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_xX_Frosty_Xx_
Apr 21, 2002, 01:57 PM
T.H.U.G. L.I.F.E.

A little Crip boy
Twelve years of age
Actin' all hard like his life's on stage
Working on corners, making over minumum wage
Angry at the world like a bird in a cage
Nothing can contain his rage.
He hates any who oppose him
He barely acknowledges anyone who knows him
Some say he has a heart, but he never shows it.

As he gets older, his ego gets bigger
One thing about him, he hates racism
He dispatches anyone who calls him a n*****
Mad as if he's blinded by liquor.
Five bullets embeded around his tattoo
"Thug Life" across his chest
Shot so many time's like he's a bullet proof vest
Hasn't died yet, so he claims to be the best.


After C-Walking all night in a club
The boy intends to prove he's a thug
Or so it seems....
He pulls up to a bank
All he wanted was some money from the ATM
But the crooked cops stopped and looked @ him
"Hey boy, why you out @ 1:00?"
As if he was reaching for a gun he went for his pocket
The cops took out their guns, proceeded to unlock it
A shot rang out
A scream came out
As he fell on the ground his fist opened up
To reviel a blue flower, no reason to kill.
Remember, next time you pull out a gun,
"The Hate U Give Lil' Infants Fucks Everyone"



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ABDUR101
Apr 21, 2002, 03:30 PM
Damn...powerful power man! Keep it up http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

*just woke up from a rest*
No poem o_O

Psylocke
Apr 22, 2002, 12:50 AM
Sharing my misery with total strangers since 1992...


My Tortured Soul

Twisted shadows on the floor
Half-formed spectres in the corner
They watch my every movement
They come quickly to snatch each tear that falls
My pain feeds them; makes them stronger
While I grow ever weaker.
The shadows shift and grow
They engulf the room and me.
My world is dark and cold
Misty with my tears.
There is no hope of escape.
No one can help me now.
I want to scream and fight
But my limbs are heavy and weak.
My voice is lost in the shadows
Stolen by the spectres in the corner.
I cannot defend myself
I cannot even cry for help
No one knows the unseen war inside me
No one can possibly understand.
When I wake, the shadows will retreat
(Or so it would seem)
They will melt into the walls to wait for night.
The half-formed beings will dissipate
(Or so it would seem)
They will leave to torture another helpless soul.
They will return for me at nightfall.
I live in fear, I live alone
How will I ever be set free?

ABDUR101
Apr 22, 2002, 04:05 AM
That was yet another interesting poem psylocke o_O

Keep them coming, very unique.

No, no poem from me. I'm not in the right mindset.

Psylocke
Apr 22, 2002, 06:51 AM
This one started out as a poem, but for some reason I felt the need to make it into a song. Here it is:

Broken

Here it lies
A piece of glass
Broken
Shattered...
Like me.
It cannot cry
It has no tears
I can cry
I do
Locked inside myself
Alone in my misery
It seems like all I do.

I am broken
I am broken
Alone
In this silence...
In this darkness...
I lie with the broken glass
I am dead...
Inside.

I broke this glass
Crushed it in my hand
The shards fell to the ground
My blood fell, too
I felt the pain
I pushed it away
I can ignore this kind of pain
But the kind you give
I can't ignore
Sharper than this glass
It cuts more deeply
And now...

I am broken
I am broken
Alone
I am broken
I am broken
So all alone
I fall to pieces
My heart falls to pieces
My mind falls to pieces
Over you...

I am broken
I am broken
Alone
In this silence...
In this darkness...
I lie with the broken glass
I am dead...
I am dead...
Inside.

Sai-Yuk
Apr 22, 2002, 06:05 PM
This poem isn't my usual kind of work... it wasn't written 'as me' so the speak... as some people may know, i role play... this is a poem i wrote from the perspective of my character... i wrote it, but as him so to speak...

He's still a depressive bugger

I hope you enjoy it...

Edit: You'd think i'd learn to spell by now

^_^

---

Sanctus

How i crave, for nights black to fall
for the beauty of the moon doth call
i wish for beauty, i wish in vain
i wish for freedom, from this pain

i wish i could see, into the heavens
to see the angels sing and dance
to see them laughing, to see them cry
and then in my sorrow, i'd see them die

they'd die inside, because of me
while the demons, dance in glee
sinful creatures, twist and writhe
but still those angels, are alive

in heaven pure, and hell i'm damned
the mighty fall, before my hand
my hand of torment, my hand of love
those feelings fit me, as if a glove

the hand that nurtures, that does create
but grace is granted, much too late
as god i'm not, yet god is me
such delusions, they set me free

i wish not, to suffer these delusions
i wish for one, to shatter these illusions
i am a man, that much i know
yet in my reverie, let beauty grow

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_xX_Frosty_Xx_
Apr 22, 2002, 09:17 PM
Nice poem Sai http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime2.gif. Did you like mine?

Psylocke
Apr 22, 2002, 09:53 PM
Sai, that was beautiful! I'm beginning to think you're better than me...

I hate it when I question my talents...*sigh*

Ayame
Apr 22, 2002, 10:36 PM
Wow...it sure has been a long time since I've posted any in here. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime2.gif
Well...do love poems count? http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/blush.gif

Forever Love

I've always loved you
since the very start,
I'll always love you
with all my heart.
I'll love you forever
and always be true,
These feelings I have
are my love for you.
I love you more than anthing
no words can describe
This love I have that
I wish not to hide.
I wish to express my love
so you know how I feel,
I want you to love me
the way I love you
so that out love can be real.

This was a love poem I had written a while back...I thought I'd freshen it up and show it to you all.

http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif

Psylocke
Apr 23, 2002, 01:00 AM
That was, as all of your poems are Ayame, wonderful. Nice to see you post here again.

Currently I am working on a series of related poems. 3 in number, last one's almost done. Will probably post them later tonight.

ABDUR101
Apr 23, 2002, 03:30 AM
Great poems everyone! Gaaah...I need to get a poem out!! EEEHH..*smacks self*..
o_O
Keep these poems coming everyone, nice http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Sai-Yuk
Apr 23, 2002, 03:33 AM
Frosty: Yes, i do like yours... I love the way your poems clearly highlight certain moral issues - such as the one about love you did, where the woman ran back to her ex, and the one where kid is shot, simply because he reached for something, in a way that was taken for another action... you put some very good points into your poems - like T.H.U.G. L.I.F.E. on the surface pointing out racism in the way it does - keep it up, i enjoy reading your poems


Psylocke: No... I'm not better than you, not as far as i see it anyway... you seem to be about as self critical as i am

^_^;

you write very well, and i'm flattered to get praise from you for some of the things i write, and its always nice to be able to read what you write... Keep it up!


*claps for Ayame's poem* very nice
^_^

Psylocke
Apr 23, 2002, 04:10 AM
Okay, my newly completed Trilogy. I don't have a name yet for the compilation, but here they are...

Sol

Stand in the setting sun
Race toward the horizon
Try to catch a ray of light
And hold it in your hands.
The sky is a rainbow
A kaleidescope of colors
The beauty of this moment
Is enough to make you weep.
Alone in the fading light
Bid farewell to the day
Keep forever in your mind
The sight of a burning sun.


Luna

Stand in the moonlight
Bask in the silver glow
Try to catch a shining beam
And hold it in your hands.
The sky is an inky canvas
Painted with tiny stars
A dark and sparkling testament
To night's eternal beauty.
Alone in the deepening night
Dreading the return of day
Keep forever in your mind
The sight of the mystical moon.


Stella

Stand out under the stars
Admire the twinkling light
Try to catch a bit of sparkle
And hold it in your hands.
The sky is all aglow
With an ethereal aura
The magic of the night
And the hidden veil between worlds.
Alone in the midst of a starburst
Frozen with wonderment and awe
Keep forever in your mind
The sight of these diamond stars.

If anyone has any suggestions on the title of the Trilogy, I'd appreciate it. Something like Nature or Sky, but in Latin

Rotis
Apr 23, 2002, 04:24 AM
On 2002-04-22 20:36, Ayame wrote:
Forever Love

I've always loved you
since the very start,
I'll always love you
with all my heart.
I'll love you forever
and always be true,
These feelings I have
are my love for you.
I love you more than anthing
no words can describe
This love I have that
I wish not to hide.
I wish to express my love
so you know how I feel,
I want you to love me
the way I love you
so that out love can be real.


If someone sent me a love poem that ridiculously trite, I'd slap them. Seriously.

-BK-
Apr 23, 2002, 06:52 PM
I dis-agree with Rotis, that was a beautiful poem. Keep it up Ayame. Uh....I'm going to pull an "Abdur" and not post any poem and blame it on.....inspiration hasn't hit me yet.....uh ... yeah....

ABDUR101
Apr 24, 2002, 05:16 AM
On 2002-04-23 16:52, hagakura wrote:
Uh....I'm going to pull an "Abdur" and not post any poem and blame it on.....inspiration hasn't hit me yet

Everyone has different ways of writing a poem. Some artists need inspiration before they can do their best work, if thats not your style, thats 100% ok.

Me, however, need to actually feel the emotion and put it into every word, instead of just throwing out poems that mean nothing to me.

*turns on more Utada Hikaru*

gypsy
Apr 24, 2002, 01:06 PM
Theres been some really nice poems coming out recently from everyone...I'm not very good at commenting on poems but I have liked all so far ^_^ Especially T.H.U.G.L.I.F.E. Frosty...that was a really moving piece of writing

-BK-
Apr 24, 2002, 06:12 PM
I just got this poem turned into a poster. It's a poem that I origanlly wrote at the lunchtable, but I re-wrote it to be more fitting of "real" life.

Good-Bye

Another day draws to a close
Another artist starts with the prose
For the ultimate goal I still strive
And people know when I arrive
I look at my friends who still sit
Now the moon is newly lit
In my bed I want to lie
But not before I say, "Good-bye"

No I'm not leaving PSOW again, just posting this news and poem. Have fun people and keep posting your stuff here.

_xX_Frosty_Xx_
Apr 24, 2002, 08:29 PM
Letter From My Heart

Time after time, I wonder why
The girl that walks by
Isn't mine.
I'm just now realizing
As I look up at the sky and
Actually think about why I can't find her
I'm afraid.

As I think about my life so far
My heart sends me a message faster than email
I wonder what's going on, but over my mind
My heart prevails.
It seems like I'm in the pits of relationship hell
For me, things aren't going very well
My heart begins to tell
Me to stop looking so pale.

"Part of the reason you can't find
your one and only is because you don't rely
on me. Trust your heart, not your mind.
If you do what I say maybe you'll find
You may loose the right one because of your mind
The feelings it binds."

_xX_Frosty_Xx_
Apr 24, 2002, 08:31 PM
That one didn't come out as good as I wanted it to, mainly because when I had it mapped out in my mind, I didn't write it down. When inspiration strikes, put it in writing.

ABDUR101
Apr 25, 2002, 05:22 AM
Great poems guys. Really nice.

Don't worry frosty, it wasn't THAT bad. I agree though, when you have the words flowing, get it down on paper. Quite annoying when you have a nice poem and then you lose it x_X

ragnar
Apr 28, 2002, 04:36 PM
here comes rags one and only txt poem design for a txt message, m8 want it to tell a girl he liked her


i look at u, u look at me but i wanna be more than m8s do like what u see

not long or particulary stunning but it makes a gud txt poem

_xX_Frosty_Xx_
Apr 28, 2002, 11:51 PM
More coming soon, I just need some inspiration......

ABDUR101
Apr 29, 2002, 12:06 AM
"The Might"
The clouds swirl in a fit of anger,
A touch of death, from my finger,
From the mountains to the atmosphere,
A fright for those who see and hear,
An Angel at war with himself,
Putting the books of knowledge back on the shelf,
This might and power,
Can I make it blossom and flower,
Rushing the light,
Into the eternal night,
An angel all alone,
The only keeper to a begotten throne,
A tortured existance like no other,
Filled with so much despair, a mortal would smother,
Raging his dreams,
He's more than he seems,
The deciding factor on heaven and hell,
Raising those who have fell,
A destroyer of worlds,
A restorer of words,
Can the angel redeem?

...go me..?
Right off the top of my head as I listened to Dir En Grey "Cage". Thanks Psylocke http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

_xX_Frosty_Xx_
Apr 29, 2002, 12:17 AM
I loved the poem Abdur. Finally a poem from you after a while http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime2.gif

_xX_Frosty_Xx_
Apr 29, 2002, 12:19 AM
Heart Cry

While I think about a mistake I enduced
I let my guilt run loose
"It was my fault...I should've known she felt that way."
The exact words my mind thought that day.

I didn't know
Even though she showed interest
She's like my family - it would feel like insest
My mind and my heart are in a contest
Both are blessed
My mind with knowledge
My brain with intelegence
But which would help me judge what to do with her elegence?
I would have responded to a the letter her heart sent
It wasn't my intent to ignore her.
Even though this was the case,
I didn't know.

Her "friend" diverted me from my path
To be with her.
She cause this dramatic aftermath.
"This didn't have to happen."
I think as I watch tears stream down her face.
I approach her to apologize
Even as I looked at her she wouldn't look in my eyes
Now I witness what she goes through
When her heart cries.

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ABDUR101
Apr 29, 2002, 12:21 AM
Thanks man, and thats a rather powerful poem you have there as well http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Keep them coming.

_xX_Frosty_Xx_
Apr 30, 2002, 10:07 PM
[i]Digital Love

I see you two walking hand in hand
You his woman he's your man
I know this relationship is a hidden one
Which will all will be surfaced once it's said and done
I feel the feelings from which you'll run
Your life will seem like it's over, not a pun
Both of you deceiving
Actually thinking each other are believing
The words that are falsely passing their lips
"I love you."
Words without meaning because you know it isn't true
Just preaching anything you can, as long as it gets you through

Both of you have separate lovers
The man in the relationship thinks he's above her
"Insolent female, I'm cheating and she can't tell."
Little did he know, she was thinking the same thing as well
Deceit, the only thing that that can get you through
While as if your computer is a mainframe and love a file
You wait while it gets deleted; while in reality the file is you
Your tricks are slowly being depleted and you know the web will be down
Don't look around your energy ran out
What are you surprised about?
She finally began to loathe him, and him her
Because in both of their minds, a digital conscience declared
"Game over."

ABDUR101
Apr 30, 2002, 10:16 PM
Wow...now thats an interesting way to put a poem together man. Really great. I like your constant word play, keep it going http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

ABDUR101
Apr 30, 2002, 11:06 PM
"In A Perfect World"

I walk down the street,
Being greeted by everyone I meet,
Laughter and smiles all around,
Sadness and pain are no where to be found,
Everyone living in such bliss,
Keeping my eyes open, for that moment I might miss,
All these wonderful people together,
As graceful as if from heaven, fell a feather
The seasons change with the setting of the sun,
Watch the children as they run,
This life, so full of glee,
I look at you, and you look at me,
And suddenly its not what it seems,
I begin to realise its all just a dream,
The sadness grows, but I try and stay,
Until finally, to black it all fades away.

This is for every dream I ever had, where I was so much at rest and thought it was real, only to wake up and realise it was just a dream...

_xX_Frosty_Xx_
May 2, 2002, 05:23 AM
http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_frown.gif I wish it was like that.......

Vyce_Grypp
May 2, 2002, 06:39 AM
Lest not forget, Fred will not regret
Worchester sauce on my chainmail, you bet
Dream a dream of passion in Wapping
Look forth, imps in the night eavesdropping

Go wheezy unicorn, go and naught return
For the wind thy broke will make me burn
Homophobia is not the answer
For I am the Sacred Tights Dancer


There, it's done. Whaddaya think?

gypsy
May 2, 2002, 07:41 AM
I always enjoy your poems Frosty...they are so emotionally powerful ^_^

Abdur, those last two poems were great... that last one reminds me of Glastonbury festival hehe ^_^



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ABDUR101
May 2, 2002, 11:25 AM
Frosty, yeah, me too. Some dreams I have were so good, that when I wake up I end up crying myself back to sleep x_X

Thanks gypsy http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

And Vyce..err...nice poem...I'm alittle lost with it, but nice o_O

Vyce_Grypp
May 2, 2002, 12:26 PM
On 2002-05-02 09:25, ABDUR101 wrote:
And Vyce..err...nice poem...I'm alittle lost with it, but nice o_O


"Lost"? Are you mad!?
The subliminal message is as clear as daylight: Never swallow glass.

-BK-
May 2, 2002, 02:11 PM
"In Dreams"

Chased through the streets un-ending,
Running with my life now pending.
What is it that chases me like this?
Try to stop them, but ever I miss.
Scared to turn, for what I might see,
The creature that does not want me to be.
Can I keep this up through the night?
What will happen if I lose this long fight?
As a new form of sanity starts to fade;
And the walls of the city start to cascade.
I awake with nothing truely finished,
Save that my life is here unblimished.


bhruhaa...

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-BK-
May 4, 2002, 07:13 PM
Here's is one from Bevis and Butthead...
(well, just from Bevis)

Here I sit, same as ever
Take a dump, pull the lever
Toilet clogs, overflow
Look out world, it's a motherload

ABDUR101
May 4, 2002, 09:04 PM
Hagakura, the first one was nice...

But from when I used to watch Beavis and Butthead, I don't remember that poem... o_O

And where did frosty go? Psylocke?..gypsy!?

ABDUR101
May 4, 2002, 09:56 PM
"Internal Disruption"

This darkness, in it I am consumed,
So comforting, not cold as many presume,
In this black abyss,
I'm just falling short of eternal bliss,
My back to the world without a care,
Everyone looks, and I'm cut down by their stare,
Back to the darkness I run,
Away from all the screams and shouts of fun,
Chained in a prison so strong, not even light can escape,
It's time to see things for what they are, stand up and alter fate,
Banish this darkness, rush to the light,
I've seen a blink of the world, I can't be struck down by this plight,
Once sorrow, depression,
Now astonishment and aggression
The soul neutralizing the hate,
A newly changed fate,
The clouds part and the light breaks through,
I've cracked the case and shattered hell, all for you.

Not much to really say about this, just came to mind so I wrote it down. err, its not how I feel right now by the way...just had afew lines run through my mind while getting a shower..

_xX_Frosty_Xx_
May 4, 2002, 10:33 PM
That's a very good poem http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime2.gif. It's sad......I think?

ABDUR101
May 4, 2002, 10:37 PM
On 2002-05-04 19:56, ABDUR101 wrote:
"Internal Disruption"

This darkness, in it I am consumed,
So comforting, not cold as many presume,
In this black abyss,
I'm just falling short of eternal bliss,
My back to the world without a care,
Everyone looks, and I'm cut down by their stare,
Back to the darkness I run,
Away from all the screams and shouts of fun,
Chained in a prison so strong, not even light can escape,
It's time to see things for what they are, stand up and alter fate,
Banish this darkness, rush to the light,
I've seen a blink of the world, I can't be struck down by this plight,
Once sorrow, depression,
Now astonishment and aggression
The soul neutralizing the hate,
A newly changed fate,
The clouds part and the light breaks through,
I've cracked the case and shattered hell, all for you.


..actually, its the opposite of sad. It's someone who was living a lie, justifying everything to himself, and then one day was shown the right way, and he tore himself apart just to be a new person. o_O

Sad, to an extent..but thats life, right? You have to find the real you sooner or later...

_xX_Frosty_Xx_
May 5, 2002, 09:01 AM
The meaning of that poem was so deep to an extent I didn't even get it...............

ABDUR101
May 5, 2002, 11:14 AM
You were just too tired to understand it... o-O;

gypsy
May 7, 2002, 01:46 AM
And where did frosty go? Psylocke?..gypsy!?

I was hiding behind the sofa http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif Muaha, I knew you wouldn't find me there ^_^

-BK-
May 10, 2002, 06:01 PM
Sitting here all alone.
Sitting here by the phone.
Why don't I give you a call?
Why does my mind always stall?
I want to tell you what I feel.
I want, your heart, to steal.
Will you ever find me out?
Will I never stop and pout?
Wrap your arms and hold me tight.
Wrap me up through-out the night.

gypsy
May 11, 2002, 03:31 AM
Nice ^_^

ABDUR101
May 11, 2002, 03:41 AM
"An Angel's Ally"

It's this endless waltz,
It keeps me awake like smelling salts,
The rushing and the glare,
Disrupting the soul as I stare,
The beauty of the night,
Keeps me in this eternal fight,
Such a strong will and so pure,
Of her sight, I want more,
This angel as my company,
This angel, there aren't many,
The souls who would follow you through
Hellfire,
And with their wings raise you higher,
It's this existance that makes you think,
It could all end with a blink,
Hell below and Heaven above,
We'll be side by side when push comes to shove,
The endless war for salvation,
We'll overcome this eternal damnation,
We'll run as far, and fly as high,
Even if the final destination is heaven in the sky.

I've been listening to "Ai Yo Kienaide"...and I felt like writing a poem...wow..there it is... o_O

gypsy
May 11, 2002, 04:22 AM
well done man

Psylocke
May 12, 2002, 11:07 AM
Aw.... Abdur, did you miss me?
*scratches head*
Odd...wasn't that you I've been talking to on AIM??
*shrugs*
Ah well....too many brownies I guess.

At long last, another poetic offering from me.

Illusion Illness

Life is nothing but a dream
We are merely dreamers
Life is nothing like it seems
We are illusion redeemers.

We live inside our dreams
Refuse to see what's real
We are nothing like we seem
Refuse to truly feel.

Illusion exists no just in dreams
We embrace it even when we wake
Illusion distorts how everything seems
We fight the reality we cannot break.

Life is nothing but a dream
Death reveals what is true
Life is nothing like it seems
Death shatters the illusions we cling to.

Dreams are illusions
Illusions overshadow dreams
Death takes over in the end
Revealing that nothing is like it seems.

-BK-
May 12, 2002, 04:22 PM
Nice poem, Psylock, I really like it.

My typing skills have been going down the drain lately, so I'm going to postpone putting a poem up right now.

*grabs a brownie on his way out*


(just so you know, i had to type "on" three times before i spelled it correctly)

gypsy
May 12, 2002, 04:32 PM
Lovely poem Psy, I liked that ^_^

Ayame
May 12, 2002, 04:59 PM
Wow, wonderful poems everyone! I especially like your Illusion Illness poem, Psylocke!

It's been quite a while since I've posted any poems here, mainly due to the fact that my PC was in repair for two weeks. -.-;
Well, that's not going to stop me from posting any more! Here's on of my, as Abdur liked to call them, "On-the-fly" poems!

Afterlife

Taking A Path That Decides My Fate,
Nearing The End Of This Long Road.
My Journey's End In Which I Wait,
A Completed Story In Which To Be Told.
Told In A Manner In Which Ears Cannot Hear,
Sounds That Reach Beyond The Skies.
An Image, A Presence In Which I Fear,
Staring At Me With It's Fiery Eyes.
It's Eyes That Consume Me
And Steal My Very Soul.
My Existance In Which I Can See
No Longer As I Am Devoured Whole.
My Body Still Exists,
But My Heart Is No More.
This Feeling, The Power That I Try To Resist,
Are The Burning Desires In Which My Soul Has Tore.
For In The Afterlife, This Living Hell,
A Person's Body Is Never Enough.
Standing In Lonliness, Standing Still...
Just Wanting To Have Once Loved.
Dreams Torn Apart, But Reborn,
No More Pain Or Weapons.
Healing The Wounds Which Have Been Torn,
The Human Soul Sent To Heaven.
While The Heart Still Wishes To Be Free,
To Fly High As A Dove.
My Heart And Soul Become One With Me
The First Time I Experienced Love.
But Here In The Afterlife,
Things Aren't As They Seem.
Love No Longer Involves Husband Or Wife,
But Our Bodies May Still Dream.

...Was it a winner?

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-BK-
May 12, 2002, 05:11 PM
Wow, I don't know what else to say, just wow. That was awesome, really something else. I'm ... searching ... for more words that are relatively easy to type.

Psylocke
May 12, 2002, 05:39 PM
That was a wonderful poem Ayame....and happy birthday (too late probably, but...hehe)

Okay this poem is testament to the fact that I spend FAR TOO MUCH time listening to Malice Mizer and Dir en grey!


Bloodlust

Pulsing blood
Simmering in my veins
Pulsing beat
Pounding in my brain.
Spinning, spinning
The night is closing in
Falling, falling
The bloodlust now begins.

Glowing eyes
Shining in the dark
Glowing heat
Spreading in my heart
Spinning, spinning
The night is dark with sin
Falling, falling
The bloodlust now begins.

Burning hunger
Filling up my soul
Burning desire
Consuming all control
Spinning, spinning
The night is never done
Falling, falling
The bloodlust has begun.

Ayame
May 12, 2002, 06:11 PM
On 2002-05-12 15:39, Psylocke wrote:
That was a wonderful poem Ayame....and Happy Birthday (Too late probably, but...hehe).



Wow, another great poem, Psylocke! I really admire your poetic skills. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif Something that I'm not really too great at. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime2.gif
And as for being too late, no need to worry. My Birthday has yet to pass, as it isn't until tomorrow. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime2.gif But thank you! ^_^

And thanks everyone on your input, I needed to have done a new poem. It's been far too long. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime2.gif

<-- (Looks to beginning pages of thread and sees that username was still SugarKitty) O.o

Oh my... http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime2.gif

Psylocke
May 12, 2002, 08:21 PM
Thank you Ayame. I really appreciate the praise. But you have a beautiful style as well. We just have different styles, so it's hard to compare and say if one's better than the other, you know what I'm saying?

ABDUR101
May 12, 2002, 08:35 PM
Great poems everyone, I'm glad others started posting in here again hehe, I thought afew people had stopped writing. Really nice, can't wait to read more.

And yeah, Psylocke and Ayame each have their own style, both are unique, keep them coming http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

_xX_Frosty_Xx_
May 13, 2002, 05:52 PM
Garden of Love
It seems as if whever I take the opposite sex as my friend
Complecations always make the relationship end.
Just because we talk doesn't mean I'm interested.
My nice personality made the mind it infested cry, but she has to realize
I'm not looking for love, just trying to get by.
If I open up my heart to you
in the end, I'll get hurt, and you will too.
You probably think "Who is he to say he's better than me?"
If you realize the complications at hand
Maybe you'd understand why I don't want to be your "man"
Even though I can, I can't
Don't let the seeds of love I plant in your mind rot.
The love you believe it is, it's not.
Even though it wasn't, keep looking for what you sought.
Now as the tears stream down your face,
find an empty place and expand that space.
As your your emotions get stronger, make the m go farther.
Now you have a garden, just find the gardener.

ABDUR101
May 13, 2002, 06:08 PM
Ah, another meaningful poem. I like the theme as well, nice work http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

_xX_Frosty_Xx_
May 13, 2002, 06:12 PM
[i]Based off an event that happened today....[i/]

Nerd
May 13, 2002, 08:58 PM
a haiku for people who dont like pets

To kill a dog's bark
Leave it a bowl of coolant
Soon silence is heard


st00pid poetry for angry white nerds

Hey! are you working for minimum wage?
starin through everyone--eyes glazed
customers bitchin, gettin crazed
well i am
Im sick of this shit, im sick of these cows
crowdin round like we got towels marked down
hoofin to mercantile sales on the 3rd aisle

what do you dream of? what do u want?
im still a bit upset my life is a shitpile
All this time, all this while
Slave with a white collar, just waitin
spoutin "self improvement is masturbation.."
Poor assholes dyin in a third world nation

Meanwhile i work at Sears and keep payin
For games and other shit i dont need
A loveseat with a striped pattern in green
a yin yang coffee table or any clever thing
No time for rest, no time for sleep
Jumpin off the cliff with all the other sheep

A wake up call, when you take the fall
Dive into oblivion
Cryin on the fat bitchtits of Bob
Im seein things i never should have saw
I gotta fight to feel alive at all

Its only after youve lost everything
That you are free to do anything
Consumers just sicken me
I wanna burn down the economy
Fuck it all

Start over, give you a clean slate
My Project is Mayhem to hand you your fate
'Don't ask questions' is the mandate
Dont try to run, dont fuck with me
Im a nerd on the very edge of insanity

You can see im not stable entirely
Cant put shit past me,
tap out, get out, now you bleedin
Gonna tear down your capitalist seed

Oh shit! what the hell dude?
i spazzed out again, how can i help you?
Ye--yes ma'am i apologize
Let me assist with that for ya too
(dam im pathetic)

ABDUR101
May 13, 2002, 09:12 PM
I'm sorry to hear that frosty. Wow..can only imagine how that must feel.

Nerd, is that poem your own, or did you find it somewhere, eh? hehe

Nerd
May 13, 2002, 09:38 PM
i wrote it..based on my love for fight club and my sad life, the beat of the song is sorta eminem inspired..

gypsy
May 13, 2002, 09:49 PM
Another nice poem Frosty http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Nerd - dunno about that haiku....but the poem was good lol...I thought it was meant to go along to eminem ^_^

Sai-Yuk
May 15, 2002, 05:51 AM
*reads all he missed, and notices nobody noticed he wasn't here... apart from Abdur who bugged him on AIM*

o_o

whoa...
*cries*

I'm gonna try writing a new poem soon... i just need to get the feelings that have been running rampant for a while down on paper, in a form that isn't confused...

