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    Default Darkers and Dragons.

    First i'd like to say I really enjoy reading all other fanficts here on my cell phone and it is a really good way to spend time waiting on something. That being said, I felt like contributing a fanfict too. I, however have newer written anything like a story before, except for some minor school work and that was not even in English. I have a few parts ready to put here on the forum. I'm not sure how long it will take for others after those parts.
    I've written everything on my cellphone as I've allot of time waiting for trains....
    My grammar is far from first class and I ran a quick typo/spelling check on it. But it might not be enough so if you see something that really twists the meaning please note it so I can edit it.
    All character names are either made up or players that have given approval(in a way). I still lack a title for this fanfict.
    A big first one to launch my new hobby. Also big wall 'o text because I don't get these spoilers to work here in this forum....

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    Part one. Prologue
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    part2. I used lines between most conversation parts and non conversation. Also unavoidable double post....
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    Like the new improvements. Will be interested in the upcoming prototype CAST city battle. As for a title, could go for something based on the ending or the climax.

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    Last part of the prologue. I stretched the lines even further this time for easier reading. It results in an even bigger wall 'o text though.
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    PS: I really enjoyed writting this part and ending of the proloque. Future chapters will revolve around planet Amduscia and the dragonkin. Thats why dragons in the title <.< *cough* I hope those who read this fanfict also enjoying it so far and comments are always welcome as it may help me improve my work.
    PSS: Spoilers why don't you work (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ ┬─┬ノ( º _ ºノ)
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    Good idea you have here, I'll be keeping an eye on this.
    PSO2 Characters

    Kais (Male CAST) Ship 9 Hu62 Fi46 Ra53 Gu65 Fo6 Te1 Br36
    Lilith Reiger (Female Deuman) Ship 9 Hu42 Fi1 Ra1 Gu1 Fo20 Te45 Br56

    Are we alive or just breathing?

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    Update later than i planned myself, but here is the first chapter in the Ambduscia arc.
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    After sega's notes I used Varder instead of a long thought Vardha.
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    Small part this time. I kinda lack the time to write with my projects I have.
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    finally get the spoilers to work


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    part 3
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    I'm getting a tad slow with writing. =/ Hope you all still like it so far.


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    part4
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    Been a while since I've visited the fanfiction part, had exams a week earlier so I didn't really spend anytime on this. No update since I seem to be unable to write something down eventhough I've replayed every action and line in my head multiple times......

    I've a nice song to fit Arc 1 though.


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