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That's why it's great to comment on any little thing that comes to mind while you read. Seeing how your thoughts compare with other's makes the story telling more interesting.

[spoiler-box]This one is...kinda strange. Two weird characters going head to head. The fact that I haven't really seen Double in-game adds to that, this would probably make more sense to me if I...

That's probably the best way to start, doing the most fun and interesting things first. It might screw you over if you decide to make a full thing of it, but that's better than you not being able to...

Ack, I'm having such a tough time finding responses to your chapters. I just read your second, and I can't really pick anything apart in each.
I can say that, because you just throw us right in,...