PSZ: 12 Days of Christmas! ^_^

[Monogeo]

>skips straight to the last verse and burts out in song!<

On the 12th day of Christmas, the Tower gave to me:
Twelve Rappies rap'n
Eleven Humans humming
Ten Helions a-heckling
Nine CASTs krumping
Eight Newmens nuking
Seven Swords a-swinging
Six Korses crashing
Five Divine Units
Four Foie Hazes
Three Rappy Souls
Too many missiles
and a Saikouondo for me XD

*hops* Yep, the Eternal Tower makes me CrAzY @_@;
-M cackles madly at his DS, 'Gimme MY PSYCHO WAND!!!' then quietly goes back to playing

[pso_crash]

"Nine CASTs krumping "

what? lol

"Too many missiles"

I liked that one

[DanMalak]

All 'Twas well untill 'Five Divine Units' xD.

Other than that, bravo.

[maybe 'Five Finjers falling?] =P

[xanthaze]

that is a good idea...lol oh and how about:
five forces fleeing
or something about force mothers... can't think of one though...

[StaticWings19]

no. the five divine units are fine.

have you people never heard the twelve days of christmas? five is when they break the pattern

cause.. ya know. 5 golden rigngs fits the pattern as well as divine units

[ブルーベリー]

Divine is like D'vine it doesn't fit poetically. Nobody separates Divi as "Dee Vai". Also, Rings is one syllable, and units is two.

So it has to be. 1 2 1 syllable wise, you have "Five Divine Units) which is 1 1 2.

Also, Haze is plural for Haze.. so Hazes is wrong.

[ブルーベリー]

So I will rewrite it correctly.

CORRECTIONS
Twelve Rappies rap'n Boomas Rap'n.
Eleven Humans Humars Humming.
Ten Helions a-heckling mayors rambling.
Nine OGIs krumping dieing.
Eight Newmens nuking mooning.
Seven Swords a-swinging
Six Korses crashing raging.
Five Divine Units FIVE PHOTON DROPS
Four Foie Hazes Haze.
Three Rappy Souls
Too many missiles Two broke shoulder buttons.
and a Saikouondo PSY-CHO- WAND for me XD

REWROTE

Twelve Boomas Rapn'.
Eleven Humars Humping.
Ten Mayors Bawwing.
Nine Ogis Dieing.
Eight Newmans Mooning.
Seven Swords a-Swinging.
Six Korses Raging.
FIVE PHOTON DROPS
Four Foie Haze
Three Rappy Souls
Two Broken Soulder Buttons
AND A PSYCHO WAND FOR ME.

[lavisblade]

Lul I like the "CASTs exploding" and the "two broke shoulder buttons" though I think it sounds kinda off...just my opinion though

[ブルーベリー]

It is off but its the most truth I could put there.

Also I changed it to Ogis Dieing for further truth.

[ironman24682]

and a Saikouondo PSY-CHO- WAND for me XD

Ha ha win! XD