Its hard though... but then, Abdur again, because he got me on AIM, probably knows who i'm going to devote it to, if i can ever write it...

gypsy
May 15, 2002, 06:44 AM
I noticed you dissapeared for a bit man....just didn't highlight it, but I noticed. I look forward to the poem if you can get it down ^_^

(just noticed you live in England ...whereabouts? ..Going to glastonbury? ^_^)

Sai-Yuk
May 15, 2002, 09:46 PM
bah... why has everythings i've started been so morbid?
i guess its because of the subject...
*continues trying*

You finally noticed that?
Heh... i think thats something that i always look at...
I live in the west midlands, about... 50 miles from the welsh border... (did you see or hear recently about that english clinic that was on the border, where 9/10 people where welsh men for this one op for increasing their size?
o_O
strange...
especially when one of the nurses commented on some of them being 'very small'
heh... enough of that...

No, i'm not... i didn't even know that it was going to be one soon... too reclusive i guess...

*goes back to deserately trying to start this poem, in a non depressive, non offensive way*

_xX_Frosty_Xx_
May 16, 2002, 04:43 PM
Man......I made a TIGHT poem......but I left my damn notebook at school. It was called "History of Love". Well, hopefully you can all see it tommarow....



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ABDUR101
May 16, 2002, 09:40 PM
Take your time Sai-Yuk, I know it will be a great poem, just remember to let the emotions do the talking, yeah? http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Frosty, no worries, we'll eagerly await your poem tommorow http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

ABDUR101
May 18, 2002, 01:54 AM
"Slave's Love Un-Equal"

Bowed eternally at your feet,
For you, my soul to keep,
Crying for you as I wake,
Wondering how long this journey will take,
Laying on my side in a disrupted state,
Knowing it takes action to alter fate,
Wishing the world at my finger tips,
Longing to hear those words stream from your lips,
It's all for you, this unequaled devotion,
My heart, circling in this constant motion,
My eyes, heart and soul,
Fixed in a faulterless gaze on you.

I had the first few lines thought up yesterday right before I fell asleep, and I finished it just now. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

gypsy
May 18, 2002, 02:39 AM
I told you before, but I think its a great, well writtne poem that flows very well http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

_xX_Frosty_Xx_
May 18, 2002, 09:38 AM
I got some more inspiration after an event that happened @ my freshmen dance last night.............but on to "History of Love".


History of Love
A crimson rose seasonly grew from concretete
Nourished by all elements
It's stem grew long to a certain extent
The stem was like steel, it would possible never be bent
Even through all disasters, it grew tall
Despite the world being so big, it never seemed small
It needed no thorns, it's being said it all.
The flower seemed to have an endless lifespan
longer than Earth, longer than the history of man
When this flower was discovered, it was then in huge demand
The flower seeds got to countless people, that it did
Everyone revealed the secret hid
The flower slowly deevolved from an adult to a kid.
People has to mess it up, they took it for granted
The steel rose's stem slowly got slanted
As the steel turned copper, it slowly bent
The invincible rose lost the message it sent
It lost all the assistance it lent
It lost it's spring fresh scent.
The rose slowly started to lose power
It slowly became a scarce flower
The emotions inside slowly became sour
It no longer stood tall like a tower
As the flower slowly withered away, it was picked up by a dove
The two slowly flew into the sky above
The lost species of the flower's name was "love".

Just take notice that plenty of people are taking it for granted, and if you don't use it properly, you might lose it.

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gypsy
May 18, 2002, 07:26 PM
God damn Frosty...that was so powerful, I loved it. Its amazing the way you kinda tell stories in your poems....well done ^_^

_xX_Frosty_Xx_
May 19, 2002, 12:38 AM
Double Vision
Optical illusions, what my eyes invision
A double personality, a female with bad intentions
One minute she'd hurt your feelings without mention,
Then the next, a perfect personality from another dimension
comes into play and intervenes.
A question askable, "What more confusion can be seen?"
One minute she's kind, the next she's mean,
Describable as an angel injected with devil gene
Is what I'm seeing a nightmare or a dream?
The unknown is what I deam
this devil floating on a cloud's cream.



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ABDUR101
May 19, 2002, 12:42 AM
Great poems frosty, I'm really enjoying them my friend http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Nice word play, and as Gypsy said, small stories. Very nice.

Speaking of which...I'm hoping Psylocke and Sai-Yuk can get some poems in here, if your reading Sai-Yuk, I hope your poem is going ok http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

No poems from me though, have to wait http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

_xX_Frosty_Xx_
May 19, 2002, 12:45 AM
Hmmm, time to work on a large project............expect it in about three or four days.



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gypsy
May 19, 2002, 12:47 AM
Another classic! ^_^

Noooooooo poems from me either hehe.

Psylocke
May 19, 2002, 03:04 PM
I wrote this a couple months ago about someone very special to me. He knows he is, but he doesn't return my feelings and one night I really got to thinking about that, became unbelievably depressed, and wrote this poem for him (though he's never seen it and it's doubtful he will...then again, I don't know for sure). Enjoy...


Beautiful Heartache

I feel a love I've never known
Whose existence cannot be explained
So many miles separate us
And I know I love in vain.
Is love supposed to hurt like this?
Am I supposed to feel empty in my soul?
I thought that love brought happiness
That it made you feel whole.
Your eyes send arrows to my heart
They make me love you, they make me cry
Because no matter what I dream of
I know it's all a lie.
My heart aches with a beautiful pain
Every time I say your name
You'll never return this love of mine
But emotions are hard to tame.
Do you know I've seen inside you?
To your joys, your sorrows, your fears?
Do you know I feel each one just as deeply?
That I cry the very same tears?
To me, you are a beautiful heartache
A source of love and of despair
An exquisite agony that tears me in two
A haunting angel I carry everywhere.
Though you won't ever embrace me
You will never let me go
For your beauty inside and out
Has forever captured my soul.

gypsy
May 19, 2002, 04:49 PM
Nice poem Psy http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

ABDUR101
May 20, 2002, 02:43 AM
Sorry for not commenting earlier, I thought I already did x_X

Great poem Psylocke, it almost sounds like a song, just how the words play and when you say it. Very nice...

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Psylocke
May 20, 2002, 02:51 AM
Thanks guys.

Abdur, you really think it sounds like a song? That'd be kinda cool...did you comment on my other poem? Bloodlust? I don't remember and I'm too lazy to go check!! =P

ABDUR101
May 20, 2002, 02:57 AM
On 2002-05-20 00:51, Psylocke wrote:
Abdur, you really think it sounds like a song? That'd be kinda cool...did you comment on my other poem? Bloodlust? I don't remember and I'm too lazy to go check!! =P

Yeah, it did sound like a song when I read it. ohh, too lazy eh? Well then...



On 2002-05-12 15:39, Psylocke wrote:
Bloodlust

Pulsing blood
Simmering in my veins
Pulsing beat
Pounding in my brain.
Spinning, spinning
The night is closing in
Falling, falling
The bloodlust now begins.

Glowing eyes
Shining in the dark
Glowing heat
Spreading in my heart
Spinning, spinning
The night is dark with sin
Falling, falling
The bloodlust now begins.

Burning hunger
Filling up my soul
Burning desire
Consuming all control
Spinning, spinning
The night is never done
Falling, falling
The bloodlust has begun.


Thats a pretty interesting poem actually. It kind of reminds me of the earlier ones I wrote. It also reminds me of Dir en Grey haha.

Psylocke
May 20, 2002, 03:05 AM
hehhe...I think it reminds you of Dir en grey because I was thinking about the following songs when I wrote it: Beast of Blood by Malice Mizer, Mizerable by Gackt, and ZAN, Myaku, and Raison D'etre by Dir en grey! hehe


Well, since I be here, here's a small offering...

My Cries

Invisible, silent tears shed inside and out
For no one but myself cares to notice
Not a friend have I to confide in
No welcome shelter to find solace and safety
From the emotional storm raging quietly within.
I hide my pain behind a smile, a harsh word, flirtatious whimsy
Perhaps they will not notice how their apathy crushes me so.
Alone I suffer; alone I cry; alone I wish for release
For a little show of kindness in my bleak world
I long for the one who will hear my cries.

ABDUR101
May 20, 2002, 03:22 AM
Yeah, "BloodLust", Dir en Grey just came to mind when I read that.

The last poem was interesting, gotta like self-descriptive poems hehe.

*waits for other people to comment on poems*

_xX_Frosty_Xx_
May 20, 2002, 06:12 AM
Good poem Psy http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif. Reminds me of a past event in my life.

-BK-
May 20, 2002, 10:43 PM
Wow, looks like I missed a bit again. Well, I'll post another poem when I finish it. It's kinda hard to finish the one I'm writing now, too strong of an emotion tied into it. Well, that and I've been playing too much Jedi Outcast. See ya around, guys.

gypsy
May 20, 2002, 11:58 PM
~looks forward to hagakura's next poem~ http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Psylocke
May 21, 2002, 12:02 AM
Another poem from moi...


Wishful Thinking

Something like a dream
Closer to delusion
Emerging from shadowed recesses
To wreak havoc on my senses.
New and confusing emotional responses
Cry out, demanding attention
I am tempted to withdraw inward
But I cannot ignore what I feel.
Ever present fear compels me to silence my tongue
Hope pushes me onward
Sleepless nights offer no answers
And the courage to voice my emotions eludes me still.

ABDUR101
May 21, 2002, 12:05 AM
: O

And yet another great poem is posted...weeee...

Great work, keep them coming http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Hagakura, take your time man, we'll be here when you're ready http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Psylocke
May 21, 2002, 12:10 AM
hehhe...thanks Abdur...
And yes, we can be patient and wait for great works. *grin*

RuneLateralus
May 21, 2002, 12:39 AM
Everything's all cool
It's all fine
I take shit in stride within time

My anger risin'
I'm slippin away
Things get worse from day to day

And you give me a look of calm
And you just look at me with hate
Well that is just great

The pain is high when the needle is out
And is low when the veins are poisoned out

Reach on out
Take my hand
Don't let go my friend

The worst is yet to come
The best is gone
When you are all alone

Will you bleed for me?
Will hold me in the night?
Or will you kill me in spite?

Bleed for me, as I bleed for you
I will make you see the pain I do


Yeah, I know it is not that good, but it is better for me to just write things like this instead of just thinking about it

ABDUR101
May 21, 2002, 12:46 AM
Now THATS a poem I like : )

Raw emotion, right there...thanks for posting it man http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Psylocke
May 21, 2002, 12:59 AM
I really liked that Rune. Very powerful.

gypsy
May 21, 2002, 01:16 AM
Yep me too, it was a good poem http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Psylocke
May 21, 2002, 01:18 AM
*is thinking that she should maybe post something not so depressing*

hmm...

Psylocke
May 21, 2002, 06:16 PM
Okay...something not so depressing.hehehe


I Found You

Throughout my life I've wandered
Weak and frightened and alone
I had no one to really love me
No place that I could call my home.
Life was dreary and monotonous
Each day I drowned in my tears
No one answered my mournful cries
No one heard my desperate fears.
A new life for me was beginning
I thought I'd be more alone than before
Little did I know that you'd be there
When I stepped through a closing door.
I was so happy to have found you.

I'd never had a friend like you
You opened my eyes to so many things
You helped me when I was my lowest
You encouraged my brightest dreams.
After all the years we've spent together
As sisters in the truest sense
I feel we can never be parted
Though the space between us may grow dense.
Because you believed in me
And showed me a greater love
You helped me believe in myself
And are a part of what I've become.
You made me so happy to have found you.

I am a woman, I am a friend
I am a better person all around
In the short time that I've lived
You are the best thing I have found.


I actually don't remember if I ever posted this before..oh well!

-BK-
May 21, 2002, 07:51 PM
NICE, I really like that poem, Psy. I've made some progress on my poem, but it's still not finished and it's still hard for me to focus on it. The story behind this is interesting so I'll post that for now instead. There is this girl that I love, but I can't persue a relationship with anyone right now. I'm getting ready to spend the summer in New Mexico and after that I don't know WHAT I'll be doing. Also, due to circumstances, I can't exactly tell her how I feel. I'm in agony over the fact that for once I can't just tell the girl how I feel. I don't want to add any strain between me and her, for fear of it pushing us apart. Oh well, maybe a summer in a Christain camp will help me out. If you've read all of this, thanks for listening.

gypsy
May 21, 2002, 10:38 PM
I read it hagakura....sorry to hear about that unfortunate situation there http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_frown.gif

-BK-
May 21, 2002, 11:09 PM
It's cool, Gypsy, in my Christian studies I've learned to live with the bad and the good. Life goes on, just a little more painful than one would prefer. Besides, sometime in the future, maybe things will be different and I will be able to get the girl. Well enough off topic talk here, BRING ON THE POEMS!!!!!!



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gypsy
May 22, 2002, 02:32 AM
On 2002-05-21 21:09, hagakura wrote:
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I hate to break in there and spoil your fun man, but I'm afraid you've broken a few rules.

Here is a copy of the terms and conditions for use of my creativity form:


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Before approaching me, any users of PSO World with the desire to indulge in my creativity form must agree to the following terms:-

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2. I claim ownership of the materials you create via my creativity form and upload to PSO World; or post, upload, input or submit to any other PSO World service or its associated services for review by the general pso playing public, or by the members of any public or private community. However, by posting, uploading, inputting, providing or submitting ("Posting") your individual use of my creativity form you are granting me, (i) permission to use your submission in any way I wish (ii) the license rights to: copy, distribute, transmit, publicly display, publicly perform, reproduce, edit, translate and reformat your Submission; to publish your name in connection with your submission; (iii) and the right to sublicense such rights to any other internet Site/Service.

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hagakura > it is clear that you are violating these rules, and something must be done. I would hope that this matter could be solved quickly and without fuss.

-BK-
May 22, 2002, 09:08 AM
Now we can all add confused to everything else that I'm feeling. What is this about, and please tell me it's a joke.

gypsy
May 22, 2002, 09:27 PM
Its not a joke, I feel everything that is being said here is quite clear.
Thankyou for your co-operation >hagakura

Psylocke
May 23, 2002, 10:57 PM
Okay, so I'm bored outta my mind, so here's another poem. More if I'm as bored as I think I am!

Okay, this is a song...

In Your Eyes

I have seen in your eyes
All the love you have for me
I have felt in your kiss
That it will be there always.

In your eyes
I see your soul
In your arms
I feel complete
At times when my words fail me
My eyes will tell you all you need.

I have felt in your touch
The promise of forever
I have seen in your smile
That we will always be together.

In your eyes
I see your soul
In your arms
I feel complete
At times when my words fail me
My eyes will tell you all you need.


Tell me how I can show you
All the love that you inspire in me?
I tremble when I see your face
And your touch makes me weak.
Show me how I can tell you
Of all the love I feel inside
I somehow have to let you know
I can't let these feelings be denied!

