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[SPOILER-BOX]". . . Branwyn’s tendency to put in the bare-minimum had resulted in her being overlooked for various responsibilities, such as the coordination of multi-party operations. Recently,...

At face value there are a lot of parents and their children involved and the story revolves around the children, is my guess.

Sounds good. Kinda surprised Stukasa hasn't done the same. Though I would understand if it was due to it being hard to contain spoilers, or having to update it often, haha. Gives people an idea of...

[SPOILER-BOX]I imagine the bold text is her yelling that in her head. Also every time I see someone speak quickly i'm always expecting someone to say "slow down" at some point, haha. With it being...

Interesting that you didn't go with the beast look. [SPOILER-BOX]Also interesting to see to another character perspective. Its nice that Teresa and her stayed in touched. Makes me wonder what else...

I somehow missed this. Though I guess that was because it was one of those times where it says there is a lot of new posts when there weren't, or there are new posts but it says i've already read...

Yeb, the only reason you would do it first is if you wanted to put something in people's minds before they got into a chapter, or for them to not get the wrong idea afterwards.[SPOILER-BOX]The first...

Its all good. I'm sure the quality will be much better because of it, but I like what you're doing. Not really going for the grand story, but still building a foundation to stack upon. If not to put...

Fun times. Makes me wonder who will get third person limited and who gets third person omniscient

Heh, the rare second person. What made you decide to go first person with the expanded chapter?

An interesting start, I've always wondered what sort of stories you had for all your characters and shall stay tuned for more.