Fanfic:Jonathan's Story

[Hunter-Hucast]

Chapter1: The Creation of Jon

Once when a doctor named, Dr. Rile studied off of his research when he was 38. He started building up some parts when he was 40, and started a building an android for him when he was 43.

He wanted this robot to do all his work that he needed done for him. Gary J. Rile was his name and he finished building up every part and putting them together. Once he finished he decided a name for the robot! This is what started the story...

Rile: "...almost finished" He crossed over to the table and placed the right leg of the android.

Rile: "...now for the left leg" He twisted the bolt with his wrench. And reached over the table for his left leg.

Rile: "The right arm" He put it together and the left arm.

Rile: "Perfect! Now all this android needs is a a programmer inside his body." He called the lower lab area and recieved the remaining and put it inside the android

Rile: "Okay this Android is finished!" He put the tools back in his office desk And looked at his new creation.

Rile: "All it needs is a name" Gary Rile thought for a while

Rile:"Joseph? Jose? Jone? Jon?" He stayed in surprisement!

Rile: Jon! Your new name is Jon!

Jon: Alphermative!

Rile: Now I programmed you to do all my work that needs being done, no worries it's not a chore, it's just several jobs!

Jon: Anything master.

Rile: Just call me "Dad"

Jon: Anything Dad!

Rile: Excellent! Now you still aren't finished though! We need to see if I located your program correctly.

Jon: It is currently located in the right area.

Rile: Wow! I might like my new creation! Now since I finished the creation, I am more than glad to serve you correctly as your father...

Jon: No thanks, Dad! So...what's the first task?

(Finishes Episode 1, it was small because it's just a creation chapter, the other's will be bigger)



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[Hunter-Hucast]

Chapter 2: The Team

Rile: *As Dr. Rile looks around at the shelf he finds all his weapons are gone* "You should start with a weapon, but I don't have one now!"

Jon: *hands turn into a fist* "Should I use my body attacks?"

Rile: "There's no other choice! It's your only option. Should I send some back-up?"

Jon: "I don't need back-up, it'll power me up even if I'm level 1."

Rile: "Yes but you need back-up. You could die if A Gobooma pops up and takes away your life"

Jon: "Very well, send back-up...i'll be down by the transporter for you to send them"

Rile: "Is something wrong?"

Jon: *opens the door, looks back and smiles* "Everything is fine!"

Rile: "Glad to hear" *reaches over to his table cabinet* "Actually your the one that will choose, go around Pioneer 44 and look around if you see any one who might be willing to help"

Jon: "I'll do it Dad" *runs off around Pioneer 44, and sees a lonely Racaseal* "Ahh, someone who feels lonely" *runs to the Racaseal* "Hi, how do you do?"

Lonely girl: "Oh hi, i feel good" *smiles*

Jon: "Hi, I'm Jon"

Lonely Girl: "Hi, my name is Garette"

Jon: "Nice name" *shows paper* "Can you help me?"

Garette: " Uhh...I'm sorry but I don't know how to read"

Jon: "It just says that if you can help me...err, help my father do this mission"

Garette: "Who's your father?"

Jon: "He's Gary Rile, he's the principal of Pioneer 44"

Garette: "I'm not that educated but i'll help you in battle" *smiles*

Jon: "Okay" *Puts letter in pocket* "I should find more people" *runs down hallway and finds a shy RAcast* "Oh hey friend" *waves hand*

Shy guy: "...."

Jon: "Do you speak?"

Garette: "Hello fellow Racast"

Shy Guy: "uh...hello guys..."

Jon: "Can you join our team so that we have enough people to go with?"

Shy Guy: "sure"

Jon: "Excellent, I'm Jon!"

Shy Guy: "I'm Jeremy"

Jon: "Okay, 3 of us can be a team, now I have couple of Meseta, I can buy a weapon" *goes to shop and goes to the arm shop* "hmm...a halbert"

Garette: "Choose carefully"

Jeremy: "Halbert..you have enough money"

Jon: "I'll take it" *buys and equips the Halbert*

Garette: "Awesome choice" *shows her handgun*

Jeremy: "And I have an Autogun"

Jon: "What level are you guys anyways?"

Garette: "I'm level 1"

Jeremy: "Me too"

Jon: "Hey, me too, I was just born today and I didn't battle yet, we can train together"

Strange dudette: *talking from a distance to another guy*

Jon: *looks at her* "who's she?

Jeremy: "I dunno"

Garette: "Beats me" *shrugs shoulders"

Jon: "She looks like a Hucaseal, she's suspiciously standing there"

Garette: "She looks shy!"

Jeremy: "She is...maybe"

Strange Dudette: *passes by and bumps into Jon* "Oh...sorry!" *gets up*

Jon: "It's okay! Hey I wanted to try and ask you something anyways" *shows paper*

Strange dudette: *reads it* "Count me in!"

Jon: "Thanks! I'm Jon!"

Garette: "And i'm Garette!"

Jeremy: "I'm Jeremy!"

Strange Girl: "Hello guys, I'm Liz"

Jon: "Hey Liz"

Garette: "Hi"

Jeremy: "Hiya"

Liz: "Hello and thank you" *gets out her Dagger* "This is my weapon and i'm level 1"

Jon: "We all are" *smiles* "Now I've gotta tell my dad I made a team"

Garette: "Okay"

Jeremy: "Let's go then"

Liz: "Come on"

Jon: *goes to Dr. Rile* "So Dad, this is my team!"

