Republic Insa: Director's Cut

[KodiaX987]

Yahhhhooo!

http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=981671

I would have done an RI sig for the event but I didn't have any character pics handy. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_razz.gif

There it is. The revamped version of Republic Insa: The Android Sin. I've corrected mistakes, smoothened out the plotline, and added a bit of political intrigue to twist things around even more. Also:

-The full prologue of Elenor's transformation.
-Added detail to battle scenes.
-Shurikane's creator is introduced and adds a new twist to the plot.
-Extended scenes, which reveal a bit of Shurikane's past, along with the other Insas, and some other characters.
-Cameo appearances, namely Breezblok and Davion.
-Updated fighter profile charts.
-Drives deeper into the relation between Shurikane and her daughter Sierra.
-Alternate ending includes a few TFFOMP elements, modified to match the Republic Insa timeline and plotline.

Enjoy! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif While I am at it, I submit the revamp for the fanfiction database. http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_smile.gif

[Moo2u]

Alright! Once I get some free time I know what I'm doing! http://www.pso-world.com/psoworld/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif

[M_BlackHawk]

Once I get a free moment when I'm not doing anything, I'll be posting "Shadows of the Past" and "The Search" at fanfiction.net.

I still need to work on "Steel Spirit", but I've wound up with a serious writer's block on that fic.


Speaking of which, I may just wind up reposting "Shadows of the Past" and "The Search", and submitting them for the fanfic archive, since they're my two first fanfics.

later

M_BlackHawk