[Shar]

Hello,

Well this is my first drawing related to anime/manga. Not with pso, though. And I was wondering what you people thought of it.

I know, it's nothing compared to other fan art. And I also know I made a few mistakes.
Even though, I want some advices, and what you think of this "first-timer".

Thanks.

http://img65.exs.cx/img65/3036/FirstCreation1.jpg

[theendisnear]

yay, first timer

anyways, heh, to the point:
i think the head is ok and the torso and legs are fine, but the arms dont look right and it seems to me that those hands are far too small.

now im not trying to be mean, you have a lot of potential to do great psoy things. but hey, its criticism


keep going.

[Shar]

On 2004-10-07 15:33, theendisnear wrote:
yay, first timer

anyways, heh, to the point:
i think the head is ok and the torso and legs are fine, but the arms dont look right and it seems to me that those hands are far too small.

now im not trying to be mean, you have a lot of potential to do great psoy things. but hey, its criticism


keep going.

Thanks for your reply. And you're right about the hands, they should be larger. And the arms, I know what you mean, but I still don't know how to get it "right". Guess practice will do it

[Cell132]

Well, I think it's both practice, and study. Just look at yourself in the mirror and see how you move, and learn from it. Just a suggestion though.

[Scejntjynahl]

I suggest you get a wooden poseable doll (forget the name of it) it will help with proportions and posing. Rule of thumb, the open hand is at times as big as the face...the hands in your drawing are a bit in the small side. Good luck