[Hunter_Daigoyin]

Okay, this is Hunter Daigoyin. I hope at least one person reads this, so here we go!


The Crimson Glare
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Chapter 1
History: The Past and the Present
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The setting is the Central Dome. In the central dome is an abundance of people, bickering among each other.
"I tell you doctor, there's an abnormal growth of photon energy right beneath our feet!"
"There's nothing to fear, this will pass." the doctor, a Newman, answered.
"But doc!"
"Look, nothing's going to happen."
"Dr. Black--"
"I told you not to worry. Besides, you're a bodyguard, you shouldn't worry about it."
"Remember the dealings of Dr. Osto? He's not faring so well with Beta772"
"What does that have to do with anything?"
The bodyguard had a look of terror. "What if... it has something to do with the ruins?"
"Poppycock!" The doctor adjusted his eyeglasses. "There's nothing down there."
"You haven't been there..." the bodyguard trembled. "Everything there, it's overwhelming! The monsters--"
"There are no--" An earthquake struck. The surrounding shockwave surrounded the area.
"DOC!!!"
"IT CAN'T BE!"
The doctor was down on the ground, when a tannish shoe was at his head, which kicked him back to the wall.
"Who the... no... not... you..." The doctor collapsed.
The bodyguard was staring a crimson stare at the Doctor, behind him, a shadow of dark proportions...
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Pioneer 2 has reached the orbit of Ragol.
"Attention all passengers," a voice over the loudspeaker announced, "we have reached Ragol, I repeat, we have reached Ragol"
A young FOnewearl girl got up from her bed. She had a blue-and-white costume, the light reflecting off her brown eyes. Half-asleep, she went over to the bathroom, missing the door by an inch.
"Ouch, why does the doc move this door?" she muttered while washing her face. From there she rushed to the Hunters Guild.
"Excuse me, but have you seen Dr. Whitill?"
"No young miss, but I've seen his androids, K-Type 01 and Tipe 0."
"Okay then." The FOnewearl nodded and waved in a childlike gesture. She then ran into who she looked for, a RAcaseal with pink-and-yellow "hair" hanging down in a ponytail and a pink costume, a with skin plating that would make anyone mistake her for a human.
"Do you need to see Master Whitill?"
"Yes Kyako, where is he?"
"He's in the shop, having a tussle with someone."
"Not again... let's go Kyako."
"Yes Mistress Relana."
Before they got to the shop, though, a HUmar with a purple costume and medium-length turquoise hair stopped them.
"Well well well, what are two cute girls doing here?" The HUmar stuck out his arm in handshake gesture. The two just looked at him.
"Er..." Relana said in dumbfounded emotion, "who are you?"
The HUmar stuck his middle and index fingers out. "I am the hero of the helpless, I assist all who need it, I am the legendary Marth!" Marth then got whacked in the head by Relana.
"Do you have to be an idiot?"
"That was uncalled for..."
Marth and the two girls parted ways when a tantrum was thrown in the shop.
"WHAT!?!?! THAT WAS MINE!!!"
"I DON'T THINK SO"
"WANNA PICK A FIGHT!"
"HAH, BRING IT ON!"
Relana heard from behind the door. "This is gonna be a long day..."
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Whatdya think? Personally, I'd do more, but I need to remember the description of one of the characters, namely Dr. Whitill. *whacks own head*

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[SuzukaCC]

Intesting start, keep it up =^_^=

[Hunter_Daigoyin]

