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    Default PSO2: Legend of Aki: REBIRTH [Updated 5/25/19]


    Hello and welcome to the official sequel to my "Legend of Aki" PSO2 fanfic! This is the follow-up to the story I wrote in 2013-2014 about my character Aki and her adventures as an ARKS soldier. (Note: If you haven't read my previous work, there's a link to the original thread below.) I know it's been a long time coming but I've been hard at work these past few months getting everything ready. Just like before, I plan on releasing once a week, usually Saturdays. And as always, thanks for visiting!

    * CHAPTER SELECTION *

    << SEASON 1 >>

    << SEASON 2 >>
    Spoiler!

    << SEASON 3 >>

    << SEASON 4 >>

    << THE ATHENA CHRONICLES >>

    CHRONICLE 01: THE GIRL WITH NO PAST
    - Chronicle 01.1 [12/2/17]
    - Chronicle 01.2 [12/9/17]
    - Chronicle 01.3 [12/16/17]
    - Chronicle 01.4 [12/23/17]
    - Chronicle 01.5 [12/30/17]
    - Chronicle 01.6 [1/6/18]

    CHRONICLE 02: TROUBLE IN PARADISE
    - Chronicle 02.1 [2/10/18]
    - Chronicle 02.2 [2/17/18]
    - Chronicle 02.3 [2/24/18]
    - Chronicle 02.4 [3/3/18]

    CHRONICLE 03: THE VIOLET AND THE ROSE
    - Chronicle 03.1 [4/28/18]
    - Chronicle 03.2 [5/5/18]
    - Chronicle 03.3 [5/12/18]
    - Chronicle 03.4 [5/19/18]
    - Chronicle 03.5 [5/26/18]
    - Chronicle 03.6 [6/2/18]
    - Chronicle 03.7 [6/9/18]
    - Chronicle 03.8 [6/16/18]
    - Chronicle 03.9 [6/23/18]

    CHRONICLE 04: PHANTOMS IN THE DARK
    - Chronicle 04.1 [8/25/18]
    - Chronicle 04.2 [9/1/18]
    - Chronicle 04.3 [9/8/18]
    - Chronicle 04.4 [9/15/18]
    - Chronicle 04.5 [9/22/18]
    - Chronicle 04.6 [9/29/18]
    - Chronicle 04.7 [10/6/18]
    - Chronicle 04.8 [10/14/18]

    CHRONICLE 05: DOWN THE RABBIT HOLE
    - Chronicle 05.1 [12/8/18]
    - Chronicle 05.2 [12/15/18]
    - Chronicle 05.3 [12/22/18]
    - Chronicle 05.4 [12/29/18]
    - Chronicle 05.5 [1/5/19]

    CHRONICLE 06: DEN OF WOLVES
    - Chronicle 06.1 [4/6/19]
    - Chronicle 06.2 [4/13/19]
    - Chronicle 06.3 [4/20/19]
    - Chronicle 06.4 [4/27/19]
    - Chronicle 06.5 [5/4/19]
    - Chronicle 06.6 [5/11/19]
    - Chronicle 06.7 [5/18/19]
    - Chronicle 06.8 [5/25/19]


    * REFERENCES *

    - PSO2: Legend of Aki [original thread]
    - Darker Bestiary
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    CHAPTER 1 [2/7/15]
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    Haven't even started reading yet,nor do I have the time atm, but I feel so hyped.


    MultiCore------------Male Cast~~~~~~~~~~~Moriah----------------Female Dewman
    Zyonyl----------------Male Newman~~~~~~~~Shilka ZSU-----------Female Cast
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    Did you try turning it off and on again?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sacrificial View Post
    Haven't even started reading yet,nor do I have the time atm, but I feel so hyped.
    That's okay, just read it when you have time. I appreciate the enthusiasm though!

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    Beautifully written. Your use of language was fantastic.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zorafim View Post
    Beautifully written. Your use of language was fantastic.
    Thanks! I had a lot of fun writing this one. It helped that I had a bunch of dramatic imagery to work with.

    By the way, are we ever going to see more of Levia's adventures...?

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    Curiously attractive for a fish man Zorafim's Avatar
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    That's right, you still need to see her in full, don't you? I'm working full time now, so I'm creatively drained when I get home. I've just gotta proofread this next chapter and see if it flows right before it's ready. But I can basically only work on the weekend now, if I have nothing else to do and if I have the mental energy. Maybe I'll be able to do more now, I just took a load off.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Zorafim View Post
    That's right, you still need to see her in full, don't you? I'm working full time now, so I'm creatively drained when I get home. I've just gotta proofread this next chapter and see if it flows right before it's ready. But I can basically only work on the weekend now, if I have nothing else to do and if I have the mental energy. Maybe I'll be able to do more now, I just took a load off.
    It'll be about 1.5 to 2 months before I write the part with Levia's cameo, but yes. I've already been thinking of possible alternatives in case you haven't released enough by then. I can either A) ask you to send me a couple paragraphs describing her in detail, B) reduce her role in my story somewhat, or C) improvise and hope my portrayal isn't too far off. xD

    I know what you mean about feeling creatively drained. I work full time and it's sometimes hard to find the time and the motivation to work on my story. What I end up having to do is to think about my story at work in between tasks so that when I come home I already have a good idea of what I want to write. The words flow more easily that way. It does sap a lot of my free time but I consider it worth the investment.

    P.S. I also asked about your story because I'm interested to see where it goes.

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    Curiously attractive for a fish man Zorafim's Avatar
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    I don't like option B).
    Despite my not doing much on the forums, I check it every day. If you want to go into details, that should be the best way to communicate.
    Of course, the best way to get Levia's personality might just be to use her partner card. I spent a bit of work on that, and while it's mostly set to be as good looking and non-subtle as possible, it might be good for an overview of her personality. Of course, that would require me logging in.
    I don't think I'll be done with her development in less than two months, especially considering this tame, not-important chapter took me 2 months by itself to write. So, there's that.

    The hardest part for me is actually just writing. I can think up what needs to happen pretty much on the spot, but actually converting from visuals to text is very difficult for me. The absolute worst is dialogue, since I need to get another person in my head and think like him.

    On the subject of the actual chapter,
    Spoiler!

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    @Zorafim: Are you even able to log in now? I had to jump through a few hoops to get my game working again after that fiasco last year.

    Let's talk more about Levia in private. I definitely need to know more about her appearance and personality when she's in the PSO2 era. Also, her motivation for being there!

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    Spoiler!
    To what aspect of Newmans are you referring?

    Newmans have always been my favorite race in the PS series. My characters in PSO and PSZ were Newmans. My first character in PSU was a Newman (see my signature pic). The character I played in the PSO2 Beta was Newman. If I had to describe why I like Newmans... it would definitely be the pointy ears. And the affinity for "magic."

    AFAIK there's no official Newman backstory in PSO2 so I had to improvise using what I knew from other PS games. In some sense that's a risk since I could be contradicted later, but as a writer sometimes it's better to take that risk--a small one, anyway--than play it safe.

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