Code Lyoko fans, i need help. (Development)

[Linka]

ok. the title may have got you wondering wtf i need help with. i'd be wondering too, if i wasn't me. so, anyway. for months, perhaps a year now, i've been slowly developing a sort of alternate version to everything from the show Code Lyoko, which i consider a 'euro-anime', since it originated in europe and not japan, but was still quite anime-like.

i really just need ideas for new monsters, and looks for afew characters. some need looks for outside the alternate Lyoko, some need looks for in it. i'll post everything i have so far...straight from the notepad file.

first up, the team itsself. i reversed the gender ratio of the original team, so it's three girls two guys. each one that actually fights has a weapon, a power[tower-deactivation isn't technically a power. it's more of something do-able due to a specific characteristic of the person.], and three to five techniques for their weapon. btw, wall of text!

tower deactivator:
name:Aulora Ivala
sex:F
age:18
Lyoko powers:Phantom Flight[makes Aulora and the others invisible, but not unhearable to enemies.]
Weapon Moves: Tornado Arrow[arrow spins at 500 mph, creating immense air force, and penetration power, so if enemy isn't killed by the arrow, or arrow narrowly misses, the enemy gets sent flying by the unreal wind force.], Arrow Shotgun[turn bow sideways, and fire five arrows simultaneously in a wide spread], PDH Arrows[Proximity-Detonation Homing Arrows. these special arrows seek out enemies automatically, and detonate upon either impact, or close enough distance to still deliver its punch.]
weapon/s:bow & photon arrows
appearance:blonde hair with light-blue streaks through it forming an x over the top, D-cup chest, white skin, blue eyes. typically wears a white medium-sleeve shirt, with a pink half-shirt over that that's left only halfway buttoned up, with an orange frilly skirt that just barely covers her orange panties. height, about 5'6" to 6'. weight, about 130 pounds, maybe 120.
Lyoko form: orange angel wings, orange hair with bright and vibrant neon pink lines through it forming the Lyoko symbol, with her normal outfit but with the shirt being skin-tight with long sleeves and colored the same pink as the Lyoko emblem in her hair, plus the half shirt being the same highly-vibrant orange as her hair, her shoes becoming skin-tight orange leggings, and her skirt lengthening an inch, with added semi transparency, while the leggings also covering where her panties would be.
Personality: kind, with a slight mischevious quirk, and a love of flirting. also a total tease towards those she loves.

close combat specialist:
name:Roka Zilta
sex:M
age:19
Lyoko Power:Ronin War Cry[can let out a powerful war cry to enhance own and all ally speed, defense, and reaction time for thirty minutes. only usable once per trip to Lyoko.]
Weapon Moves:Sonicboom[slicing wave projectile launched and formed due to a sword slash slicing apart the air, creating a directed razor-thin sonic blade upon the air clashing back together to refill the open gap.], Split Wave[twin blades of slicing air sent in a V pattern ahead], Sword Quake[stab ground to cause a fissure to form below enemies ahead, dropping them into digital sea]
weapon/s:Thief katana[katana-bladed 'Thief Sword'.]
appearance:
Lyoko appearance:
Personality:serious, but also loves jokes...though sucks at making them. infamous for cracking a 'yo momma' joke at the wrong moment...and usually picks a bad one.

long-range specialist:
name:Miara Hakara
sex:F
age:17
Lyoko power:freeze frame[isolated temporal stasis]
Weapon Moves: Boomerazor Shot[circular adjustable-trajectory bladed projectiles], Trick Shot[shot goes towards intended foe, then vanishes and appears near enemy again from another angle.], Sweeping Laser[fire a continuous energy beam from rifle that can be swept across enemies]
weapon/s:laser snipe, laser kunai
appearance:
Lyoko appearance:white, skin-tight sniper suit usable both above and below ground. the suit is designed to allow excess heat to escape, so hot environments and scorching sun doesnt cause heat stroke.
personality:think Yuki Nagato from The Melancholy of haruhi Suzumiya. essentially devoid of emotion, but not quite as thoroughly. occasionally cracks a smile, or lets slip a hint of emotion around idiotic jokesters.[she's looking at you, Odd Delarobia!]