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Chapter 2
The Ear, The Eye, and the Fist
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"Aw, crud! I need to get back to Pioneer 2!" The voice came from a HUmar with teal hair covering his left eye and a ponytail in the back, with tan clothes. His opponent: the Sil Dragon.
"Okay, someone punched in the wrong coordinates for the teleporter."
The Sil Dragon dove into the ground. The HUmar ran past the first two dashes, but narrowly avoided the third spiral underground route.
"Okay that was close" he came to his senses and took out his Inferno Bazooka. When the Sil Dragon rose out of the ground, the HUmar ran back, waited until the dragon landed, and blasted it three times, taking it down.
"That...was harsh, frozen three times, almost out of TP, good thing I finished..." He panted and teleported back to Pioneer 2.
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Over at the shop, Relana and Kyako opened the door to find two newmen, FOnewms to be exact. The first one was dressed in red, red hat, and red hair. The second one was in a black costume, sporting fancy sunglasses. The tekker tried to break up the fight, but got a cane right in his face.
"AW SHUT UP!" shouted the black-clothed FOnewm
Kyako whacked the red-haired one. "Dr. Whitill, don't be a fool, what the heck are you arguing about?"
The red-haired newman turned around and looked at Kyako. "Kyako? What are you doing--"
"The question?"
"Oh. I found this baton--"
Relana interrupted. "Um, Doc, don't you remember I have a Demon's Baton?"
The doc stood still for a moment. "Uh, is that better?"
The other newman whacked the doc. "Well, duh, with a special attribute."
Relana gave an innocent greeting. "Um, sorry about the doc, he may be smart, but he doesn't know anything about weapons."
The black-draped newman looked at Relana. "Heh heh, I guess the old doc has to know something."
The doc held the other newman up by the costume. "OLD!?! I'M NOT A DAY OVER 26 YOU YOUNG JERK!!!"
"JERK!?! WHY YOU--" before the newman finished, the doc was knocked out by a blow from Relana.
Relana then resumed her innocent look. "I'm sorry about that. So what's your name?"
The other newman smiled. "It's Ryker"
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The forest, a lush place full of trees, grass, and your occasional hoard of Boomas. This particular hoard of Boomas happened to be marauding a FOmar and HUcast.
"Man, I hate beginning with training. Especially since I'm the trainer." said the FOmar, a shrimp in his standards with brown eyes, long brown hair, and an imperial-looking robe and hat.
"Master Whitill gave you the opportunity to help with his experiments." the HUcast spoke, An orange-and-black body with a point-tipped head.
"Yeah, the great Tipe 0, Dr. Whitill said 'training' and data analysis."
"Yes Rudolph, 'data analysis'"
Rudolph sighed. "You're hopeless." He knocked out some Boomas with a gifoie attack. On the other hand, Tipe 0 took out a few with daggers.
"Master Whitill sure didn't have any taste when looking for a hunter from the guild."
"WHAT!?!?! TAKE THAT BACK!"
A Hildebear dropped from the sky right on Rudolph.
"OUCH!!! YOU SON OF A--" He got up and killed the Hildebear with two Barta techniques.
"Okay, I take that back." Tipe 0 responded. "You're a little better than I thought."
"A LITTLE!?!?!"
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The HUmar walked to the shop after healing and went to the item shop.
"Excuse me, do you have some difluids?"
The shop person simply answered "yes."
"I'll take ten."
"Okay." The HUmar took the dimates and paid for them.
"Um..." the doc came through, "could you get of my back, it does hurt, you know."
The HUmar stepped back. "Oh crud, sorry about that."
Relana giggled. "Hey mister, what's your name?"
"It's Daigoyin"
"Daigoyin," the doctor said, "I believe I heard that name. Oh well..."
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Rudolph was gnawing on Tipe 0's head while the android walked over to the teleporter.
"Hey, take that back! You're only a beginner! I'm twice as good as you!"
Tipe 0 stood still at the boss teleporter. "Something seems wrong here."
"Duh, high photon energy where a huge monster is."
The two went into the teleporter (Well, Tipe 0 went in. Rudolph hung on gnawing Tipe 0's head again)

The room was unlike the room of the dragon. The dragon lay dead on the floor and a teleporter was behind it.
"...right" Rudolph reluctantly stated. I don't remember anything about the dragon defeated. "Let's just go."
When they reached the teleporter, the dragon re-emerged, whacking Rudolph and Tipe 0 to their knees.
"Oh! That was CHEAP!" Rudolph yelled.
"We seem outmatched."
"Oh, right, I can defeat this guy alone easily. Just follow my lead."

[CakeMan]

haha it feels like im seriously playing pso right now.

[Hunter_Daigoyin]

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Chapter 3
Danger A-Rye: Soul of a Hunter
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The dragon roared and flew up.
"Oh great," Rudolph scorned, "How are we going to reach it up there?"
"Well 'genius', maybe you could use a zonde attack to hit him." Tipe 0 responded with a scorn of his own.
The dragon then dove into the ground. It was heading toward Tipe 0 with his back turned. When Rudolph saw it, he dashed toward Tipe 0. "You dolt! Get out of the way!" Rudolph dove toward Tipe 0-- and hit his head on the android. "Ow, ow, oww... Never dive-bomb an android out of the way." The dragon collided into Tipe 0 and Rudolph, and Tipe 0 landed on Rudolph.
"Oww... I think you broke a rib." Rudolph stated in pain.
"I don't have ribs, I have metal parts."
"No, I meant my rib."
Rudolph got up, seemingly whole, when he barely dodged the second attack. Tipe 0 wasn't so lucky.
"You bucket of bolts! This isn't too hard to dodge when tried! Just run!"
Tipe 0, on the other hand, was weary. "Can't go on..."
"I can't believe you..." Rudolph rushed toward Tipe 0 and healed him. "Now shape up!"
They both jumped out of the way as the dragon passed by both of them.
"Now what?" Tipe 0 asked.
"Wait for it..."
The dragon re-emerged from the ground and sent a shockwave out from its landing.
"The thing's pretty weak now, aim for the legs, and I'll get the head."
Tipe 0 continuously whacked the feet of the dragon-- and it collapsed on him.
"You--"
"Yeah yeah, let me finish this, Tipe 0" Rudolph launched with a gibarta spell. The dragon struggled to get up, but once it did, it fell on its side (right on Tipe 0).
"Rudolph! I'll report this to Master Whitill!"
"Yeah, do that. I didn't want to train a cocky jerk anyhow!"
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Back at Pioneer 2, Daigoyin was starting to leave.
"Hey, where are you going, Daigoyin?" Dr. Whitill asked.
"I've got to... er, I'm not feeling well. I'm going to get some fresh air." Daigoyin went to the teleporter. But then Tipe 0 and Rudolph entered the shop.
"Hey, I've got something to complain about." came from both Rudolph and Tipe 0.
The doctor looked at them both. "Yes? Tipe 0, go first."
"Okay doctor, this guy here is lacking the responsibility for his assignment, letting the dragon land on me TWICE!"
"Okay, Rudolph, you next."
"Dr. Whitill, you android needs to be less cocky and more.. how should I say this, logical!"
The doc nodded. "Hm... well then..." Rudolph pulled his lower eyebrow down and stuck his tongue out at Tipe 0. "I'll say... Rudolph, you're Tipe 0's new trainer!"
"WHAT!?!" both the android and kid responded.
"I'd think more logically if I wasn't whacked twice and stood on, so that's my decision!"
Everyone fell flat on their face.
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Two men were discovering the water-filled caves. One was the HUmar known as Marth, but the other was a FOmar named Roy.
"Well Marth, I know the people from Black Paper are in this next room, so don't screw this up." Roy whispered.
"Oh what happened to that new girl, the one I saw higher above, oh..." Marth started to shout after, "Where have you gone my love!?!"
Roy clamped Marth's mouth shut. "I said don't screw this up."
They both heard voices from behind the door.
"Well, how is the plan?" a first voice came.
"We still need Dr. Osto's research to unlock the mystery of Beta772." another voice said.
"I know the info is over in No Man's Mines." the third voice, a woman, said.
Unfortunately, Marth recognized the voice and rushed in. "Heya sweetie! How are you doing this fine day?"
Roy looked down in disappointment. "I can't believe my brother does this..."
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Footsteps.
The patter of running over crumpled grass.
Two rangers are running across opposing sides of a rock in the forest.
"Drat that outlaw! She's gonna go down, I assure of it." The RAmar lifted a communicator. "Felici, I'm intercepting the outlaw, I found out her plan, she's gathering DNA from the creatures here for Black Paper." This particular ranger had decently long hair, a mechanical device covering his eye, a black cloth over his mouth, and a white, black, and faded turquoise getup. He rounded the corner and waited at the door. As he expected, the RAmarl opponent's black spiky hair, visor, and black costume came through the door-- right into a Visk 32W's shaft.
"Okay Whitful, you're caught.
Whitful didn't think so though. "Perhaps not..." she said as she quickly rushed behind the RAmar's back, aiming her own Visk point-blank. "Well, Dr. Mome--". The RAmar ducked down, slipping a pair of photon handcuffs on her. "Just because my name is Mome does not me you confuse me with that wimp."
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Back at the caves where Marth barged in, five people were discussing the situation.
"Who the heck are these jerks!?!" a RAmar named Tonzlar yelled.
"These guys are going to ruin our plans!" Tobokke, the HUmar, screamed.
"Someone stay behind and get rid of these pests!" The FOnewm, Mujo, ordered.
"Yolanda, do you know this jerk?" Anna wondered aloud.
"Unfortunately, I had a run-in with this guy earlier." The HUnewearl Yolanda answered. "Let me handle this."
Mujo looked at Yolanda. "Okay then, Yolanda, you handle these two. Make sure they don't pass."
"Got it Mujo." Yolanda let the rest leave, then locked the doors. "Okay, Marth you're going to pay for your lecherous behavior."
Roy looked surprised. "MARTH!?! YOU GIVE YOUR NAME TO EVERY GIRL YOU MEET!?! YOU IDIOT!"
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"No, I must run from him... He's gone mad, ludicrously mad!!!"
Kireek was running from a lethal enemy, closing fast. "No!!!" He pulled out his new Soul Banish and swept a life-stealing blow to the enemy, but did nothing. The latter of the two struck down with a Dragon Slayer, cutting Kireek apart with three slices. Then he walked over and crushed Kireek's head... with his foot. "The infamous black hound of Pioneer 2? He was nothing. I'm looking for more challenge, if no one on this measly planet can supply that much, I'd be best off spreading the darkness for my whims." As his dark aura strengthened. he stared with crimson eyes right into Kireek's leftover database. "Heh heh heh. GWA HA HA HA HA HA!!!"
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Well, after stall, third one up! Not to stall until I do the next one (I hope not)