I have seen in your eyes
All the love you have for me
I have felt in your kiss
That it will be there always.

In your eyes
I see your soul
In your arms
I feel complete
At times when my words fail me
My eyes will tell you all you need.
Oh baby!
When my words fail me...
My eyes will tell you all you need.

uh...this is a song, too...I been writing lots of songs lately...these are my only love songs.

Is That Too Much To Ask?

I wake this day and I'm alone
That's nothing new to me
Solitude is all I've known
Shadows are all I've seen.
I can't seem to shake this pattern
That leaves me crying in the night
I can't seem to shake this lonley burden
I can't seem to find the light.

All I want is love
All I want is someone
Does it have to be a dream?
All I want is love
All I want is someone
Someone to hold me
To need me
To never let me go
Is that too much to ask?

Every day I walk alone
And see lovers all around me
I wonder if I'll ever know
The kind of love I've only seen.
Help me paint a brand new picture
Help me banish lonely nights
Help me shake this awful burden
Help me start a brand new life.

All I want is love
All I want is someone
Does it have to be a dream?
All I want is love
All I want is someone
Some to hold me
To need me
To never let me go
Is that too much to ask?

I want to feel the light of love
I want to bask in it's warm glow
I want to find my place
I want to be half of a whole.

All I want is love
All I want is someone
Does it have to be a dream?
All I want is love
All I want is someone
Someone to hold me
To need me
To never let me go

All I want is love
All I want is you
I want you to hold me
To need me
To never let me go
Is that too much to ask?
Hold me...
Need me...
Love me...
It can't be too much to ask...

gypsy
May 23, 2002, 11:52 PM
Lovely songs there Psy http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

RuneLateralus
May 23, 2002, 11:55 PM
Very lovely.

Psylocke
May 23, 2002, 11:59 PM
Thanks guys. I appreciate it...kinda cheered me up.

ABDUR101
May 24, 2002, 12:04 AM
http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_eek.gif
Psylocke's post was 666...

Great job with the songs!

*kicks the post count to 667*

muahahah
*looks at his own post count*
http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_eek.gif

Psylocke
May 24, 2002, 02:21 AM
For some reason I feel like writing songs...*blames Kyo of Dir en grey*

Anyhow, this is one is brand, brand new. I wrote it like 10 minutes ago...


Silver Ash

The sky is breaking
The heavens are crying
Silver ash
Silver ash

Midnight dawns and someone is weeping
The song of suffering and despair
It fills the night
It fills my dreams
It pounds its anguish into my soul
Angels are dying and mortals are laughing
Madness is contagious

The sky is breaking
The heavens are crying
Silver ash
Silver ash
The sky is breaking
The stars are falling
Silver ash
Silver ash

Dawn breaks cold and distant
I hear the weeping still, subtle and raw
It cuts the morning
It cuts my dreams
It carries its hopelessness over into death
Angels are dying and mortals are laughing
Madness is contagious

The sky is breaking
The heavens are crying
Silver ash
Silver ash
The sky is breaking
The stars are falling
Silver ash
Silver ash
The sky is breaking...

Silver ash

ABDUR101
May 24, 2002, 02:25 AM
Thats a nice one! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Interesting lyrics, really nice.

Psylocke
May 24, 2002, 02:32 AM
Arigatou gozaimasu, Abdur-kun

I think that one's my favorite out of the three I just wrote. I'll think about posting the other two. I found this poem just now, too, that I wrote a few weeks ago. And it's an actual poem!! hehe

Trapped

Trapped in a volatile whirlpool
There is seemingly no escape
I want out
Let me out
I can't get out
I'm not free
I'll never be free
I need to be free
But I'm trapped.

Not as good as the song, but oh well....

-BK-
May 24, 2002, 12:30 PM
Today is the last day that I get to post until August, as I'll be working at a camp this summer. (if you really want to talk to me, email) Here is the poem that I've been working on, even though I still consider it incomplete. I'm finding it very hard to figure out exactly how to word my feelings in this one, but here it goes anyways.

Emotion (an incomplete work)

Why can't I say what I want to tell you?
In my heart, there is no doubt it's true.
Why can't I gentely caress your beautiful face?
I'm so intimdated that I can't even stand my place.
Can't you see the love that fills my eyes?
Don't you understand that love never lies?
When you sleep, I want to watch where you lie.
And when you're scared, I'll kiss your fears godd-bye.
I want to hold you, and claim my love,
And explain that you are my angel from Heaven above.
There is nothing more special here in my life.
Nothing worth fighting this much strife.
I see your face every night in my dreams,
And pray that things will be better than seems.


Well there it is, I'll post the finished version in August (hopefully).

*edit* I change the title, as it only expresses ONE emotion *end edit*

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Psylocke
May 24, 2002, 04:11 PM
Very nice so far, Hagakura. And have fun at camp!

_xX_Frosty_Xx_
May 24, 2002, 05:34 PM
...........time to come back.......I've been away too long...........

ABDUR101
May 24, 2002, 05:36 PM
Great poem Hagakura http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif
Take care and have some fun at the camp.

-BK-
May 24, 2002, 06:18 PM
Thanks guys (Frosty was gone??), I'll try my best to have fun, but they usually stop me. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif Kidding, it's a Christian camp, and I'll be doing my best to represent both my church and the gaming community.

gypsy
May 24, 2002, 08:30 PM
Silver Ash, brill song there Psy, and nice poem too http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Hagakura, I enjoyed the poem...even if you feel its incomplete. We shall all miss you here; have a great time, release the joy ^_^
~peace~

Ayame
May 24, 2002, 08:31 PM
Have fun at camp hagakura! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif

<-- (Will start writing some more poems...soon...)

Psylocke
May 24, 2002, 10:02 PM
Well, since gyspy here thought my song was brill (hehe) here's another one that I wrote last night...title unashamedly stolen from the Dir en grey songof the same name! hehehe However, it's nothing like the song (although I do recommend it! *grin*)


Berry

Berry red
The color of blood
Paint me red
Paint my tears
The color of blood
My soul is bleeding

Whatever I did no longer matters
I compare it to what was done to me
Forget that I was blind ad trusting
Now I drown in a blood red sea.
Meaningless words drip from berry lips
A song of empty promises and lies
A song I heard in a dream and believed
But now my naive heart bleeds and dies.

Berry red
The color of blood
Paint me red
Paint my tears
The color of blood
My soul is bleeding

Whatever you did no longer matters
This fire in my blood has gone cool
You don't exist in my world anymore
So why do I still feel like such a fool?
Love is like a berry, sweet and bitter
Forevermore I've had my fill
My heart is shredded and tossed aside
Any belief I had in love has been killed.

Berry red
The color of blood
Paint me red
Paint my tears
The color of blood
My soul is bleeding.

-BK-
May 24, 2002, 11:21 PM
Another great song, Psy, I really enjoyed it. Well, this is my last post till August. I'll miss you guys, and pray for each of you everyday that God's blessings may rain upon you. Peace, love, and may the song of your heart echo through time. ^_^

*subliminal message* don't forget to email me *end subliminal message*

Psylocke
May 24, 2002, 11:31 PM
On 2002-05-24 21:21, hagakura wrote:
Another great song, Psy, I really enjoyed it. Well, this is my last post till August. I'll miss you guys, and pray for each of you everyday that God's blessings may rain upon you. Peace, love, and may the song of your heart echo through time. ^_^

*subliminal message* don't forget to email me *end subliminal message*



Thanks Hagakura. We shall miss you. Have fun at camp doing all those...uh...Christian-y things that you do at Bible camp...*is clueless*
Now, if you'll excuse me, I have the strangest urge t e-mail someone...

ABDUR101
May 25, 2002, 01:26 AM
Thats another great song Psylocke, and its pretty interesting. You just need to get some music and a beat to them http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Hagakura, take care man, we'll see you upon your safe return, I hope http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Psylocke
May 25, 2002, 01:31 AM
On 2002-05-24 23:26, ABDUR101 wrote:
Thats another great song Psylocke, and its pretty interesting. You just need to get some music and a beat to them http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif



well, you know anybody who 1) can translate them into Japanese 2) can compose music for said translated songs and 3) wants to move to Japan and start a Visual Kei band with me?

ABDUR101
May 25, 2002, 01:40 AM
On 2002-05-24 23:31, Psylocke wrote:
well, you know anybody who
1) can translate them into Japanese

..actually yes, I think I do.



2) can compose music for said translated songs

...possibly



and 3) wants to move to Japan and start a Visual Kei band with me?

*bursts out of his fucking seat and jumps up and down*
http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_eek.gif
ME ME ME!
I'll be Kawaii Dick-Gurl! KDG!

Psylocke
May 25, 2002, 02:25 AM
1) Honto?

2) Honto, honto??

3) hehehe Okay, but you have to get hair extentions in a cool color and wear make-up and crazy costumes (designed by moi! *grins*) This is Visual Kei I'm talking about! You down with that?
And what would your band name be?

ABDUR101
May 25, 2002, 04:05 AM
On 2002-05-25 00:25, Psylocke wrote:
1) Honto?

...eh?



2) Honto, honto??

EH?!


3) hehehe Okay, but you have to get hair extentions in a cool color and wear make-up and crazy costumes (designed by moi! *grins*) This is Visual Kei I'm talking about! You down with that?
And what would your band name be?

*quickly covers up tangent*
Colored Hair Extensions: OK
Make-up and Costumes: OK
Visual Kei band, am I down with it: SHO!
Band Name: Bishonen Dick-Girl Unity

Muahahah

Psylocke
May 25, 2002, 04:17 AM
On 2002-05-25 02:05, ABDUR101 wrote:

...eh?

Really?

EH?!

Really, really??

*quickly covers up tangent*
Colored Hair Extensions: OK

Kakkoii!

Make-up and Costumes: OK

Kakkoii!!

Visual Kei band, am I down with it: SHO!
Band Name: Bishonen Dick-Girl Unity


Uh...I meant what name would you go by in the band, not name of the band!!! And although that is very amusing, I'm not sure how well that would be received! We'll have to talk about it...

Muahahah

Sai-Yuk
May 25, 2002, 09:25 PM
i'm working on that one finally right now...

it may take a while... i'm on my fith stanza...

ABDUR101
May 25, 2002, 09:53 PM
On 2002-05-25 19:25, Sai-Yuk wrote:
i'm working on that one finally right now...

it may take a while... i'm on my fith stanza...


We're all on the edges of our seats my friend, take your time http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Sai-Yuk
May 25, 2002, 10:01 PM
here it is... it took me some time to get the last stanza's down, because i can't see the screen, i had a BSOD somewhere, multiple instances of people bugging me on messenger... and an urge to get ice cream somewhere in there too...

i just wish i could have done the person its about justice... i'll have to write it down for him and pray its not too late...

---
Grandfather

how can i write from the heart
how can i create a work of art
why can't i write something for you
if only how much i cared you knew

no flights of angels are sworn
no promises of life again born
what does it matter what i say
when that i do is sit and pray

you can't see me shed my tears
you can't hear me voice my fears
you may never know what i regret
of a chance that i may never get

i cry for a man i barely know
how much i care i cannot show
we may never get to sit and share
guiness in the garden without a care

i'll never forget that time we had
playing football, when just a lad
or when i beat you that time at chess
how it happened you couldn't guess

i hope you know how much we care
and loosing you seems so unfair
i wish that your dreams trouble free
you've always been grandfather to me

Psylocke
May 25, 2002, 10:03 PM
Yes, yes, Sai-Yuk....do not rush genius!
*grin*

gypsy
May 25, 2002, 10:10 PM
Indeed; I'm looking forward to it Sai-Yuk http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

ABDUR101
May 25, 2002, 10:35 PM
On 2002-05-25 20:01, Sai-Yuk wrote:
---
Grandfather

how can i write from the heart
how can i create a work of art
why can't i write something for you
if only how much i cared you knew

no flights of angels are sworn
no promises of life again born
what does it matter what i say
when that i do is sit and pray

you can't see me shed my tears
you can't hear me voice my fears
you may never know what i regret
of a chance that i may never get

i cry for a man i barely know
how much i care i cannot show
we may never get to sit and share
guiness in the garden without a care

i'll never forget that time we had
playing football, when just a lad
or when i beat you that time at chess
how it happened you couldn't guess

i hope you know how much we care
and loosing you seems so unfair
i wish that your dreams trouble free
you've always been grandfather to me


Ah, now that is from the heart my friend. Can really feel it http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

I know you put alot into it, and I hope it helps ease you when you read it. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Mystil
May 25, 2002, 10:54 PM
..|Wesley Absolute|..

-Sometimes your greatest friend-
-Is your greatest ally-
-Even when you have nothing-
-Left that can protect-
-You from the greatest harm-

-Just remember, one that cares-
-For you, is your guardian-
-When two best friends meet-
-You never need to worry-
-Even if his life means protecting-
-You-

I love you Melissa

..|Wesley Absolute|..

ABDUR101
May 25, 2002, 10:58 PM
On 2002-05-25 20:54, Silhouette wrote:
..|Wesley Absolute|..

-Sometimes your greatest friend-
-Is your greatest ally-
-Even when you have nothing-
-Left that can protect-
-You from the greatest harm-

-Just remember, one that cares-
-For you, is your guardian-
-When two best friends meet-
-You never need to worry-
-Even if his life means protecting-
-You-

I love you Melissa

..|Wesley Absolute|..

Ah, a new person joining the ranks of poets at PSOW? Nice poem, no doubt to one of your friends, and I'm guessing you look out for each other, yeah?

Feel free to post more http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Mystil
May 25, 2002, 11:11 PM
Thanks =). Melissa liked it too.(It didn't include the last line).

gypsy
May 25, 2002, 11:21 PM
Damn, missed the poem at the bottom of 46 there..

Its a very deep poem Sai-Yuk....I can tell you care for your grandfather very much http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Psylocke
May 26, 2002, 05:53 AM
Eep! I missed it, too! Gomenasai! Very nice, Sai-Yuk. And I liked yours as well, Silhouette. Welcome to our ranks!

Well, here's that last song that I wrote that night that I wrote 3 songs...I can't remember if it was yesterday or the day before 'cause the days all blur together for me! hehehe Enjoy...if you can...BTW, this poem makes mention of adult things; PG-13 rating!

