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Yesss! PSOW is back online! Happy to see it back. :D

Yeah, I totally agree that if you're not feeling it then it may be for the best just to wait it out for a more "gripping" story idea.

And I do think it would be good if you're able to release the...

[SPOILER-BOX]Wow, coco with the badass creative way to kill the Baize! :O She's also extremely selfless, and that sure was a close battle with the sentry! I'm surprised Aoto wasn't watching her more...

[SPOILER-BOX]Ack, such a cliffhanger! Coco can be so reckless! ;__;

Anyway, it was an action packed chapter! Galatea Mark-5 was a nice surprise, and that was an entertaining little exchange with...

[SPOILER-BOX]I had a lot of fun reading this new side story as well, awesome job! :D Also I had mixed feelings about the way it ended as a dream too. It made everything connected but the mood of the...

[SPOILER-BOX]I know! I needed a few minutes inbetween reading where I could just let it "sink in". Especially Warren's decapitation and the head proceeding to roll around in front of his comrades. I...

[SPOILER-BOX]Perfect song to start the fight! Starting off with the orchestral to build it up while they're talking, then goes straight into rock when they begin the epic battle and a great finale...

[SPOILER-BOX]Wow, that was an extremely exciting chapter! I loved the high energy music which fits equally great with dramatic high-tension dialogue and action scenes. Like Polly mentioned, it was a...

No worries, we all understand. No one is going to mind if you take a bit of time to improve the quality of your work. We have extremely high expectations with every chapter you release by now! :lol:...

I read this back on Saturday but didn't get a chance to comment till now... ^^;

[SPOILER-BOX]Hard to add much more than what has already been said, so I'll start by echoing other people by saying...

[SPOILER-BOX]Yikes! Close calls all-around and leaving at such a cliffhanger. ^^; I think it was a good length though, plus I liked the way it switched to Croix's perspective as a way to keep the...

[SPOILER-BOX]I liked the way you cut the edge of the tension with a tad of pervyness. (Especially with that scene between Coco x Nedra~ :lol: )

Fantastic songs to fit the atmosphere this chapter...

[SPOILER-BOX]Haha, woohoo! As soon as they decided to go to a fiery planet I was wondering if they'd have the fun of finding a Vol dragon. :D Excitingly tense chase scene, I liked the way the high...

[SPOILER-BOX]Ohhhhh, that Aoto and Coco scene was great! A bit of lighthearted hilariously cheese-y humor and then it ended up as a really nice sweet scene. ^^

Nice taste in the style of music,...

I agree that the pics are a nice touch in each chapter to help visualize the characters. :)

Anyway for me personally I don't think it's necessary to have a summary recap at the beginning of each...

[SPOILER-BOX]Having her covered in Gwanahda guts was the absolute best way this chapter could end. Such a silly song to go with the imagery too. :lol:

Very intense fight with the Gwanahda where...

This chapter was great! It had it all, plot, action, characters, and comedy. Just super entertaining all-around! :D Solid pacing, It feels like every part was written at the right length. It honestly...

HAHAHA, OH MY GOD! When she met her new team, set-up with that silly music, it was just the perfect introduction! I'm sure any scene with that group will be hilarious! Quite an eccentric set of...

[SPOILER-BOX]Suspenseful fight! :O Really cool use of creative tactics and the descriptions of the action were really engaging. Plus the playful dialogue at the beginning was fun too. As others have...

Woohoo! I was excited to see where you went with the new chapter! It really shows the badass side of Cocona after you delved into her backstory in the last chapter.

Track 14 was awesome! I'd say...

Wow amazing! That Coco turned out incredible. :O Cute, very cute, yet awesome, fits her char perfectly! :D

Personally I'd say the first version "pops" better and appears more crisp(even though the...

Great new chapter! Hehe, I was very excited to read a new one and it didn't disappoint! :D

The dialogue was engaging to read plus the second part of the story was nicely-written to give us some...

Thanks for the greeting! Looks like a fun forum and a nice place to meet friends. ^^

I also checked out the rules as well~ ;)

Greetings! My name is BloodmageR... or Blood... or Major Blood. You can choose whichever way to call me. ;D

I'm from Canada and my interests include anime, manga, games, touhou, VNs, along with...

Yeah I'd agree with the others that you have some great descriptive writing in your story. Perfectly set-up intro to get the reader engaged in the race. Plus your dialogue is well-written and...