special tactics specialist:
name:Tyoza Okiva
sex:M
age:18
Lyoko Power:Aerial Master[can jump in midair up to three times before landing, and can stand on air for limited periods of time]
Weapon Skills:Hookchain Barrier[spin HC blades to create a big defensive wall], Bladed Twister[extend blades out five feet, and spin to make a tornado],Seismic Slam[attaches HC blades to an airborn enemy, and uses kinetic rotation momentum to launch self high into the air, before utilizing three Aerial Master jumps, then spinning in place, and sending hooked foe hurling into the ground. can be combo'd with Miara's Boomerblade Disk Shot, along with Roka's Sonicboom, to create a combo move.]
combo move: Galactic Meteor Crash[use a combination of clever timing with prepping of Seismic Slam to take a large enemy to stratosphere, before flinging at extreme kinetic rotation speeds at a group of enemies. upon terminal velocity being achieved by flung enemy, flung foe is dice into a perfect cube grid pattern with Boomerblade Disk Shots, and allowing Roka to cause the cubed foe's parts to scatter with precise timing via the air gust from a Sonicboom sent right behind the projectile-enemy, causing it to scatter like a rain of shrapnel for incredible barrage damage.]
weapon:Hookchain Blade x2[arm mounted hookshots with manually retractable and extendable bladed tips]
appearance:
Lyoko appearance:think viking mixed with a hint of samurai. samurai under the armor via light chainmail, but viking with a helmet that covers across the bridge of the nose, but no lower...with some bits of plate armor on the arms, legs, and torso. not much, though.
personality:pervert who really needs to shut his mouth half the time. often the cause of mass facepalming. also tends to say perverted stuff just to make couples blush, cause it amuses him.[Tyoza's looking at you, Jeremy Belqua and Aelita Hopper! oh...and occasionally you two as well, Ulrich Stern and Yumi Ishiyama!]

tech handler:
name:Luna Blossola
sex:F
age:18
IQ:let's just say even Franz Hopper would be impressed.
appearance:hair color is a vivid shade of blue[for exact shade, pull up Paint, go to 'edit colors', and set red to 0, with blue and green at 255 each, sat at 240, hue at 120, and lum at 120.], with eyes looking to be an icy blue, wears a blouse over her E-cup breasts that covers to just above her naval[belly button], and is the same shade of blue as her hair, with a short frilly skirt of the same color, and sandals of the same color...worn over matching socks. also, she's 5'5", approximately 125 pounds.
Lyoko appearance:none[works the Supercomputer. doesnt fight monsters in Lyoko.]
personality:nice, a taaad shy, and alittle naive sometimes. rumored to be a lesbian, and in love with Aulora. rumor can be blamed on Tyoza's idiotic pervert mind.

as you can see, Roka needs both appearance types set. i was thinking something of a thief/samurai hybrid...but i'm not really sure how to describe it. as for Miara's civilian form, try something that fits. Tyoza's...unsure at the moment. something that fits his personality, and would make sense based on his Lyoko form as well. i'll list the monsters i've got so far in the next post, and the alternate Lyoko's...what was it?...uhm...6, or was it 7 sectors? oh wait. it was 9. yeah, 9. four more than the original.

[Linka]

and now for the monsters, starting with their source. hardcore fans may get the reference behind its name.

C.A.R.T.H.A.G.E.:a multi-agent bioprogram designed to infiltrate networks, and eradicate viruses through electrobiological assault on any computer found capable of transmitting a virus. program was buggy, and attacked everything on computers it was tested on harshly enough to make several of the test PC's explode. was eventually placed in a modified copy of Lyoko, and contained through a near-infinite amount of security ensuring CARTHAGE couldn't damage the supercomputer containing the modified Lyoko, or escape onto the internet and cause widespread damage.
Carthaginian Monsters:
Krikoro:a crab-like monster first made by CARTHAGE as a test to see if it could find an indirect way to attack Lyoko. weakpoint is a Lyoko emblem on the top of its shell. 20 LP, ATK 20.[LP, or Life Points, is amount of damage needing to be dealt if a listed weak point isnt struck in order to destroy monster. ATP, or Attack Power, is attack power of monster's strikes, and the number is equal to amount of damage dealt. meaning, an ATP 20 rating would mean a monster deals 20 damage per hit.]

Wasps:like XANA's Hornets in origin, only more based off the normal wasp. unlike a Hornet, Carthaginian Wasps don't fire lasers. they sting directly, like an earth wasp would. 10 LP. 20 ATP, SpcEff Psn.[SpcEff, or Special Effect, indicates a special effect of each attack from a monster. Psn means each attack has a chance of inflicting a poison status ailment, which will slowly eat at the afflicted's LP until there's only 10 left.]

Gigas Walker:a walking quadropedal tank.[quadropedal=four-legged.] carries a very thin energy burst cannon on its back, capable of firing massive energy blasts twice the monster's own body size. monster itsself is around 8' tall, and 8' from one leg joint to a diagonally-adjacent one, with each leg being 8' long. has a weak point marked with a Lyoko emblem on its underbelly, but this one is reenforced with a leather-like carapace, so best place to hit is the power core, which can be hit with any kind of energy projectile shot down the barrel of the energy burst cannon. hitting the core will instantly kill a Gigas Walker, and deal 20 to 50 points of damage to surrounding enemies, with the exact amount being based off precise distance from the blast's point of origin. one foot away, equals 50 damage. 3 feet, 30 damage. 5 feet, 20 damage. 6 feet or more, no damage. 80 LP, 30 if all hits are on emblem. ATK 200, attack cooldown 60 seconds, attack charge 120 seconds.


yeah, i don't have many. this is where i need the most help. and that's why i'm also listing the sectors. aside from 5, each and every one is new. one sounds familiar, but it's still kinda new. more of an update to an old one. also, each sector has some trick to it that will become an advantage to one team member, and a disadvantage to another...however these are irrelevant, and some i can't remember, so i'm not stating them.

Neo Lyoko sectors:
Savannah Sector:assaulted by strong wind, this grassy plain can be quite good for ambushes, formed by either side.

Blizzard Sector:this chilly sector is always covered in at least a foot of snow, and plagued by near-constant blizzard battering, leaving it cold enough that if you stay too long you'll lose LP.

Beach Sector:yes, its a beach. palm trees, sand, the ocean, its all here. along with 130 degree heat! so dont stay long, lest you burn to a crisp from all this sun, and begin to lose LP!

Underwater Sector: yeah, the digital sea's a normal sea now. except an ocean. gravity in this area is low enough you float in the water like it's space, but the physics otherwise are the same as with water. weapons and attacks are affected like gravity was normal. it's...weird.

Sector 5:...think original one from the show. only instead, it leads to sector 6 OR 7.

Sector 6, aka Heaven Sector:it's alot like sector 5, only...the traps/puzzles are harder, and sometimes instead of a puzzle there's a giant enemy...with a time limit for killing it. usually the time limit is quite lenient.

Sector 7, aka Hell Sector: polar opposite to sector 6. only fights here, always giant enemy, and the timer's just enough to win based on the skills of the fighters, and the monster. screw up in the fight, it's over.

Sector 8: another puzzle sector, only with a fight thrown in. the puzzle is sometimes the fight itsself. the fight aspect is usually fakes of the lyoko warriors trying to stop the originals from solving the room's puzzle. usually quite tricky, as well. also, techniques and powers are nullified here.

Sector 9, the core:where the core of Neo Lyoko resides. if enemies get in here...better fuckin defend it, damnit! cause if that core is destroyed, Neo Lyoko is bye-bye! and CARTHAGE is free! we don't want that, do we?

[Sayara]

What exactly did you need help with?

[Linka]

...it says it in the first post. also...who renamed my thread? it's not an AU! this team operates in the same universe, just a different location. different school, everything. not an AU thing.

[Sayara]

I moved it. I also apologize for renaming it AU. It seemed that was a correct match i guess not.

[Linka]

yeah. try asking, next time, please. i mean, i've never really pulled 'AU' on any idea. AT[alternate timeline], yes, but not AU.

anyway. for those who don't wanna sift through my wall of text...i need looks for Roka Zilta[civilian/outside Lyoko, and inside Lyoko ones.], Miara Hakara[just outside Lyoko], and Tyoza Okiva[outside only, as well]. also, i need more monsters. i'm not gonna reuse any of XANA's old monsters. new team, new threat, new Lyoko, gonna be new monsters as well.

also...i realize i forgot sectors 6 thru 9. x.x

[Linka]

sorry for double-post, but i added sectors 5 thru 9 to the list of sectors in the second post.

[Sord]

Ok, first off, what setting is your real world in? The original was supposed to be in France (it's a French anime afterall,) but your names seem predominantly Japanese influenced (Roka, Miara, and Tyoza.) Though only Roka I know is directly Japanese, and Tyoza is damn close to Gyoza (chinese dumpling, but still fairly popular in Japan now with its own version.) Miara Hakara just sounds like it was made up because you thought the "a" and "ara" sounds sound good repeating, though I could be wrong. Regardless, I'd rename everyone to be something more realistic, at the very least names that may have been heard somewhere (though Luna is fine, most people have usually heard the word and relate it to the moon.) Unique names do not equal good story telling (to many usually subtract from it, it becomes confusing to some people and just sticks out in a good setting like a sore thumb.)

Roka: Drop "ronin" from ronin war cry, and give him an over the top military uniform and a giant combat knife. You already have a dude wearing samurai chainmail, don't make two people with a heavy influence in the exact same thing. Even if Yumi was a geisha and Ulrich was a ninja those are still two very distinct things.

As per others physical appearance, you don't seem to have a whole lot of a mixed demographic. If this is in Japan or something that's one thing, if it's in France (or in another major European country for that matter) you're gonna have a much larger variety of racial profiles than you would see in Japan.

Also, E-cup breasts on a 125lb 5'5" character? I'm sorry, that's just stupid. Lower the cup size or make her significantly taller or heavier (or both.) And if you don't do any of that, at least make it a reoccurring joke or something that her breasts cause her enormous back pain or some shit.

[McLaughlin]

At that size I'd think her back would be causing her breast pain, what with them being dragged along the floor the entire time.

[Linka]

...ok, you know what? i'm not good at making this stuff up. this is the first time i've ever tried an entire team of characters. so lay off, alright? cut me some slack. really.

and, as for the names, if they sound japanese, sorry. i didn't have any specific place planned out for where this team would be. i was more focused on the team, the new monsters, and the new Lyoko. whether it makes sense or not, i don't care. i did this for fun.

also, Tyoza's not a samurai. i pegged him for something way different when you take his weapons into account, but i can't really think of any way to describe what kind of warrior he really is. grapple viking? i dunno. the helmet i think was viking inspired when i thought of it, so...meh.

as for Luna having E-cups, 125 pound weight, and 5'5 height...i'm not good at scaling in my head, alright? yeesh. besides. you think E's are bad? there's a woman out there. a real woman. with ALL NATURAL ZZZ-CUP BREASTS! i think in comparison, my messup is insignificant as all hell! so complain to god for letting a woman get breasts so big each weighs 40 pounds! or was it eighty? i cant recall what manswers said.

now, i put all this info and asked for help with afew characters looks, and finishing the list of monsters, hoping nobody would be a damn critic on the rest of the damn work. you wanna help? then help...on what i asked for help on. monsters, and the civilian and Lyoko looks of those that i haven't done it for so far.

also, while i'm at it, i'm surprised you didn't complain about my Gigas Walker monster. i realize it might be overpowered, but i intend for it to only appear in the Hell Sector. so it actually fits.

so, if you really think you can do a better job...do it. i've spent months...possibly a year getting this far, working off and on with this project. why so long to get this far? i have other things i do, besides sit and think of Code Lyoko teams, and stuff.

*sighs*...so...can someone erase those two's posts? i was hoping to come back after watching Gurren Lagann and not have my surge of emotions ruined by a pair of critics. but, sadly, the world just gave my hopes the middle finger.