Rile: *examines the team's personalities* "Now what are your names?"

Garette: "Garette"

Jeremy: "Jeremy"

Liz: "Liz"

Rile: "Okay, you all are welcome to Jon's crew! Now for your first mission"

[b]The End: Continued in Next Chapter

[Hunter-Hucast]

Chapter 3: Mission Impossible

Jon: "Yes?" said as he quickly sharpens his Halbert

Rile: "I need you guys to go down to the Dragon area and take out the Dragon and get the Dragon's Fang, I eed it for my new expirement!"

Garette: "Dragon Fang?!?"

Rile: "Yes made from Ragol's Forest"

Jon: "How do we contact you if we need help?"

Rile: "Then you can have this, if you click the button in the middle you can call for back-up" *tosses a CTP44 to all 4 of them* "It's a CTP44, which stands for 'Contact To Pioneer 44'"

Jeremy: "Nice name"

Rile: "Anyways the Junction is busy at Forest 1, so your going to have to take the transporter to Cave1 and works your way down to Forest 2 to the dragon"

Liz: "Lot's of work but okay"

Rile: "Well, you should be on your way"

Jon: "C'mon guys let's do it!" *runs off to the transporter with the rest*

*They arrive at Cave 1*

Jon: "This is my first battle but we should be altered more allegiance if we continue on!"

Garette: *goes on and spots an Evil Shark* Ahh! *runs up behind Jon* "You take the steps."

Jon: "Okay..." *takes a few steps and the Evil Shark charges at them slowly*

Jeremy: *gets his Handgun ready* "This should be simple"

Garette: "Ahh!"

Liz: "I never saw one of those things"

Jon: *gets up his Halbert and attacks the Evil Shark just as more come up*

Garette: "More?"

Jeremy: "Damn!"

Liz: "Let me take care of it!" *runs up one and slices off a head*

Jeremy: "o_o"

Garette: "How...?"

Jon: "Cool!"
*door opens* "Come on let's continue"

*Soon they get to the end where there's a teleporter back to Forest 2*

Jon: I have to feed my MAG hold on! *goes to center and feeds his MAG*

Garette: "Me too" *feeds MAG*

Jeremy: "Me three" *feeds MAG*

Liz: "Me four" *feeds MAG*

*suddenly they finish*

Jon: "Now i'm level 4!"

Garette: "Level 3 for me!"

Jeremy: "Level 3 I am"

Liz: "Level 3"

Jon: "Hey i'm the only level 4, I can be the leader!"

*They continue on to Forest 2*

Jon: "This is the place" *points at big house*

*enters the door with the rest of them*

Jon: "It's quiet...too quiet!"

Garette: "And it's hot...too hot"

Jeremy: "Can you just stop repeating people differenlty?"

Garette: "Sorry!"

Liz: "Look above"

*Dragon pops out*

Jon: "This is the time, it's what we've been waiting for!" *gets Halbert ready*

Garette: "I'm right behind you" *gets Handgun*

Jeremy: "Me too" *gets Autogun*

Liz: "Okay" *gets Dagger*

Jon: *starts attacking his head when his head is on ground*

Garette: *attacks his arm*

Jeremy: *attacks his leg*

Liz: *attacks his tail*

Jon: "He's weak!!!!!!"

*Jon does the finishing attack*

Liz: *grabs the Fang*

Jeremy: *sets a telepipe*

*Everyone gets back to Pioneer44*

Jon: "We did it Dad"

Rile: *Gets the Fang* "Very good, i'm proud of you 4"

(Continued in Next Chapter)


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Chapter 4: The New Company

Rile: "Very well, now I think you should look for a company for you 4 to work at."

Jon: "Do you have a job's listing?"

Rile: *marks 3 sentences on a piece of paper* "Have this paper, the 3 I marked are jobs here on Pioneer 44, you can have these jobs or you can go down to any other Pioneer home to get a job"

Garette: "Which one is challenging, and will put us in a good fight between our Pioneer 2, and Ragol's monsters?"

Rile: "Then I marked those in Green Pen marks"

Jon: "Okay, we'll make sure we make you proud, see ya Dad"

Garette: "See you later Dr. Rile"

Jeremy: "Bye Dr. Rile"

Liz: "Ciao Dr. Rile"

Rile: "See you androids later"
*Jon and the other's walk around the semi-center of Pioneer 44*
(This is how Pioneer 44 looks like)
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______________________________________
/Hunter's Guild/ | Dr. Rile's | |
| |________________| |
| _| |
|A |________ |
|R| |Hospital| |
|M| |''''''''' |
|/ | |_| |
|I | _ |
|T| |__| |_____ |
|E| |Check Room| |
|M| |''''''''''' |
|/ | _______|____
|G | |Transporter|
|U| | |______Ragol|
|A| | |'''''
|R| | ________|____ |D| | | |
|/________________|__________|___Principal|
''''''''''
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Jon: *Goes down the Hospital, through the Check room,
around the Ragol Transporter to the Principal's Office.*

Garette: *follows Jon*

Jeremy: *follows Jon*

Liz: *follows Jon*

Jon: "We're almost to the Principal which is our first Company there!" *transports to the Principal*

Jon: "We're here!"

Garette: *looks at Man* "This is the Principal?"

