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Shiva91
Sep 12, 2005, 09:39 PM
it had pictures on it
one with a girl
who was covered in wounds
blood
burns
"As i lay here, I ponder, What happend next? I'm drenched in blood. Im Drenched in pain. Nothing can make it go away. No one can help. Nothing can remove the memory of pain. Everytime .you think .remeber the pain. It increases. Am i going to die? Is there a reason to live? No on knows me. I bring pain to those who think of me. Everytime .you think remember .the pain. Increases. Will saying sorry help? no because what have i done to be sorry for? Am i forever Damned with Pain?! Am i forever Damned with Silence?! I only see..heh..heheheheh..If i don't see..If i do not feel..If i do not speak..I will forever hear."

*picture*:has blind fold on her eyes still all bloody and what not: "As i Lay here i ponder. I hear it .all i .see .nothing .I feel numb no pain i can no longer speak..I ponder..Is there a reason? why did this happen? what did i do am i so blind. The darkness is light. The light is darkness. Good is evil. Evil is good. You cannot have one without the other. I hear nothing no one is aroud. no one cares.. life is death, death is life. Which am i experiencing? is the other worse?"

"as i ponder.. . All the tthought i thought. All the questions i asked. No one answered no one helped.. no one..no one cared. all because. im diffrent. I see what everyone. everyone sees. I know how to help--"

"I was Never ment to. no one would truely understand me, My mind is too vast. too deep too full of constant thought, THAT NONE OF YOU UNDERSTAND!!! so you ignore me?! NO, you would never ignore. I know how you think. You forget. You don't forget alot, but you forgot me. who shall read this. either you don't understand me or you understand comletely."

"You do not understand, because you do not care. For that, a curse shall be placed on you forever engraved in your mind. What is it? You will know. and it will haunt your sleep.

You .understand? Then set me free from the darkness..I will not see, feel or speak again. I will only listen. Do know, for you who understand.. Thank you.."


: Please do not spam it, i dont know where its suppose to go :



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geewj
Sep 12, 2005, 09:42 PM
Please don't spam it requests belong in Off Topic or Fanworks.

Shiva91
Sep 12, 2005, 09:46 PM
May i request a move to either of the places?

Wyndham
Sep 12, 2005, 09:48 PM
I like it. o_O

Shiva91
Sep 12, 2005, 09:51 PM
On 2005-09-12 19:48, Oran1324 wrote:
I like it. o_O



thanks.. http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime2.gif

Kuea
Sep 12, 2005, 11:06 PM
http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_eek.gif

this is very interesting

I sorta like the darkness to it

makes me wonder whats going on with you for this to be your thoughts o.o

lots of typos though~ http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif =3

Bungee950
Sep 13, 2005, 08:49 PM
wow.... i may need to go and have a scary dream now... very poetic, creepy, yet very meaningful. I like!

Shiva91
Sep 13, 2005, 08:51 PM
On 2005-09-13 18:49, Bungee950 wrote:
wow.... i may need to go and have a scary dream now... very poetic, creepy, yet very meaningful. I like!



Must mean you didn't understand http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif don't worry i share the same scary dream XD

And thanks. (wasn't suppose to be a poem)

Neith
Sep 14, 2005, 05:59 AM
I think the way you've written it makes it flow, so it's seen as a poem.

I quite like darker things like this, just a shame you're going through these thoughts though..

Rubius-sama
Sep 14, 2005, 01:58 PM
I don't think Shiva will be having any more thoughts ;_;...*sniff* http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_frown.gif

Bungee950
Sep 15, 2005, 03:01 PM
On 2005-09-14 03:59, UrikoBB3 wrote:
I think the way you've written it makes it flow, so it's seen as a poem.



thats what i meant.