Never Love

There is lust
And there is hate
Animalistic, intense, pure
There is sex
And there is pain
Seething, wild, blind
Never love
Never love

Always searching
Always dreaming
Never finding
Never love

There is attraction
And there is disgust
Instaneous, singular, whole
There is obsession
And there is rape
Consuming, hidden, lost
Never love
Never love

Always wanting
Always wishing
Forever crying
Never love

gypsy
May 27, 2002, 11:17 PM
A song that took me a while to write....not that great but here it is....
_____________________________________________

regret

The love you feel for me will fade
You'll look back at me and wonder
Why you thought I had it made
Depression blinded, pushed me under
Robbed my one chance to surrender
My one regret, with no way back
I felt the same
I wish I could have told you that


It doesn't matter, what they might say
It doesn't matter, 'cos I'm on the brink
So fuck me, can't I stop to think...when

I'm so far on the outside I can't see you
So lost in my world I can't talk
When I hear you say those words
I try to pay attention, I can't


The moment you called my name, I froze
I could see that, I could feel but
I couldn't comprehend, it was me you chose
You had a sea of emotion, I had no luck
It couldn't be real, I was dreaming
How did I end up here?
One day, I hope
I'll return without a fear


It doesn't matter, what they might say
It doesn't matter, 'cos I'm on the brink
So fuck me, can't I stop to think...when

I'm so far on the outside I can't see you
So lost in my world I can't talk
When I hear you say those words
I try to pay attention, I can't

So far away
I lost you

Psylocke
May 27, 2002, 11:30 PM
Wow, gypsy! That is really awesome! I really liked that.

gypsy
May 28, 2002, 12:23 AM
Thanks psy ^_^

ABDUR101
May 28, 2002, 12:32 AM
Great songs, both of you http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Really nice.

Psylocke
May 28, 2002, 04:13 AM
Thanks Abdur. And my pleasure gypsy!

Here is yet another offering for the poetry-crazed. *grin*

Fear of the Silent Voices in Dreams

Must there be secrets?
Must there be shadows?
Must there be voices
That haunt me in my dreams?

Must there be hatred?
Must there be sorrow?
Must there be silence
Louder than the voices?

Must there be nothing?
Must there be darkness
Must there be fear
In this deafening silence?

Must there be hopelessness?
Must there be despair?
Must there be empty dreams
That encourage my fear?

Must there be lonliness?
Must there be misery?
Must there be these voices
Echoing in my dreams?

Must there be lies?
Must there be envy?
Must there be this endless silence
Following me into dreams?


I'm thinking of changing this a bit to make it into a song, but I don't know...

ABDUR101
May 28, 2002, 04:21 AM
On 2002-05-28 02:13, Psylocke wrote:
I'm thinking of changing this a bit to make it into a song, but I don't know...


It's a nice poem never the less. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Psylocke
May 28, 2002, 04:29 AM
Thankies, Abdur....
*shakes her head*
I have this habit of shortening everyone's name and I keep wanting to call you Abby! hehehe *grins*

gypsy
May 28, 2002, 10:59 PM
How YOU doin Abby http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wink.gif *wink wink*



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Psylocke
May 30, 2002, 02:46 AM
Here is yet another new song.


Child of Light and Darkness

Breaking through the darkness
Shining with an inner light
Sinking in the darkness
Burning in the blazing light

You touch my cheek to ease my pain
To brush away my tears
Will I move into your warm embrace
Or run away from here?
My conflicted heart wants to believe
That everything can be all right
But again and again I pull back in retreat
I can't find the will to fight.

Child of light and darkness
Will you never learn?
I am a child of light and darkness
Trapped inside a twisted mind
With a soul that writhes and yearns.
Child of light and darkness
Will you never see?
That the person you seek when you look at me
Is a person that I'll never be.

You think your presence beside me now
Will help me find my way
It only makes me wonder more
Why you even bother to stay
Just when I think I've found the light
It all starts falling apart
I can't help but succumb once more
To the darkness in my heart.

No one can help me now
No one can stop the pain
No one can save me now
No one can stop the rain.

*Child of light and darkness
Will you never learn?
I am a chld of light and darkness
Trapped inside a twisted mind
With a soul that writhes and yearns.
Child of light and darkness
Will you never see?
That the person you seek when you look at me
Is a person that I'll never be.

Child of light and darkness
Will you never learn?
I am a child of light and darkness
Trapped inside a twisted mind
With a soul that writhes and yearns.
Child of light and darkness
Will I never see?
That the person I seek when I retreat into dreams
Is a person that I'll never be.

*REPEAT

ABDUR101
May 30, 2002, 03:09 AM
Well, thats a great song, expecially when to the beat of Tool, "Lateralis". http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

gypsy
May 30, 2002, 03:15 AM
Another nice one Psy http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif Very nice

Psylocke
May 30, 2002, 03:15 AM
Thank you, but I do not know that song...I kind of have a semi-tune for the chorus part in my head.

Psylocke
Jun 1, 2002, 06:51 PM
Thought I'd save this thread before it slipped onto the next page. Here's another song (one of these days I'll write an actual poem again!)


Orpheus

Descending down a dark tunnel
To find the one I love
I can't look back
I must go on
To reach the light above.

We were not two
Separate
Alone
We were ever one
I felt joy and love
Peace
Bliss
It was all undone.
Wedding bells rang
We laughed
We danced
We ran in golden meadows
Then came a serpent
Quietly
Deadly
And left a broken halo.

Descending down a dark tunnel
To find the one I love
I can't look back
I must go on
To reach the light above.

My life was lost
Broken
Shattered
I was incomplete
My song turned sorrowful
Bitter
Raw
When once it was so sweet.
I sought the gates of Hell
For compassion
For sympathy
To right this awful wrong
My music entranced the Queen
Enchanting
Sweet
I'd have my love before long.

Descending down a dark tunnel
To find the one I love
I can't look back
I must go on
To reach the light above.

No longer could I bear
The agonizing wait
I had to turn to once more gaze
Upon my beloved's face
It sealed my doom
And broke the spell
My foolishness betrayed my love
And sent her back to Hell.

Descending down a dark tunnel
I lost the one I love
I should not have looked
I return alone
To the light above.


It's not my best, but I love the story of Orpheus and Eurydice and thought it would make a sweet, sad song.

ABDUR101
Jun 2, 2002, 04:35 AM
Great song psylocke http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

I've had a poem on my mind the past few days...just need to harness the emotions and use them.

Psylocke
Jun 2, 2002, 03:16 PM
On 2002-06-02 02:35, ABDUR101 wrote:
Great song psylocke http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

I've had a poem on my mind the past few days...just need to harness the emotions and use them.



You'll get it down one of these days. Don't push it, hon.

And thanks.

_xX_Frosty_Xx_
Jun 2, 2002, 08:54 PM
......well, since I noticed a huge drought of poetry from everyone, I thought it'd be nice to right one. I understand if it isn't up to par, as is took me 4 minutes to write it.


Ex
Down my throat the pill goes
Infiltrating quietly like S.W.A.T. pros
Attacking the germs like po pos
"Maybe this will cure me..." I ponder while the pill sinks
But in my mind I smell something...it stinks
Instead of feelings of reliefe
My throat gets dry and stiff
The only emotion I harness is greif
You know when a tree branch loses a leaf?
I'm the leaf and my family the tree
Where will my grave be.....?
"Mommy, I'm not feeling to good..."
Crimson red blood is all I see
In a minute I'll be D-E-A-D

I'm five years of age and already
I'm an actor and my life's on stage
I'm the angry stereotypical character
All I talk is sorrow and rage
This is all in the same book, just on a different page

I snap back to reality
The devil's standing there, smiling at me, constantly saying
"Use more....death is the key..."
But then, I look at him and yell angrily
"Why the fuck are you bothering me and
why did you temp me to use extacy?"
Yet again, I "wake up"
Out of my floor I errupt....
Floor? "Medicine, I need more!"
I can't move my arms.....
My head hurts....
I roll around on my ground with glee
and laugh at how long drugs got me in this psychotic facility.



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ABDUR101
Jun 2, 2002, 09:30 PM
Thats an...interesting poem. Nice, but very interesting.

...something that happened in your life? o_O

_xX_Frosty_Xx_
Jun 2, 2002, 11:03 PM
.........no.............

Psylocke
Jun 3, 2002, 12:31 AM
On 2002-06-02 21:03, _xX_Frosty_Xx_ wrote:
.........no.............



riiiighht...we believe you....*wink, nudge, wink*

No, seriously, it was very interesting.

_xX_Frosty_Xx_
Jun 3, 2002, 12:29 PM
Thanks http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif

Alielle
Jun 4, 2002, 12:27 PM
I found this in an old notebook the other day.

i stood by you
as the grass sang softly
to the branches skyward
dancing to their rolling melody
swaying leaves
melancholy
i was the tree

(c)1997

Psylocke
Jun 5, 2002, 03:04 AM
On 2002-06-04 10:27, Alielle wrote:
I found this in an old notebook the other day.

i stood by you
as the grass sang softly
to the branches skyward
dancing to their rolling melody
swaying leaves
melancholy
i was the tree

(c)1997



That's really very nice. I like it.

I'm thinking of taking a break from posting stuff here. Nobody else hardly ever posts anything and I feel a bit odd...plus, I mean, I like hearing how my poetry makes people feel, what it means to them. It makes me feel like I have a real purpose in writing, you know? I dunno...I take it very seriously, I suppose, which is good since it's part of what I want to do with my life.

I'm rambling...I'll stop...

WourmGirl
Jun 6, 2002, 06:13 PM
um.. well.. i have lots of poems... but um.. I guess I'll just post the latest one on my site... i'm sure I have others floating aboot though... ok.. here goes...

You
I was nearly numb when I found you,
My fingers were icy red.
I could no more feel your pulse
than close the veins which had been bled.
My eyes grew wide and frantic
My blood turned icy with my fear.
So close you were to making
your life last one more year.
So many thoughts in my mind,
like crashing waves of you...
Was there anything I could have said?
Was there anything I was supposed to do?
Now that you are dead and gone,
what should I do now?
There is nothing left to say,
I feel I've failed you somehow.
Should I be ecstatic that you've finally left this place?
Should I jump for joy that you've seemingly got your wish?
Yet how can I feel anything,
when my world is empty without you?
Just a quick and lonely walk,
I find me at your grave,
I gaze upon the inscribed granite,
My eyes ablaze with pain
I drop a single white rose
and say a prayer all in vain
Pleaase forgive me,
But without you,
Life will never be the same.

yes.. i know it prolly seems kinda cheesey.. but well... it was written for one of my friends.. who.. well.. he like the idea of death a bit more than he should... *twitches nervously* um.. yeah.. thats all i have to say...

Psylocke
Jun 7, 2002, 12:56 AM
I never read that one before, Wourmy. Is it new?

WourmGirl
Jun 7, 2002, 01:07 AM
This one was written/dedicated to my mother's "oh so wonderful" boyfriend. I don't think its very good, but hopefully you won't agree with me... enjoy
My Viper

No matter what I do,
It will never be enough,
No matter what I say,
It will never matter,
To try to understand is futile,
To try to be heard, obscene.
So cruel you are,
Your venomous lashings,
Breaking me inside.

What can I possibly do,
To please and pacify you?
Should I just become your slave?
Would that make you smile?
How good does it feel,
to make my fury grow wild?
How cruel you are,
Your tauntings and your teases,
I should have know you'd end up being,
One of life's human diseases.

Such a pity that I can not leave you,
Push you from my life,
But I can not sever the tie that binds us,
and walk away with guiltless strides.
How sad she is to be drawn to you
My pity will forever be hers,
My fury will be reserved for you,
until you depart this land.

How could you do this to her?
How coudl you treat her so wong?
Such a lecherous beast you are
Such a venomous viper you seem to be.
To think you could separate a mother,
From the daughter who is me.

I can not help but hate you,
Your worse than the thorns in my side,
Your worse than the remembered agony,
My mind will forever hide.
I'm sorry to say this to you,
But I hope your eaten and you rot
If I had half the courage,
I'd butcher you on the spot.
Too bad, you I will never be,
A viper such as you I am not...

If you want more poems by me click here:
Land of Squee (http://www.angelfire.com/weird/landofsquee/)

ABDUR101
Jun 7, 2002, 07:07 AM
Alliele, nice http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Wourmgirl, nice as well. Both of you, feel free to keep posting here.

You too Psylocke. The only reason I've stopped is because I haven't had any inspiration. Without inspiration, my words are lost, and I'm not going to let my words flow if they have nothing to flow for.

Trust me, me not writing a poem is good, it means I'm at peace with the beast within.

My poems usually come out of frustration, because writing a poem is much better than some other things I could do. Plus, I like turning the reasons of my frustration into small poetic stories, I like to read over them every so often just to get a mental image.

Feel free to post older poems, although I like to see your current work, afew old ones won't hurt http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Psylocke
Jun 7, 2002, 06:03 PM
Kathy...Eep! I mean Wourmy! (it's sooo hard to remember to call you that! hehehe) I liked that, but I think you could have done without the last verse. It was kind of unneccessary. Not bad, don't get me wrong, hon! I really liked it. You say you want construcive criticism, for someone to be honest about your work, and I always tell you that I will be, so here it is.
*hugs*

In answer to you, Abdur my sweet (*grin*), mayhap I shall post another poem later tonight.

WourmGirl
Jun 9, 2002, 01:05 AM
Well, like i said.. even i thought it was kinda sucky... forget you not Nuku-love... most of my poems are just me rambling my feelings and they end up what they are... But thank you anyway for being honest... Btw.. i have no idea why i called you nuku-love... nuku-chan? I can't remember the semantics behind the chan and whatnot.. *doh*
and as far as i know.. i haven't writen anything newer than that.. i'd hafta check... i've been working on a sci-fi story that isn't "The Normal"

Sai-Yuk
Jun 9, 2002, 07:56 AM
Last night i started five poems... three where scrapped and the other two, i'm afraid i can't show...

-_-

I'm inspirationally dead right now for some reason... to the point where its not funny...

I need a new muse... my current ones defective.

Psylocke
Jun 9, 2002, 07:20 PM
On 2002-06-08 23:05, WourmGirl wrote:
Btw.. i have no idea why i called you nuku-love... nuku-chan? I can't remember the semantics behind the chan and whatnot.. *doh*


Well, depends on if you are calling me Nuku Nuku or a cat. If you are calling me a cat, it's Neko-chan. *grin*

-BK-
Jun 12, 2002, 12:39 PM
I've pirated a internet connection, and here I am. Please reply through email as I won't be able to pull this off often.

I once was gone, but here I sit
The day begun, the sun is lit
Silence surrounds me, drownds the day
Thought I'd step in, and just say "Hey"

ABDUR101
Jun 12, 2002, 12:55 PM
On 2002-06-12 10:39, hagakura wrote:
I've pirated a internet connection, and here I am. Please reply through email as I won't be able to pull this off often.

I once was gone, but here I sit
The day begun, the sun is lit
Silence surrounds me, drownds the day
Thought I'd step in, and just say "Hey"


..is this a dedicated poem, or a plea for someone to email you? o_O

Well guess what, I'm not falling for it!