Principal: "Welcome, Jon and others"
*Jon bows*
Principal: "I have a job for you!"
Garette: "Well, we'll be happy to work for you"
Principal: *Gives the 4 androids sign-papers* "You'll be working for me so, you need to Sign-in a spot"
*all the androids sign-in*
Principal: "We recieved your papers, so your jobs are...

Jon will be my Agent!
Garette will be his partner sidekick!
Jeremy will be my bodyguard!
And Liz will be the back-up!"

Jon: "Me going to Ragol and do dangerous tasks? I'm In!"

Garette: "Sidekick, W00t, Just me and Jon, side-to-side, I'll do it!"

Jeremy: "Me staying here for you? And protect you and still get payed? Okay you can count on me!"

Liz: "When Jon needs help i'll be there for him? Okay! Of course i'll go!"

Principal: "Okay then, i'll be giving your Section ID's! But I don't know which one is which. *points at Jon* What's your name?

Jon: "Jonathan for full"

Principal: "Your a Whitill" *gives Whitill Section ID and puts it on Jon*

Jon: "Okay":

Garette: "I'm Garette"

Principal: "Congrats! Your a Redria! *puts Redria Section ID on Garette*

Jeremy: I'm Jeremy.

Principal Your Viridia! *puts Viridia Section ID on Jeremy*

Liz: "And I'm Liz"

Principal: "Your a Bluefull" *puts Bluefull Section ID on Liz*

All: "Thanks"

Principal: "No problem, now you are able to be fighters, Now for your first mission!"

(Rest continues on next Chapter)

[RubyEclipse]

The format you use for your stories is certainly different from the norm, but it's interesting nonetheless. Keep the chapters coming!

[Hunter-Hucast]

Chapter 5: The Work Through Success

Principal: "What I need you workers to do for me today is to bring me a tentacle of the Cave's boss De Rol Le"

Jon: "Fancy name for an ugly monster!"

Garette: *giggles* "So where actually is this boss located?"

Principal: "Deep down in the Underground channels, he lies down there and follows the path of the sewer water, you need o kill him before he reaches to the path, I know a shortcut there"

Jon: "We prefer taking the long way Boss, it'll strengthen us and make us stronger"

Boss: "Very well, it's for the best, bye Jon and Garette, remember if you need back-up then just give me a chat with the CTP44 so i'll send Liz over for you"

Liz: *closes one eye and puts a thumb up for Jon and Garette*

Jon: "We'll be back soon" *said as he quietly moves down the hallway to the teleporter*

Garette: "See ya" *follows Jon down the teleporter and into Ragol's Teleporter"

Jon: "So here we are, Cave 1, shall we begin Garette?"

Garette: "Sure!" *Takes out Hangun* "This is where we begin"

Jon: *takes out Halbert* now your talking my language" *runs down and gets caught i the middle of 4 Evil Sharks* "Stay back, i'm warning you"

Garette: *Shoots all 4 of them and they die*

Jon: "I wasn't paying attention"

Garette: "Heheh...ain't that the whole stinkin' truth"
*gets trapped by 6 Evil Sharks*

Jon: *shoots them all* So what about you?

Garette: "I wasn't paying attention"

Jon: "Heheh...ain't that just the whole stinkin' truth"

Garette: "HEY"

Jon: "C'mon let's move"

Garette: "Fine"

*They go into the next room and spot a Nano Dragon*

Garette: "What is that thing?"

Jon: "Hmm...might be a Nano Dragon"

Garette: "At least we know Nano means Small"

Jon: "Not actually, Nano means deadly"

Garette: *scared*

Jon: "Just playin' with ya" *goes after the Nano Dragon*

Garette: *shoots it from a distance but hits Jon by mistake* Oops...

Jon: "Oww, that hit me by 120 hp"

Garette: *puts gun near her mouth* "Sorry!"
*When not expected the Nano Dragon blasts a beam toward Jon* "JON, WATCH OUT!!

Jon: *dodges the attack and it goes directly to Garette* "WATCH OUT GARETTE"

Garette: *dodges it and goes hit a Nano Dragon that tried to sneak up behind Garette* "Hah, you can' sneak up behind me"

Jon: "Garette let's just continue"

Garette: "Okay"
*They go on to the next room*
Garette: "Hey there's noone here"

Jon: "Suspicious, that's not supposed to happen"

Garette: "I'm a-scared"

Jon: "Garette did you go to college?"

Garette: "No that's why i'm uneducated"

Jon: "Your supposed to go to college to become a Hunter, Ranger, or Force!"

Garette: "Yes but Force need the most education, then Hunter's and Ranger's don't get educated much but most do, I don't"

Jon: "Okay, if we're on trouble just call on your CTP44 to the Principal and Liz will come to help us okay?"

Garette: "I know"

*Pretty soon they get to the end*

Garette: "Wow, that Grass Assasin back there almost stuck me up!"

Jon: "And that Poisen Lily almost poisened me!"

Garette: "Let's continue."

Jon: "Okay"
*They go on to Cave 2*

Garette: "Is that a Poifully Slime?"

Jon: "Only one way to find out" *calls Principal on the CTP44*

Principal: "Hello?"

Jon: "It's Jon"

Principal: "Need back-up?"


Jon: "No I just want you to identify a monster"
*tilts CTP44 to the monster and back to Jon*

Prinipal: "He's obviously a Poifully Slime"

Jon: "Okay thanks boss"

Principal: "Okay call me for any help"

Jon: "Okay. Jon out" *turns off CTP44*
*looks at Garette* He's a Poifully Slime!

Garette: "Ewwth" *starts shooting it* "It's regenerating!"

Jon: *slices it and it dies* "Heh, thanks for the beginning shot"

Garette: "No Problem"

Jon: "Let's go on"
*Then they get on to half the level*

Jon: "Next door"

Garette: *As she follows Jon she gets surrounded by a dozen of Evil Shark and gets taken away*

Jon: "Garette? Hey, where are you?"
*Noone answers*
Jon: "Ah giz, this is givin'e the freaks!"
*A noise comes*
"What the?"
*A Poisin Lily appears*
Jon: *kills it and get the access to the next room* *The next door is the access to Cave3* "Finally Cave 3!* I'll call for back-up so we can finish this mission together and then find Garette!...I really got to stop talking to myself!" *gets his CTP44 and calls for back-up for thew current location at the beginning of Cave 3!*

Liz: *appears in a while* "whatsup?"
Jon: "Garette got captured, so we have to finish this mission, the sooner the better"

Liz: "Okay! Let's go then"
*They both go to the end of Cave 3 almost to the end*

Jon: "Hey look that a Hidoom and a Miguem!"

Liz: "Disgusting creatures!" *throws both her daggers and it hits both of them*

Jon: "Nice throw"

Liz: "Thanks"

*they both get to the Underground Channel*

Jon: Thanks Liz, i'll take it from here"

Liz: "You sure"
Jon: "Of course"
Liz: "Okay see ya back at base"
Jon: "See ya"

*Liz opens a telepipe back to base*

Jon: "Okay De Rol Le, let's go"

Jon: *stabs him to death and the fight takes 5 minutes* "Okay" *The Place starts to blow up*
"I have to get out of here" *quickly grabs the tentacle and goes to the telepipe that Liz used*

Jon: *goes to Principal and places the tentacle down*

Principal: "Now I have the Dragon's Fang and De Rol Le's Tentacle, thanks"

Jon: "I really got to look for Garette, she got kidnapped"

Principal: "Then go look for her"

[Hunter-Hucast]

Chapter 6: Garette's New Power

Jon: "Okay, i'll be back in a sec."

Principal: "Take Liz and Jeremy with you"

Jon: "Pardon?"

Principal: "Jeremy and Liz should help you, you are all one big team"

Jon: "Thanks Boss"

Liz: "We should get going"

Jeremy: "We might lose her forever"

Jon: "Right guys" *gets his Halbert* "Their gonna pay"
*They go to Forest 1* "Let's Start from here and work our way up to Garette's Location"

Jeremy: "Where is she anyways?"

Jon: "I don't know, but I lost her in Cave 2"

Jeremy: "Let's check there, she could be there"

Jon: "Yeah, hey where'd Liz go?"

Liz: "I'm right behind you"

Jon: "Oh sorry"

Liz: "C'mon what're we wasting our time yapping here let's move.

Jon: "Right"

Jeremy: "I'll cover the rear"

Jon: "Right, we'll put our lives in anyposition to find Garette right?"

Liz: "Right."

Jon: "So we need to spread out, we can communicate with our CTP44, but we need our numbers"

Liz: "My CTP44 number is 677
*They add Liz's Number"

Jeremy: "Mine is 402"
*They add Jeremy's number*

Jon: "Mine is 249"
*They add Jon's number*

Jon: "Now we can contact, let's spread"
*Jon goes to the East Door, Jeremy goes to the South Door and Liz goes to the West door*
*5 minutes later*

Jon: *contacts Liz* Did you find anything?

Liz: "Nothing"

Jon: "Okay, let's get Jeremy on the other line"
*They call Jeremy*

Jeremy: "Hello?"

Jon: "Did you find anything?"

Jeremy: "Nothing"

Liz: "What about you Jon?"

Jon: "Follow my footsteps, I found the way to Forest 2"

Liz: "Okay"

Jeremy: "Roger That"
*They get off*

Jon: *waits for them as he feeds his MAG and polishes and sharpens his Halbert*
*They finally arrive*

Liz: "I'm here Jon"

Jon: "Where's Jeremy?"

Liz: "I haven't seen him when I was gong your path along"

Jon: "Probably he got captured"

Jeremy: *shows up* "Here I am"

Jon: "There you are, come on let's get to the next part of Forest area" *gets on teleport with them*

*Arrive and Jon's CTP44 rings*
*Jon answers it*

Jon: "Hello?"

Principal: "Jon? It's me! I found the location that Garette is currently located!"

Jon: "ReallY? Where?"

Principal: "She's being located at the Central Dome"

Jon: "Isn't that where the Dragon is?"

Principal: "She killed the Dragon by herself and is being possessed"

Jon: "Possessed? Ah Man! Possessed to what?

Principal: "She's been possessed to an evil android let's just keep it at that!"

Jon: *turns off CTP44 and looks at Jeremy and Liz"
Oh no, Garette is...POSSESSED!"

Liz: "This could be a problem."

Jeremy: "Yah think?"

Jon: "She's in the Central Dome, causing trouble"

Liz: "We have to wor as a team for this one"

Jon: "Anyways we have to move along"

Liz: "I agree"

Jeremy: "Me too"
*they move on to the next door* "Hildebears!"

Liz: "I'll take care of them. Go!"

Jon: "But.."

Liz: "No Buts, GO!"

Jon: "Okay"
*Jon and Jeremy disappear to the next door*

Liz: "Okay, You dumb, ugly Hildebears, time to meet your maker."
*Meanwhile*

Jon and Jeremy: *still running and go to a warp and get on top of a platform*

Jeremy: "We made it, the central door is this big, beautiful building." *hears a noise*

Jon: "What was that?"
*A bunch of Monests and Mothmants appear*

Jeremy: "I'll take care of this, you go on ahead and take care of Garette"

Jon: "But..."

Jeremy: "No buts, GO NOW!"

Jon: "Okay, i'll see you after I save Garette" *runs to a warp to the Central Dome*

Jon: "Garette? Garette? Where are you?
*Garette appears*

Jon: "There you are"

Garette: "Munimun"

Jon: "Huh?"

Garette: *floats in the air* "EID UOY DIORDNA"

Jon: "I cant understand?"

Garette: *raises her hands and a huge earthquake heads straight at Jon*

Jon: *gulp* "Oh no!"
*Liz comes inand grabs Jon from a rope and pulls him up* Liz: "1,2,3." *drop Jon and he lands on his feet*

Jon: "Thanks Liz."

Liz: "No problem"

Jeremy: *jumps in*

Jon: "Hey Jeremy"

Jeremy: "Hiya"

Jon: "Okay now we need to make her snao out of it, but we can't hurt her"

Garette: EROM? WOH EMOC?

Liz: "She's talking backwards"

Jon: "Liz...Your a genius"

Liz: "Thanks, I know I am"

Garette: *kicks nothing and a fire storm comes with raining fire*

Jon: "She has the power to control things"

Liz: "Please, stop this Garette, we're your friends *grabs her hand* True friend, we don't want to hurt you. *Remembers something* Oh yeah, you guys! Do any of you have an Antidote?

Jon: "That's only for poison"

Jon: "Yes, but we can still heal her"

Jeremy: *Checks his pockets* "Nothing"

Jon: *checks his* "I have only 1" *gives it to Liz8

Liz: "Good because I didn't have one, now we have to get this in her mouth" *picks up a spider in the floor that Garette is scared of*

Garette: "AAAAAAAA"
*puts the antidote in her mouth*

Garette: "........I feel.....Good...."

Jon: "It worked"

*Garette loses her powers*

Jon: "Do you still have your powers"

Garette: "I lost them"

Jon: "Okay"

Liz: "Let's get out of here"

Jeremy: "Yeah" *puts down a telepipe and the 4 get
back to Pioneer44*

Principal: "Did you get her"

Jon: "Yes she's right here but gets sleepy at time"

Principal: "Put her in the Hospital"

Jon: "Excellent Idea" *puts her in the Hospital*

Nurse: "Come back in 4 days and she'll be better"

Jon: "Okay thanks Nurse"
*goes back to Principal*

Jon: "I'll have to pick her up in 4 more days"

Principal: "Well I almost forgot,it's pay-day"
*gives 6,000 dollars to each*

Jon: "Wow"

Jeremy: "Wow"

Liz: "Wow"

Principal: "You deserve every penny"

All: "Thanks Boss"

Principal: "And give this to Garette when she's done in the Hospital" *gives 6,000 to Jon*

Jon: "Okay i'll make sure she gets it"

Principal: "Well, thak you gus, you all been good workers, and I might throw in a extra surprise for you guys when you make more effort"

All: "Okay"

(Chapter ended, continued in next chapter)





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Chapter7: Jeremy's Accident

Jon: "So Boss, what's now?"

Principal: "Well this task is only for Jeremy"

Jon: "How come? Isn't he just your bodyguard?"

Principal: "Well, he has to deliver a package to a Ranger's ONLY building, if Garette was here I would've sent her since she's not my bodyguard but Jeremy will be partenered up with you until you get to the area, and if you need back-up, then liz will be there for you"

Jon: "Hmph, i wonder why it's Ranger ONLY"

Principal: "That I do not know"

Jon: "Ah well, seeming as it is, only Jerey can deliver this package" *hands package to Jeremy and slowly wrinkles it as Jon puts something else in there* "Let's go Jerry"

Jeremy: "It's Jeremy"

Jon: "That's what I said Jellery"

Jeremy: *Sigh* "Let's go"
*They slowly walk to the teleporter back to Pioneer 44 but the Principal inturupts quickly*

Principal: "Jeremy!"

Jeremy: "At least someone can get my name right" *looks at Principal* What!?!?

Principal: "I have upgraded your Autogun, now it fires rapidly just like a mech gun, except it's only one gun"

Jon: Grr"

Liz: *Looks at Jon* "Looks like someone is jealous" *starts teasing him*

Jon: "I'm not jealous, why would I be jealous?"

Liz: "For some reason" *rolls eyes*

Jeremy: "Thanks Boss"

Jon: "Okay Jeffrey, LET'S GO"

Jeremy: *sigh* "It's Jeremy" *follows him*

Jon: *they go into the Ragol, transporter* "Do yah remember what to do?"

Jeremy: "Yes"

Jon: "No, yah don't, because Rangers aren't educated"

Jeremy: "Yes I am, your confusing me with Garette, 90% of the ranger's are educated, I am one of the 90%, 10% which Garette is in are not educated"

Jon: "Okay I get it" *goes forward into the Cave* "Where is the location?"