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[CakeMan]

Mome =p nice fic, i like the movie feeling to it keep up the good work.

[Hunter_Daigoyin]

Movie feeling? I don't know what you mean, but I gues I'll keep that up

As for the story with Mome, my sister couldn't think of a name for the character, I don't know how she thinks. On the other hand, with Roy and Marth, let's just say too much SSB:M

I'd like more reviews please, if you're reading. I don't even know if people are reading.

[RavenTW]

Like I told you, shes' definately at the SSBM fangirl age. Anyway, this is pretty funny. That dude at the end sounded like one of my older characters.

[Hunter_Daigoyin]

*Relieved sigh* that was a harder one, still with lag. Oh well, it's here.

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Chapter 4:
The Dark Power Stalks Nearer
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The battle at the waterfall didn't start so well...
"MARTH, YOU IDIOT!!! HOW COULD BE THAT LECHEROUS!?! I'M ASHAMED TO CALL YOU MY BROTHER!!! MAYBE THIS WILL SNAP SOME SENSE INTO YOU!!!" Roy yelled as he punched Marth upside the head both ways repeatedly.
"Ow! Oh come on! Hey--wait--stop it! Ouch!" Marth responded with a massive amount of pain.
Yolanda looked in stupefied awe, thinking do those idiots even need to be held back? I don't know how they even advanced to this point!
Roy finished pummeling Marth and got up (while Marth lay dizzied from the many blows, mumbling something about black rappies).

