[CakeMan]

I:Sparks that ignites a Flame:I

"Hey Cakey what's up man."

"Huh? Oh it's just you Paperweight."

"Just Paperweight! I am Paperweight the greatest Hunter in existance."

"Yeah you want to prove it?"

"Against you Cakey? Umm.. Sorry I have a thing about hurting my freinds, and come on I'm a clan fighter not a solo fighter like you."

"Yeah what ever, you're the only one in your clan, that means you're a solo fighter."

"Hey don't be so cruel, you know I'm just looking for the best out there, I'm telling you Clan Burning will be the greatest clan ever."

"Yeah whatever."

In walked Suzuka Clan-Clan a beautiful Hunewearl, she walked toward the counter of .Netcade. As she walked many heads turned to glance in her direction, the male .Netcade costumers stared at her blood red hair.

"Hey aren't Newmans endangered?" Paperweight asked Sazuka.

"Yes."

"That's incredibly sad.... We should go repopulate your race then."

"Uhhh. Hey Cakey I need a computer."

"Yeah Suzuka of course, comp 27 is open."

Suzuka handed Cakey the 100 meseta, only to have Paperweight place his hand upon hers.

"Suzuka was your name right? We'll Suzuka how about you come see me fight at the battle's this weekend?"

"I thought you looked familiar. I've seen you there."

"You must have been mesmerized by my fighting skills."

"No. I noticed you asking a bunch of guys to join your clan."

"Yeah Clan Burning. Best clan on Pioneer 2"

"Yeah sure."

Suzuka glared at Paperweight for a second, then walked toward her computer to have a seat.

"Haha Cakey she wants me bad."

"yeah whatever."

"Look she's staring at me!"

"Thats becuase you're drooling."

"Huh, thats not drool, It's charm water."

A loud crash suddenly came from outside. Cakey and Paperweight grabed their weapons and rushed outside. To see four 2 Ramars and a humar pick on a all black Humar.

"You little punk. I'll whoop your ass if you don't give us our Meseta back." A Ramar told the black hunter.

"You couldn't even hit me" the black Humar replied.

The 2 ramars picked up there rifles and fired randomly at the black humar, untill the whole area was filled with smoke. But to be sure the 2 ramars searched the smoke for the black humar, they saw nothing, except a black shadow run behind them. The2 ramars began firing into the smoke hoping to hit the black humar. They began looking again and saw nothing until the smoke cleared, what they saw shocked them. All their shots fired had hit there humar partner.

"His speed is amazing Cakey, he reminds me of someone." Paperweight told Cakey.

"He is pretty fast."

"I didn't even see were he went."

"Look up."

The ramars looked up seeing the black humar falling from the sky. The black humar seemed like he would definetly hit the ramars, but instead he fell flat on his face.

"Hey Cakey what happened?.. Tell me I know you saw..." Paperweight asked.

"HEY RAMARS!" Cakey called.

"What do you want?"

"Here's your meseta."

"How did you get this?"

"I pulled it off of him when he ran past me."

"Thanks, I'll take this criminal with us to the police station now, who knows maybe theirs a bounty on his head. HAHAHAHA."

"No leave him."

"Who are you to tell us what to do?"

"If you don't I'll kill you both." Cakey reached for his S-Red Blade.

"Fine but if he steals from us again I'll kill you both."

The two ramars picked up their freind and left, ran off. Cakey then walked up to the black humar and picked him up and carried him inside. Cakey took the black hunter into the back room to let him rest.

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"Hey Cakey you still didn't tell me what happened." Paperweight asked once again.

"Remember the meseta Suzuka gave me?"

"Yeah Yeah!"

"I hit him in the head while he was on his way down."

"You took a hunter that fast down with just a handfull of meseta?"

"Yeah. No big deal."

The backroom door swung open. "where am I?" the black humar asked himself while holding his head.

"You're in my store."

"Oh."

"I could have turned you in you know."

"Why didn't you?"

"Your speed cuaght my attention. What is your name Kid?"

"Will you turn me in If I tell you?"

"Only if you promise me you won't steal again."

"It's my only income."

"I was in your posistion once too kid, but then I found out about the battles."

"Battles?"

"Yeah every friday night they hold battles downtown, it's a good way to earn meseta. You can fight solo or join a clan. I know you have the skills to fight there. So why don't you join?"

"Oh. but I really need the money today. I have to pay rent tommorow."

"You pay rent?"

"Yeah. No parents."

"I know how that is." Cakey and Paperweight replied

"How about you stay here in the store, and give me a quarter of your earnings at the battles?"

"Really you'd let me do that."

"On one condition."

"What is that?"

"You join my freinds clan burning."

"Hey I like that idea Cakey." Paperweight replied.

"Deal. I'll join Burning."

"Hey kid your name" Cakey asked.

"It's Jin, Jin D. Saga"

"Alright Jin you live here now"

Suzuka then got up off her computer screaming and crying. She then ran out of .Netcade crying and screaming.

"Hey Paperweight watch the store for a bit." Cakey asked.

"Hey wait let me get her."

"No you'll just make it worst."

Cakey ran out of the store looking for Suzuka. It was like she dissapeared. He searched for hours and nothing. He then gazed upon the top of a building to see a woman at the top leaning against the sky. Cakey then began climbing the sides of the building by jumping off the walls of the two nearest buildings. But it was to late she had jumped off, falling a few stories before Cakey cuaght her in mid-air and then crashing through a window.

"What are you doing Jumping like that... Wait you're not Suzuka."

"Are you an angel?"

"Angel?"

"Yes you have the wings of one."

"No, I saw you were going to jump so i saved you. Who are you anyway?"

"Juju, but who is Suzuka your girlfreind?"

"No just a freind. Why did you jump?"

"I didn't know I fell. I was just walking and I fell off."

"You're lying I can see it in your eyes."

"It's okay now really, but can I ask you a favor."

"What is it?"

"Can I possibly stay at your place."

"You too? I guess."

"Great take me there."
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"Hey Cakey your finaly back." Paperweight said.

"Yeah"

"And wow you brought a lady back. A beautiful lady I might add."

"Uh yeah."

"Hey were is Jin in the backroom sleeping."

"Hey Juju you can stay in the back room there."

"Why is Jin sleeping? It's early still."

"Well its like this we were just sparring, and the kid is really good. But i was pounding him and then he started moving really fast, and just fainted."

"That kid is different somehow. I need to know."

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"Huh, thats not drool, It's charm water."---Paperweight---


------------Recap-----------
Jin joins CLAN BURNING

=====Preview of next chapter====
Jin and Paperweight go into their first tag battle against Forces You can't Kill. Will the young Smadar and the wise Foie take down Clan Burning.... Find out next time in episode 2 The Fire Circle.[/center]




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[Neverwinter]

Nice, go back to uor application for your story and look at mine plz.

[SuzukaCC]

so far so good. looking forward to next chapter. =^_^= charm water?

[CakeMan]

II The Fire Circle II

The sun shined perfectly that day, everything through Jins eyes was perfect. Jin lived his life carefree, he had not a worry in the world. Jin had gotten out of his beg that morning to hear the ocean crashing on the shore of his nearby house. He walked down his hallway to see his mother on her knees crying.

"Whats wrong mom?"

"Your brother and father."

"Yeah what about them?"

"They just left last night."

"Left?"

"On Pioneer 1. They kept it from us this whole time. Here's the letter."

If you are reading this mother we are probably gone by now. The goverment has been planning for years to leave this planet. That is why we are gone, they need their best soldiers so we have no choice but to leave. I am sorry for leaving you two alone like this but I will not regret it, for you see our planet is dying and if we don't find a new planet to live on we will all die with it. Mother I know you will be crying when you read this letter, and I know father won't be there to comfort you. But you must stay strong for Jin's sake, mother there is something about Jin that makes him a great fighter, I don't know what it is yet but I want you to train him to find out. Mother try not to be too sad for their is a second ship leaving Ragol in three years, I want you two to take it so we will see each other once again.....your son Vyse.

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"Hey get up your sweating."

"Who are you?"

"I'm Juju I guess I will be your roomie for a while okay."

"Ohh"

Jin looked around him to only see the steril metal walls boxing him in. Jin wanted it back, he wished to be on solid ground, he was sick of seeing artificail rains and unnatural light. Jin wished to be home.

"HEY JIN" Paperweight crashed In screaming.

"What!"

"Sorry did I scare you?"

"No.. what do you want?"

"We have a battle today, we fight today. It's a anything goes fight till you can't fight no more match."

"Oh."

"Don't worry it shouldn't be to hard, it's just a couple of forces, we'll take them easy."

"FOrces?"

"Yeah umm. FOmars, they have low defense and HP, but they are pretty quick. So all we need to do is hit them a couple of times and we win."

"FOmars?"

"Wow you really are a clueless hunter aren't you, FO means Force or magic users and Mar is a tearm for a male human."

"Oh so they use magic."

"Yeah, they go by the name of FORCES U CANT KILL. They are a force by the name of Foie, and Smadar."

"Wait if you abreviate their clan name it spells FU..." Juju Interupted.

"Yeah, i know I saw it can we move on."

"Oh sorry."
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"Smadar have you been practicing your spells?"

"Yes, can't I go out and play grandpa."

"Im sorry boy, but we have a battle tonight. But if we win you can go out and play all next week."

"If we lose?"

"More training."

"Okay, who are we facing anyway grandpa?"

"Two Humars, meaning we can't be hit tonight."

"HUmars are really strong"

"But Humars my grandson, are really stupid, Humars usually boost their strength to the max and then they become incredibly slugish."

"I see so they will never even hit us."

"That is how I see it my boy."

"Hmmm Clan Burning, you picked a great name, for you will truely be burning tonight."

Smadar and his grandpa continued their training.

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Suzuka walked up to the door preparing to knock. She had been thinking of nothing but him for the entire week, seeing his image in her head day in and day out. Suzuka was hypnotized by images of them finaly being together, finaly being happy. All Suzuka had to do was knock and tell the man behind the door how she truely felt.

"What am I doing here." Suzuka thought to herself.

"He would never understand. I bet he wouldn't even look at me twice. How could I ever fall for someone like him, he's a hunter, if something were to happen to him, I would break. Why did I have to fall for a human, I'm not even sure what he'll say." Suzuka stood there for fifteen beats straight just thinking.

"I know I'll leave him a note. If he come's to see me fight tonight I'll tell him for sure how I feel. But if not, then I guess I was truely meant to be alone."

Suzuka took the note and stabed it to his door with an Amore Rose, someone had finaly found a use for it, and for Suzuka it was for her to show her true feelings. Suzuka then pounded the door and ran off.

"Tonight, we'll see what you truely think."
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Later that day...

"Hey Jin come on we better leave now." Paperweight yelled.

"Yeah hold on."

"I'm coming too" Juju yelled.

"Juju coming to see me fight."

"You and Cakey, fighters are so cute you know."

"I try my best to look better than the rest."

"Oh please" "oh please" Jin and Cakey said as they let out a sigh.

"Hey Cakey you coming too?"

"If I do come i'll come later. I have to close up first..."

"We'll be seeing you than Cakey." Paperweight said as he exited the door.

Cakey stood there alone for a while, clenching an item in his right pocket. "Should I go" Cakey thought to himself as he punched the wall.

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"Welcome Ladies and Gentleman. Tonight we have 4 very special matches. First up is the awsome twoblade style of clan TWIN SABERS versus the clan with a specail note in their songs for fighting CLAN BARD. Round two will be a bout between two dark and devious clans, that battle will be MIDNIGHT against DEMONS ROW. Our third match will consist of the rookie clan BURNING challanging the veteran Clan of FORCES U CAN'T KILL. The final match taking place tonight is between a gigantic Hucast BRUTUS versus a swift moving Hunewearl SUZUKA. Please try to contain your selves for tonight will be an amazing night." The anouncer told the crowd over the speakerphones.

The room for clan Burning was tiny with no chairs, no bed, and no food. Jin walked over to a corner of the room and sat down, Paperweight and Juju sat down next to him. Jin looked calm and relaxed while Paperweight began sweating intensesly.

"Jin are you OK?" Jube asked, but she got no reply.

"Paperweight are you okay?"

"Fine just fine"

"Are you sure? becuase you sure are sweating alot."

"This is how I prepare, you have to get your body slipery so your opponent cant get a hold of you."

"What am I saying. We have no stratagy other than to hit them, damnit. We're going to get killed out there." Paperweight thought to himself.

Clan Burning sat there in there dimly well lit room for about 50 beats without saying a word to each other. It was almost their time to fight, and thats when Jin got up.

"We are going to win."

"Huh" Paperweight replied.

"I can feel it."

"Really you think so."

"Of course."

A knocking came from the door. "hey team burning you guys are up."

"Your ready Paperweight." Jin asked.

"Yeah lets go."
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Jin and Paperweight aproached the stage were they would be fighting, while Juju waited out of the ring. On the other side of they saw a little blue haired boy, and an old man in the other corner.

"A brat and a old fart. Thats our opponents? god i'm going to kill these guys" Paper said cockily.

"Are you ready fighters.... Ready.......FIGHT!!!" Anounced the refere.

At that moment Paperweight rushed in to attack the old man leaving Jin behind. Paperweight swung wildly as Jin watched. Every swing Paperweight had dished was easily evaded and countered by the old force. "TACTIC ONE" the old force yelled out. The two forces ran around Paperweight casting Foie in his direction. Jin did nothing except watch his partner get pummeled by an incredible amount of Foie's. Jin ran in trying to attack the forces but he came up empty handed. The streaks left by the foies attack cuased a streaking image cuasing both Jin and Paperweight to be traped within the fire circle.

"Jin we're getting killed here."

"I have a plan."

"What's that?"

"Your Yamigarasu, stick it out."

Paperweight stuck his yamigarasu out, cuasing the old force to trip, sending him flying out of the ring. The old force was unconcious as he layed on the outside of the ring. "Grandpa Noo" Smadar cried out.

"You two did this, I now have to unleash my new technique on you two."

"Yeah go team burning." Juju said jumping up and down on the outside of the ring.

"Ahhh boobs" Smadar said as he gawked at the sight of Juju's bouncing breast.

"Paperweight hit now before it's too late."

"boooobies...." Paperweight replied also staring at Juju's jiggiling chesticles.

"Guess I have to do it myself." Jin said as he rushed into Smadar delivering the final blow, sending Smadar flying into the gates that kept the crowd from getting to close.

"People we have a winner, and that is CLAN BURNING."

Jin and Paperweight exited the stage, Paperweight still staring at Juju's chest.

"You three did great tonight, I'm really proud of you guys." Cakey said stepping out of a dark corner.

"Three?" Paperweight said shocked.

"Okay four, you, Jin, and Juju's boobs."

"My boobs?"

"Yeah. Obviously they distracted the opponent."

"Oh well a win's a win. Lets collect our meseta and celebrate." Paperweight told Cakey.

"Wait I want to see the next match. It's Suzuka fighting."

"Why do you want to see that?"

"Becuase I'm fighting her in three weeks."

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"Hmmm Clan Burning, you picked a great name, for you will truely be burning tonight."---Smadar---

------recap------
Clan Burning Defeats Clan Forces U Cant Kill

== Next Chapter==

The battle between Suzuka and the giant Brutus begins, but can it compare to the battle going on within Suzuka's heart? Will her lover appear, or will she be broken again....Find out next time in episode 3 the heart of ice...

[RavenTW]

When an idea for another fanfic comes along, remind me not to put a romance in it. Too many romances. But other than that, this is pretty good.

[BOC]

this is shaping up 2 be quite the story

go team burning!!!!

[Logical2u]

Great Story. Needs a few minor spelling corrections. Quite alot like real life though... cool!

[Hunter_Daigoyin]

Cool chapters. When do I come in?

And I have one thing to say about the fight in chapter 2.
...right
I never get distracted that way

[CakeMan]

III The Heart of IceIII

"In three weeks? Cakey you must be kidding." Paperweight replied. Paperweight was shocked but also glad that he would finally see Cakey fight.

"Yes, I haven't seen Suzuka fight before, and I want to see her style of fighting. Come on lets go find a seat."

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"We'll ladies and gentlemen, tonight has been an extrordinary night. But like they say, before the flam on a candle dies down, it flickers wildly, and following that saying we have saved you the best for last. On one side of the ring we have Brutus who has the strenght to turn stones into dust, while on the other end we have Suzuka who well, has the ability to look really good while fighting."

Cakey, Paperweight, Jube and Jin search the crowd for an available seat. Finally they found one next to a green haired hunter.

"I saw you two fight today." the green haired man told Paperweight.

"You mean you saw us win hehe."

"You call that winning? You two barely escaped death. If that woman over there's boobs weren't so bouncy you would have been killed."

"Are you saying Burning Clan is weak?"

"No I'm just saying your clan lacks stratagey. Something that cuased many clans to fall apart. Look what I'm trying to say is, let me join your clan."

"You in our clan? Ha you must be kidding yourself."

"Listen okay. You two may last through the preseason, but after the fourth week your clan will be a member short."

"That is true."

"Right, so let me in on your clan."

"Hmm alright.. But if you dissapoint me we'll drop you."

"Trust me you won't be dissapointed."

"So what's your name?"

"Daigoyin, I already know you two."

"Hey why don't you join us for dinner tonight?"

"Alright sounds good to me."

Paperweight and Daigoyin's attention returns to the ring as the match begins.
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"Where is he?" Suzuka thought to her self. Searching the crowd for the man in her heart. She stood there like a rock just looking, but she came up with nothing.

"Okay little girl, it's time to play." Brutus tuanted Suzuka.

Brutus charged Suzuka swinging his fist, and hitting her each time. Suzuka was paying no attention to the ongoing match, but looked through outh the crowd, finding no one. Suzuka's heart began to ache moor then the metal fist of the Hucast's.

"Maybe he's not comming."

"He's not I know it."

Suzuka droped to her knees and started to lose hope. Brutus took advantage of this situation by kicking Suzuka in the face. Suzuka fell backward onto the concrete stage, Suzuka didn't even attempt to get up, she just layed there thinking to herself. "Why didn't you show." Tears began rolling down her face, as the crowd began to boo. In her head Suzuka thought to her self "One more time, I'll look once more." Suzuka stood up and looked through the crowd, finally spoting the man she wished to be with.

"Oh no I hope he didn't see me cry... Okay he's here so I can't lose.... Not to a weakling like you."

"Weakling? I knocked you to the floor, and I'll do it again if I want."

Brutus pulled his partisian out and began to swing wildly at Suzuka. Suzuka noticed his swinging paterns and dodged each swing, she then droped to her knees to sweep Brutus off his feet, Brutus fell down but got back up quickly.

"You bitch, how dare you pull out suck a cheap trick."

"Cheap... but effective."

"You'll pay for that."

Brutus picked his partisan up and took one gigantic swing at Suzuka, Suzuka didn't move but instead swung her fist into the shaft of the partisian cuasing it to snap in two.

"Ahh you broke it. You broke my partisan."

"And next will be your face."

" No no no I'm sorry I give up."

Brutus picked up his broken partisan and ran out of the arena screaming.

"We have a winner ladies and Gentlemen, and she is the lovely Suzuka." The referee anounced.

"Okay Suzuka it's time to tell him, time to let him know how I really feel... No I can't he probably didn't come to see me, he probably just came to see a fight." Suzuka thought to herself. "I know i'll find some other way to tell him."

Suzuka then walked off the stage and out of the arena.

"Next weekend to celebrate the upcoming holiday, we will have a easter rappy hunt for our hunters. Till next time this is your anouncer saying take care."
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"We'll I'm just about ready for some food." Paperweight said holding his stomach.

"Me too, I'm starved." Juju answered back.

"Let's go eat dinner guys."

Everyone but Cakey got up to leave.

"Hey Cakey you coming?" Jin asked.

"Yeah I'll meet you guys there."

"Umm Okay."

The three of them walked out of the arena, while Cakey sat down, and began thinking to himself, as he clenched an item in his pocket.

"Suzuka.... I will beat you in three weeks. No matter what."
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Later that night everyone rested like they have never rested before, Jin and Juju shared, a room in Cakey's store. Everyone was sleeping except Cakey, he just sat outside staring at the sky, admiring the stars for there serene beauty. "Cakey your still up." Cakey turned his head to see who it was, it was Juju walking up to him and then taking a seat next to him.

"Oh it's you Juju."

"Why are you still up?"

"I'm always up, sleeping is just a waste of time."

"That's not good."

"I don't like to sleep."

"Why not?"

"Dream's I hate dreams okay."

"That's a silly reason, dreams are beautiful, you could dream of things you like, things you wish you had, and even people you wish you had. Dreams are like an escape from reality." Juju said smilling at Cakey.

"But whenever I dream it comes true. Everything I dream of comes true, it's like I can predict the future through my dreams."

"Well thats a good thing right."

"Not if you only dream about bad things, I knew everything that would happen on Ragol, I knew about it all but no one would listen." Cakey sat there and smiled.

"You know Cakey your smiles scare me.... Whenever you smile I can tell that your hurting, like you use your smile as a sheild to prevent people from seeing your true feelings." Juju leaned over to hold Cakey. Cakey did nothing to accept her hug but did not hug her back either. Cakey and Juju remained there for a while just sitting gazing at the stars.

"HEY CAKEY, JUJU!" Paperweight came running waving his hands in the air.

"What is it Paperweight?"

"Come on open the store."

"Why it's still night."

"Night? It's always night here on Pioneer. I called a clan meeting and I'm using your store as our Headquarters."

"Oh alright."

"Hey Cakey the strangest thing happened to me while I was walking here, I accidently steped on a short fat FOnewman, and he swore he would get revenge. So I told him, listen Mister if you try anything I swear I'll kick your beachball ass.HAHAHA! Isn't that hillarious."

"Short Fat FOnewman?"

"Yeah, what a joke right."

"I guess."

"Hey let's go inside and wait for Daigoyin."
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"Shit I'm gonna be late" Daigoyin yelled as he rushed down the street trying to get to the .Netcade. He ran past everyone knocking a few down, when a cloaked man steped in his way.

"Daigoyin. I knew you would be running in this direction." The cloaked man told Daigoyin.

"Who are you?"

"Just call me an advisor."

"An advisor?"

"Well more of a prophett, but I have something to tell you, and only you should know."

"Well okay what?"

"Your clan burning will face Cakey, in an exobition match some time this season. You must kill Cakey in that match, or pioneer two will be destroyed."

"Kill Cakey?"

"Yes the fate of Pioneer 2 is in your hands now."

The electricity suddenly wen't off, but when it returned the cloaked man was gone.

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"Did you tell him?" The voice behind the chair told the cloaked man.

"Yes my master."

"Good, once Cakey is out of the way we will be the strongest hunters in existance....."

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"You know Cakey your smiles scare me.... Whenever you smile I can tell that your hurting, like you use your smile as a sheild to prevent people from seeing your true feelings." ---Juju---


------------Recap-----------
Suzuka defeats Brutus

=====Preview of next chapter====
What the? Jin and Paperweight have been transformed into newmans... Who did this? They have to transform back before the weekend or they will lose the match for sure... Next Episode NOL The Mysterious Hacker..

[midi]

Good so far but where do I make an appearence¿