That's actually not correct. Enforcer had it right with "...amidst all manner of trees."
That said, as far as grammar and syntax go, there are a few comma splices and odd dialogue tags sprinkled throughout. Certain authors can get away with rampant bending of the rules and general disregard for what's commonly accepted as "correct" syntax (Thomas Pynchon comes immediately to mind), but it's always good to learn the rules before you go breaking them.
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