*goes back to his Halo and forum whoring*

RuneLateralus
Jun 13, 2002, 01:22 AM
No Love Song Here

This night I can't seem to shake the voices in my head.
This night all I can see is the a really dark shade of red.

What's that?
Who's there?

When I shall rise you will flee towards the stone wall
But what you will say will not matter to me at all

Why's that?
Who's there?

Hey pretty lady, how are doing!
Today maybe, where you be going!
Can I come with ya, can I be in ya!

Let me go with ya! Let me go with ya!

Hey now! Hey now! I said hey now!
From a grave I'll, from a grave I'll cry!
Hey now! Hey now! I said hey now!
From a grave I'll. form a grave I'll lie!
Hey now! Hey now! I said hey now!
From a grave I'll, from a grave I'll cry!
Hey now! Hey now! I said hey now!
From a grave I'll. form a grave I'll lie!

Thats it now, I am going.
The sound of, the thunder.
The kiss of, a viper.
The dream of, the vision.
The thrusting, and screaming.
The sweating, the bleeding.
The love, the sex. The love of, a climax.

Am I forsaken? Am I forsaken?





Edit: Dammit, I forgot two lines...

<font size=-1>[ This Message was edited by: RuneLateralus on 2002-06-12 23:47 ]</font>

_xX_Frosty_Xx_
Jun 13, 2002, 01:29 AM
Sai, I know exactly what you mean, so I'm going to do something I don't do very often....post an old poem. I think Abdur may remember this one. I don't write poems very often, and this is one that has a lot of meaning to me.


"What is love?"
A girl on a park bench I spy with my brown eyes
I travel over to deploy my greetings
The girl was crying like she'd just recieved multiple beatings
As I offer myself a seat as I send out a quiry
"What's wrong?"
Like something you'd hear in a love song
She recited a past love did her wrong
Relations with her best friend made her feel as if
She'd reached her life's end.
"It's ok, maybe he wasn't right for you. Trust me,
I've seen falsified love too."
Then predictably she replied,
"But I loved him."
Then I asked a question that threw her off guard
"What is love?"

After a while the girl and I became friends
It seemed like I'd finally myself found a relationship
That wouldn't end.
After a while I asked
"Have you found the answer to the question I asked back then?"
I believed I had
If the same occured with her I'd be so glad.
"I'm still not sure."

Soon after the incident
Images that used to seem so bright
Slowly faded away....but not without a fight
Again, I wondered, "Should I ask? I might."
Strangely enough things like this always occur
Faster than a blur, I saw her conversing with another
"Maybe it's just a friend...maybe it's her brother."
Later I found out it was her former partner
I see them in the park on the bench
It's like instead of my nose my ears pick up a stench
"I love you."
Maybe instead of me asking her, I should find the answer myself...
"What is love?"

ABDUR101
Jun 13, 2002, 01:36 AM
Nice Rune, nice http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

And indeed frosty, I remember this poem, a very nice poem http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif Thanks for posting guys.

Sai-Yuk
Jun 16, 2002, 09:44 PM
Thought out and written in the space of twenty seconds...

Though i'm sure that other people have written something identical to this a hundred times before... thats one reason why i call it "familiar" at least...
(if someone has, then good for you, i'm not in the mood to argue right now.)

---

Familiar

For all i can do
is cry inside
and long
for the freedom
i shall never have

ABDUR101
Jun 16, 2002, 10:52 PM
Hey, not bad Rune. You should post more when you can. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

And Sai-yuk, that is a nice poem as well. Even if it was on the spot and done very quickly, you no doubt meant every word in thought of something that is happening there http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

gypsy
Jun 16, 2002, 11:01 PM
He had a bad old man who beat him
put a hammer to his knees just to please him.
Now hes 35 and half alive.
He's an open mouth in a beehive.
He's gonna smile and be happy,
let everyone know that hes happy.
Put his smiling face on a billboard,
kiss from your car, he's happy,
He's not happy.
With his swollen lips round his early teens,
in his dress he can't believe its in his genes.
Some days he's half man and then he's half god,
but on his blue days he wouldn't touch his greens.
He's gonna make you smile and be happy,
make everyone know that hes happy.

Put his smiling face on the TV.
Kiss him from your chair make him happy.
He drowned his stepson in the duck pond,
let the wife-beater out to make a pop song,
put razor blades in the ice-cream,
shot a paedophile in a wet dream.

He's got a young man who feeds him,
whispers sweet nothings just to please him,
he makes him cool for the TV,
makes half the man he is a celebrity.
With his swollen lips around his early teens
in his dress he cant believe its in his genes
He's half a man and half a god,
One half bitch one half dog.

He drowned his stepson in the duck pond,
let the wife-beater out to make a pop song,
put razor blades in the ice-cream,
made nobody famous on the big screen.
Put the whole wide world on remote control,
he put a five times rapist on his tv show,
on every single channel in every single home,
you can even hear his voice on the telephone.

ABDUR101
Jun 16, 2002, 11:12 PM
Wow, did you write that man?? That was damn good! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

gypsy
Jun 16, 2002, 11:18 PM
~not mine~

ABDUR101
Jun 16, 2002, 11:28 PM
On 2002-06-16 21:18, gypsy wrote:
~not mine~


aww, well thanks for posting it man http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Psylocke
Jun 17, 2002, 03:15 AM
I don't remember if I already posted this (yes, it is I Psylocke, back from oblivion these past few days!), but I'm gonna post it anyways.


Fire

For now I mourn you
Even as I rejoice
I feel no good will come of this.
There's nothing more for me to do
I've made all the wrong choices
It's fire that I've played with.
I've felt such lovely heat
I've felt the painful burn
But I still return for more.
Sometimes I win only when I cheat
And now it is my turn
With fire I'd planned to win this war.
But I can't risk the pain
I wouldn't want to bring you harm
I love you far too much.
My soul couldn't carry the stain
The heat of this fire's charm
The only part of me you can't touch.
I want you too badly to have you
In this matter I have no choice
No good will come of this burning desire.
I've done all I can think to do
And still have no reason to rejoice
For no good will survive this fire.

ABDUR101
Jun 19, 2002, 03:38 AM
"Downward Spiral"

Attuning myself to the beat,
Rushing the light as I stomp my feet,
A blaze of air as I go in downward spiral,
Charred by emotion in this painful desire,
Encirculation, aggrevation, rotation
Hit me where it hurts, in this constant motion,
Use your powers and peirce this shell,
Do it quick, we're in a downward spiral to hell,
We're lost in fire shower,
They're dead, all the beautiful flowers,
It's just us, you and me,
Downward spiral to hell, an eternity,
My wings are broken and torn,
Covered in blood, we're spiraling to forelorn,
It may be hell, but it's better than a false heaven without you,
Lamenting as I sit alone in the church pughe,
The downward spiral is coming to an end,
Don't look out of my eyes, I'll always defend,
A bright light, what is this,
This doesn't seem like hell, something is amiss,
We've broken the barrier,
We're no longer inferior,
We've rushed the light,
We won the eternal fight,
Hold me close, hold me dear,
Feel my love as I wash away all the fear,
Everlasting tranquility, a reality.



I was finally able to get one out. While listening to "Information High" from Macross Plus, and thinking about my friends.

gypsy
Jun 22, 2002, 11:06 PM
Fucking hell man....can't believe I missed that, sorry http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_frown.gif I really like that though....you show some real writing talent in there http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Psylocke
Jun 24, 2002, 03:58 AM
Nice one, Abdur.
Well, since I'm insanely depressed at the moment, I'll post a poem that I wrote at another time when I was insanely depressed.


Cold

Cold on the inside
I'm dead on the inside
Cold on the outside
I shiver on the outside.
Cold tears on the inside
I cry on the inside
Cold tears on the outside
Frozen tears on the outside.
Cold on the inside
I feel cold pain on the inside
Cold on the outside
I deny my pain on the outside.
Cold on the inside
I shiver on the inside
Cold on the outside
I'm dead on the outside.
Cold inside out
Frozen fears
Frozen tears
Cold inside out
Chilled my breath
Chilled to death
Cold inside out
Wishing to cry
Wishing to die
I'm cold.

Pollo_loco
Jun 24, 2002, 07:31 PM
I post my stuff at http://misomaniac.deviantart.com

Be a deviant. Join deviantart.com

ABDUR101
Jun 24, 2002, 09:09 PM
On 2002-06-24 17:31, Pollo_loco wrote:
I post my stuff at http://misomaniac.deviantart.com

Be a deviant. Join deviantart.com


Thanks for the link, but I'll just keep posting it here. Someone else will most likely post there though.

Nice poem psylocke, thanks for posting it.

ABDUR101
Jun 25, 2002, 02:01 AM
"1,000 Miles From Nowhere"

We're all so far and wide,
Grasping onto each other as we hide,
Lamenting over all the world's wrongs,
Weaving in and out of life's throngs,
We've all come so far in our own time,
We're 1,000 miles from no where,
Wishing that in the end we could all be together,
Stick together and we'll make it through,
Don't let it get you down that we're so few,
We'll ravage the masses and rave the crowds,
We'll get the message sent,
Go ahead, let it out, vent,
Our voices will not fall to deaf ears,
We're going the distance, together, without our fears,
Throw the light on the world and let it become realised,
We're 1,000 miles from no where,
Wishing that in the end we could all be together,
Take the lead and lay out the truth,
And we'll sit back together and lament as it takes root,

..finally..some release.

gypsy
Jun 25, 2002, 03:10 PM
Love it http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

_xX_Frosty_Xx_
Jun 27, 2002, 03:38 PM
"Anger Management"
Mos definately...............
You've infuriated me
All of this anger you see
Is because of you - the cause of it
Now you regret - your tounge you should've bit
The flame of my anger you mistakingly lit.
I try my best to hold it back
It's just that uncontrollable knack for
Retaliation people make me take
I try my best to be quiet, just for your sake
From me you need to isolate yourself
I put my anger into words, it's best for my health.
You've commited a sin in the bible of my life
I hope these words cut you sharper than the blade on my knife
How can I come at you with such trife?
How can YOU come at me for something I didn't do
Don't look the other way - look into the eyes of the person that's talking to you.
Instead of being blue, the non touched by oxygen blood is boiling red
Because of those retarded itiotic statements you said
Those words form a raging typhoon in my head
Out of my mouth these flaming hot words bled
Part of me wishes you were dead
The other part doesen't - it wants you to hurt
These words come out intentionally, no I didn't blurt
The out mistakeingly like you did
The spot where the eternal words of my mind hid
Is vacant..........
I attempt to make this blatent
Our friendship was on life support - now it's dead
It was a malpractice intentionally
On who's fault it was unknown
Don't bother wasting minutes on my phone
I don't want to hear anyone's damn voice, not even my own.

LostHero
Jun 28, 2002, 04:25 AM
wasted
dilerious
cubord empty
can't trust the chinese takeout in the fridge
the clock is way too fucking loud
eyes bloodshot
you eat a bowl of raisen bran
the house echos with the sound of an urine fountain
you passout on the couch
welcome to my house

a 27 1/2 second compilation piece



<font size=-1>[ This Message was edited by: LostHero on 2002-06-28 02:27 ]</font>

ABDUR101
Jun 28, 2002, 04:06 PM
A nice vent poem frosty. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Losthero...you get a WTF?

I'm glad I don't live with joo, I'd die from food poisoning http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_eek.gif


..or being impaled by man-beef...

ABDUR101
Jul 5, 2002, 11:03 PM
ok, I noticed someone starting another poem thread, so I figured it would be kind of stupid to keep making small poem threads when they could just add it to this one.

Please, feel free to post any poems YOU have written. And if you DO post someone else's work, give them credit. I prefer you only post your work.

I don't have any poems at the moment though, sorry.

DarkMilitia
Jul 6, 2002, 01:30 PM
Brother Mary (7-2-2002)
------------

Do you know the nancy boy?
The one who always clings to hands?
Do you know of whom I speak?
The one who always spoke and ran?

You never understood him,
poor brother Mary.

The poor confused soul,
He never needed any of this,
So why then would he cause this scene?
Is something you and I should know.

Do you know that blackened butch girl?
The one who always pierced her skin?
Do you know of whom I speak?
The one who always took us in?
Like a jagged sharpened pill.
A spikey cold mithril
glove
on her hand adorned.
With which she used to cover sorrow.

I alone could be your friend.
Do you remember?
How we used to exchange glances and clothes.
And then we took swords to those who opposed.
And then at the end of the day,
a revelation over the phone,
you said "we are all alone."
But I was there until the end.

Perhaps if you had been there too,
She would have taken one instead of 42.
So why then would she cause this scene?
Is something you and I should know.
You never understood her,
poor brother Mary.

Sadly, I think.
The boy had never met his other side.
For maybe if they had come to terms,
In whole they could have survived.
So why then, did you not let it happen?
Is something you and I should know.
You never understood them,
poor brother Mary.

ABDUR101
Jul 6, 2002, 03:30 PM
Wow, an unexpected post from Darkmilitia http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Thanks man, it was a great poem. Nice to wake up and read something new.

gypsy
Jul 6, 2002, 07:50 PM
Yeah nice one, I liked that too http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

DarkMilitia
Jul 7, 2002, 12:21 PM
the furry RP forum that i post at is currently being apocalyptic. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif that doesnt mean however, that when it gets back to normal, i will leave forever. i will keep posting and keeping you company so to speak. i was always addicted to this place, and though some of the people i used to talk with are gone, i will still try to keep the legacy http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif.

Sai-Yuk
Jul 8, 2002, 04:09 PM
I still have to type up the much longer 'Nightfall' no questions about why i wrote these, or named them, because i can't answer something i have no clue about

^_^;

---

Sunrise

See the flower, watch it burn
With this hour, it'll be your turn
I hear you cry, my smiles grows wide
When just earlier, your comments where snide

obsessive hate with compulsive failings
i'll push your back, against the railings
with one push, i'll end it all
with one push, you'll finally fall

this apparent angel, with wings clipped
truely a demon, who finally slipped
such an act, with hate resounding
your heart racing, my chest pounding

all life sees an eventual end
to your body, none shall tend
as they clean those bloody smears
do you think they may shed tears?