Jeremy: *looks at package* "It says Deliver to Cave 2" *looks up and find that Jon is gone* "Jon? Where are ya little buddy?"
*Hears a chainsaw noise and all the lights go out*
"J..J..J..Jon? AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
*runs i circles not going where he is*

*Meanwhile*
Jon: "Hey Jeremy are you alright?"
*Looks at Jeremy running in circles with his eyes closed and making a chainsaw noise with his mouth*
(Everything he thought is not true, Jon is right in front of him and everything is fine it's just that Jeremy had a moment there)
*snaps*

Jeremy: *wakes his eyes and stops the noise* What just happened?

Jon: "Are you actually educated?"

Jeremy: "Yes" *takes out a college certificate that he always wars with him inside his jacket* "See, graduated from college and i'm a full grown man"

Jon: "Right?"

Jeremy: "gets his upgraded Autogun* C'mon we have to deliver the package" *they soon get to the area with a house* *Jeremy knocks on door* *Door opens*

Stranger RAmarl: "Hello?"

Jeremy: "Hi, i'm here to deliver the package"

Stranger RAmarl: "Are you a Ranger?"

Jeremy: "I am, but my friend here is not"

Stranger RAmarl: "Then come in" *goes inside with Jeremy and when Jon is about to go in the RAmarl shuts the door on his face*

Jon: "Oww"

Stranger RAmarl: "Sorry, you don't happen to be a Ranger?"

Jon: "Sorry no, i'm a Hunter"

Stranger RAmarl: "Then no entrance" *closes door on him*

Jon: *sigh* "I'll just wait for Jer-whats his face"
*Meanwhile inside the house*
Jeremy: "I have a package here that consumes to belong in this house"

Stranger RAmarl: "Hello i'm Betty"

Jeremy: "And i'm Jeremy miss"

Betty: "Nice to meet you" *grabs his arm and gives him a tour around the house, and guess what's the last room?" *leads Jeremy to the last room* "And this is my torchure chamber"

Jeremy: "Right, I think I should be going!" *scared*

Betty: "Why? Why not have some FUN?" *grabs Jeremy and puts him in a torchure machine*

Jeremy: "Ahh! You evil lady"

Betty: "Welcome to the LIVING HELL"

Jon: *still waiting* "What the heck his taking so long?" *lays on the wall*
*Meanwhile*
Betty: *Puts Jeremy on the Spinning wheel of Doom* *Gets a sword* "Now this where I aim on one of your body parts to try and kill you, don't worry it will hurt, and plus it'll be easy for me since you have a big body of a RAcast" *throws sword and misses Jeremy's body part*

Jeremy: "AHHHH, JON HEEELLPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jon: *hears a noise* "Jenry!!!" *kicks the door open and goes through every room to look for him* "JELERY!!!!!!" *calls the base* "Boss, send Liz right over"

Boss: "Okay, where's your location?"

Jon: "In the house, somethings wrong"

Boss: "Oh then why would you need back-up? You delivered it"

Jon: "No but Jeckery is being tortured by the housekeeper, she's evil"

Principal: "Oh no, I didn't know I was to deliver a package to an evil housekeeper, i'll send Liz right over there"

Jon: "Okay thanks Boss"

*tries to stop the lady and pulls her back*
*Liz arrives*
Liz: *grabs an umbrella from the umbrealla holder and starts hitting her with it*

Jon: "Where's your weapon?"

Liz: "It's on repair, i broke it while I scratched the Principal's back, man that guys back his HAIRY, and my weapon broke instead of his skin, it's like metal"

Jon: "Okay" *throws him a slicer* I got that on the way here" *starts damaging her with his Halbert*
*Meanwhile*
Jeremy: *His systems are malfunctioning*

Jon: "Liz you check on Jeremy"

*Liz goes tp the torchure chamber and checks on Jeremy* "JEREMY! Are you dead?" *goes to his control wires on the inside of the body* "Let's see...how do I work this thing?"
*Meanwhile*
Betty: *goes to her closet of weapons and grabs a rocket launcher* HAHAHAHAHA! *shoots Jon but Jon moves to another room and she shoots and wrecks her living room but she doesn't care and heads after Jon in the kitchen*

Jon: *throws a fruit from her basket and tries to hit her*

Betty: *locks on him and shoots but misses Jon as he heads to the bedroom* *Betty wrecked her own kitchen but she still doesn't care and moves on after Jon* "DIE YOU LITTLE DAMN!" *shoots everwhere to try and surround him but still wrecks her house*

Jon: "Do you notice what your doing to your house?"

Betty: "I don't care, I just want to kill all 3 of you" *surrounds him* "What're you gonna do?"

Jon: *scared*

Garette: "Drop Out Bitch" *appears*

Jon: "GARETTE! YOUR HERE!" *all happy*

Garette: *jump kicks Betty rapidly* "Take that you dumbass" *flips her in the floor and steps on her in one foot, points a gun at her, and flashes her section ID* "I'm a true ranger, your under arrest"

Jon: *surprised, proud and excited* "...Garette..."

Garette: *smiles at Jon and picks Betty up and telepipe's her to the Pioneer44 to the Principal*

Principal: *sees the 4 arrive* Ahh...Jon, Garette, Liz and this so called Betty"

Betty: "Unhand me now"

Garette: "SHADDAP" *smacks her across the face*

Jon: "Iv'e seen you grew more mature since you got captured"

Garette: *smiles at Jon* Well, that teached me a lesson"

Principal: "She's going to prison"

Garette: "YAY!!"
Jon: "Awesome"
Liz: "Radical"

Principal: "Where's Jeremy? If he was there he wouldv'e finished it saying 'Excellent'"

Jon: "We gotta find him, he's still in the torchure chamber"

Principal: "Okay then, i'll be waiting"

(Finished, continued in next chapter)

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Chapter8: Liz and Jeremy's New Secret

Jon: "Okay Team, ready to go rescue Jeremy"

Garette: "He's only in the torchure chamber with noone there"

Liz: "Then let's hurry"

Jon: "Indeed"

Principal: "I want you guys to return immediently after the arrival and pick-up"

Jon: "Whatever you say boss, i'll do it"

Principal: "That's the spirit, you two girls too"

Garette: "Fine"

Liz: "Sure"

Principal: "Guard him with the rest of your lives"

Garette: "Ok. it'll take a sec."

*They go to Ragol's Cave 2*

Jon: "The house is nearby, anyways Garette how did you know we were in the house?"

Garette: *sits down* Well it started when I was in the restroom, then I felt a little better but I sensed danger, my radar said somewhere around Cave 2 there was trouble brewing, I needed to know if it was you guys doing another mission, so I called up to the Principal. He said that you guys were somewhere in Cave 2 in trouble, so I went there and saw a mysterious looking house, I just heard noise of Jeremy screaming and I just knew it was there"

Jon: "Wow, so your meaning to tell me that you have a radar tha can sense danger?"

Garette: "Yup"

Liz: "Interesting story, now let's go get my boyfr...I mean Jeremy" *runs to the house and sees Jeremy in the torchure chamber*

Jon: "Was she about to say boyfriend?"

Garette: "I heard a close range word at that but yeah I think that's what she said"

Jon: "Ooooohh, Liz got a lover"

Liz: *Can't believe she said her secret but she frees Jeremy* "How are you doing?"

Jeremy: "Just fine, been here for 2 days without food"

Liz: "Aww, don't worry, i'll buy you some food when we get back"

Jeremy: "Thanks sweetheart"

Liz: "No problem baby"

*They get back to Pioneer44*

Principal: "Excellent you found him, you can go on a little day-off for now"

Jon: "Oh yeah Garette, I almost forgot" *gives her 6,000 dollars* "That was for pay-day"

Garette:"Aww, thank you Jon" *hugs him and suspiciously looks at Liz and Jeremy"

Liz: "Let's go on day-off shall we?" *Thinking:Do Jon and Garette like each other?*

Garette: "Sure thing" *Thinking:Does Liz and Jeremy like each other"

Jon: "So shall we be going?" *Thinking:Does Jeremy and Liz like each other?*

Jeremy: "Okay then if everyone agrees then let's go" *Thinking: Does Garette and Jon like each other?*

*They go travel around Forest and take a day-off*

Jeremy: "So how you guys been lately?"

Liz: "Okay"

Jon to Garette in whisper: "Suspicious, Liz answers Jeremy's question first"

Garette to Jon in whisper back: "I know"

Jon: "Iv'e been good"

Garette: "Me too"

*Jeremy and Liz hug each other*

Liz: *looks at Jon and Garette as they look back weirdly* "What? It's a..a.a...a friendly hug" *smiles innocently*

Jon: "Right?"

Garette: "Whatever?"

Jeremy: "I got to use the bathroom" *goes to a nearby bathroom house*

*As Jeremy is gone*

Jon to Liz: "You like him don't you?"

Liz: "What?I don't like him?"

Garette: "We know you said boyfriend in the begining of Cave 2"

Liz: "I meant boyfriend as a friend that's a boy"

Jon: "That excuse is gettin' old"

Garette: "We know you like him"

Liz: "Do you want proof?"
*Jeremy comes back out*

Liz: "Jeremy!"
*Jeremy comes*
Liz: "Do I like you?" *Faces back at Jon and Garette and makes faces to try and tell him to say no*

Jeremy: "Of course, we're boyfriend and girlfriend"

Jon: "AHAH"
Garette: "Told yah"

Liz whispers to Jeremy: "Your suppossed to say no"

Jeremy: "Sorry"

Jon: "Jeremy and Liz sitting on a tree
K-I-S-S-I-N-G
First comes love and then comes marriage
And then comes Jeremy with the baby carriage"
*runs away*

Jeremy: "Damn you"

Liz: "Grr.." *runs after Jon and Garette*
Jeremy: *Also runs after Jon and Garette*

JoN: "You can't catch me, Nananananah"

Garette: "You can't catch me either"

Liz: *runs fast after Jon*

Jon: "Oh no" *goes on circles in the big area* "Heheheheh!"

Jeremy: *runs fast after Garette*

Garette: *runs backwards* Your so slow, I was the best at the track team"

Jeremy: *pant* *pant* *pant*

Garette: "Is that all you got?" *Jumps backwards and moves at the same time and still can't catch Garette*
"I'll go easy on you" *runs slower*

Jeremy: *catches up*

Garette: "There ya go, now you won't have a problem for cathing me when i'm running faster* *Runs faster than a cheetah*

Jeremy: "Aww.. come on, oh wait" *runs the opposite way that she's running on the circle and they both collide* "Gotcha"

Garette: "Owwie"
*Meanwhile*

Jon: *gets his Halbert and throws it to a wall* *jumps on it and grabs it and makes flips with it and gets up a mountain edge* "Now can you catch me?"

Liz: *makes flips and gets up the mountain edge*

Jon: "How did you do that?"

