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It is starting to look better! :)

Consider revising: "Since then, there has not been a single piece of substantial news regarding the game's release."
Revision: "Since then, there has not been...

I suggest you remove " Many fans have become disheartened and jaded, wondering if the silence means that the game may never see release."

And replace it with "Many fans are excited for the...

Lol. Agreed, but, suggestions and examples were provided. Subject it to scholarly review. Remove the weasel-wording. Be polite and succinct. Revise.

I'm with you on this, but I strongly suggest...

I'm not turning anything around, ha. I'm simply quoting this awfully written petition. Run it by a scholar, or any English or language department. It's riddled with weasel words.

Letting sega...

But you are 'checking up on them' while also saying "Phantasy Star Online's western fanbase disenchanted and grasping at what little hope they have about the game."

[I]which is not true.
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This thing reads like Bull$€£¥. If you're "disenchanted and grasping at what little hope [you] have about the game," then why are you petitioning its release.

What you're doing here is rude. Be...