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    It's very similar to Kuda's drawing, but that's because we think alike. We both have characters that wear Matrix jackets and I thought he pose would be good for showing off his swords.

    So here you go:





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    His left-hand sword reminds me of Cervantes's Nirvana sword.

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    Nice ness, I like how you have the body and how the clothes are detailed, with the wrinkles.

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    Nice work. I would have to say the profile of the face looks a bit odd when in conjunction with the body (the body is twisted towards the viewer). If the face was looking towards the viewer more, with the right eye visable as well, it would work better. Also the stance of the feet is a bit off.

    Detail work on the coat and clothing is nice though.

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    I'm very sorry Ness, but this is far too similar to Kuda's picture for me to believe that you had much input in it at all... at least you acknowledge it I guess



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    On 2005-06-15 14:24, Deathscythealpha wrote:
    Nice work. I would have to say the profile of the face looks a bit odd when in conjunction with the body (the body is twisted towards the viewer). If the face was looking towards the viewer more, with the right eye visable as well, it would work better. Also the stance of the feet is a bit off.

    Detail work on the coat and clothing is nice though.
    Thanks for the input, everyone.

    I noticed the thing about his head, too. Feet have always been diffcult for me as well. I plan on doing one in another pose.

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    Here's a color picture:



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    If you wanted a shiny saber, pencil lines repersenting the swords boundries won't cut it.

    Remember how a Jedis saber is totally line-less? And if there WAS a line it was of the color the saber is. Not black. That ruins the effect of the picture.

    "It looks cool this way, let's stop."

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