our Lives!
We see Orcrists running from the doors of Pioneer General,a veiled hildecane in hand. The hospital explodes just as he escapes.

Tell me what you think. Yes I'm that bored. I'm so bored I didn't even remember to change accounts. This is cheep by the way,note the title. Sanji was on my computer. I'd like to make it a comic,but I don't know how to put the images on the message boards. Is it funny? I like how over dramatic it was! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif