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Feb 17, 2002, 11:35 PM
Thanks :)
Who suggested a book?

Feb 17, 2002, 11:41 PM
that was me :/

Feb 18, 2002, 05:37 AM
These are all beautiful poems..really to bad I dont right poems or I would post them!

Feb 19, 2002, 02:25 AM
Here it is...on the fly, how I feel.

"The Distance"
I sit, eyes closed, head down, weeping,
Your so distant, are you really just sleeping,
The angel puts his hand on my shoulder,
Trying to help me regain my composure,
I pray you haven't forgot,
My love isn't in naught,
I look out the window, to the moon,
Are you looking at it right now, as I am too?

Feb 19, 2002, 12:04 PM
*feels inspiration lacks true thought*
wake me when we get there

Feb 26, 2002, 12:06 AM
Right..Ayame is back, which means more poems. But before she steals the center stage, I'm going to try and put one out on the fly.

"Tribal Lamentation"
The leaves are rolling in the air,
The sun looks over the forest, an unyielding glare,
The trees are unmoving,
The sound of the tribe is comforting,
Ancient echoes,
Through the hollows,
Of times past, they lament,
Those of today, not knowing what they meant,
Can you hear the stomps,
The timeless warriors in their romp,
Echoes and Reverbs,
Without ever knowing the words.

And there it is...

Feb 26, 2002, 12:18 AM
Well, I won't be stealing the stage just yet, but to make as much as much as a contribution I can tonight, there's the two poems in my signature... ^^;

He Loves Me Not

Across The Seas Of Sand,
A Desert Rose's Petals Rot.
Picking Them Off, One By One.
He Loves Me...He Loves Me Not.

Falling Into Eternity

Wind Through Your Fingertips,
Leaves Through Your Hair.
Falling Into Eternity,
Not Knowing You're Even There...

Great poem Abdur, by the way~!

*runs off through earlier pages of thread to read through missed poems*


Feb 26, 2002, 12:56 AM
I couldn't resist.

Summer Afternoon

The Sun Shines Bright,
Clear Blues Skies In Sight.
Stay Away Dark Moon,
From This Summer Afternoon.
Kid's Playing In The Street,
Street Vendors Selling Meat.
Approaching The Deserted Water Fountain,
Cool Water On My Lips Ride Down The Mountain.
Windy Weather Appears,
Blowing Away The Sad-One's Tears.
A Summer Afternoon Gone,
Until The Next Day's Dawn.

Okay, okay...that was just a warm up. ^^;

My Garden Of Eden

Confused In His Desert Of Affection,
Dazzled At My Forest Of Reaction.
Lost Inbetween His Arms,
Holding Me Tight As I Cry.
Hypnotized By His Lovely Charm,
A Battle Of Love At An Even Tie.
His Grip Lets My Body Loose,
Something That I Must've Missed.
An Option I Could Not Choose,
Slipping Slowly Into Lonliness.
Alone Once More,
A Scarce Chance For True Love Lost.
My Heart Is Sore,
From This Rough Road You've Made Me Cross.
Back Into Your Arms I Crawl One More,
A Feeling That I Had Once Knew.
Back Into My Garden Of Eden,
Laying In Eternity Next To You,
My Love.

Feb 26, 2002, 01:05 AM
That last one...I REALLY like it...but..ouch.
I can't wait for more..

Feb 26, 2002, 01:15 AM
Don't worry AbdurryWurry, I'm still in on my side of the deal. 4 - 5 poems a day in exchange for...umm... ahh...

*looks around*

... umm, yup. 4 - 5 poems....a day....whoooo-o-okay....


*runs off*


Feb 26, 2002, 04:27 AM

Don't want you for the weekend
Don't want you for a day
Don't need a love divided
Don't want to feel this way
See I want you to need me
(the way I need you)
Just like I need you
(the way I see you)
And I want you to see me
Like no-one before

You're irresistible - and natural, physical
It's indefinable - and magical, illogical
So make you mineable, you're mine

So can't you see I'm tortured (tortured)
Oh can't you hear my pain
If you just let me show you (show you)
I'll be your summer rain
Then you'll feel that you want me
(the way I'm feeling)
Just like I want you
(the way I want you)
And you know nothing's better
It's like nothing before

You're irresistible - and natural, physical
It's indefinable - and magical, illogical
So make you mineable, you're mine

Now you feel what I'm feeling
(don't you feel what I'm feeling)
Don't you know that it's more
(it can take you places)
It can take you places
Like never before

You're irresistible - and natural, physical
It's indefinable - and magical, illogical
So make you mineable, you're mine.

I wish I wrote this :(
Nice poems Abdur and Ayame

Feb 26, 2002, 04:43 AM
Don't let it bother you my friend :)
It's nice never the less..

Feb 26, 2002, 08:09 AM
My Destination (*Revised*)

Images of a lovely young woman,
Thoughs of us strolling hand in hand,
We can remain together for an eternity,
I know we can.

The only things that rival your beauty
is your personality. I enjoy the way
we spend our time, and how you lovingly
smile at me.

You carry yourself just as a woman should,
You're intellectual, beautiful, and loving.
What more could someone ask for?
You're nice, you're fragrent, you're talented.
You are the wings that give me the ability to soar.

The emotion I'm feeling perfectly describes you,
Lovely, loving, lovable,
Considering all the difficult trials we've been through,
We must be compadable,
That's why our skies aren't grey. they're blue

When I look in your eyes,
I can see forever
I can see images of us, even at old age
Enjoying our lives together.

I've never known a love so deep,
So my lady, I give you my soul to keep
Before I lay my head down to sleep,
Your love is the reason I begin to weep.

Even when I begin to sort through my thoughts,
There on the top of my mind you stand,
I pray the rest of our relationship goes as planned,
We control the future which lays in our divine hands.

So as you can see, you contol my thoughts all the time,
So please just keep these words in your mind,
And as you think of them, you'll find
That you are my only inspiration,
And your heart is my only destination.

Enjoy =)

Feb 26, 2002, 01:54 PM
Hey, thats a nice one as well frosty :)

By the way, did you get my pm about that pic you wanted me to help you with?

Feb 27, 2002, 07:39 AM
Hurt Before

She's a girl in a world
She's moving as fast as she goes
Loves her mum and her dad
The only secure that she knows
But at night she's alone
She's dreaming of somebody new
Her someone for to hold
She's praying the dream will come true

Show me the way
Show me, show me how
Help me, be brave
For love
Show me the way
Show me, tell me how
What do you say?

There's a pain in her heart
She's trying so hard to unwind
Makes her cry in the night
When visions so real make her blind
Wants to break through the fear
Erasing the scars from within
Start a new kind of being
She's down and she's praying again

Show me the way
Show me, show me how
Help me, be brave
For love
Show me the way
Show me, tell me how
What do you say?

You see she's
Turning the key, unlocking the door
Embracing the roller coaster world
Stepping outside with body and soul
Taking whatever future holds
Turning the key, unlocking the door
Embracing the roller coaster world
Take it in stride, you're just twenty-two
You know we've all been hurt before

(Violin Solo)

You see she's
Turning the key, unlocking the door
Embracing the roller coaster world
Stepping outside with body and soul
Taking whatever future holds
Turning the key, unlocking the door
Embracing the roller coaster world
Take it in stride, you're just twenty-two
You know we've all been hurt before
We've all been hurt before
See you're not alone, no
You're not alone.

Don't worry Abdur, I'm okay hehe. The music along with the lyrics is so beautiful


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Feb 27, 2002, 08:37 PM
Sorry about yesterday with no poems. ^^;

Yesterday Shall Come

Among The Sea Of Stars,
Drifting Off Into Tomorrow.
Drowning Myself In Your Arms,
Sinking To The Bottom Of My Sorrow.
Stuck In The Glue Of Confusion,
Not Able To Move Forward The Next Day.
I Reach My Hand Out To You,
No Use, You Are So Far Away.
A Year From Yesterday Has Come,
Tomorrow's Present Has Come To Start.
Soon The Race Shall Be Won,
Before My Heart Is Torn Apart.
I Don't Exit Without You Here,
In The Game Of Life I'm But A Pawn.
But My Love Of Tomorrow I Do Not Fear,
Swimming In My Sea Of Stars Until Yesterday's Dawn.
So Into My Sea You Dive,
Knowing There Will Only Be One.
Tomorrow Is Bound To Arrive,
But Soon Yesterday Shall Come.

Feb 27, 2002, 09:57 PM
Hey, really nice Ayame...I tried to get a crying session in tonight, but it did'nt work :(

Gypsy, I'll have to look for that song. I think you guys will like my 14th show. :D

..hmm...I wish I could put out a poem..

Feb 27, 2002, 11:38 PM
The Life

I live for the moment
i hope you dont mind.
My life aint worth it
do you think im just hig?
Ill hate to just tell you
but your also aint right.
Lets pretend i didnt say it
or would that make you cry?
Althou it just hurts me
Ill just say goodbye.
I hope you dont forget me
Ill always be on your side.

Kinda ishi but... it reflects
some old thougts.

Feb 27, 2002, 11:42 PM
Hey, not bad wob :)

Feb 27, 2002, 11:59 PM

One Last Goodbye

Ever since i saw you
i knew you were special.
Weved been trhu alot together
Love, Hate and the weather.
Youved forgiven me from the worse
and yet ived always let you down,
im not asking for one more chance
just for one last goodbye.
Im not leaving cause i wasnt there
or even cause i didnt take you to the fair.
Im leaving to let you move on
althou my love will always be there.
Your tears will always make want to stay,
but i have to let you go.
If i didnt it would be unfair,
to that other girl i promised
to take to the fair.


Feb 28, 2002, 01:18 AM
..hmm...I don't know what to think of that one wob o_O

"The Silent On-looker"
The instruments lament,
Their poetic embracement,
The soothing sounds,
Echo throughout the towns,
The children scream in laughter,
They run and bound without faulter,
The simple life is so far and wide,
I'm stuck here, in the dark corners do I hide,
I watch and listen from afar,
An unyielding watcher, a non-kufar,
Head bowed,
Eyes down,
Staring into the darklit void,
The poetic embrace keeps me from being annoyed,
A tear for he who died in battle,
A smile for the rider and his new saddle,
An unyielding glare,
For those intruders that dare,
The holy book and the blade,
My companions until that day.

...on the fly, of course.

Feb 28, 2002, 05:02 AM
I love the poems everyone :) Keep them coming.

Abdur...would'nt it be kinda hard to find them without knowing the artist? Or do you know the artist...they're The Corrs. I don't know if you'd like them...they aren't anything like j-pop/anime/chinese classical/folk...

Feb 28, 2002, 05:09 AM
Rags to rags

There's a spider crawling on the bathroom mirror,
Right on top of my right eye.
And I can't stop staring back.
How did I get this way?
Take a big look at a living lie.

Rags to rags and rust to rust.
How do you stand when you've been crushed?
Rags to riches was a bust.

Sometimes I dream about it, what it's like back home,
The railroad tracks and the pussy willow.
But I had to leave it and I go back
Whenever my tired head hits the pillow.

Rags to rags and rust to rust.
How do you stand when you've been crushed?
Rags to riches was a bust.

Busted once again.
But I'll show them one day that I can buy and sell the world.
One day I'll come through with my American dream,
But it won't mean a fucking thing.

Rags to rags and rust to rust.
How do you stand when you've been crushed?
Rags to rags and rust to rust.
Don't let me go.
Rags to rags and rust to rust.
Don't let me go.
Rags to rags and rust to rust.
Don't let me go.

By The Eels....and Abdur...it doesn't mean to me what it might seem like.


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Feb 28, 2002, 08:10 AM
Short metaphor poem someone asked me to write -

Love, Hate, War

Love is a sea of emotions
A sky without limits,
Search your heart, within it you'll find
No need for mind altering potions

Hate is a virus causing the genocide,
Of the American people,
Was it a fact or just a false perception when
That man said "All men are created equal"?

War is an unnessicary sea of confusion
Which even people with no vision can be seen
In the middle of a slew of violence
War is a street brawl with no mean.

Enjoy =)

Feb 28, 2002, 11:25 AM

Turn the ugly light off, God
Wanna feel the night
Every day it shines down on me
Don't you think that I see
Don't you think that I see
What it's all about

Hard to look the other way
While the world passes me by
And everyone is trying to bum me out

It's a pretty big world, God
And I am awful small
Every day it rains down on me
Flower in a hailstorm
Flower in a hailstorm
Livin' for the drought

I could throw it back again
But then I'd play their game
Everyone is trying to bum me out

When I came into this world they slapped me
And every day since then I'm slapped again
Tomorrow's king, an unsightly coward
You see, I know I'm going to win

Turn the ugly light off, God
Don't wanna see my face
Every day it will betray me
Don't you think that I know
Don't you think that I know
What they're talking about

If they step on me tonight
they're gonna pay someday
Everyone is trying to bum me out

(The Eels)

Feb 28, 2002, 03:03 PM
Nice one frosty. And actually Gypsy, I could just look up the song name :) I've heard the Corrs before, they aren't bad. And nice ones as well :)

Take care everyone, and have fun.
*has been up all day watching his nephews*

Feb 28, 2002, 09:12 PM
Staind, Epiphany

Your words to me just a whisper
Your face is so unclear
I try to pay attention
Your words just disappear.

'Cause it's always raining in my head
Forget all the things I should have said.

So I speak to you in riddles
'Cause my words get in my way.
I smoke the whole thing to my head
And feel it wash away.
'Cause I can't take anymore of this
I wanna come apart,
Or dig myself a little hole
Inside your precious heart.

'Cause it's always raining in my head
Forget all the things I should have said.

I am nothing more than
a little boy inside
That cries out for attention,
Yet I always try to hide.
'Cause I talk to you like children,
Though I don't know how I feel
But I know I'll do the right thing
If the right thing is revealed.

'Cause it's always raining in my head
Forget all the things I should have said.

Mar 2, 2002, 12:40 AM
Very good, all of you! ^^

Anything -- Anytime And Anywhere

Standing Here In My Lonliness,
Letting Anything By, Anything Fly.
Unable To Gain My Rest,
Gain Control, Again I Try.
But It Overcomes Me,
This Power I Fear.
I Cannot Break Free,
When You Aren't Here.
So I Give My Heart, My Soul,
Just For You To Care,
That I'll Give Anything,
Anytime And Anywhere.
Anytime You Need Me By Your Side,
I'll Be There, Next To You.
Anytime You Want A Place To Hide,
Care To Share, Our Love So True.
Anywhere You Want To Be,
We Can Stay There Together.
Any Place You Want To See,
Side By Side We Stare, Off Into The Horizon, Forever.
Anything You Want, I'll Give It To You.
I Need You Here To Save Me.
Save My Heart That You Once Knew,
Rescue And Set My Heart Free.
Now I Love You So True,
Leave You Again I Shall Never.
My Heart Is Full, Now That I'm With You,
Together We'll Be, Forever...
Anytime And Anywhere,
With You, Together.

Mar 2, 2002, 12:44 AM
...wow. Now that is a nice poem.
*has gotten his fix*
Phew..almost OD'ed on it..but better now :D

...now..I hope I can put one out soon. Thanks for posting it Ayame :)

Mar 2, 2002, 01:11 AM
Guest list

Are you one of the beautiful people?
Is my name on the list?
Wanna be of the beautiful people
Wanna feel like I'm missed

Hey you with the walkie-talkie
I know my clothes are not right
I wish I had my own walkie talkie
That reached to God every night

Everyone needs to be somebody
Everyone needs to find someone who cares
But I don't know if you know what I mean
'Cause I'm never on your list

Are you one of the beautiful people?
Am I on the wrong track?
Sometimes it feels like I'm made of eggshell
And it feels like I'm gonna crack

Everyone needs to be somebody
Everyone needs to find someone who cares
But I don't know if you know what I mean
'Cause I'm never on your list
I'm never on your list
I'm never on your list

(The eels)

Mar 2, 2002, 01:14 AM
must..get...Eel's music...

hehe, thanks for posting the lyrics Gypsy :D

Mar 2, 2002, 01:29 AM
Hey, no problem man, the eels kick ass hehe.

I love the poem Ayame :)

Mar 3, 2002, 08:16 PM
Hmm..I was sitting here listening to a song that a friend in Bei Jing sent me, and I went into Photoshop to make something, when suddenly this just came to me. So, here it is.

"You and I"
The clouds roll through the sky,
The reflection of you in my eye,
If time could stand still,
I'd wish it with all of my will,
For everlasting life,
Without doubt and strife,
You and me, never-ending,
Just the rythme of our hearts pounding,
A sweet melody so clear,
Feeling the reverb as I hold you dear,
Where the only fear is your leave,
And all is reality, without false dreams,
You and I.

Mar 3, 2002, 10:53 PM
I love that Abdur, excellent :)

Mar 3, 2002, 11:28 PM
"Silent Sadness"
Day in and day out,
I'm never out and about,
The sun sets and I'm still alone,
Not even the privacy to hear a voice on the phone,
In the dark corner of my mind,
Do I sit and pass the time,
Do the angels see me gasp and shudder,
Do they shed a tear as I faulter,
A good dream is better than the bad reality,
But in the end, sadness is the totallity.

Mar 3, 2002, 11:31 PM
i knife has sliced through my heart,
i knew i never played my part.
through thick and thin we've been together,
i thought we would be there forever.
Its times like this i wonder why
i even had the strength to try.
I loved you, i guess u never felt the same,
our love was like a runaway train,
never going anywhere and never coming back,
but it has finally jumped the tracks.
I grab your hand and look into the sky,
i take a deep breath and look into your eyes.
It fades away, we've gone our seperate ways,
we probably wont see eachother another day.
ill always remember you and when we were together.
and remember when, I thought we would be there forever.

poem by me XD, on the fly.... hope u guys like it.

Mar 3, 2002, 11:32 PM
Prepare to get out plenty in Cali with me man :p

Mar 3, 2002, 11:59 PM
Great poems everyone. I have a poem here that is quite a bit old that I did one night when I was talking to Abdur on AIM. It has no title as it wasn't done here on the forums but I hope all of you can appreciate it. ^^;

Original Format

Silence In The Night,
The Moon Shines Grey.
Stay With My Tonight,
Please Don't Go Away.
I Stand Outside On The Balcony,
The Wind Blows My Skirt As The Rain Pours On Me,
You Are Such A Flirt.
Stand With Me High Above,
You Wouldn't Want To Miss.
For You Are The One I Love,
Don't Make Me Jump,
Don't Make Me Go Crazy
Without Your Kiss.

Upgraded Format

Silence In The Night,
The Moon Shines Grey.
Stay With Me Tonight,
Please Don't Go Away.
I Stand Outside On The Balcony,
The Wind Blows My Skirt
As The Rain Pours On Me,
You Are Such A Flirt.
Stand With Me High Above,
You Wouldn't Want To Miss.
For You Are The One I Love,
Don't Make Me Jump,
Don't Make Me Go Crazy
Without Your Kiss.

Across The Seas Of Sand,
A Desert Rose's Petals Rot.
Picking Them Off, One By One.
He Loves Me...He Loves Me Not.

<font size=-1>[ This Message was edited by: Ayame on 2002-03-03 21:07 ]</font>

Mar 4, 2002, 12:16 AM
Very nice poem. I'm glad you finally posted it :)

Anymore poems..anyone?

Mar 5, 2002, 05:09 AM
"The Last Wish"
A solemn tear for the departing soul,
An ornate grave on a grassy knoll,
A lovers thoughtful distress,
Laying awake, eyes staring into darkness,
Praying for an abrupt close,
One that will clear his woes,
Silently slipping into dream,
No matter how nice, its not what it may seem,
There she is, vibrant and beautiful,
How can he succumb, he is not delusional,
Wishing for one last touch, but knowing better,
He is pulled awake, as his soul begins to shudder,
Here it is, his last wish came true,
He breathes his last breathe, just to be with you.

Well, there it is..on the fly. -_-

Mar 5, 2002, 06:06 AM
Very nice :) And sorry man, I won't be going home for my break, I'm stuck at college so we won't be able to talk :(
(should be getting my PC done tonight after work)

Mar 5, 2002, 06:26 AM
doesnt this belong in fanarts O_o

<-------sucks bad at writting anything be it poems or fanfic

Mar 5, 2002, 06:32 AM
Ah, no worries gypsy. I'm going to sleep now, have to watch my nephews today. And I hope the comp gets put together today :)

And no, this doesn't go in fan-arts, as it has nothing to do with PSO or PSOW. Just like my radio shows o_O

Let the words flow Alisha..turn on some music...get out those emotions..
*goes to sleep before he starts annoyin..ohh..too late*

*pulls the plug*

Mar 5, 2002, 06:40 AM
um id do that better with a sketch ive hated writting for as long as i can remember in fact i remember when i was in middle school the idea was tossed around that i could use a typewritter instead

Mar 5, 2002, 07:34 AM
Is a keyboard not okay Alisha? Come on, I'm sure you have plenty of things you could write about.

And if ya don't wanna do that, then go for a sketch, thats cool too, just post it here or something. I'd love to see whatever you can come up with.

Mar 5, 2002, 05:04 PM
I Apologize

Emotions submerging my inner thoughts,
With images of beautiful loves now lost,
Simply because I acted irrationally
without realizing the cost.

Depression, sadness, anger blend together,
To make an impression on me that will last forever,
Now I question the choices I made,
Reason being the thing speaking to me is
the jagged, bitter weather

Simotaniously, I lost loves and gained enimies,
Nothing covers me from this disaster, not even the trees
"Why did this event occur?" I ask as I
touch the dampened ground with my knees

Feelings of pain and sorrow me wonder
"What's in store for me tommarow?"
Whatever comes, I must thoroughly prepare thyself
Because I might mistakingly bring pain to myself

Now I finally realized the mistake I induced,
What correction can be made to bring this war to a truce?
I gained the sadness I now possess
from the choices I made, These came and corrupted my happiness.

I never shall ignore your opinions again,
I'll try to be a respectable young man,
I apologize for the mistakes I made,
I'm sorry for the games I played.

Apoligizing might not heal the wounds I caused,
Even if it doesn't, from now on, this will make me pause,
And think about the decisions I make,
Please say its alright, for both yours and my sake.

Mar 7, 2002, 10:26 AM
Its no good, no more
What can I do
I can't ignore
Theres only so far to go
Its hard, you don't know

I don't know where I am
My future too important
I want to say I can
I can't

I need to know how I'll provide
Its eating me inside
Me and my life
We're gonna wash out with the tide

Mar 7, 2002, 10:42 AM

Between the two lines of blurred vision
The anonymity becomes my identity
I embrace it whole and welcome the change inside.
The last day I was me, I sat in my shell
And pondered of what could have been
And all that chose to remain was the lie.

Mar 7, 2002, 07:20 PM
Frosty. Nice. Gypsy, interesting as well. Something I know about?
Tia_EH, I know where your coming from with that -_-

Unfortunately I don't have a poem to post. Sorry.

Mar 12, 2002, 06:58 AM
My God, I've hit a new low in depression for myself, and still no poems. Nor crying sessions.

I just can't put into words how I feel, and I apologize. It hasn't been a good three weeks/month.

I've only been up..10 hours at the most..but I'm just worn out, so I think I'll goto sleep.

Just bumping this once incase Psylocke or any of the people that could'nt post before have a poem they'd like the share.

Mar 12, 2002, 08:00 AM
After Love

After it, you feel the emptyness inside,
After it, you wringe when you arrise from your pillow,
After it, you feel like a bird who can't glide,
After it, you feel like an old willow

After it, you never want to see daylight,
After it, sometimes you want to die,
After it, you feel as if you've lost your sight,
After it, you may just break down and cry

After it, sometimes you just want to scream,
After it, you never want to smile,
After it, you want to end this cruel dream,
After it, you feel so vile

After it, you're afraid to try again,
After it, You wonder why you tried ,
After it, you don't want to be friends
After it, you wonder why you lied,

After love, these are the things you feel,
There's no reason to deny it's real,
After love, these emotions run all over you,
After love, you feel as if your life is through

Sad, isn't it =(

Mar 13, 2002, 06:41 PM
No comments?

Mar 13, 2002, 06:48 PM
Wow Frosty, I totally loved that poem. I didn't comment earlier because I usually only reply when I'm posting a poem, but I've been too busy to write any poems (Oh no!!) as of late, so I wasn't able to reply. ^^;
I totally loved it...it's beautiful. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif


Mar 13, 2002, 09:51 PM
It's a..sad..poem. Nice though, really.
Sorry for not commenting -_-
I still haven't gotten a poem out yet.

Mar 13, 2002, 09:57 PM
I liked it too.
And no poems from me either.

Mar 13, 2002, 11:59 PM

Please tell me what event occured
to get our worlds and visions blurred

After this, I could never bring myself to sleep
Reason being we haven't talked in weeks

Whenever I see you passing by my side,
I see fading images of my future bride

When I walk outside, I see the rain,
But instead of water, I'm feeling pain

I finally realized that love isn't a game
Because of this, things will never be the same

Memories of us being together,
Even through the good and bad weather

We've never been apart
All these feelings are new to my dying heart

Restless nights and lazy days,
Make me question my ignorant ways

I never really took your feelings into consideration,
Now those are what's bringing my frustration.

Sorta short, but oh well =)

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Mar 14, 2002, 12:11 AM
Nice poem frosty, really nice. I see someone is taking my place with the sad poems hehe
Keep them coming..

Mar 14, 2002, 12:18 AM
Wow Frosty I loved that one. I LOVED that one! ^^


Beautiful... ^^;

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Mar 14, 2002, 05:50 AM
"The End"
Here I am, larger than life,
Screaming from the mountain top, without strife,
My screams and shouts echo through dreams,
Even awaken ancient beings,
I call them out of their slumber,
They reply, as the skies quake and thunder,
A stare crosses my face,
I depart, with angelic grace,
Towards the heart of disaster,
Full force, pushing onward, faster,
There it is, the center of hate,
With all my being encompassing a blade,
I lash out with all my strength, performing what was forbade,
Just as contact is made, a shape is formed,
A hefty figure, with claws clenching a sword,
Come evil, sealed is your fate,
When you are cleansed, so is the hate,
Your just a guise covering a fragile frame,
I'll throw the light on the world, and no one will be to blame,
Needless sorrow, pain and anguish will be the past,
Onward we will march, and fast,
The history of the world serves nothing,
It's the here, the now, so stop rotting,
Can you see that point of rejoice,
Listen, its the origin of my voice,
This soul may shudder under the strain,
But in the end, there will be no more pain,
Willing or not,
Pray for naught,
Listen to the angels cheer,
For your end is here.

And thats what happens on the fly when I listen to Raihan- "Puji-Pujian". o_O
Hope you enjoy it, and glad I finally got a poem out -_-

Mar 14, 2002, 08:09 AM
Abdur, that was beautiful man *sniff sniff*

Mar 14, 2002, 08:14 AM
Nice one Abdur http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif Glad you finally got one out ^_^


It's not moved in days
Probably never will
It just lays there
Vacant and so still
It won't respond
God how I've tried
Show me anything
Let me know you're alive
Don't let it end this way
Please show me a glance
Show me any distinguishable feature
Give me one more chance
Show me a smile that's gone
Give me something I can hear
Give me a dying breath
Or a sullen salty tear
Why can't I save you
Why can't it be done
I've lost so many already
I don't want to lose this one
Please stop laying there
Show me your will
Show me there's life
Yet you'll always be still

Mar 14, 2002, 08:16 AM
If I could find my notebook, I'd really put some stuff on ya'll, but I think I left it @ school =(.

Mar 14, 2002, 08:19 AM
On 2002-03-14 05:16, _xX_Frosty_Xx_ wrote:
If I could find my notebook, I'd really put some stuff on ya'll, but I think I left it @ school =(.

I have about 20 notebooks full of writing from the past 10-11 years. I could litter this thread until it explodes with material XD I'll try and post in here more often hehe ^_^

Mar 14, 2002, 10:07 AM
Hey, post as much as you like, really. Frosty, get your notebook man.

I just started writing poems last year, and before I hated them entirely. But it turns out their a good way to get creative and show emotion. A good stress releiver when you sit and just let the words flow.

Might get booted off soon *looks at clock as its read 10am*...what the hell am I still doing up x_X

Finishing my 19th radio show "Solo City Run" and posting here, thats what o_O Your all ev0r, making Abdur lose sleep and so on. hehe

I'll hang around alittle longer -_-
*downs afew more sugar cubes*

Mar 14, 2002, 05:29 PM
In Case I Forget

In case I forget, girl I need to tell you this,
When I'm not near you, I miss your kiss,
So many things I love about you, I could make a list,
Girl, I'll never let go of you, I promise.

In case I forget, I love you so much,
You don't have any reason to blush,
You're from above, you have an angels touch,
You were my first crush

In case I forget, let's go get lost,
I don't care, no matter what the cost,
In the winter, let's go play in the frost,
Think about how many roads we can cross

In the heat of the night, the light of day,
While we listen to a love song play,
Girl, you know we can go all the way,
Or we can tke it slow, that's ok

In case I forget, stay by my side,
In case I forget, let's take a ride,
In case I forget, girl I never lied,
I never lied about how I feel inside

Mar 14, 2002, 08:15 PM
All of those were absolutely beautiful! And I'm so sorry for having not posted anything as of late, so to make up for that, I've written what has been quite possible my longest and bess rhyme yet! ^^

Love In Your Days, Lies In Your Ways

How Many Times Have We Lied, Not To Let
Another Time Lie Into It.
What Will It Take Before We Learn?
A Subject To Be Ignored, Without Our Concern.
What Will Our Future Hold?
Unspoken Secrets, Soon To Be Told.
Just What Will Our Future Bring?
Beatiful Music And Songs For Us To Sing.
Together, Right Now, We Can't Even Go On,
Things We See, But Still Yet Not To Know.
Time Flying Away, Leaving Behind The Feathers Of a Pigeon,
How I Must Tell You, To Show You My Vision.
Too Much Hatred, Too Much Grief,
Unknowingly Accusing My Inaccurate Beleif.
We Have To Wake Up Now Before It's Much Too Late,
Get A Grip On Ourselves Before The Ending Date.
Our Memories Get Shattered Away As We Argue,
Not Beleiveing Each Others' Lips, Spoken From Them Our View.
Things Coming To An End Much Too Fast,
This Connection We Friend, How Long Will It Last?

Incredible And Invisible, The Things I Wish To Be,
With You, As Easy As One, Two, Three.
Push Me Down, You Disagree,
You've Taken Away My Vitality.
The Way Before, How Our Feelings Have Been Linked.
More Now, Than Ever Before, Gone With The World, My Love Extinct.
Once Was Solid Before, Seen Through The Air,
Gone With The Wind, Not Even There, To Share.
Gone Off In Different Direction, Our Emotions Going Two Different Ways,
My Loveless Empty Heart, My Abandoness Has Given Me A Heartbrake.

The Time You've Given Me, The Lessons I've Learned,
Empty And Forgotten Memories Are Bound To Be Burned.
We've Eaten The Fruit Off The Tree of Life,
My Heart's Been Pierced By Your Lifeless Knife.
How Wonderful And Peaceful Are Your Days,
With Hatred And Anger In Your Ways.
Unable To Feel Emotions, Love And Pain,
A Joyful And Outgoing Day In The Rain.
Your Fake Love, Undeniably Untrue,
What Came At Me, Goes Back At You.
This Tear You've Made Me Bear On My Eye,
Leaving You Here As I Reach For The Skies.

Forgetful Of The Things You've Done, Way Back Then,
This Sinful Pain You've Caused, At An End.
There's A Place In Your Heart Where You Can Understand,
That Love Is An Emotion That Your Heart Demands.
Expressing This Emotion Isn't Always Peacefully,
Listen To Your Heart, And Listen To Me.
In Life And Love's There's Always Much More,
Never At An End Until Heaven's Door.
Once It's All Over, Life's Become An Endless Bliss,
Memories Lost Since Then Your First Kiss,
Up In The Skies, The Clouds, Dreaming Forever,
Something That You Did Not Miss.

Mar 14, 2002, 08:27 PM
Ayame that was pimpin yo! You inspired me to write something long.

Mar 14, 2002, 08:28 PM
Best Friend

Struggling to escape an emotional cage
Which binds me stationary as well as my rage
I feel like a puppet dancing on stage
Everytime I try to escape
I start to realize it's too late
This unescapable destiny determines my fate.
My arms won't move an inch
I must be the screw and the devil the wrench.
I countinue to finch
As my nose picks up the stench
Of anxiety because of the fact
No one is standing beside me.
At times of need when
My wound opens and bleeds
I rely on my friend
The one that promised to be there until the end
When I look up in the sky
My friend begins to cry
For those who are affected by lies
When the sun comes out I see his might and I reply
"Thank you Jesus Christ"

Mar 15, 2002, 09:10 PM
Happy in a Different World

I had it all fleshed out in my mind
Or at least I thought I did
The pictures I'd pinned together
To form such a happy collage
At the time it all seemed right
All I saw was the "meant to be"
I guess the "meant to be" was I saw was my version alone
I could lie to myself and pretend it's not happening
But the oblivious path can still only last so long
What little pain it nullifies, only intensifies once the blindfold is gone
And you're standing right behind me ready to pull it off
And now my eyes are forced to see
The world and all I'd imagined
All falling down in front of me
The pain takes shape
And puntures the sould like a sword
But you'll never have to hear it
You're happy in another world.

Close my eyes
And pretend I'm alive.


Mar 16, 2002, 12:07 AM
Hey, thats a nice poem. From last year even http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Yours as well Frosty, very nice. I'll have to try and get one out. Maybe...hopefully.

Mar 16, 2002, 12:34 AM
That was indeed your best poem yet Ayame http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

And also great poems from Frosty and Tia, well done http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Mar 16, 2002, 09:02 AM
The Key

Whenever I think of you,
My skies turn from grey to blue,
I wonder if you think of me too,
Who am I thinking about? You know who

You're the rain when I'm on fire,
You're the wings when I want to get fly higher,
You're from above,
All I'm bringing is love

You're my kind of girl,
The person who makes the world,
I live in more beautiful,
Your love makes me full

Of happiness and the days I miss
When we're apart,
When you can't see me, remember this,
You have my heart

When you're lonely, think of me,
When you're not feeling well, think of me
When thing's aren't going well, think of me,
and you'll see, you are the key to my heart

Mar 16, 2002, 09:24 AM
Nice one Frosty http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Mar 29, 2002, 11:32 PM
"The Past's Journey"
I sit and I listen to my past,
And I wonder, why have things changed so fast,
Here I am, contemplating my worth,
Constant thought, as I walk this earth,
Is my direction right,
Or is it only leading to a fight,
Looking over my shoulder and towards the setting sun,
As its warmth lays on my shoulders, the journey has begun,
The echoes from yesterday,
Are with me to stay.

I have a headache..I'm tired...and thats as good as it gets at the moment. -_-

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Mar 29, 2002, 11:42 PM
Heaven In My Eyes
I'm swiming in a lake of tears
Simply because I can't overcome my fears
To talk to this person it seems like I
haven't talked to in years.
I see her right beside me
Perhaps this is an illusion I see
Maybe it's a dream because
I can't seem to decypher what this means.
I must be a cloud because water falls below
It slowly forms a lake
Mixed with all the mistakes I make
Everyday, it begins to expand
Dampening and flooding the land.
But finally, I pull out my hand
And I start to correct the mistakes while I can
It stops raining and the land dries.
The thunder stops it's cries
Earth, in which the land lies
Now looks like heaven in my eyes.

Mar 29, 2002, 11:43 PM
Nice one Abdur =)

Mar 29, 2002, 11:46 PM
Hey, nice one from you as well. Really nice. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Mar 30, 2002, 12:30 AM

Four boys walk into a playground like some film they've seen. They have cigarettes and smart cards in stolen wallets. The girls on the seesaw are Scottish, Irish or Czechoslovakian; you can't tell they're so faraway.

Older boys, who got nothing for xmas, go to the far corner near the road, with lighter fuel in metal waterpistols, they pool their marlboros and balance them upend on the railings. They shoot off the ones the wind hasn't blown off. With empty guns they pick up the cigarettes and play petrol cigarette roulette. They put them between their lips and light them with blindfolds and gloves on.

Friday five thirty. It's a good day for England. It's summer and the sky's flat like cowdung. The four younger boys work in the glue factory, clamping the soft metal and crimping it over. The younger boys want to be older. The older boys want to be with the girls, and the girls are happy where they are.

The younger boys applied to be astronauts five years ago. They found the advert in the financial times lying on a tramp. They left a forwarding address: 'Brown's playground', and still hadn't heard a thing. They sit on concrete bench backs on the edge of dog shit rectangle, where posts used to be. John hands out platic bags. They flick a coin for who'll be armstrong, Jack gets five heads in a row, and gets the see-thru' freezerbag. The others get a red dixons, a green safeway and a pastelstripe no-brand carrier. They pull them over their heads and tuck the handles into their hoods, Jack gets up, his breath all over the inside. His face has gone and he can't hear the girls at all now. He walks off, double moon speed, like a bad golfer looking for a ball in a tree. The other boys fall flatout on their backs. Their mothers are waiting with suppers burnt, but the boys are on the moon with no way back.


Mar 30, 2002, 03:02 PM
My Dear Heaven

Far Across The Desert Plains,
Beyond The Field Of Endless Stains
Lies A New Horizon, A Brand New Start,
An Existance Created By The Love Of Our Hearts.
The Ability In Which We Acheive
This Magnificient Utopia That Our Threads Have Weaved.
As We're Coming To The Tip Of Our Needles,
The Feelings Are Soft As A Fly, But The Pain Is As Hard As The Shell Of A Beetle.
In And Out, The Endless Threads Weaving Forever,
Finishing This Masterpiece To Bring Us Our "Heaven".
Locked Doors With Twists And Turns,
The Fire Of Our Love Still Burns.
But As The Sand Bottle Slowly Slips,
The Acheivements Of Our Lives At Our Fingertips.
Sliding On A Sea Of Ice, Endless To My View.
Reaching The Field Of Flames, My Vision Of You.
Us Together In Our Dreams Come True,
An Experience And State Of Feeling I Had Never Knew.
Knocking At The Gates Reading 667,
The Neighbor Of Your Flames, Welcoming My Dear Heaven.

http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif.... http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime2.gif

Mar 30, 2002, 05:06 PM
Wow, that was an interesting poem Ayame. I like those lyrics as well gypsy http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Keep it up, I'm going to try and get some more music to listen to. Gotta get it out

Mar 30, 2002, 05:57 PM
Ok i'm not a genius but i have somethign i wrote i don't know how it is but who better to get opinions than my friends a PSOW
i will write it next time goin out right now
but i am not sure if you heard this one yet

I do not car yet my eyes bleed tears--
you can give your opinions i will write more when i have time so see you for now guys

Mar 30, 2002, 08:41 PM
They weren't lyrics.

I love that poem Ayame http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif Ghaeleon, I look forward to your writings; Abdur, you'll get it all out soon and come up with another great poem ^_^

Mar 31, 2002, 03:29 AM
This is just what i came up in like 5 minutes its a lyrical rhyme

I'm out to kill falz, My skills hit'em hard
Gallions the humar the one with the scar
I killed the dragon - defeated de rol le
went to vol opt ha he couldn't hold me
i use techs and sabers
blaes and daggers
demonic creatures u shatter
wHEN i'm crazed i use my lavis blades - through the ruins in the shortest pace
Falz is one but i'm the ace now say your grace cause u bout to go to the holy place

I'll try to write more and better but this is just a crappy rhyme http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Mar 31, 2002, 03:30 AM
hehe, not bad. A nice little jingle if you can put it together...

Mar 31, 2002, 04:05 AM
On 2002-03-31 00:30, ABDUR101 wrote:
A nice little jingle if you can put it together...

Kehehe, you know? I noticed that too. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime2.gif That was a nice little rhyme you've formed there! Show us more. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif

<-- (Should write more poems)

Mar 31, 2002, 04:38 AM
I write too many poems.

Sometime I'll have to share them. (Unless you're brave enough to go to my website and read them yourself.)

Mar 31, 2002, 04:45 AM
Well, I was brave and I checked out your site. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif
My favorite poem has to be "The Burning". I really liked that one. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif

Post some more!


Mar 31, 2002, 04:51 AM
Hmmm... here's one about my true tragic love life:

In the dirt

The rose in the garden
Secluded and solitary
With thorns that prick
At the slightest caress

It’s beauty is immense
With undeniable attraction
Every time I try to grasp
My hand gashes and bleeds

In savage winds
The rose does not bend
It shares the land generously
Even with lesser flowers

To claim this rose
And harvest it as my own
I must refrain from
Such a selfish act

This rose beckons me
Do I see what I wish
To hold back my urges
I am murdering myself

What do I see
In this unique flower
That enslaves a free me
The willing captive

My rose will always be
Just out of my final reach
Here I sit stranded
Surrounded by weeds

Mar 31, 2002, 05:14 AM
Wow spy, that's amazing. My favorite type of poems are ones that have to do with emotions, love or nature. And I must say, you hit nail on the head there! That's now one of my favorite poems in this thread... http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/blush.gif

Well, I'm tired now...goodnight.


<-- (Will probably write a poem tomorrow...err, today. Kehehe...!) http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif

Mar 31, 2002, 05:36 AM
Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Mar 31, 2002, 09:45 AM
Very nice poem Spy =)

Mar 31, 2002, 11:19 AM
Great poem spy..good to see more people posting in the thread. I hope Psylocke gets back soon.

Still nothing from me, I'll have to wait a while longer to get it out. Take care everyone, and keep adding http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Mar 31, 2002, 11:19 AM
It All And Nothing

It is all
It can not show
Can not allow
You to say
What you mean
If you would
Have the courage
To say what you mean
Do you think
You can hurt me?
I'm far beyond everything
Anything you could say
Open your mind
Open your mouth
Let your words flow
Shove them into my heart
And tell me what you mean
I'm far beyond damaged
I'm already prepared
Speak now
Break the peace
I already know
Even before you say it
So come and help me
So I can help you
Collapse my world to nothing

Mar 31, 2002, 11:35 AM
Wow, those almost sound like lyrics http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Very nice, Indeed.

*waits for parents to leave*
Maybe I'll get something out today while their at my sister's for easter.
Keep them coming everyone http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Mar 31, 2002, 12:52 PM
My Broken Heart

I Cannot Dream,
Dream I Can Never.
I Cannot Beleive,
Beleiving Forever.
I Cannot Imagine,
The Things You Would Do.
I'll Never Disagree,
But I Won't Agree With You.
I'll Find My Own Path,
Leading Myself Into An Empty Field.
Much More Empty Than Your Heart,
This Weapon I Yield.
'Tis A Sword Of Justice,
A Sword To Break Free.
Wielding This Wish I Pray,
For You To Leave Me.
Stand Back,
This Heart Is Mine.
This Heart You've Broken,
Do You Think This Is Fine?
You Know Not The Pain I Feel,
The Pain I Know.
You Know Not The Pain I've Seen,
None Of It To Show.
Showing Me A New Path,
You Aren't Here Anymore.
But This Empty Heart Of Mine Is Now Filled,
More Active And Lively Than Ever Before.
The Truth My Was Love,
The Lies Were My Hate.
They Took Me Away From You,
Something I Shall Always Regret.


Mar 31, 2002, 02:03 PM
Nice poem ayame. Ack! Must watch anime and get sad...but first, I must eat before I starve x_X

Keep them coming, I'll be back in abit..perhaps alittle Love Hina is in order o_O

Mar 31, 2002, 03:01 PM
I agree ayame ad spy both good http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif
yea mine was lie a jingle but its corney lol
i'm not too much of a writer but i'll post anyways so u can give your opinions lol

Mar 31, 2002, 04:00 PM
Thanks for the input everyone. Here's one of my more cynical pieces.

Happiness Procrastinates

The sun will shine tomorrow
Tomorrow will be a better day
It can't get any worse
So brighten up and smile

The world will always be here
Change is good
And we are all changing
We are good

Set your best foot forward
The worst is past
And the past is far behind
The future is bliss

Dark days may come
But they will never stay
Even in the night
It is plenty light to see

War burns out
Peace is eternal
A full stomach
Outlasts a long famine

Love triumphs over all
Even loathing and avarice
Friends are always staunch
Time mends abysmal wounds

People don't die
Nor do they fade away
We don't have to feel
Pain to know what is real

You've turned your back
On the darkest parts of you
The candle that radiates
Your heart guarantees this true

Be confident
Wipe the tears from your eyes
With beautiful grace and ignorance
Indoctrinate these happy lies

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Mar 31, 2002, 04:03 PM
if i had any poetry talent what so ever, i might've posted but i dont lol! yowza, you guys should try to sell your poems!

Mar 31, 2002, 04:24 PM
On 2002-03-31 13:03, Mello_Yellow wrote:
if i had any poetry talent what so ever, i might've posted but i dont lol! yowza, you guys should try to sell your poems!

Why sell them? Their my feelings in full view, they belong to me, no amount of money would be worth giving them away.

Mar 31, 2002, 05:27 PM
On 2002-03-31 13:24, ABDUR101 wrote:
Why sell them? Their my feelings in full view, they belong to me, no amount of money would be worth giving them away.

Then why share them? Your feelings do in fact belong to you and then no other eyes should see them nor any other ears hear them. If they are truly personal and you truly hold them dear then you would not have to write a poem to express them, you would simply prove it in your everyday life and people will know how you feel. I live in a way where no emotions are shown except those that I cannot hold within, poems are for those who can't understand how they feel. Of course, that is if they are truly poems, for there are "poems" and then there are poems. The "poems" are those which are simply written about random subjects with hardly any touch of feeling but simply scribbling, then there are true poems that express the human beliefs and emotions. You can certainly tell the difference, the writing is much different, much more powerful and a lot more is put into them. Of course, "poems" can sometimes be acceptable but they pale in comparison to the true poems. But, since that ALL that was way to uncharastic i'll just say the stuff you guys usually hear me say: ha ha ha... *thinks for second* D'OH!

Mar 31, 2002, 05:36 PM
...you just proved what I was saying. Why would I >SELL< something that I wrote from how I felt? I have no need for money, and even if I did, I would'nt sell my poetry.

Writing poetry for how you feel is one thing, writing poetry just for money is another.

Just because I don't want to sell my poems doesn't mean I can't share them with my friends, emotions are to be shown, so I show my emotion by my words, in my poetry.

It's a hobby and a stress releiver, one that I share with my best friends. Guess who my best friends are?

On 2002-03-31 13:24, ABDUR101 wrote:
Why sell them? Their my feelings in full view, they belong to me, no amount of money would be worth giving them away.

Notice, that already sums up how I feel. My FEELINGS, in FULL VIEW. I don't need money to share my feelings.

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Mar 31, 2002, 05:38 PM
On 2002-03-31 14:36, ABDUR101 wrote:
It's a hobby and a stress releiver, one that I share with my best friends.

Damn straight. Amen.

Mar 31, 2002, 05:41 PM
I know I'm and idiot, it's so true! lol, no really when it comes to this stuff almost any body can out class me, im even surprised at how stupid everything i wrote was... read my sig, everything after So long and thanks for all the fish ^_^ it is true, dont be fooled by the childish mask that it carries.

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Mar 31, 2002, 05:44 PM
On 2002-03-31 14:41, Mello_Yellow wrote:
I know I'm and idiot, it's so true! lol, no really when it comes to this stuff almost any body can out class me, im even surprised at how stupid everything i wrote was...

Everyones good at something. I fell into writing poetry since I came to PSOW. I really hated it before, but now I realise it just comes natural and makes me feel better.

Your most likely good at something I'm not..thats how it all gets balanced out. Excel at what you can, try at things your not.

Mar 31, 2002, 05:53 PM
Back up, I never said I'm a retard. Just poems, *shudders*. I'm a bioligst/computer egineer (no that is not computing science, there is a difference) and i still have to pick oen or the other, but im sure Simon Frasier (the University im going to) can offer both and then when im done my education ill finally be able to find one...

Apr 1, 2002, 07:02 AM

The hidden words
The private sin
I'd rather die
Than do it again
I'd rather breathe
The breath of death
Than carry on
With what you left
One dark day
There will come a time
When you get your's
Because I got mine
Why did you think
It'd be easier this way?
You think that I'm weak
Unable to endure pain
But I'm not so timid
I'm not so weak
I'm not anyone's fucking rag doll
To be thrown atop the heap
I'm not your toy
I'm no one's possession
So say it out loud
Share your confession
Tell me all that's truth
Tell me I'm only a lie
You think you can hurt me?
I refuse to die
So it all comes down
As I sare at your pretty face
Be a man
Say the words
Put me in my place

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Apr 1, 2002, 03:05 PM

Um... Enjoy =)

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Apr 1, 2002, 03:08 PM
Hey, nice poem TiaEH..wow!

And spy, I'll check out your site tonight, my nephews are here and want to go outside. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Apr 1, 2002, 03:12 PM
isnt this thread amazing 28pages without me in it, only cuz i cant rit poetry but im here to say you lot can write some dam good poems.


Apr 2, 2002, 07:42 PM
I was about to post a poem, but i just remembered that I left my poetry notebook at church on wednesday.

*hangs head and walks away*

Apr 2, 2002, 10:15 PM
...all you have to do is goto the church and ask for it. It has an owner/keeper, correct? You could call and ask if you could get in if its closed. You'll get it, don't worry.

"A Soul Shudders"
The music's rolling melody,
So easily setting me free,
Walking the depth of my mind,
Finding peace in time,
Running from the hate,
Hoping it isn't too late,
Crying in my sleep,
Hoping the hole I've dug isn't too deep,
Can my soul regain its composure,
As I seek for eternal closure.

My work from 10 minutes ago as I listened to afew songs over and over, with my head down, trying to drown out the blasting TV in the living room. -_-

Apr 2, 2002, 10:34 PM
Nice poem Abdur

Apr 2, 2002, 10:48 PM
Thanks Spy...I'll go to your site after I get something to eat. I just haven't had the time to go there recently -_-

Apr 3, 2002, 06:51 PM
If I wasn't so busy at school and in the studio, then I would goto the church and pick up my poetry. Anyways, I should have back it tomorrow, and then I'll post my most recent work.

Apr 3, 2002, 09:58 PM
Um, yeah. Here's one about my now ex-girlfriend. Freedom!!! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif


You approached us one by one
Then proceeded to cripple us
Leave us held in your vice grip
Writhing in agony and pain

You would drain us of ourselves
Leech on and gorge gluttonously
To fill the gapping abyss you are
Without the slightest thought or care

Corrosion would engulf us
As you digested our souls
The great plague you are
Sickening us and leaving us weak

We would sit and rot
As you festered in us
Content in your captured prey
Your hard earned trophies and prizes

We were each affected in our own way
Some were heartbroken and suffering withdrawal
Others took much knowledge from the experience
You have fortified my already impervious shell

It seemed like a good thing at first
You masqueraded what we desired most
Thank you for this valuable life lesson
If it seems to good to be true it is

I am pleased that I awoke and escaped
Not totally spent and able to recover
And return to my previous condition
Thankfully I am not the tragic character

The vicious circle doesn’t affect me but only once
And for you it comes around yet again unending
More innocent fuel for your perverted desires
Stay the crippled diseased victim that you are

Apr 3, 2002, 11:09 PM
Nice poem spy, makes me wonder what your girl friend did o_O

Hagakura, post whenever you can.

Apr 4, 2002, 11:43 PM
Slow day today http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

The Treasure Hunt

The shackles binding my heart
Have been finally cast off
Freeing me to explore this existence
The world full of endless possibilities and hopes

There is so much to see
To experience and explore
A sense of overwhelming encroaches
What can’t I do with this new freedom

Immense is this ocean we swim in
This world where we are born live and die
To see and do everything with this one life
Is the greatest accomplishment and impossibility

The treasure hunt begins to seek
The one thing true and dear to me
It may be somewhere off in this vast existence
Or right under my unsuspecting nose

Will I find what I have lost
Many different great ancient lifetimes ago
My other half that cries out to me in my dreams
That has been ripped from me by the winds of change

I sit and ponder this epic quest
And the future experiences I will gain
The revelation that I am not free blinds me
I see I do not care that I am a slave to this

Just to find you one more time
To wear out yet another life alongside you
I would wholeheartedly ignore this universe
The world full of endless possibilities and hopes

Apr 5, 2002, 12:00 AM
Now thats a poem I love. DAYUM http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Very nice!

...wow..keep them coming.

Apr 5, 2002, 12:04 AM

I'll try to get more out faster. In the words of Boxer, "I will work harder."

Apr 7, 2002, 09:55 PM
Lonely Night

My soul cries out in the night
Longing for your embrace
Wishing that you were near
Loneliness predominates this existence

I walk into the darkness
With moonlight as my silent guide
Stars unreliable markers and way points
Dark shadows my constant companions

Journeys are not meant to be simple
Anything worth doing is a challenge
This is one I wholeheartedly accept
My search is unrelenting until I succeed

Unanswered questions persist and nag
Where are and can I find you
What will I do if or when I do
Is there anything I can say to convey me

I have lost much in my pursuit
But to gain you I would throw away
Everything else I hold dear to my heart
I continue as my feet are worn away

Rising over a hill in the distance
With rays of light heralding it
The sun is reborn and night is day
Unable to cross over I stand here in the darkness

Apr 7, 2002, 09:57 PM

Everyone is enjoying themselves
Dancing to the music with joy
Surrendering their guard and minds
To the mob mentality that consumes them all

They don’t know how they do this or why
If they even realize what is happening at all
It just happens as everyone is taken over
Sanity and reason are left as an afterthought

Except for one who stands alone
Not pleased nor melancholy
He stands there watching and listening
Observing like a statue overlooking the sea

Unable or unwilling to surrender himself
One can’t help but wonder why
He is like this so alien and strange
What could make somebody so inhuman

Maybe human he is not
Nor is he what he would seem to be
Is he controlling the mob or studying
Perhaps it is just dysfunctional

Yet everyone slowly takes notice
Of this lone person not joining in
Ruining everyone’s sense of fun
Some don’t care and others begin to anger

What makes him so superior to us
That he is above doing what we do
He does not belong here if he’s to be this way
Is he just restraining himself or does he feel no urge

Nobody takes any action until the music has died
People only dare ask him what is wrong
He says nothing and only grins wide
I am a virus

Apr 7, 2002, 11:11 PM
Wow, theres some really nice poems in there... I loved that last one Abdur, and especially 'The Infection', Spy.

Apr 8, 2002, 12:28 AM
Can you stand the rain?
When I'm feeling pain
Can we maintain a relationship?
When the water starts to drip
I'll cover you.
Will you do the same?
Even when it seems like
a relationship we can't maintain,
will you remain?
When we encounter harsh winds,
will our being continue or
will we just be "good friends"?
Will you stay for the rest of the season?
If you can't think of why to stay,
let me give you a reason.

Apr 8, 2002, 12:32 AM
Nice poem Abdur and Spy. Man it's been a while since I posted here.

Apr 8, 2002, 12:46 AM
Great poems everyone, really nice. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Keep it up..and sorry for not posting a poem -_-

Apr 8, 2002, 02:17 AM
Due to my recent feelings, I'll probably do a bit of writing and come up with a poem soon...I usually do when I feel like I do now.

Apr 8, 2002, 02:21 AM
Can't wait man, get one out when ever you can http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Apr 8, 2002, 04:12 PM
Formerly Known As Life

Anger runs rampant throughout my mind
Hopefully a pair of wings I'll find
To fly me away from the pain
To fly me over the rain.
As I observe the world below me,
I witness a vision. I see
all the bad things now,
and how things will be.
I see tanks coming,
people in the ghetto running,
people meeting bullets,
and falling on the ground as their bodies start numbing.
I see families break up
Emotions erupt
People I know suddenly turn corrupt
As I sit on a cloud and think to myself
and talk outloud "At least now I can read treble clef,
I couldn't in the former life I left."
I play a beautiful melody on my harp,
Which matches the beautiful visions of Earth in my heart.

Apr 8, 2002, 04:33 PM
....now that is a HELL OF A POEM!!

GREAT! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

I must now get a poem out...rage the dreams that have been annoying me...

We shall see o_O

Apr 8, 2002, 05:01 PM
*dabra puts a pencil in ink and starts writing*


Fetch me another beer!(didnt think of another name)

My secksay poem was written as if the person involved was a male. And at the end well....you see.

Oh well, im just proud i made a post on this thread!! yippy!


Apr 8, 2002, 05:16 PM
On 2002-04-08 15:01, Dabra_Shenrox wrote:
*dabra puts a pencil in ink and starts writing*


Fetch me another beer!(didnt think of another name)

My secksay poem was written as if the person involved was a male. And at the end well....you see.

Oh well, im just proud i made a post on this thread!! yippy!



Apr 8, 2002, 08:33 PM

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO WTF HAPPENED? I WORKED SO HARD!!! dammit, i mustve cut it out instead of copy when sent it to a [email protected]

Apr 8, 2002, 08:42 PM
....do I really need to comment?

I still haven't gotten a poem out, haven't had any time to myself to fully sit and get it together. -_-

Apr 9, 2002, 11:42 PM
And here it is...I raged the dreams.

Here I sit, getting lost in past memories again,
Waiting for this dreadful torment to end,
As my heart reaches to the heavens,
Wishing the angels would descend,
Your in my sight, but out of touch,
I never thought love meant so much,
Another sun has set,
But I did'nt forget,
The aching of the soul,
I'd do anything, whats the toll,
I've been waiting for this chance,
But when it comes time, I can't hold my stance,
Just another face in the crowd,
A silent voice amongst the shoutings loud,
Running from the spotlight,
I would'nt feel right,
I'm not meant to shine,
The less glamorous road is fine,
All I wish, is that I'd be yours, and you'd be mine.

Apr 10, 2002, 12:00 AM
Step by step, you will get there my friend. Great poem, well put together http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Apr 10, 2002, 12:24 AM
Wow, great poems EVERYONE! I loved them all so much! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif
Well, it's been a while since I've posted any poems in this thread... http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_frown.gif So...! I'm actually a bit tired tonight (And sick) to write a poem, but I did do a short poem earlier today that I want to share with you all.

This goes out to my boyfriend... http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif

I Love You So Much

Across The Widest Ocean,
Above The Highest Skies.
A Feeling Not Even Felt In Dreams
As I Stare Into Your Eyes.
Your Wonderful Voice I Love To Hear,
Your Beautiful Smile I Love To See.
This Feeling I Hold Inside My Heart
That I Hope You Feel For Me.
Something I Wish To Get Close To,
But Can Only Look And Not Touch.
These Feelings That I Have For You
Are Because I Love You So Much.


Apr 10, 2002, 12:33 AM
Nice poem. Indeed

Ah, Gypsy..thank you my friend. I know I will http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Apr 10, 2002, 07:00 PM
Ok heres my artwork. I'm not fluent in english so i use crappy words. Also, i dont like poetry. But i gave a shot. Here is it:

Want to hug, want to kiss.
Grab her hand, never miss.
Leave a note, she will read.
If she smiles you succeed.

Want to punch, want to kick.
Never miss, just grab his dick.
Poke him hard, he will bleed.
If he cries, you succeed.

If you do the former
If you do the latter
Consider yourself a man,
You can be more of a player.

If you do the opposite
Kick a gal or two
Consider yourself a fuck-face
You can't be any meaner*

If you do the opposite
Kiss a guy or two
Consider yourself a homo
You cant be any gayer.

But now that i can see you
Blurred out from the alcohol
I see that your a woman
So il shut up for you

But before i shut my hole
I can tell you something:
That if you do all that
Your on big bitch, and that's that.

Yep, i suck in poems. Feel free and open to comments, abdur, flame it all you want. You are all poets compared to me, and i am a 2nd grade writer compared to real, 15th century poets. I know i suck http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif

Apr 10, 2002, 07:14 PM
Want to hug, want to kiss.
Grab her hand, never miss.
Leave a note, she will read.
If she smiles you succeed.

Want to punch, want to kick.
Never miss, just grab his dick.
Poke him hard, he will bleed.
If he cries, you succeed.

If you do the former
If you do the latter
Consider yourself a man,
You can be more of a player.

If you do the opposite
Kick a gal or two
Consider yourself a fuck-face
You can't be any meaner*

If you do the opposite
Kiss a guy or two
Consider yourself a homo
You cant be any gayer.

But now that i can see you
Blurred out from the alcohol
I see that your a woman
So il shut up for you

But before i shut my hole
I can tell you something:
That if you do all that
Your on big bitch, and that's that.

Was that a fucking joke?

Apr 10, 2002, 08:42 PM
Same Concept

My girlfriend since forever left my life
The woman that hopefully would be my wife
The words peirced my feelings like a knife
"It's over."
Quickly, day became night
The tears alone I began to fight
But alas, I lost
I wanted her back no matter what the cost
My tears froze like frost
But it was too late
She left...
Loneliness was my date
Then a comment I began to state
"Her name was the emotion she killed."
While I walked in the storm against my will
Just a fragment of the emotion remained still
I spoke her name as I studied the night sky above

Does anyone actually get this poem? Just making sure.

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Apr 10, 2002, 08:54 PM
Uhh... http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime2.gif

My Paradise

In The Midst Of Battle,
At The Heart Of The War.
Feelings Being Scarred,
Down To The Very Core.
But Somewhere In The Field,
Lying Behind And Above All This Hate.
Lies A Beautfil Destiny
That Seeks Us All By Fate.
But It Hides Itself In Lies,
Keeping Itself To Only Those True.
A Perfect Heaven,
And Endless Paradise With You.
But Encased In Glass,
Sturdy And Strong As Steel.
The Only Thing That Can Overcome This Power
Are The Strong Emotions For You That I Feel.
These Tears From My Eye
Open New Paths For Me To Go.
But Soon They Shall Dry,
Leaving Me Here In The Barren Snow.
But You Rescue Me From The Battlefield,
Taking Me Away From This Place I Fear.
But You Wipe All My Tears Away,
As I Rest With You Here.
Finally At My Paradise,
An Endless Rest, Without Need Of A Love Letter.
As I Lay Here In Your Arms,
Dreaming Into Sweet Love "Eternally" Forever...


Apr 10, 2002, 08:57 PM
Sorry, that wasn't directed towards you, Frosty. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime2.gif Great poem! I loved it.


Apr 10, 2002, 09:00 PM
On 2002-04-10 17:00, Dabra_Shenrox wrote:
Yep, i suck in poems. Feel free and open to comments, abdur, flame it all you want. You are all poets compared to me, and i am a 2nd grade writer compared to real, 15th century poets. I know i suck http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif

For the record...I'm going to file this under "Future Bitch Slap".

Frosty, I get the poem. I like the symbolism my friend, great use of it http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Ayame, also a great poem. My god..*stops himself from OD'ing*

*goes back to read Dabra's poem*
ahh..thats the downer I needed XD

heheh, come on Dabra, you can put a better poem than that one out. Don't be so lewd, put some emotion into it. It's not just words, you have to have emotion behind each word.

Apr 10, 2002, 10:42 PM
ack ... God, right now I'm not really inspired to write a poem but I have one I'd like to show you. I didn't write it, but I want you to go and read it. Those are lyrics of "Cease to Exist" from Tristania.

You don't know what your missing if you don't click that link ...


... you know you want to !

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Apr 10, 2002, 10:54 PM
Subliminal messages XD

Stop that o_O
*goes and does what he said*

*just faked everyone out with a big "WTF" *

Apr 11, 2002, 05:13 PM
Look who's back, it's that haga-guy...whatever his name is.

A Poem For My Love by: ME

Being weary from my walking,
I stopped to do some talking.
But when I bowed down my head,
I thought of you instead.
How you seem so far away,
But my love is here to stay.
Of the beauty that is your face,
How it makes my heart skip a pace.
I thought of how I long to you,
Until then the sky is too blue.
Becoming weary from my thinking,
And my mood started to sinking.
I decided to write you a poem,
Bofre my heart started to roam.
In this I stated how I feel.
That, my heart, you did steal.
I wish that I could wipe away that tear,
And take away all your fear.
Unitl then, I will sit and mope,
But remember that I still have hope.

Apr 11, 2002, 05:26 PM
On 2002-04-10 19:00, ABDUR101 wrote:
heheh, come on Dabra, you can put a better poem than that one out. Don't be so lewd, put some emotion into it. It's not just words, you have to have emotion behind each word.

The only poem i can write, is the one i can cry.
But alas it's all dry, all i can do is sit here and sigh.

Apr 11, 2002, 10:37 PM

At a certain point and time
There was a shy boy with a positive state of mind
Hopefully through his searching a new relationship he'd find
One from someone sweet and kind.
The boy met up with this "soul mate"
And politely asked for a date
While his heart started beating faster
The lump in his throat gained weight
"I accept, let's go out around eight."
The next day they went out
Shopping, enjoying they're time
It was about 8:00 when she asked a question
That made his heart stop
"Do you want to continue this relationship?"
A quiry that made his heart flip
Quietly he murmered,
"I should say yes, I love her...."
He became silent, she became violent
He was bombarged by the angry words she sent
She walked on, yet again he was alone
His heart replaced his brain and said
"Maybe the love that came wasn't what you were looking for.
Instead, wait for love while your heart slowly becomes unsore...."

Again, does anyone understand? I'm exploring metaphors alot now....

*EDIT* Made some corrections

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Apr 11, 2002, 10:48 PM
Great poem my friend http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

He found someone to love, but it wasn't what he wanted exactly. It was love, but not the love he was actually looking to find. Keep them coming my friend http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Apr 12, 2002, 06:03 AM
Ayame, that was beautiful! One of the best from you so far.

Hagakura, I really liked that. You're pretty good.

OKay, I don't know if I've posted this before and it isn't a happy poem or anything, but here it is:

All I Miss and Fear

I still feel the hunger
The pangs of all I lost
Haunt me in my solitude.
I still hide in the shadows.
The light of your eyes
Seeks me out in my solitude.
I still long to escape
From my past…
From my future…
From the intensity of your love…
Even as I crave it.
I run from what I cannot explain
I run from what I am not accustomed to
I run from what I want most.
The hunger grows within me.
The fear follows me in my solitude.
I hide in this darkness
Stealing through the shadows
Silently pleading to be free;
Free from the confusion…
Free from my solitude…
Even as I embrace it
As I wish I could embrace you.
Never to escape,
Never to be free,
Never blessed (or damned)
To be with you in your light.

Apr 12, 2002, 04:03 PM
Someone say something nice about mine!

Apr 12, 2002, 04:56 PM
On 2002-04-12 14:03, _xX_Frosty_Xx_ wrote:
Someone say something nice about mine!

I did o_O

hehe, nice poem as well Psylocke.

Apr 12, 2002, 06:00 PM
Here's an old poem... iw as dubious about putting such things in here, but, i dunno... seeing all your poems, and how mine pales in comparison... well... i'll give you a chance to see the underlying message that my aweful poem has...

I won't post my more depressing stuff, like the one that i wrote in ten minutes, that still scares me... heh...

(and the edit was me putting the second stanza down a line... damn i'm tired)


There she lies, swathed in white, sobbing softly to herself
a true angel, pale and pure with broken white wings

her broken wings contorted... did she fall or was she pushed?
cliche, how ironic to consider, why an angel would have fallen
a tentive step forward gains a rewardance of sorts
rewarded with the angels screams... this step falters
this step falters and dies... and the angel sneers
her broken white wings flutter as she sneers at the worry i show

all i attempt is to comfort, all i want is to ease the pain
all i want is to help this fallen angel, but she has her pride
that pride clouding her immaculate purity with tainted humility
humble no more as she tries to push away the only offered help

again a hand is offered, without want for more than to aid her
only to be turned down by the beautiful one with white wings
apparant pride turns to spiteful words as the help is scorned
scorned by the angel, the fallen angel in the busy street

none stop, nobody cares that an angel lies wounded so close by
an angel too proud to accept the only help offered
or maybe too revulsed to accept the only help offered
revulsed by what i am, a beautiful angel too, with pitch feathers

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Apr 12, 2002, 06:19 PM
And... another one before i crawl off and get some sleep... heh...

- the last one was entitled... demon... i think... i can't remember why i called it that... something about the demons that people are...
this one is called 'effeminate shame' - and... well, i wrote it after crying over the end of a movie...
i'm strange

My poems still suck though


is it wrong, to feel so defeated, so distraught, so crushed
is it wrong to find myself becoming so deeply upset
upon seeing something so disturbing, something so sad
as something being wrongfully taken, destroyed, killed

to feel the sickening realisation deep within, upon seeing it happen
to feel the misplaced yearning as the last words are uttered
mournful feelings, blood running cold as a life is lost
the broken form taking one last breath, as life fades

to loose the angel in your life, for her to leave
for her words to sting at the betrayal she leaves
the loneliness settling in, as the joy love brought flees
only for her to be lost, never to grant that final farewell

to feel that familiar shame at the sudden burning pain
streams of sorts running down those predestined channels
down, always down it runs, as the unrelenting burning grows
the same burn, the same shame, as tears run their path

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Apr 12, 2002, 11:16 PM
Hey, those weren't bad man. I rather liked them. Keep posting here, its greatly welcomed.

And the only poem that truelly sucked was Dabra's lewd attempt... o_O

I'm not sure when I'll get another poem out though.

*looks at clock as it reads 12:17pm*
...I haven't eaten all day, so I'm going to take the chance and..
*runs to kitchen for something to eat*

Apr 13, 2002, 12:28 AM
This poem I wrote based on a song called "Epiphany" originally written by Aaron Lewis of the band Staind.

"Your words to me are but a whisper
And your faces appear unclear
My attempt to pay attention
And your words just disappeer
Now I speak to you riddles
Afraid my words get in my way
So I smoke the whole thing to my head
And wait for it to wash away
I can't withstand anymore of this
I wish I'd come apart
Dig myself a little hole
Inside your precious heart
I am but a little boy inside
Aching for attention
And aching to hide
I speak to you like children
Yet I don't know how I feel
But I know I'll do the right thing
If the right thing is revealled
Because its always raining in my head
Forget all the things I should have said"

The poem is really close to the lyrics of the song. But its so true for my life. Here recently I've realized of my life that its an epiphany, a noticing of reality. And Aaron Lewis says the song means the exact same thing I feel about it and what my poem speaks. Here are the lyrics to his song..

Epiphany(Staind's song)
"Your words to my just a whisper
Your faces so unclear
I try to pay attention
But your words just disapeer

Cuz' its always rainin' in my head
Forget all the things I should have said

So I speak to you in riddles
Cuz' my words get in my way
I smoke the whole thing to my head
And feel it wash away
Cuz' I can't take anymore of this
I wanna' come apart
And dig myself a little hole
Inside your precious heart


I am nothing more than
A little boy inside
That cries out for attention
Yet I always try to hide
Cuz' I talk to you like children
Though I don't know how I feel
But I know I'll do the right thing
If the right thing is revealled


My words in the poem are made from every line of the song except the chorus until the end of my poem. But I don't care, the song is so true for me, and I'm sure for many others as well.

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Apr 13, 2002, 12:33 AM
Hey, thats ok man. Thats what its about, you write poems for yourself. If you have any others, feel free to post them.

Apr 13, 2002, 12:47 AM
I love that song ^_^

Apr 13, 2002, 02:57 AM
Uh... i've kinda exausted the non-depressing poems i've written... i mean, i mentioned the one that i did in about ten minutes (And i don't write poetry often)

I'll just put the first stanza from this poem to show you how bad it is, in terms of how i SHOULDN'T be showing the full version


i wish it where possible to slip away
slip away and get away, leave this place
leave this place and go where my heart tells
my heart tells me to go, to be free
to be free of this world of pain
pain brings the birth of flowing crystal
crystal channels carve rivers in valleys of flesh


I've been told that the poem has an almost lyrical quality, but, i've also been told to stop writing such depressing stuff


anyone who wants the full poem, will have to ask for it privately i'm afraid.

Apr 13, 2002, 03:22 AM
Well hey, as my thread, your allowed to post anything you want. Pretty much all of my poems are depressing, and alot of others here are as well. Don't let anyone hold you back, post your stuff man.

There are alot of people that are eager to read it, me included. Post it hehe

Apr 13, 2002, 03:28 AM
Okay... here's the full poem...
A lot of poems i've done where done to show how much self harm hurts people... i actually found some people stealing my poems and using them to discourage friends from self harming... guess who didn't have the heart to tell them to take it down

Well, seeing as you do want to read it... here you go...

And before anyone says anything bad about it for its content. Don't. ^_^;

Umm... Enjoy? (like thats possible...)


i wish it where possible to slip away
slip away and get away, leave this place
leave this place and go where my heart tells
my heart tells me to go, to be free
to be free of this world of pain
pain brings the birth of flowing crystal
crystal channels carve rivers in valleys of flesh

this painful world ensared me with its thorny grip
trapping me in frigid lakes of sorrow
fleshless fingers of a dead world close slowly
hope draws its final breath, shudders and is no more

flesh bears witness to flowing crystals course
tears fall as the kiss of steel marks betrayal
flesh bears witness to flowing crimsons course
crimson falls as the sharp kiss fades unforgivingly
unforgiving kisses leaving flesh wet with crimson
lights dull reflection red-tainted shines wetly

this hateful world numbs me with its icy caress
crushing me with forever relentless pain
vines about me in a grotesque embrace tighten
white wings clipped, never to soar again

Apr 13, 2002, 03:35 AM
The depressed man's mantra...its not a bad poem man. And no one better say anything against what it partains to either o_O

No worries man, I enjoyed it. Feel free to post any poems you want.

Unfortunately, I still have no poem to post. Better luck next time eh?

Apr 13, 2002, 04:11 AM
Well... I'll post anything new i write... I'm not posting my much older stuff though... heh... bad memories attached with them...

and swear words...


No matter, i'll try and write something today... anyone care to give me a theme for the poem?

Apr 13, 2002, 04:20 AM
Hey, I liked it too, nice poem.

And neither have I, got any poems out.

Apr 13, 2002, 04:38 AM
My latest contribution:


From the mists she arises
An ancient goddess long forgotten
Arms outstretched she rises
This lovely goddess long forsaken.
She glows in the pale moonlight
The radiance of a thousand candles
She lifts her face to the silver light
And shines in the gentle beams.
Awakened from an endless slumber
The goddess is returned to Earth
Revived by the growing numbers
Who called for the goddess's rebirth.
Stepping out of the mists of time
Our goddess has been reborn
Returning to her children from the void of time
Through her resurrection we are all reborn.

Apr 13, 2002, 05:09 AM
Beautiful poem Psylocke http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Apr 13, 2002, 05:24 AM
Thanks gypsy! Much appreciated.

Apr 13, 2002, 11:04 AM
Sai-Yuk I enjoyed yours http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif Keep it up.

Apr 13, 2002, 06:31 PM
two of my older poems... my oldest ones aren't even accessiable to my friends anymore... heh... i just won't bring them out again

these two deal with self harm though, so if you have any trouble with that, or think you may, please, skip over them

these where written in part, to highlight the fact that self mutilation isn't a good escape... its a thing that as one poem clearly sates, is an addiction... but... just don't moan at me for them...



Hateful feelings flow, like ruddy liquid down my wrist
Painful steels razor kiss, alabaster marred by crimson

Wet, my life-blood, running as a Red River may
Wet, my tears running in a crystal channel over pale flesh

Bloody saliva, against my wrist, flowing red as I watch
Crimsons taste assaults me, loosing me in a sea of pain

Razor sharp the caress of loving steel, loving the pain
Crystal mixing with crimson, a wet and bloody smile

The crimson smile slowly fades, to a blissful oblivion
Twin blue orbs closing slowly as more tears fall

Blissful in my agony I remain, the metallic aftertaste
The loving feeling the pain grants fills the gap

Deathly white my hand, as it cleans away the impure
Impure crystal swept away to make room for the crimson

Smears of crimson against near white, colour to my cheeks
Crimson beauty to the ugly white is granted quickly

And again I am alone, the blade by my side without a soul
Its perfection taken the second with was put aside for another thrill



Again i have broken my word, broken something sacred
Razor blade kisses greeting coldly, like a cheating lover
Bloody, my smile as my aching wrist meets my lips
The word i gave voided, by the razor sharp kisses of steel

Quivering in my reverie, as the trickle of blood comes
Punctuating my word with crossed fingers and a bloody period
A bloody apostrophe, marring the promise like a clause
Pallid my flesh and crimson liquid flows, ruddy contrast

Slow veiling of azure, the world darkens with a veil of flesh
A crystal channel runs wetly, a second punctuation of my word
Tearful punctuation of a broken promise, one that will bring reparations
The blood and tears of friends seeking to stop me

Apr 13, 2002, 08:40 PM
Hey, nice poems Sai-yuk. Very nice.
*just woke up*
6 hours of sleep..thank god. Unfortunately still nothing from me -_-

I haven't been able to concentrate enough the past few days to write a poem.

When did you first start writing poems Sai-Yuk?

Apr 13, 2002, 09:42 PM
Some of my older stuff.......the first poem I put in this thread was a revised version of this poem, so if you can find it, compare them. Page 20 I believe. Enjoy:shy:

My Destination
As I sit here, burning an incent,
Pleased about the way things went,
I'm sitting here, thinking about the letter I sent,
To my baby girl, the one I'm in love with

I wonder if she has these feelings too,
I wish I could say "I love you"
I can imagine saying them, from your point of veiw,
For some reason, I always knew

Ever since I saw the look in your eyes,
I'd have to be with you, to watch the sunrise,
I always dreamed together, we'd watch the crimson skies
I just hope those dreams aren't all lies

I always love it when we're together,
I wish I could keep these feelings forever
Me stop thinking about you? Girl never
For the last few days, I've been trying to decide wheather

Or not I should tell you how much I'm in love,
Seems like someone sent me an angel from above
You Know I love the smell of
That fragrence you wear, and I love your hair

And everything about you, because you are pure,
When I'm sick, you're my cure
It just seems like you lure
Me into loving you. Girl, you know you're

My everything, Without you, I'm incomplete,
Please my lady, have a seat,
While we eat this meal called love,
These feelings I'll never delete

My love is still here
My skies are all clear
My love stays constant, 24/7 all year
I love it when you're near

I've never known a love so deep,
So girl, I give you my soul to keep
Before I lay my head down to sleep,
I find I begin to weep

So please just keep these words in your mind
And as you think of them, you'll find
You are my inspiration,
And you heart is my destination...

Apr 13, 2002, 10:37 PM
I finally decided to visit this post and will post something I came up with. I'm an amatuer when it comes to this so...Enjoy!

It's funny how new doors appear.
Some day that blessing will come.
I always loved it when you were near.
Unfortunetly there are now things to fear.

Chains are ripped apart.
Things needed a fresh start.
I cannot imagine us upart.
It aches, this thing called a heart.

I cry out to God for a door.
This is very heavy for me to bear.
I should put my trust in him more.
Trying to rely on him is my only care.

Although I want it all.
This cannot always work out.
I pick myself up, and then I fall.
It makes me wonder what this is all about.

Memories are a sweet hiding place.
It reminds me of those good parts.
Seeing a smile on your face.
Things were mutual in our hearts.

I grab your hand, but you slip away.
Being persistant I won't let you go astray.
Sometimes I wonder if I should stay.
But seeing you lonely, I'll continue anyway.

Trying to move on has not worked.
You noticed I could be doing this for me.
Annoying how all of this must be.
I wish this path ahead I could see.

It's hard sometimes, but I'll be fine.
I remember your words well...
"If you love something, just let it go."
Fly away, soar into the sky little bird.
Love and warmth is always in the nest.
If it's in God's and your will, return home.


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Apr 14, 2002, 01:16 AM
Hey, nice poem there frosty, great work http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Castelak, nice poem man. Don't worry about being an "amatuer"..pfft hehe. Everyone starts somewhere, just glad to read some new people's poems. Really nice.

Apr 14, 2002, 01:59 AM
~what Abdur said~ http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Apr 14, 2002, 04:24 AM
Hey Castelak, nice poem. I liked it. BTW, what does your title mean??

Okay, another from the writer-wannabe ie. me!

Is It You?

The sun runs and hides
The leaves all die
And a bitter wind blows through the trees
All warmth fades away
The tall grasses sway
And I wonder who could that be?

Is it you who chases away summertime?
Is it you in the breeze that blows through my hair?
Is it you that rings those old copper chimes?
Are you telling me that you still care?

Frost covers the ground
And the only sound
Is made by my beating heart
Snowflakes cover my head
It's been winter since you've been dead
Since we had to part.

When the cold wind howls is it you that is there?
Is it you in the rain that pelts down?
Do you know how I feel, that I still care?
Was it you who lead me to what I found?

I found with you that my life was worth living
You showed me that I could be kind and giving
Without you now I feel lost and alone
A little stray cat no one wants in their home

Help me be strong
Give me the courage to go on
Let me know in the breeze
That whispers through the trees
And caresses my face
As I gaze into space
That you are still with me
In mind if not body
Let me know that you still care.

The "since you've been dead" part is metaphorical. It's more of a "dead to me" or "lost forever" type of thing.
But, there ya go....

Apr 14, 2002, 04:35 AM
And yet another great poem, thanks Psylocke http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

*has no idea what Castelak's custom title means*

Probably asking if you understand it XD

Apr 14, 2002, 04:40 AM
Thankies, Abdur, That one's kinda old, too, but I've always liked it. *grin*

*looks at Castelak's title again*

Hmmm....I think it do be time for me to get a Japanese/English dictionary!

Apr 14, 2002, 05:25 AM
I haven't been able to concentrate enough the past few days to write a poem.

Don't worry... if you just sit there, and allow yourself to relax and see what thoughts you have that could be used, then i'm sure you'll find something... it works for me... that and writing about random things that seem to be bothering me at the time (Like crying over a movie)

When did you first start writing poems Sai-Yuk?

About... A year and a half ago... and i've not wrote that much in the way of poetry.... you've seen pretty much all of my stuff, bar two or three poems, that i can't even find myself anymore... I'm trying to decide what to write a poem on next... maybe i'll do something about something close to heart... if i ever figure what that is... heh

Apr 14, 2002, 05:34 AM
How come you didn't start writing poetry until a year or so ago, Sai-Yuk? Your stuff is pretty good for someone who's relatively new to it. I started writing poetry almost 13 years ago, when I was 7. Haven't stopped since! *grin* As for what to write next, a lot of the time you can't just sit down and say, "I feel like writing a poem", something has to inspire you. Think of something that inspires you, write about what you're feeling at the precise moment you put pen to paper (or fingers to keyboard *smile*). It's not that hard, but it's not that simple either. Sometimes picking out a certain way you want to write a poem can help ie. no rhyming at all, first and second lines rhyme, first and third lines rhyme, first rhymes with fourth second with fifth third with sixth, etc....I think you get the point. Anyways, as an English major and future best-selling author, I think you have talent. Develop it!!!

Apr 14, 2002, 05:36 AM
Hey, it's 3:33am and I'm going to conjure up a poem from my head in this thread for no apparent reason whatsoever.

"The sunflowers will lead the revolution,
Pepto-Bismol is neccessary for happiness,
the wallet laughs,
Johnny likes beer."

The end.

Thank you, goodnight.

Apr 14, 2002, 05:39 AM
*lol @ Wata*

Oh man, that were funny! Sounded like a haiku. I like haikus. Can't write a coherent one to save my life....but you've shown that coherency isn't necessary!!

*hee hee hee*

Apr 14, 2002, 05:57 AM
Psylocke, I only started writing poetry a while back, because of an incident with a girlfriend, who basically was the first and only girl i've ever had true feelings for, who basically used me to get back at her ex, and dumped me after giving me just long enough to get very attached to her (i wake up near enough every morning, and go to sleep every night, wishing that i had someone in my arms) and it wasn't long after that, that i started writing poetry (I was dumped around christmass, not this year, but the year before) and that poetry started out VERY hateful and emotional... it also dealt with self harm, because i went through that, and i was lucky to have some friends who stuck by me through it, and tried their best to help (who also threaten to make me suffer, should i ever do so again) before that, i never had thoughts of writing poetry... as for sitting down and forcing myself to write one... i do sometimes sit down and think 'i'm going to write a poem' and see what happens... some times i get nothing, other times i get something like 'Demon' and sometimes, i just tap one out of the blue, like 'Angel' (i think that was the one)

my style of writing depends on the poem... i actually have one that rhymes, that isn't really serious, that talks about someone giving themself a gender change with a blender (its just a little joke one i knocked up to cheer a friend up)

anyway... enough of that... heh... I'm going to get back to people telling me i should be an author or something... me? author? i doubt it. heh


Apr 14, 2002, 06:06 AM
I'm sorry for the painful experience my friend. It makes it hard to ever feel comfortable with someone once that happens, but it opens your eyes to the people that are actually worth being around.
Life is drama, a never ending tornado of experiences and emotions. You either ride the winds to the top, or you get drilled into the ground.

I know how hard it is to not have someone in your arms when you wake up every morning, my god do I know that -_-

Just take it in stride, and know that you have friends here as well as there that care for you http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

I find that writing a poem is really a matter of feeling the emotion first. Alot of my poems are sad or violent, because when I wrote them, thats how I was feeling, with those thoughts in my head. I can't just throw one out though, I feel obligated to use as much emotion as possible, otherwise I have abunch of words on screen that are meaningless to me.

Good luck in your future my friend http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Apr 14, 2002, 06:07 AM
I can understand and sympathise with a lot you just said, Sai-Yuk. I started writing poetry around the time my mom got her second divorce and he got custody of my brothers. I was really depressed because I realized I wouldn't see them every day anymore. My poetry is mostly dark, although I do have some upbeat ones, they're just rare. I went through the whole self-hate, self-harm thing, myself, so I know what that's like. The dark thoughts of suicide and all. Some of my best poems actually came from those feelings. I'll look a couple of them up.
Anyways, cheer up. Things'll get better (if they already haven't) and you'll find someone to hold in your arms. Goddess knows I spent a good portion of my life thinking I was destined to be alone for the rest of it, and look what happened? I met Kay. So, keep those friends close to you and never give up hope.

Apr 14, 2002, 06:28 AM
Abdur, Psylocke, i understand where you're coming from, and what you mean, and i know a lot of people have been through things like this, as Abdur said, there needs to be emotion, or you have meaningless words (wait... i wrote a poem by that name once... *searches for it... can't find it... sighs happily*) - all of my poems do have emotion, that makes them what they are to me - in a way, Poems are like memories... they reflect so much, and you don't think about it at the time, or you think about it, and you never know just how much they may mean to others...
Psylocke, things aren't much different, but that doesn't mean they haven't got better... while i may be single in real life, it doesn't mean that i haven't learnt to cope, through the support of my friends, and so on.. i guess one day i will find that person, who is 'the right one' and i'll do my best to write a poem based on those feelings and share it with everyone


If this place is still going at that time, i'll come back and post it... heh...

Apr 14, 2002, 06:43 AM
"Poems are like memories"....that is beautiful, Sai-Yuk. And very true, too. I can look back at old poems and be like "Wow! I can't believe I felt like that!" or "I remember exactly who/what this is about and exactly where and when I wrote it!" It's definitely a trip down memory lane. *grin*

Well, I looked up one of my semi-uplifting poems. It's like 5 years old, but it's still pretty good. When I'm feeling down, I think of the last stanza to give me strength...

My Precious Dreams

So very little happiness
Left for me it seems
So very much unfairness
That I cannot follow my dreams.
No matter how I fight
No matter how I try
No one seem to care
How very much I cry.

There are those who support me
But they don't really know
How uncertain of myself I am
Or how my unhappiness grows.
How can I tell them the truth
And not break their trusting hearts?
I don't want to lose their love
And it's tearing me apart!

Day after day I am wishing
For the answer to appear
But year after year is slipping
And I am no closer I fear.
So I cling to the little things
That give me all my pleasures
I cling to my precious dreams
For they are my greatest treasures.

Apr 14, 2002, 06:49 AM
"This Life"
I rush the light,
Realing in my own delight,
Onward with the endless fight,
A test which does not take might,

This life is short,
It's not meant to be a sport,
Run the distance, don't stay in your fort,

To its fullest and most extreme
This life is not a dream


Apr 14, 2002, 06:54 AM
Oooh! Very nice, Abdur. Almost profound in a weird sorta way.

Apr 14, 2002, 06:55 AM
Pyslocke... that was beautiful... I'm going to attempt to quickly do a poem just from how that one made me feel... it may not be good... but... i need a name for it

(Edit - the Name is 'Freedoms Broken Stance' thanks to Abdur and Psylocke for helping with that title ^_^)


We suffer for your beauty
We suffer for your pain
you take away our freedom
we're scapegoats for your blame

you may try to break us
you may try to crush our dreams
no matter how you hurt us
you'll only get our screams

our dreams cannot be taken
our lives are but a token
no matter how you treat us
you're the one thats broken

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Apr 14, 2002, 06:59 AM
On 2002-04-14 04:55, Sai-Yuk wrote:
i need a name for it

We suffer for your beauty
We suffer for your pain
you take away our freedom
we're scapegoats for your blame

you may try to break us
you may try to crush our dreams
no matter how you hurt us
you'll only get our screams

our dreams cannot be taken
our lives will are but a token
no matter how you treat us
you're the one thats broken

"The Stance" seems like a good and fitting name. Great poem, both of you http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Apr 14, 2002, 07:01 AM
Thank you, Sai-Yuk. Yours was amazing. You really do have talent. I'm touched that my words inspired such beautiful ones from you. You have no idea how good that makes me feel. As I writer, my aim is to touch just one person with everything I write, and you've helped me realize that aim. Thank you. I'm impressed with how quickly you whipped that up, too. Now, if it were me, I'd call that Broken.

Apr 14, 2002, 07:09 AM
Well, i'm glad that you liked it, and i'm glad that me writing that, because of your poem made you feel how it does, because in a similar way, i guess, if i you can truely touch just one person in your life, then you have done something that they will remember, and you will remember for years to come... we all need good memories, after all... *wipes tears away*
sorry, i don't just sound confused, i feel confused... its not often that you can truely even get a chance to touch someone... and in a way, i guess your words touched me, and you where touched by mine, so... its a good thing!


Broken... Stance... Hmm... names are never easy...
I'd have called that something like... Freedom.

Freedom, Broken or Stance...
what name is more suitable is the question?

Apr 14, 2002, 07:14 AM
Aww! Don't cry. It's okay, though. TO be perfectly honest, I'm in a confused state of being myself. BUt, you're right about touching just one person's life. It makes you feel good about yourself.

Hmmm...*incorporating all ideas*

The Stance of Broken Freedom??

*shrugs and raises an eyebrow*


Apr 14, 2002, 07:21 AM
well, it can go by that name... or Freedoms Broken Stance, depending on what seems to be the more flowing title...

I just wish i could truely touch more people, because its one of the best feelings i've had in a long time...

I'll see what else i can write today... I doubt i'm going to be inspired again though... heh... two poems in a day is my current record... maybe i can do three?
(With luck)

Apr 14, 2002, 07:27 AM
Either one sounds good. It's your poem, your choice.

Yeah, that's the best reason for writing. To let people see inside your soul and hopefully touch a part of theirs. I'm glad I could make you feel good. *smiles*

Well, here's one I made up on the spot a few months back, when this thread was just a scant few pages. I really liked it and I wanted to bump it up for you, so without further ado:

On Stage by Psylocke

Screaming aloud...it's all in my head.
Weeping a river...it's all in my head.

I smile, I laugh...it's all a facade.
My giggles, my grins...it's all a charade.

I hide my hurt so no one knows
How my sorrow grows and grows.
I hide my tears...
My worries...
My fears...
I can't let my damnable weaknesses show!

I am an actress.
It's all a show...
My smiles...

My joy...

My bubbling laughter....

None of it is real.

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Apr 14, 2002, 01:04 PM
The title of that poem meant that I was going down a road, but was forced to take a detour... http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime2.gif

Apr 14, 2002, 01:12 PM
On 2002-04-14 11:04, Castelak wrote:
The title of that poem meant that I was going down a road, but was forced to take a detour... http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime2.gif

err hehe, I think she means your custom title, under your name.

"Suteki da ne?"
What does it mean eh?

Apr 14, 2002, 04:36 PM
This poem is called, "An ode to Nuku".

The author prefers to remain anonymous.

"Semen stain on my bedspread.
Looks like wayward river.
I am happy."


Apr 14, 2002, 04:56 PM
On 2002-04-14 14:36, watashiwa wrote:

"Semen stain on my bedspread.
Looks like wayward river.
I am happy."


Well, I guess that just proves that not all poety has meaning or beauty.

Apr 14, 2002, 05:00 PM
On 2002-04-14 14:56, Spy wrote:
Well, I guess that just proves that not all poety has meaning or beauty.

It's beautiful in the 3 second orgasmic way.

Apr 14, 2002, 05:04 PM
On 2002-04-14 15:00, watashiwa wrote:

It's beautiful in the 3 second orgasmic way.

I guess it is true then that beauty is in the eye of the beholder http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wink.gif

Apr 14, 2002, 08:10 PM
Uh...interesting, Wata...very...interesting

And, yes, Castelak, I did mean the custom title...

Apr 14, 2002, 11:58 PM
Sector hell of heaven
Killing me oceans apart
Thinking of you
Not being by my side

But who am I to wish
For that world,
I do not deserve.
Whatever spite,
New beginning
New faces
Nothing changes

The fence is jumped,
No going back.
Yet to rid the evil,
Inside me persist
All I want
But the feelings exist

Apr 15, 2002, 12:01 AM
There we go man! Great poem, I knew you had it in you http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Apr 15, 2002, 12:28 AM
Hehe, thanks man http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

And great poems by Psylocke, Sai Yuk and Abdur dudes....I liked all of those ^_^

Apr 15, 2002, 02:35 PM
Written today, for someone who i wanted to cheer up... I don't know if this is any good, or not, but, its nameless as i left them to name it, as it was written for them...

I guess for now, a name like 'Nameless Sorrow' would do for it...


I see your tears of pain
I see your tears of sorrow
I cringe to see such anger
My words of comfort seem so hollow

I wish i could just hold you
I wish i could just remain
I would try to defeat that rage
So i could kiss away those tears of pain

Would you let me get so close
Would you let me hold you tight
Could i be there to comfort
I want to be there through this plight

I don't want to see your tears so sad
I don't want to see your pain so real
I just wish i could see you smile
I just want to stop that hurt you feel

Apr 15, 2002, 02:42 PM
Now that's another nice poem man. It's nice you try and cheer someone up http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Thanks for sharing it my friend.