Sai-Yuk
Jul 8, 2002, 04:28 PM
...and, here it is
^_^

well... i guess you can ask qustions... i can't promise that i'll be able to answer them though

^_^;

---

Nightfall

flesh rends
time mends
bones break
hearts ache

razor blade kisses, short and sweet
to the cold steel, i'm nothing but meat
time is a monster, that damns us all
but even without it, we're detined to fall
my body is fragile, my bones feel weak
but with all this hate, i dare not speak
time is a healer, they say fixes pain
but with my heart broken, your words seem inane

life aborted
death distorted
tears falling
hate calling

life is a disease, suffer it we must
yet after contraction, for it we lust
death is a release, from this life
something granted, by the steel of a knife
my tears are icy, my blood like fire
you will always haunt me, when of the others you tire
hate is my failing, something i wish i could feel
something that would justify, this pain so real

flesh betrayer
time slayer
bones aligned
heart confined

yet the blade is taken, denying release pure
you did it out of hate, and left me insecure
times harsh raveges, are mild compared to yours
then you have the nerve, to compare me to those boars
yet you have the want, to structure this path
and likely break my arms, when i suffer your wrath
my heart is so fragile, it has no room for you
yet you would force your way, if only you knew

life pure
death cure
tears within
hateful sin

yet i still live, yet i show such valour
i still want release, from this deathly palour
but if i had release, from the pain of life
you would never follow, with the promised knife
every tear fallen, says you won this war
yet it isn't enough, you'll always seek more
though the wordless contract, was not without clause
because of your actions, i shall never be yours

ABDUR101
Jul 8, 2002, 05:05 PM
Wow...I think everyone got bitch slapped out of no where by that last post by Sai-yuk hehe. Thanks for posting man, and great work! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

OMAR
Jul 8, 2002, 05:18 PM
Roses are red
LOL
Omar is blue
the pain that i feel is nothing compared to you..
but yet i still see the need to write this..
to give me some type of bliss..
though not like a soft tender kiss..from abdurs sis..
though i have no idea why im writing this...
i guess because this is still the closest thing to extreme stupidity
and i laugh at all of you for eternity!


.....LOL thank you thank you...more to come later:p

ABDUR101
Jul 8, 2002, 05:23 PM
On 2002-07-08 15:18, OMAR wrote:
Roses are red
LOL
Omar is blue
the pain that i feel is nothing compared to you..
but yet i still see the need to write this..
to give me some type of bliss..
though not like a soft tender kiss..from abdurs sis..
though i have no idea why im writing this...
i guess because this is still the closest thing to extreme stupidity
and i laugh at all of you for eternity!

heheh, ok..interesting. DIE!!

Feel free to post more ^_^


..wow..I learned something new, how to be sickeningly cute and an asshole at the same time.

OK, to be serious, thanks for posting your interesting albiet tasteless poem Omar, now, please go directly to hell =)

..or post a deep poem and be redeemed!

OMAR
Jul 8, 2002, 05:37 PM
ok this one is called
YOU GO TO HELL
Hell..the very world we live in.
nothing is sacred or clean anymore..
not with people like Bin Lauden...
Just to get up from bed everyday is a chore..
sometimes i feel like theres nothing to live for..
when i feel like the devil is getting near
i walk in the world full of fear..
i can see him coming from the rear..
trying to take everything i worked so hard for...
but now im cured and fear him no more...
the evil is stil out there full of anger ...
and his name is ABDUR!!!!!
and he can go to hell:)

better? lol hope you like it:p

gypsy
Jul 27, 2002, 07:50 PM
I see you there, living in your corner
With nothing to show for your days
Can you not stop, to think and wonder
what life could be without your ways?

I see you watching your time fly by
As if nothing more than a blurry haze
Grasp hold of reality, don't ask why
Life is out there, just quit your craze

I see you yet still, again in your chair
Can you not see, there's a way to cope
Give it a go, without pulling your hair
Get out of the circle, go find that hope

You take blow after blow, you see no light
Use the same ideals, after years, without a fight
Your corner may be fine, so wake up for sure
It's you're giving up that will work no more

ABDUR101
Jul 27, 2002, 08:16 PM
Wow, I kind of feel like that one was pointed at me :O

Thanks for posting another poem gypsy =)

LostHero
Jul 27, 2002, 08:29 PM
"Domo arigato mista roboto"... beautiful... beautiful words to live by!

gypsy
Jul 27, 2002, 09:25 PM
Abdur - It wasn't meant to be pointed at you...more at me....I guess more proof that we're so alike...thanks : )

Losty - cheers http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

_xX_Frosty_Xx_
Jul 28, 2002, 12:05 AM
Sweet Dreams II

Most defenitly.......
I need a woman to stand beside me
When I make a mistake she won't ride me
When I'm feeling bad, she makes it better
When I'm dry as an oasis, she makes it wetter
When I wake up in the morning, I'm as happy as the day I met her
When I'm losing my vision, she corrects the blur
If we ever break up, I'll never regret that I kept her
It bein my first time, I'll never regreat that I slept her
Constently happy as the day I met her
Instead of clubbin, she wants to come chill alone @ my crib
If she wants the last peice of food, she got dibs
She's like fam to me, closer than my sibs
If she mess up she wouldn't lie
Never let an opportunity for the perfect moment to ride by
When she get mad, we talk, no aftermath like a drive by
I'll smile when I look in your eyes and realize you're mine
When I search those eyes I read all the thoughts I find
She's my rare treasure, one of a kind
When I'm with her, she gives me peace of mind
She can be short with long flowing hair
It's just the chemistry between us, I know when she's there
She'd have all my interests, we'd make the perfect pair
We could do anything we want without a care
Right now it's not how I envision it in my thoughts
I'm feeling your aura, whereever you may be
It may be you I'm not able to see
Not for long, just momentarily
I try not to forget about even though I may walk wearily
I don't see you, but in reality you're right beside me
Summirazation of this can read as sayin
I know you're out there, the perfect woman for me, my maiden
If you a soulful girl it'll be my hair you're braiden
If you've already passed by, I won't play those games I did then.
If I haven't met you, and you fit this description,
Let me be your matinence man and handle the incryption
She gotta be sweeter than clouds cream
She has to be the girl in my sweet dreams.....



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gypsy
Jul 28, 2002, 12:53 AM
That was an excellent poem by the way Last_Saiyan, and you too Frosty http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Korin_Vayatr
Jul 29, 2002, 01:22 AM
"Angel's Sorrow"

Of those that should fall
I will help them rise
Of those that should cry
I will dry their tears

Those who fall may fall again
but I will always come to them
In life or death I shall be their hope
Helping them rest, helping them cope

Of those that should fall
I will help them rise
Of those that should cry
I will dry their tears

Those with tears that must be shed
Of their pain, their sorrow, they dread
Like miracles on wings I shall arrive
With my words they shall thrive

Of those that should fall
I will help them rise
Of those that should cry
I will dry their tears

But who would help me, should I fall
Shall I be the one who must crawl?
And the tears that my eyes release
WIll my pain, my suffering ever cease?

I am also the one who falls
But I am one who cannot rise
I am also the one who cries
But I am one whose tears do not dry

ABDUR101
Jul 29, 2002, 01:32 AM
Great contributions Korin and Frosty =)

I haven't written a poem in a while, maybe I'll get to do that soon.

Korin, feel free to post as much as you like, I hope you keep sharing.

gunome
Jul 30, 2002, 11:43 AM
dream unyoked,
dares melt memories
where flecks carved of
fondest embracing,
rose-purple weeps
must rummage,
quivering where reality crumbled.

Korin_Vayatr
Jul 31, 2002, 08:42 PM
"Fantasy"

There she was standing still
Amidst the fog and evening chill
And love I did see in her eyes
As she smiled at me, timid and shy
Could this be an illusion?
My heart's lonely intrusion?
But I knew this not to be true
As I could tell from the kiss that ensued
And how gently did the moonlight bend
As we lay side by side knowing this would end
But end did it not, for you see
This love we felt was no fantasy



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ABDUR101
Aug 10, 2002, 06:20 AM
"A Soul's Tireless Walk"
All this stress is blinding,
It feels strong enough to be soul binding,
Close my eyes for a million years,
Walk through the darkness in a sea of blood filled tears,
Shed the burden and slip away,
Hold on tight and wait for the new day,
Run rampant in my late night dreaming,
Jerk awake as I remember and start screaming,
Crawl through the day and do it all over again,
Just when I thought it was the end, it just began,
Walking the fire hoping to step on some ice,
keeping my head up and not thinking twice,
If I stop walking I'll never get there,
Sit and rest but I can't stay down, it's not that much further,
Even desert storms end in time,
It's right there, if I make it I'll be fine,
It was such a long walk, but long walks have the best lessons,
All that's happened, it leaves an everlasting impression.

I wrote that a week ago, but never posted it. It felt really good to get that out of my system =)

gypsy
Aug 10, 2002, 10:53 AM
I'm glad you posted it man - its a nice one http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

gypsy
Aug 13, 2002, 03:07 PM
aval//lanche

the scene repeats
the song won't stop
why do you feel no love
I see through your eyes
theres nothing to feel
I blind myself, I play your game
I give my love, I watch you leave
theres nothing in return
The corner calls, home
the song won't stop
the scene repeats
can't you see? You're my life;
you're me
All I want, but that ain't free
the scene repeats
I reach out for weakness, again
No one knows
The cuts, deep, bruises,
And yet again its all me; in vain
Because in the future, I see de ja vu
It was all for you
You'll never know I loved you
I was all for you

ABDUR101
Aug 13, 2002, 08:33 PM
=O Nice poem gypsy =D

*wonders where all the other poets have gone*
o_O

Shadow_Blade
Aug 13, 2002, 08:47 PM
I will conjure up a poem one of these days, when i got nothing else ta do...http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime2.gif...sorta like noooww...althooough... now's not a good time...cauuuseee....imbusysobye!

-BK-
Aug 13, 2002, 09:05 PM
Nice poems peeps, and yes i'm back and will be posting again soon.

-BK-
Aug 17, 2002, 09:44 AM
This poem is a rewrite of the previous poem that I posted here.

I once was gone, but here I sit.
The day is new, the sun is lit.
Silence surrounds me, drownds the day.
Dreams push me, begs to enter the fray.
The windows glow, my fears burn.
My mind wanders to my souls yearn.
Will I ever be the man that I should?
Will I ever do what Jesus would?

ABDUR101
Aug 17, 2002, 10:15 AM
Good to see you back, and a nice poem =)

Thanks for sharing.

Ayame
Aug 19, 2002, 08:07 PM
Lovely Eyes

A Sparkle That I See,
It Glares In Your Eyes.
It Lights Up The Heavens
Above In The Skies.

Your Love Is Like A Magic,
Suprising And New.
The Everlasting Cards,
My Love Is For You.

Our Love Is So Strong,
Tied In A Knot.
I Can Tell In Your Eyes
That You Love Me Alot.

My Love Is So True,
Our Love Is So Strong.
When I'm With You,
Our Love Lasts So Long.

This was written for that special someone. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif

Rylios
Aug 19, 2002, 09:13 PM
On 2002-03-31 00:29, Ghaleon wrote:
This is just what i came up in like 5 minutes its a lyrical rhyme

I'm out to kill falz, My skills hit'em hard
Gallions the humar the one with the scar
I killed the dragon - defeated de rol le
went to vol opt ha he couldn't hold me
i use techs and sabers
blaes and daggers
demonic creatures u shatter
wHEN i'm crazed i use my lavis blades - through the ruins in the shortest pace
Falz is one but i'm the ace now say your grace cause u bout to go to the holy place

I'll try to write more and better but this is just a crappy rhyme http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif




What the hell was I thinking... Someone Tell me whats wrong with this
BTW nice poem
Ayame and Abdur


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BlackRose
Aug 26, 2002, 10:47 PM
Thanks Abdur for telling me where to dig up this thing. Methinks we need more poets here.

*shrugs* Enjoy.

------------------------
I ask, then I scream, Oh please, not again
But I think it may be, that this might be when
I will feel no more pain, no more tears will be shed
No more nights awake, simply laying in bed

I am far too fragile, to live like the rest
I break far too easy, when put to the test
I think far too slow, I wear myself rough
I try to go faster but it's never enough

I can only conclude, that if I stop trying
Those small parts of me, they might just stop dying
The hand I reach out, it hurts when I ponder
And so it will simply be put forth no longer.
----------------------

gypsy
Aug 28, 2002, 10:37 PM
That was nice BlackRose ^_^

Spy
Sep 18, 2002, 01:20 AM
Into your blue eyes I gaze
Their cold stare turns my heart to ashes
I look upon your perfectness
That makes me look putrid and stained

I strive to be heard by you
My words crushed upon their own echoes
To listen to you sing
My language is dysfunctional

With your fair white skin I yearn to contact
My most delicate touch shatters
As you walk by
I implode under my structural defect

Your presence is my favorite scent
While up my nose turns to my imperfections
To smell even a sigh of your discontent
Pleased am I that you noticed

I want to drink from your soul
Tired of the shattered glass I am
If you were the most potent of poisons
Consuming you would be all I need

All my senses say you are the one
I am not worthy enough to know
When wishing that you felt the same
The faceless you frighten into silence
----------------------

The Spy is in lub :8_+;



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BlackRose
Sep 18, 2002, 08:37 AM
Very nice poem, spy.

-------------
I like chicken
I like rice
I even like
those deepfried mice!

(poem contrived the last time I ate McDonalds)

ABDUR101
Sep 19, 2002, 03:36 AM
"Deep Space Out"

If it looks like I'm spacing out, I'm not
Here I sit, just in deep thought,
Thinking over all the things I've done,
Trying to remember all the fun,
And everything that I've wrought,
All the trials that I've fought,
In my chair under the setting sun,
Looking ahead to when the new day will have begun,
Trials and Tribulations,
Denials and Assimilations,
Spacing out I'm not,
It's all just deep thought



...bad poetry when you're sick and tired, whooo.

Spy
Sep 19, 2002, 10:51 AM
On 2002-09-19 01:36, ABDUR101 wrote:

...bad poetry when you're sick and tired, whooo.



Nice poem. The worst poetry is love poety(like what I write).

:8_+;

_xX_Frosty_Xx_
Sep 19, 2002, 10:39 PM
Destiny?
I just got back from enjoying a restless night
With a female that made my emotions take flight
A fight took place between my mind and my heart
About wheather or not my next move would be smart
Instead of debating I chose to follow the part
That told me to show how I was feeling
The "what if's" in my mind kept drilling
I was calm and nervious simotaniously; my heart hit the ceiling
I sent out my unsure quirey
I said it loud enough so I know she hears me
"May I have a goodnight kiss?"
This was a moment I didn't wish to miss
I yearned to feel complete security and bliss
I feel in my heart this was meant to occur
This special moment shared by me and her
I feel the chemistry between us as we get closer
Then finally our lips meet
My tounge tastes something sweet
As mine and her's make a rendevious to meet
My mind stores these memories it'll never delete
About how we embraced
As my lips touched her face
My mind sends my body to a place that resembles paradice
The worries in me froze as cool as ice
It was so refreshing I began speaking in slurs
Sadly it ended as I released my lips from hers
I was wishing that moment could've been extended
The tears in her eyes couldn't be mended
With sadness in my heart I spoke some words
I could tell by the look in her eyes that they were heard
"Before I go, I want to let you know I love you,
I don't wish to leave your loving arms but I have to,
My feelings for you will eternally remain true
A thought never crossed my mind that this would occur, but it's my heart you subdue."