Liz: "Whatever i'm gonna getcha" *grabs Jon*

Jeremy: "I caught her"

Liz: "I caught him"

Garette: "No, get your hands away from me Jeremy"

Jon: "Oooh so that's your name"

Jeremy: "Finally God, YES IT IS"

Jon: "No problem Jelery"

Jeremy: "AAHHHH!!" *puts knees on floor and cryes*

Jon: "Take it easy Jeremy I was just joking"

Jeremy: "So you knew my name after all"

Jon: "well yeah, it's just fun to make fun of your name"

Jeremy: *Extremely pissed*

(The End, Continued in next chapter)

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Chapter9: The Team...grows Poor!?!?!?

Principal: "Well, it was nice for you guys to work with me, but now I think you should move on to another company, I have everything I need done"

Jon: "So is this godbye?"

Principal: "Of course not, you now have the permission to go on companies on different Pioneers, the closest Pioneer to Pioneer44 is Pioneer69"

Garette: "Wasn't it supposed to be by order?"

Principal: "Well...actually that was the most smartest question you ever asked, no it's not"

Jon: "So who will we work for in Pioneer69?"

Principal: "Anyone who is willing to help, I guess"

Liz: "Okay then, but we won't be needing these anymore, where do we put them?" *lifts up CTP44*

Principal: "Those will be yours for keeps"

Jeremy: *puts his CTP44 in his pocket* "Awesome! We'll use it if we need any help from you."

Principal: *looks down in a pitiful look" Sorry, but when your gone off a company...your just...GONE, even if your in a tough situation and hae noone to call but Pioneer44, we can't help you"

Jon: "HOW COME!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?"

Principal: "Because we have to be busy with new members"

Garette: "Oh...I see, it's not actually your fault, you'll have new workers to worry about"

Principal: "Sorry guys, it is for the best" *cheers up* "Well you'll be on your way"

Jeremy: "Okay then we'll be back" *runs and trips* "Oww"

All (except Jeremy): *laughs*

Jon: "Anyways Principal, we'll be on our way"

Garette: "See ya Sir Principal"

*They walk to the Transporter*

Jon: "Okay...we're here...on a weird planet"

Garette: "Oh please Jon, we're on Forest 1, Pioneer 69 should be floating above the skies in Central Dome"

Jon: "Yeah, I know, just wanted to get my dramatic side showing off a little bit"

*Soon they arrive to Pioneer69*

Jon: "Okay, we're here"

Guards: "Have you have any Pioneer69 Section ID's?"

Jon: "Pioneer 69 Section ID's!? Oh you mean our ID's"

*Shows Whitill to Guard*

Guards: "Sorry, this Section ID is from Pioneer44 not Pioneer69, once you have a 69 ID, then come and show it to us"

Jon: "Where could we find one?"

Garette: "I heard they were on Beach32, they are extremely rare"

Jon: "WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Garette: "yeah, and i've educated a little bit"

Jon: "Congrats on that, but we can't go to Beach32...we haven't UNLOCKED it yet"

Garette: "Well, let's go back to Pioneer44"

*They go back*

Jon: "Hey Principal, can we get our locations back PLEASE!??"

Principal: *turns to them*

4 Strangers: *looks at them*

Jon: "Who are these?"

Principal: "They are my new recruits...Jon, Garette, Jeremy, and Liz meet Harold the FOmar, Jasper the RAmar, Lindi the HUcaseal, and Shannon the FOnewearl"

Shannon: "Hi"

Lindi: "Hey"

Jasper: "Hello"

Harold: "Howdy"

*Everyone looks at Harold oddly*

Harold: *looks at them* What? You guys said all the greeting words" *shrugs*

Lindi: "oookay?.......so how you guys been?"

Jon: "Me...well I just came here to talk to the Principal....ALONE"

*They go out to the transporter*

Jon: "So can we ask for your help?"

Principal: "Sorry guys"

Jon: "Do you have any 69 ID's PLEASE?"

Principal: "Sorry I only have from 4-50 ID's"

Jon: "Damnit, we won't have any money" *Leaves outside as the 4 people come in*

Jon: "Well maybe my dad will allow us to have some jobs"

Liz: "That's an excellent idea"

*They go to Rile's Apartment*

Jon: *knocks on door* "My dad should be here on 6:34pm's"

*Noone answers* "Where is he?"

Rile's Servant: *right next to Rile's Door* Hello, i'm Clara, your father has left me here to make sure noone robs his house, what are you guys doing here?"

Jon: "Well, I just wanted to ask for a job from my dad"

Clara: "Well, he has left to the Bar on Beach 12, you guys can meet up to him there"

Jon: "I don't have UNLOCKED the beach...ah well, we'll just have to live like bums...*looks at Clara* You don't happen to have a 69 ID?"

Clara: "Sorry but i'm not a fighter"

Jon: "Oh..okay thanks for your help anyways"

Garette: "There will always be a Guild for us to have jobs right?"

Jon: "That's it, we can get Guild jobs from the Hunter's Guild so we can buy food, clothes, and a house so we can live in, Garette...YOUR A GENIUS..well part Genius actually"

Garette: "So iv'e been told"

Jon: "Okay guys, lets have the rest of our leftover Meseta to rest in the Inn, then tomorrow, we freshen up *makes hand into a fist* and we go do Guild jobs!"

(End of Chapter, continued in next chapter)

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Well that's the end of this fanfiction, I will be starting another one later.