Wtf

[FOAtHeart]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v84/FOAtHeart/Lolzorz4.png

No anatomy critiques, please, just color/shade critiques, since that's what the main focus of the picture was. >>



<font size=-1>[ This Message was edited by: FOAtHeart on 2005-07-25 16:46 ]</font>

[Deathscythealpha]

Wow, some nice colouring, the skin looks great. I think the eyes have come out too dark though, getting some serious 'Panda-Eye' going there. Maybe it could be lightened up a bit, use a smaller brush size.

[astuarlen]

Pretty! :3

I agree with D-alpha; it's nice to make the eyes stand out, but they're positively popping. http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_eek.gif
But I'd say the next thing you might try is adding more color variation in shading. This should add depth and make your pictures really come to life.
http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

[CupOfCoffee]

I for one love the deeply shaded eyes. Gives it a very Tim Burton look.

[ladyjaderiver]

Yeah, but the Tim Burton look really only works with faded out, low-saturation colours, not like what FO has here.

Now, on to my critique. I really LOVE how you did her hair. http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif Just gorgeous. http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif The shading on her neck is gorgeous as well. On her shirt/whatever, eh, not quite. You're definitely getting there, but you need to make sure you stick to your light source and follow the folds you've given the fabric. (All that really dark shading in the middle of her chest wouldn't really be there, is what I'm trying to say, I guess.)

[Daikarin]

Looks great. Did you edit it using software, or did it by hand and scanned it? It's a realistic shading anyway. http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime1.gif

[ladyjaderiver]

Unless I'm mistaken, it's done in some sort of paint chat/oekaki program, and is all digital.

[Sayara]

Fo works in Paint BBS i think.

Unless i give FO something to CG http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif