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HAYABUSA-FMW-
Nov 6, 2006, 03:18 AM
Its just a peer review.

A simple read over for a classmate's paper by a classmate.

You're not a teacher and are in the same class, so your job isn't to grade papers. It isn't to re-write the paper how you would, in your mind, want it to be written.

I peer reviewed your papers and they weren't that great, as you're no grammar expert yourself, so covering mine with what you think are corrections and advising me to 'see teacher for help' underlined, twice, is pretty insulting.

The corrections you made didn't add up. Plurals being thrown out the window with proper nouns and adverbs replaced, changing the sentence so its unreadable.

I didn't do terrible on my previous papers, in fact I got A's. My final drafts were revamped from my rough drafts and were apparently up to par. We're both in the same class to learn to write better. You wouldn't be here if your writing was already perfect.

Marking words on my paper as "are these real words?" is an attempt at a put down or insult but its also pretty funny.

"apt"
"vying" coming from "vie"

Look them up.