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Sayara · 03-29-2006, 08:54 PM

Looking for critique ere.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...pringgirly.jpg

Once given some, I'll finish er up. I am concerned about her windyed dress.

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navci · 03-29-2006, 09:02 PM

I don't know why but she has some Miyazaki feel to her. I quite like.

PJ · 03-29-2006, 09:47 PM

It's totally cute

...I shouldn't take titles so literally, but I expected... a garden

navci · 03-30-2006, 04:04 PM

Sorry I was too tired last night I didn't have a good look enough to give you more useful info.

I will just point out what might be a potential buggness to people.

Anatomy:
1. Her hat doesn't seem to be sitting on the right place. Possibly a bit to the right, see where the hat shape shoould be? Right now it just seem like it is gonna fall off, or fly off.

2. Shoulder a bit uneven. Left shoulder is smaller, hidden? (my left)

3. Overally speaking, I am not sure if her legs are too long or is it her arms that is too short. Arms usually are about half way into the thigh in length. As is I think they are a tad short. Or the legs too long.

I like the wind a lot. I think you should keep it. But the way her legs are standing makes me think she is going to fall over. If she spread them a little more apart, just a little. It might give her more support like she is standing more steadily.

Now. I want some clouds. And a garden. GET TO WORK.

Sayara · 03-30-2006, 06:36 PM

I think i fixed what you said, AND added Clouds.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...han/Girly2.jpg
Let this be draft #2. As the title states, the garden is so tiny compared to her giant body XD

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Sayara · 03-31-2006, 04:48 PM

Ok. Since we got no major concerns (just ignored? )
Here is a finale.

Yes, dig the swirly arabic in the corner. It says "Garden"

navci · 04-03-2006, 03:25 PM

Tingly, if you desire. I think this could become a nice painting of some sort. I like the layout a lot. And swirly lines. Hard to make out that arabic word tho. :> It feels very fresh. :>

Skuda · 04-04-2006, 09:28 PM

XO

how could I forget to post in here?

That is a wonderful picture Tingle!

I agree with navi on two counts

it does have a Miyazaki feel, and for the love of god! paint this!!

DD