"Well," Roy said, "now that I got this annoying pest out of the way, how about we start this." Roy went into a horizontal-staff-holding position with his Battle Verge, while Yolanda took out some Grass Assassin Sabers. "Well, whoever you are, let's get started. But I don't think a force can stop me." Roy snickered. "Then you are certainly underestimating the power of a force."
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Meanwhile, at the lava-filled caves above, a familiar group appeared...
"Master, what does this abnormally-high temperature room have to do with any of your studies?"
"Simple, this place holds the legendary Sange, within the heart of an enemy."
"Um... doc, how do you think we would find it if NONE OF US WOULD QUALIFY FOR IT!?!"
From Rudolph's shouting, the one's who spoke, Tipe 0 and Dr. Whitill, stepped back in surprise.
"Er... Rudolph," the doc responded in shock, "you never know who wants it. It's valued by many, and if we trade it in, we might get something good for it!" The doc laughed in idiotic maniacal laughter. Whitill stopped with Relana tapping his shoulder. "Um, doc, if the holder of the Sange, Zoke, died in the ruins, why should it be here?"
The doc quickly the subject. "Er... did I say the Sange? I meant gather info on sharks! That's what I meant!"
"What an idiot for a doc..." Rudolph scorned, followed by a whack in the head by Dr. Whitill. "What did you say? How about respecting your elders once in a while!?!"
Kyako interrupted the argument. "Excuse me Master Whitill, but shouldn't we worry about the Guil Sharks right behind us?"
"What?"
Kyako shot the three sharks and knocked them back. "...those ones."
Whitill took out a wand and tried to attack, but did nothing. "Idiot" Rudolph angrily ridiculed the doctor. "Wands are only for upping your magic skill. They are useless as weapons."
"Well, maybe this will help!" Whitill launched a Gizonde attack, killing the Guil Sharks. "They must be weak if I could kill them in one shot."
Kyako looked at the doc. "Well, there are stronger ones."
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Mome came back with Whitful in hand. "Well done, Mome" answered a RAmarl with a white-and-yellow camouflage costume. She flicked the back of her green hair back. "I see you got Whitful in hand."
"Yes Felici," Mome replied. "And about the money--"
"Yes, of course. 50/50, as I promised." Felici answered with a hint of seriousness.
"But why did you call me in for such an easy job?"
"Whitful had a track on me and may other bounty hunters. I thought if I got a mercenary that she didn't know to catch her in one shot, then she wouldn't know what hit her."
"I'm right here, y'know." Whitful snapped at Felici.
"Take the prisoner to the holding cells!" Felici yelled. Mome looked at Felici with that line and said "With that in mind, do you have any more jobs?" Felici didn't hesitate to respond. "Not at the moment." With a look of dissatisfaction, Mome took his money and left.
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Roy started to dash towards Yolanda, but was tripped. "Ha ha ha! What kind of attack was that!?! The one where you fall flat on your face? HA!" The force got back up and spat some water out. "Well, you seem to be very cocky. Perhaps I need to smack that sense out of you." Roy fired a foie shot at Yolanda. The spell went fast, but missed. "That was close..." Yolanda stated. She then used the G-Assassin's Sabers she held and hit Roy. He didn't respond well to that, but kept his composure. "YOU'RE BARELY HARMED!?!" Yolanda screamed in surprise. Roy grinned. "Well, that's being too modest." The FOmar then ran behind Yolanda and held a gun at her back. "With this I can easily paralyze you, then just defeat you, so give up or else."
Yolanda panicked. "O-o-okay! Go ahead!" With that, the doors opened.
"Okay now, Yolanda, leave, walk out of this room and leave us, or else. And don't turn back, or else."
Yolanda slowly stepped forward, then ran.
Roy snickered. "Heh, she didn't know it was only a plain lockgun."
At that moment, Marth got up. Woozily, he said "what happened? Was my love what knocked me out?"
Roy stamped on Marth
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Whitill's group ran into a forked road.
"Hm... maybe we should split up?" Rudolph said.
Whitill went into a thinking pose. "Very true... let me think--"
They stood there for two minutes.
"YOU DOLT!!! I'LL JUST TAKE THE LEFT WITH TIPE 0! Doc, just take the right with Kyako and Relana."
"Well... fine. Just don't kill yourself." the doc responded.
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Felici was reading some updates on her log. "Hm... okay. So today, Whitful was finally caught, with the cooperation of Mr. Mome. I've recently gotten a report about a surge of dark energy and the re-destruction of Kireek. Although I don't approve of the use of the Black Hound, this recent dark energy has me interested. I am bringing someone down to investigate along with me." Felici got a knock on her door. "Just come in, Raven."
A RAmarl came through the sliding door. "What did you call me for Felici?"
"We're going down to the first floor of the caves. There is a high dark energy signature there at the moment, and we're going to investigate."
"You do know this is dangerous, don't you?"
"Yes, and that's why I'm going to take someone else with me."
"Yes, but I have a bad feeling about this..."



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[RubyEclipse]

Well, it has been a long time since I looked back on this story, but I really have to say I love the character and emotion you put into your fic! Keep it up!