I missed this thread ^_^

Spy
Oct 1, 2002, 01:11 AM
Lunch Break

Foliage rustled by the unseen wind
Each breath relieves grief and pain
Starring idly at the innocence of nature
Loneliness crushes the empty lungs

Stones litter the ground unspoiled
Ash is a part of the soul released
Mud treaded through leaves comforting foot prints
Smoke is a welcome supplement to air

White fence wall so empty and barren
Overcast sky holding back the drenching rain
Rubbish and refuse are the only escape
Imprisoning is the chair in which to sit

Poisons so readily accepted eat away
Time wastes by at it’s own pace
Corrupting is the boredom which engulfs
Run down are those who watch the clock

Sunlight retreats to the distant horizon
People bustle by apathetic or unaware
Dim inner-light affects personal ghosts in the least
In all the excitement I forgot to eat

Pso_Juggalo
Oct 2, 2002, 07:50 AM
heres a short one
a butterfly came floating by
landed on my cheek just a smigged from my eye
i said to my little friend
get the fuck off me bug

ABDUR101
Oct 2, 2002, 03:37 PM
Serious poems or I'm going to bitch slap you. This thread has come a long way and the majority of people have kept it as a serious poem thread.

Thats a nice poem spy. Feel free to post others if you wish, and that goes for anyone who has a serious poem and not some half-assed one.

I need some quiet time to write a poem =

ABDUR101
Oct 6, 2002, 06:46 PM
"False Reality"

I close my eyes and breathe,
Close my eyes and dream of a false reality,
Sit and tremble in my own tranquility,
Take it in and feel at ease,
Feel the emotion wash over me,
Thinking of how hard it is to just be,
Walk through the shadowed door of unconciousness and feel at home,
Thinking it all through and I'm still alone,
Push away the reality,
Wash it away in slumber,
False places where I want to be,
Everything is silent, only me.

..there..finally got that out. =

_xX_Frosty_Xx_
Oct 6, 2002, 06:52 PM
I'd post another one but no ones commented on the last one I put up a few days ago...... :sad

ABDUR101
Oct 6, 2002, 07:04 PM
On 2002-10-06 16:52, _xX_Frosty_Xx_ wrote:
I'd post another one but no ones commented on the last one I put up a few days ago...... :sad


It's dated "Posted: 2002-09-19 20:39"

..thats last month =o

*reads again to refresh memory*

You always write about that special someone eh? =)

*EDIT*
..I'm going to mutilate the typos

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_xX_Frosty_Xx_
Oct 6, 2002, 07:09 PM
Leave me alone lol......you know what I meant.

BlackRose
Oct 8, 2002, 12:27 PM
Frosty, that was a very nice poem, but I didn't dig it as much as I probably would if I had a 'special someone'. =/

Abdur, that one struck a nerve somewhere in me. Thanks.

-------
The sadness behind, I float down the hall
I see there a light, the holy gryphons
Golden they shine, brighter than all
Seven rising, burning in my heart

Their wings of fire warm my cold soul
Their eyes pierce my mind
They help me forget the sadness' toll
Lift me into their heavens

This new world is all aflame
The flames caress my skin
Bringing pleasure, not pain
The thrones of the Seven lie before

The kings beat their wings of light
I am awash in brialliant flame
It clears and I am now a knight
I have passed the test

The AEmeth emblazoned upon my chest
Upon the world I bequeath
An overwhelming justice, like a giant wave crest
Nothing remains behind.

All that continues is the good of the earth
In the kingdom of the Seven
Ruled over by the Gryphon Lords
And guarded by me, their knight.

ABDUR101
Oct 8, 2002, 01:48 PM
I hope my poem did strike a nerve in someone, and your poem was really nice too, I had a great mental image with that. =)

LieutenantDwAnGStick
Oct 8, 2002, 09:47 PM
There once was a man from Madrass,
who had Balls made out of fine brass...
Yet in stormy weather,
they both clang together,
and sparks flew out of his ass.

that might sound familiar to a few

BlackRose
Oct 8, 2002, 10:03 PM
"There once was a man from Sparta
Who was a really good farter.
He'd boom from his ass
Bach's B Minor Mass
And in counterpoint, La Triviata."

I'd say something against the profligation of ass-poetry, but then I'd be a hypocrite. XD

ABDUR101
Oct 15, 2002, 03:52 AM
"Homicidal Mercy"

Please, someone end this eternal feeling,
But, I'm not asking for a mercy killing,
If you wish, we'll duel to the death,
Pick and choose the weapon to be dealt,
And I'll offer prayer that you're the one to set me free,
Do it quick, end this timeless aching soul, release me,
I can't just stand and let it happen, I have to put up a fight,
A mock homicide wouldn’t be right, share my delight,
Pull the trigger or slash the sword,
Please, do it quick before I can utter the word,
It may seem like a rue, but I wish you victory,
I'm still alive, a testament to those who offered mockery,
Show your skill and use your savage might,
Don't pull the trigger until I'm in your sight,
End it quickly, this aching life.

There we are..

Sai-Yuk
Oct 15, 2002, 08:11 AM
Woo... I've... been away a long time again, sorry...

I'm in the middle of writing a poem, that i'll post once i'm done... then i'll get my setup sorted... promise

^_^;

Sai-Yuk
Oct 15, 2002, 09:29 AM
Okay... sorry for the delay this took... got stuck around the 17th stanza for a while, and had to run and get food... comfort eating over a poem? ...its... new... heh

I'm not giving background over this, or anything, as its kinda... well... loosely pieced together from memories, twisted and taken out of context, as there is someone that i wouldn't want to assume that i'd written this about... anyway, enjoy, or whatever else... i think i'll just give it a quick name, until someone else suggests (or doesn't) something better for me

---

Foolish Dreamer

Ring-a-Ring o'roses
you take me all around
you spin me round in circles
then push me to the ground

watch me shiver as i cry
watch my tears fall
but when you really need me
don't think i'll heed your call

you whisper how you love me
you tell me that you care
but when i really needed you
where you ever there?

pass me pretty razor blades
pass me steel so clean
you'll beg me not to do it
but i'll wake up from this dream

if you saw me bleeding
you'd simply sit and stare
you'd offer me a smile
then tell me you don't care

did my smiles mean nothing
when i gave them true
or maybe you where looking
for somebody new

you where a mistake
i'll always hate your name
for a lot of my scars
you're the one to blame

then i made the same mistake
of finding love again
each and every time
its ended with tears and pain

i cannot say i love you
for you would say it back
from your lips it is a lie
it shows your heart is black

how many times can i do this?
when i torture myself this way
shivering, sighing, crying
for one who would simply stay

twisted memories haunt me
in a way you never could
but now you're simply nameless
but name you i never would

sometimes i really miss you
but memories seem so trite
when you had the nerve to claim
you where a child of the night

a pocket full of posies
but a pocket could hold a blade
if i'd have got you flowers
would you have asked who paid?

to me the first that talked of love
but you shall never be last
as even one you left me
someone snatched me fast

staggering from what happened
they took me away from you
then they comforted me
something i never knew

but when she made a mistake
i told her she was forgiven
but she made the mistake again
and from her i was driven

whats the point of caring
when love just seems to hurt
you give away your heat and soul
but you'll always feel like dirt

you hurt me because you love me
or you hurt me because you care
you can never really be sure
but life was never fair

when you told me that you care
i could feel my heart soar
but now when i think of you
you're just a namless whore

it doesn't matter who you are
you're just another face
who knows what i'm thinking
you're a pain for me to trace

dare i look for someone else
or would i be looking for pain
do i seek to get myself hurt
as love just seems inane

a few have seen me bleeding
more have seen the scars
you left me in depression
i've stepped in front of cars

but does it matter to me
what you put me through
when in the end there'll always
be one more that sticks like glue

A-tishoo a-tishoo
it seems i'm never well
but i don't really care
because we'll burn in hell

when one sticks to me so close
i have to always wonder
is it me thats going to hurt them
or will they simply blunder

i always feel i am to blame
when they go and blunder
but why do i feel i am in the wrong
when they tear my heart asunder

so little time but so much left
so many smiles and happy people
so many people who go to church
exchange vows beneath a steeple

i often feel that i'm bitter
but these memories make me shiver
when the closes i knew to this before
was how a blade would make me quiver

because i wore a mask uncaring
others asked me if i'd smile
they'd get a nervous twitch
i'd appear to for a while

my innocence is nothing
my tears fall without grace
my life races on without me
because i can't hold its pace

my night skies hold no stars
my winter days have no snow
my overcast days have no rain
because such beauty i should not know

now my company is just my thoughts
my scars are there to remind
of what i truely wish i was
of how i hate human kind

people think i'm merely fickle
they think its attention i seek
but they don't understand me
that my feelings are simply weak

struggle so long to truely feel
to overcome the emptiness inside
in thinking i am like you all
only to myself have i lied

so my world falls down
so the nursery rhyme ends
but given any length of time
any broken heart shall mend

BlackRose
Oct 15, 2002, 11:47 AM
That was epic, man... you've obviously gone through what you wrote there. I hope i'll read more sometime.

ABDUR101
Oct 15, 2002, 11:56 AM
A tragedy with an up-lifting end. Great work Sai-yuk, damn good work =)

Sai-Yuk
Oct 15, 2002, 03:16 PM
thanks
^_^;

I just had a look through that and stuff, to make sure that it was okay... never thought of doing that once i finished it, because i struggled at points and the like to get it out

i'm just glad you guys like it, because i poured my heart into its creation...

i've had strange little things running through my head all day though since, like

the roses are dead
the violets are too
you shall soon follow
because you sniff glue

...that some could find offensive, and i'm sorry if they do, but, i just thought i'd share how my mind's been working on irrelevant tangents since i wrote that poem

I'll have to write another soon... not wrote any since the last ones i posted in here...

Sai-Yuk
Oct 17, 2002, 06:29 AM
Okay, here's one that i just wrote up because... well, i tried two others, but the average demons and angels stuff with all the religious symbolism can be a little... overused sometimes... so... i tapped this up, on a whim, and wondered what i was thinking as i wrote it... so ...um... enjoy?

---

Flower of Innocence

a pair of lips curved in a blood rusted smile
"why don't you sit here and stay for a while
i would love for your company, little miss"
goaded the voice with its sibilant hiss

behind a back a shining knife was drawn
before too long, ones flesh would be torn
a smile escaped lips, innocent and sweet
but to this monster, the girl was but meat

"don't talk to strangers, they lead you astray
so said my mother, to me just the other day"
the young girl chirped, with but a small sigh
little did she know, if she stayed she would die

"Then let me tell you, my name is joe day
once i know you're, strangers we are nae"
the man again used this sibilant hiss
as he wove his web for the little young miss

but the little girl frowned, not understanding
why all of a sudden a bag of candy he was handing
"But my mother told me.." she started to speak
when all of a sudden her legs suddenly grew weak

the man was brandishing a knife made of steel
and he was about to give her, her very own feel
but the little girl stood there, she couldn't run
now that the man had her, he was going to have fun

but that fun never came, the man had no chance
a passer by saw him, as at the pair of did glance
"You stupid fool, you should turn and should run
can't you see that little girls carrying a gun?"

the man with the knife simply laughed at the guy
before he looked down at the girl who would die
"I don't think she has any weapon or whatever
apart from what lays in that holster of leather"

badmav
Oct 17, 2002, 07:14 AM
a story well known


a reality known for those who are shown
to grasp the unown of a world new and old
this place were gamers roum with days of old
were tales of heroism is carved in stone
for those who look at my words iv shown a tale that
is never ending starts to unfold a tale of thousends young an old of what i speak of is true and bold for those true to them selves i show you know it is us in the world of pso


hope you like it i love to make poems just i have not had time to make them and my brain been stuck

somone get me a shrink im over worked lol

Sai-Yuk
Oct 17, 2002, 07:15 PM
the word patriotism comes to mind...
thats not really a bad thing, as you're almost professing an ardent love for this game... its a shame i can't remember where my DC is, or my copy of PSO... i'd love to play it some time... oh well...

a question, was that poem sat down to and wrote, or did it just 'happen' as some poems seem to do, when you sit and write spontanously?

Just wondering...

by the way, you may want another host for your sig image - right now it says that the image can't be hosted on trial accounts... don't know if thats just me though...

-BK-
Oct 22, 2002, 09:36 AM
Here is the latest piece from Hagi over here. This one took me awhile to write and the only reason it was written was because I couldn't stop thinking about ex's. Oh well, at least it's a poem and it's finished. So here it is.

Relationships of The Past

In my mind, I can see them still
Girls from the past won't leave me
Years later, they're in my dreams
Chasing me, and haunting me
I wasn't ready to date them yet
I was lucky that any even worked
Too young to understand what to say
Pain now sits where love once lurked
What was I thinking when I pursued
What would happen if I continued to
Would I still have one to call my own
Is it better for me that they're through
No idea how to answer these questions
Now I wonder just what the future holds
Will I still chase after impossible things
Or will I find out how to break the molds

_xX_Frosty_Xx_
Oct 22, 2002, 10:21 PM
Based off of my thoughts about something that occured yesterday....

Defention of Love
It's a serene rainy day
I have no words to say
But in my mind I ponder in dismay
"What is love?"
Is it a feeling you have for someone or is it more
Suddenly the floor opens to questioning on this research I have to explore
I open the pores of my mind
And find that so many people are wrong
Because they base this feeling off of something they hear in a R&B song
When in reality love is what I feel in me
Webster's can't tell you what love is
You have to experience it to understand it
I've been through it, I'm going through it now
Many people question me and ask me how I know what it is
I know how it develops, I know how it begins
I know how it grows, I know how it ends
I know what it feels like, I know what it can and can't be compared to
I know all of this, and strangely enough, I can't even tell you
To grasp it, you have to form an hypothesis and a conclusion
You have to understand when it is and isn't an illusion
So many people experience mass confusion
and intrusion from tainted oppressors
That make your heart go through occlusion
Just because you can say "I love you"
Doesn't truthfully mean you do
You have to know for yourself when you say it and it's true
All in all I'm saying there's no such thing as a meaning for this word
In no way was it my mission to educate people on this subject
Or to get any type of recognition
Don't think you have the acquinition of something you don't understand
But don't neglect something everyday your heart demands
I hope you listened to this soliloquy
Because now it's your turn to tell me
What's your defintion of love?



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BlackRose
Oct 22, 2002, 10:30 PM
Very thought-provoking, Frosty. I'd tell you my definition, but text has it's limitations. =P

*looks at sig* I suppose I'll post this just for posterity.

Obsidian Soul

I am the shadow, and I am the night
You have a foreboding that nothing seems right
I am the spirit that makes things go wrong
In the shell of a nice I have been long
Now I'm released, free to enslave...