Apr 15, 2002, 02:53 PM
I'm glad you like it... I just hope everyone else does

it took a while to do that one though, because i was doing it for someone, instead of like the last one, as a spur of the moment thing, i was so picky about the content, that it ended up loosing hundreds of lines... (Seriously, i did have about fify or so lines that i removed, edited or overhauled, before it ended up like that)

Apr 15, 2002, 03:13 PM
On 2002-04-15 12:53, Sai-Yuk wrote:
I'm glad you like it... I just hope everyone else does

Hey, I'm sure they will http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

it took a while to do that one though, because i was doing it for someone, instead of like the last one, as a spur of the moment thing, i was so picky about the content, that it ended up loosing hundreds of lines... (Seriously, i did have about fify or so lines that i removed, edited or overhauled, before it ended up like that)

Thats good though, it means you try to find the best lines to fit the right mood and overall feel of the poem. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Keep it up

Apr 15, 2002, 06:31 PM
If you REALLY want to know, you can find out yourself... http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wink.gif It's nothing that breathtaking though http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif

Apr 15, 2002, 08:19 PM
I'm glad you like it... I just hope everyone else does

I do! I loved it man http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Apr 16, 2002, 07:10 AM
Uggg.....I need to catch back up! I need to write a poem...... next one coming up - Just In Case

Apr 16, 2002, 07:51 AM
This is one of my older sh!b...

"Lost and Found"

I see faces all around me
I see spirits in the air
Their looks peirce through me
Why do they always stare
The world is always changing
My life has fallen apart
Ever closer to the ending
And now they let me start
Strugling to keep my sanity
Fighting to live me life
I see the light around me
As I begin to end the strife

Apr 16, 2002, 05:26 PM
What is love?

A girl on a park bench I spy with my brown eyes
I travel over to deploy my greetings
The girl was crying like she'd just recieved multiple beatings
As I offer myself a seat as I send out a quiry
"What's wrong?"
Like something you'd hear in a love song
She recited a past love did her wrong
Relations with her best friend made her feel as if
She'd reached her life's end.
"It's ok, maybe he wasn't right for you. Trust me,
I've seen falsified love too."
Then predictably she replied,
"But I loved him."
Then I asked a question that threw her off guard
"What is love?"

After a while the girl and I became friends
It seemed like I'd finally myself found a relationship
That wouldn't end.
After a while I asked
"Have you found the answer to the question I asked back then?"
I believed I had
If the same occured with her I'd be so glad.
"I'm still not sure."

Soon after the incident
Images that used to seem so bright
Slowly faded away....but not without a fight
Again, I wondered, "Should I ask? I might."
Strangely enough things like this always occur
Faster than a blur, I saw her conversing with another
"Maybe it's just a friend...maybe it's her brother."
Later I found out it was her former partner
I see them in the park on the bench
It's like instead of my nose my ears pick up a stench
"I love you."
Maybe instead of me asking her, I should find the answer myself...
"What is love?"

Apr 16, 2002, 05:29 PM
I put a lot of thought into that. It's about time I posted some new work http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime2.gif

Apr 16, 2002, 05:30 PM
Wow..that was a great poem man. Hit me dead center x_X

I'm going to sleep though..thanks for posting it before I went http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Take care everyone, and have some fun.

Apr 16, 2002, 05:33 PM
Frosty, that's an awesome poem, if it's based on something that you've been through then I'm sorry for you. Why is it usually the painful parts of life that bring us to write some of our best works?

Apr 16, 2002, 05:37 PM
On 2002-04-16 15:33, hagakura wrote:
Frosty, that's an awesome poem, if it's based on something that you've been through then I'm sorry for you. Why is it usually the painful parts of life that bring us to write some of our best works?

It's called inspiration.

Inspiration is good, you learn from it, and it helps you to touch others who have had the same experiences. Keep it up frosty http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Apr 16, 2002, 05:41 PM
that was beautiful... hell, i'm crying because its made me think so vivdly of something thats so similar for me...

it makes you wonder, what kind of people you know, when someone you don't, can write something as beautiful as that...

"a dead flower only has the memory of the beauty it once held"

i'm going to be sure to read the next poem you write

geeze... you' think i could type wouldn't you?

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Apr 16, 2002, 05:48 PM
Current State of Mind (Part 1)

I see the world spinning around me
Life is spinning out of control
All these things that happen to me
This is me on a roll
People always come and go
No one seems to stay
I never know where to go
This is me on my way
The ones standing over me
They never seem to understand
They always try to counsel me
This is me feeling grand

This is something that I wrote when I was supposed to be listening in class. After writing it and reading it, I probably should have called it "Reflections". Oh well, more to come as I write it.

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Apr 16, 2002, 06:14 PM
I do that myself. Write during class

Apr 16, 2002, 09:16 PM
After looking back at ALL of the previous post, I am ready to write some more sh!b. It's just hard for me to believe that my first post in here was a late-nighter, oh well.


Looking back on all that was said
I can't believe half of what I read
Steps that I took for granted
Nights when my thoughts were slanted
One thing that occured over again
Is posts were friendships began
Times that passed way too quicly
Words that were never too thickly
In all of this it would seem
That my soul did redeem
A new kind of love opened up
When emotions over flow my cup
Promises lost in the crowd
Thoughts that were said a-loud
And this is all I could do anymore
Make some remarks said before
When time would have me fade
I am happier when I stayed
And now without missing a beat
At a time when I'd rather be asleep
I want to say how much I care
Even if others will start to stare
My friends are important to me
And friends we will forever be
To never say good-bye is my dream
And to never forget is my theme
Until the next time we are together
I give this night to the feather
This is not a time to take light
This is me saying good-night

*edit* that was cleansing, my soul feels ten times lighter now *end edit*

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Apr 17, 2002, 12:24 AM
Great poems hagakura, really man. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

*just woke up after 7 hours of sleep*
Wooo! Go me! XD

Apr 17, 2002, 04:44 AM
To be with you

Thinking back, of memories not forgotten
Changing distortion of what may come
A never ending music of the soul
There is nothing so uplifting
Than that, in the way you make me feel
Why ever would I resist such bliss
If that would ever come my way
Girl, you don't know how happy I'd be
With you by my side
Sharing our music clear joy
As we go along together
So much to say, so much to share
The world, with nothing in our way
Oh! if only! a cliche I know so well
Time a virtue, so much infront of you
I would say nothing of this time
for then your love, if only!
to be by your side I ask, to let me in
The ocean I love, yet for it dry this time
To see me through the glass,
To be with you never-ending
To tell you this, I love you.

Apr 17, 2002, 04:52 AM
Wow, and there's another nice poem guys http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Gypsy, I think thats your best poem yet man! Keep it up http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Apr 17, 2002, 05:00 AM
Nice new poems Frosty, Sai-Yuk and hagakura. I liked em all http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Thankyou Abdur ^_^

Apr 17, 2002, 05:31 AM
"A Morning's Tranquility"
I sit in my chair,
Out my window do I stair,
As the koto is played,
The night begins to fade,
The end of a subtle dream,
Back to the reality, it seems,
This blissful melody in the air,
Washes away all discomfort and despair,
Simplistic and enjoyed,
Feeling a million miles away from annoyed,
If only all times were like this,
Un-needed would be the enraged fist,
A peaceful morning to begin my day,
Until at last, in my bed do I lay.

Just sitting here listening to a Koto being played, doing exactly what the poem says. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Apr 17, 2002, 05:36 AM
Lovely poem man http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Apr 17, 2002, 03:26 PM
I'm just stopping by to say thanks guys, for the kind words. And nice poems, I really love them.

Apr 17, 2002, 03:39 PM
No need to thank us my friend, you contributed too. So thank you http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Apr 17, 2002, 04:07 PM
After spend some quality time with my girlfriend, I've desided to write this poem for her. If only she were around right now to read it...

Who can fill me with joy and tenderness?
Only you.
Who can make my heart leap within me?
Only you.
Who brightens my day when nothing is right?
Only you.
Who makes me feel like I don't need to change?
Only you.
Who do I love more than anything in this world?
Only you.

Apr 17, 2002, 04:09 PM
Nice poem man http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

err..where is she if you don't mind me asking? o_O

Apr 17, 2002, 04:15 PM
I know I answered you on AIM, but I'll post here too, incase anyone else want's to know. She's going to school in Mississippi.

Apr 17, 2002, 10:06 PM

Such a dull look in my eyes
I watch as a bird flies by
For some reason the minute I looked it died
"Why?" I cryed in a sad voice.
I'm sick of my life
It seems like I'm in front of a locked door
The key as a knife
What lies on the other side I know not
Hopefully not a red room that's hot
In this world of madness I see no hope
My life's like soap....it sinks to the bottom of the water
We live in called the world.
In a vally of depression I see nothing to inspire me
But then, lonely in a field, I saw a blue flower
I wanted to live.
Even the smallest thing can make the largest impression.

I have no idea why I just wrote that http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime2.gif

Apr 17, 2002, 10:12 PM
Its a nice poem Frosty, and it carries a good message. How are you doing? Feel free to have a chat with me if you'd like to ^_^

Apr 17, 2002, 10:23 PM
Hi gypsy! I'm doing very well thank you. I would have a chat with you, but I'm very sleepy from a Golden Eye 007 party I was just @ (yes down here we still rock 64 http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif) so I need some sleep. I'll be in contact soon though. Bye

Apr 17, 2002, 11:01 PM
Yes, that is a nice poem frosty http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

*can't get another poem out*
...I just wrote one yesterday o_O

Apr 18, 2002, 02:35 PM
"I'm Not So Sure"

You and I used to be so happy
What happened to those times
We had dreams of being together
Now I'm afraid to close my eyes
People thought that we were great together
But some will never see
Yesterday we were so happy and in love
Now I'm not so sure.

This one was writen today, again right after spending "quality" time with my girlfriend, who now tells me that she might want to date a guy out there.

Apr 20, 2002, 05:05 PM
(Why does the page always go down when i'm about to post a poem? ...this is the second time at least... here's what i was going to post anyway)

This poem... just... needed to be done... it may suck, but i don't care...
this is for someone i cared for, who taught me how to feel... who i never got to say goodbye to...


Tears for an Angel

I wish i was ten again
to escape the world about me
to be free of my bonds
to be free of my responsibility

i wish i could be eleven
because i at least was free
i wasn't bound like this
i wasn't forced to be

even twelve would do
as school was my only hell
schoolwork was but a chore
homework done on the sly

what about thirteen
when i was still so free of this
i felt so dead inside
yet i didn't break down and cry

fourteen would be okay
at least i wasn't this
see no evil, hear no evil
yet i couldn't even feel

fifteen is getting late
i may have stole your heart
but mine was torn apart
without emotions am i real

sixteen is getting close
to the time that hurt the most
i was given repsonsiability
but that wasn't the thing for me

seventeen is a year before that pain
but on the brightest days i see rain
I need to hold you hand
but you wouldn't understand

eighteen marked the start
the time i found my heart
those fateful three months went by
before i finally broke down and cried

nineteen feels so hollow
because its filled with sorrow
no longer is she my goddess
no longer is she my angel

twenty will one day be
but will only come for me
she may be no longer breathing
but i'll never stop my grieving

Apr 20, 2002, 05:09 PM
I liked the name of that poem man..and with each line it kept getting better!

That was a GREAT poem. WOW!

I can't wait to see how everyone else felt about it http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Apr 20, 2002, 09:20 PM

It's no good trying to play a trick on a dense group of--


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Apr 21, 2002, 01:40 AM
Those were great poems guys!
Well, I'm in a mood today and I whipped up a couple new poems. I don't know if they're any good, but I'll let you be the judge. Please be honest...

I Am Afraid

I am afraid...
I struggle with voiceless whispers
Floating in the mist,
In the abyss of my mind
There is no sound...
No explanation for my pain.
I know words are spoken there
Bu they do not reach my ears.
Tears of frustration trail down my face
They go unnoticed by all
For they are shed on the inside.
Trying to mask my emotions
As a war rages within
I'm losing control of it all
And I am lost...
I am alone...
I am afraid.

Apr 21, 2002, 01:56 AM
Its a nice poem Psylocke ^_^

I liked your last one too Sai-Yuk

Apr 21, 2002, 02:21 AM
Rotis, a rather interesting poem. At first I thought it was dealing with an ants life, but yeah, it makes sense being about rats and factory workers. Rather interesting.

Psylocke, thats a nice poem, inner strife and discomfort, trying to find the answers yourself. A repeating circle really, because if you don't know the answers, you need to look to someone else for help http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Apr 21, 2002, 02:30 AM
Sometimes no one can find the answers, Abdur. Believe me, I've asked for help...nothing seems to help....only temporary cures.

Anyhow, here's the other one I wrote tonight.

Passages of Life

How I long to regain my childhood
To return to a more innocent time
How I long to cast off my adulthood
To regain the happiness that once was mine.
In my dreams I return to my childhood
I see myself laughing and smiling and happy
In my dreams I forget about my adulthood
I see myself without any worries.
Oh, to cast off this guise of contentment!
To be accepted for every part of me
Oh, to be able to laugh with real merriemnt!
To truly live instead of just be.

Apr 21, 2002, 02:51 AM
Ah, and yet another nice poem. Your really throwing out some quality stuff o_O

...you ate the brownies did'nt you?


Apr 21, 2002, 03:04 AM
Weeellll..I ate some brownie ice cream.... does that count??

Apr 21, 2002, 03:08 AM
On 2002-04-21 01:04, Psylocke wrote:
Weeellll..I ate some brownie ice cream.... does that count??

err...was it made by Kraknutz Inc.?

If it doesn't have the Kraknutz logo, its not Abdur's special o_O

Apr 21, 2002, 03:21 AM
I thought it was Ben & Jerry's, but....
*goes to check*
Aw nutbunnies!! It was made by Kraknutz Inc.!!

I need to look at labels more closely...