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Sagasu
Dec 3, 2005, 09:31 AM
This is kind of a spurofthemomentI'mtiredandits6am sort of thing. So I dont know how long it will continue.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v106/Sarunakai/LateNightwtfness.jpg

The point being, I want to draw wierd yet fun yet not too complex stuff for a awhile. Thus, I doodle the war of the Anti Anime Girl Obsession Agency. The primary target being the endless hordes of mindless cat people! ;>

Most anything funny will be inside jokes, since the characters are strong representations of me and a few of my online buddies. But there should be enough violence to keep ya interested regardless! http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif



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Scrub
Dec 3, 2005, 11:22 AM
Oooone critique



On 2005-12-03 06:31, Sagasu wrote:
Thus, I doodle the war of the Anti Anime Girl Obsession Agency.



Association. ;3

Wyndham
Dec 3, 2005, 12:22 PM
looks fluffy.
o_O

Tact
Dec 3, 2005, 12:28 PM
On 2005-12-03 09:22, Oran1324 wrote:
looks fluffy.
o_O




Um...fun?

roygbiv
Dec 3, 2005, 01:15 PM
Is there going to be the Association of Gay Men Against Yaoi Fangirls involved in this?

Kuea
Dec 3, 2005, 02:56 PM
On 2005-12-03 06:31, Sagasu wrote:
endless hordes of mindless cat people! ;>

I'm not mindless o.o;;; so am I counted in that? o.o;;;

Tact
Dec 3, 2005, 03:01 PM
*Wonders if "he" will make an appearance as well*

-Z
Dec 3, 2005, 06:13 PM
Heh, this was a nice little surprise to return to. Hope this is something you'd consider continuing ; )


So is that how Sarun views/personifies me? : P

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HAYABUSA-FMW-
Dec 3, 2005, 08:25 PM
On 2005-12-03 08:22, Scrub wrote:
Oooone critique



On 2005-12-03 06:31, Sagasu wrote:
Thus, I doodle the war of the Anti Anime Girl Obsession Agency.



AWOOGA. ;3


Or at least that's what sound effect and word I think of when I see that acronym. http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

Better kill the "goo nekos" first. http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif

By the way, since no one else said it directly yet, it looks good. Thanks for putting the time in, forgoing some sleep to do it.

Sagasu
Dec 4, 2005, 03:06 AM
Heh, thanks Haya, comics take a lot more effort than normal pictures. http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime2.gif

And it was association, wasnt it? Woops

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v106/Sarunakai/LateNightwtfness2Fixed.jpg

Its been forever since I've drawn any kind of action scene, hell, its been forever since I've drawn a proper comic. So I'll try to improve in that respect asap.

If you cant tell allready, Zi'Zuku is pretty damned wicked. http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif



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Kuea
Dec 4, 2005, 04:34 AM
hmm

I sorta find panel order tricky to figure out~ http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/anime2.gif

Zi does kick ass though~

I like it and I say you better be keeping it coming or else!








for zi~
Humans Suck!

HAYABUSA-FMW-
Dec 4, 2005, 05:49 AM
The overlays and readability/continuity look fine to me. Weapon sheathe/un-sheathe!

*cough* I used to buy Ghost Rider comics, at the supermarket even *cough*

So the action looks fine to me as well. I'm used to dark stuff. http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

I noticed the different placement of the ears on the cat people silhouettes this time around in the second one. http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_eek.gif

It doesn't get much darker than Ren and Stimpy comics though. I got one of those around here too. http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif

Sayara
Dec 4, 2005, 01:24 PM
I really like the Zi look, its quite catchy.

Solstis
Dec 4, 2005, 03:13 PM
http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_eek.gif

Sagasu
Dec 4, 2005, 11:19 PM
Yeah, the weapons kinda came out of nowhere. I dont really feel like drawing holdsters or sheaths, so I'll come up with something else to explain that phenomenon. http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v106/Sarunakai/LateNightwtfness3Fixed.jpg

At least look at me when you shoot a bullet through my head~ through my head~

My mistakes are more noticable in this one ._.; These last two were for me to get a feel for how to draw Zi'Zuku and Sarun, plot like stuff will be hapenning next page (which I hope to finish tonight, as well.) And perhaps just better art in general.

I may ask for random people to fill various roles in the comic, but until I decide who and whats all involved, I dont want to get your hopes up.

*grabs a soda*
Back to work! http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif



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-Z
Dec 4, 2005, 11:41 PM
Heh, my compliments on drawing me the way you have. Seems like the cat people are finally getting what they deserve http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wink.gif

Now my only fear is a rebuttal... but I guess I can put that thought off until later.



Finally I can look as evil as I feel http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_wacko.gif

EphekZ
Dec 5, 2005, 12:47 AM
uhhh when the girly dude is fighting why is he frowning like he is seeing a chickflick

Kuea
Dec 5, 2005, 02:08 AM
wee~

I like the third page http://pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Sagasu is so cute~ n.n just wanna huggle him~ =3

and Zi is awesome~ =n.n=

Can't wait for more =3











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