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    Blegh. Almost a month-long break. I'm ten months behind now. And I lost my ten page lead.
    Let's try this again.

    Extra on 6/20/17

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    Next chapter: Extra on July 4, 2017 'MERCA

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    Aw, no comment chain started by my comment? I wonder if it just wasn't that interesting.

    Extra on page 45 on July 4 U-S-A! U-S-A!

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    Next chapter: July 18 on page 45
    That's about, two weeks? That's a good amount of time between chapters. Seems like you need that amount of time to get everything looking good.
    And, your stuff does seem to have shot up in quality since you changed this format.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zorafim View Post
    Aw, no comment chain started by my comment? I wonder if it just wasn't that interesting.
    I mean it was what it was. Unless I want to rewrite the whole story, the only thing I can do is take it as a lesson and improve for the future. Also thanks.
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    Extra on July 18, 2017 on page 45

    Have you thought about naming your chapters something besides -Extra-, now that they're the main thing?

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    I did think about it, but lazy and figured it was better in the long run. Stays classy rather than the chance of lame titles. Also makes it easy to tell it apart since it was also kinda used during the main story.
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    Well if it helps, the best time to come up with a title is after you've completed the work, and want to summarize it in one word or phrase. It's not needed, and now it'll mess with your flow. But it does kinda make it hard for me to remember where I am without writing notes.
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    So, I've been meaning to read through this story for a while now, and have finally started! I've made it up to the end of Chapter XX's filler (I copied over the text from the posts to a pdf so I could read them on my Kindle during my lunch over the past couple of days [which unfortunately means I didn't get to listen to any of the music]; hope you don't mind).
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    Looking forward to continuing ahead.
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    Didn't expect that to happen but thank you for taking the time to read my story none the less. As far as music goes, what kind of writer would I be if music was the driving force of a story anyways? So I wouldn't worry about it, heh.
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