FanArt: Some of my stuff

[shinobu_seta]

I finally decided to post up some of my things. Please tell me what you think.

The first is the opening graphic I did for me and my friend's multiplayer PSO group that meets on the weekends.

http://swvanime.250free.com/open.jpg

The next is a picture I did to commemorate my character reaching level 100 ^_^

http://swvanime.250free.com/shinobu.jpg

The next is just a black and white picture of the same character, about a year old.

http://swvanime.250free.com/shinobu_fanart2.gif

I hope you enjoy them ^_^

~Shinobu



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[TheOneHero]

http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_eek.gif I love them! Excellent work, though the characters seem a little skinny, but it just might be me. Do you do requests? http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime2.gif

[Garanz2]

^ What he said. Very good work! Especially the busty HUnewearl *drool*

[Eanae]

If you don't mind some constructive critism; the breasts on the middle picture kind of look alittle off. I think you may have brought the lines up just a *tad* too far. (the clevage area between her shirt) Yours pictures are awesome though!

offtopic: omg i posted in fanworks http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_eek.gif



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[PJ]

On 2004-09-10 15:32, TheOneHero wrote:
Do you do requests? http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime2.gif



I'm with him o_o YOur work is awesome http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif

[navci]

Very nice line arts!
CG work needs a little brush up, but pencil and colour pencils are quite awesome. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Kudos to you!

[KaFKa]

the middle HUnewearl's clevage is unnatural.

and on the last one he breasts look like theyre being held up at odd angles.

the HUmar's katana is cut off for some reason, im guessing it went off the page.

(and no, im not a perver for noticing the HUnewearl's issues. therye just blaringly obvious.)

[shinobu_seta]

Thank you all very much for the compliments and the critisisms! I appreciate it very much ^_^

I've been aware of the cleavage problem with the middle picture. I'm not sure why I made those lines so high, just not paying enough attention when I was inking it I guess.

I need to see some pointers or tutorials on photoshop really, it was my first time messing around with it. I actually colored the characters with colored pencils, but I applied a filter that I thought looked kinda neat. Right now I'm learning about layers and coloring that way though. I'll try to do something like that soon.

Again, thank you all for the compliments. I would really like to try some commissions too. Just send me a good enough request/description and I'll try the best I can to make it the way you like ^_^

Thanks!

~Shinobu

[Saiffy]

Wow, just wow. I usually just view some art in here but I had to post for these. Absolutely beatiful.

[TheJust1]

I really like the coloring. And the style. I wish I could color like that but I really dont try to get down with the colors to much. Yeah Kafka's criticsm can be fairly harsh but it helps some times. Personally I am feelin that group pic you did. I hope you post some more pics.

[Garanz2]

On 2004-09-12 19:33, shinobu_seta wrote:

Again, thank you all for the compliments. I would really like to try some commissions too. Just send me a good enough request/description and I'll try the best I can to make it the way you like ^_^



I'd make a request, but it would scare people...

[Sagasu]

I like the HUcast design best.

[pixelate]

I see boobs. A+.

[shinobu_seta]

Thanks again for all of the compliments! I recieved everyone's private messages and I'm going to try my best to do the requests given to me.

As for more pictures. I have this picture of my Racaseal named Marle. I've got it inked but I can't decide how I want to color it yet, (either with colored pencils, or take another stab at photoshop)

http://swvanime.250free.com/marle_ink.jpg

Thanks again,

~Shinobu

[-Z]

these are very good! while i think the neck in the middle picture is a little long, you did very nicel on these ^_^

a TehDeluxeYoink! (http://www.angelfire.lycos.com/mech/ziz/Theif.gif) for you! ^_^

[ladyjaderiver]

Pretty good! If you're interested in a full critique, let me know. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

[shinobu_seta]

I think I can take some more critiquing ^_^ although I'm not sure how much good it will do. I can't seem to be happy with much that I do in the art, all I see are the negatives. It's okay, you can only try to get better I guess ^_^

Right now I'm working on everyone's commissions. It may be a week or so on them because of work and school, but I'll try to get results soon.

http://swvanime.250free.com/mamoru_fanart.gif

Woo, I found another. This is Mamoru, a HUmar from my fan fiction. The last one I post for a while.... hopefully, lol.

~Shinobu

[PhotonDrop]

Well, I stumbled in here because I had just woke up and decided to kill some time until I was sleepy again.

But that was a mistake.

Your work is very nice. When I layed my eyes on those piccies I was woken right up.

I hope to see more from you! n.n

[ladyjaderiver]

On 2004-09-14 20:37, shinobu_seta wrote:
I think I can take some more critiquing ^_^ although I'm not sure how much good it will do. I can't seem to be happy with much that I do in the art, all I see are the negatives. It's okay, you can only try to get better I guess ^_^


Lol, you have the same problem I do...

[navci]

On 2004-09-14 21:45, ladyjaderiver wrote:

On 2004-09-14 20:37, shinobu_seta wrote:
I think I can take some more critiquing ^_^ although I'm not sure how much good it will do. I can't seem to be happy with much that I do in the art, all I see are the negatives. It's okay, you can only try to get better I guess ^_^


Lol, you have the same problem I do...



Oh trust me. It is everyone's problem.

[Sharkyland]

No matter how clear the PSO font is, I still have trouble reading it, but nice artwork. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif