Tact
Jun 10, 2007, 05:37 PM
Alright, sorry for being nitpicky here, and I realize that most of this is made of typos. I've found some spelling/grammar to point out.
http://www.pso-world.com/beastiary/psu/1/14/omnagoug/
This page has two different spellings for the same enemy. Is it "Onmagoug" or "Omnagoug"?
http://www.pso-world.com/beastiary/psu/1/34/bil_de_vear/
Once again, two spellings for the same enemy. "Bil De Vear" or "Bil De Bear"?
http://www.pso-world.com/beastiary/psu/1/40/galvapas/
"It possesses a rushing, stomping, and tail swipe attacks." Perhaps this can be reworded?
http://www.pso-world.com/beastiary/psu/1/76/grinna_bete_s/
"It also possesses a rushing attacking."
http://www.pso-world.com/beastiary/psu/1/31/jishagara/
"A medium-sized monster that prefers to charge an opponents." Simple rewording.
http://www.pso-world.com/beastiary/psu/1/51/lutus_jigga/
"Lutus Jigga" or "Lutus Jiggia"?
http://www.pso-world.com/beastiary/psu/1/88/magas_maggahna/
"The core can be left intact for the duration of the fight if players focus soley on attacking the arms." Typo/misspelling.
http://www.pso-world.com/beastiary/psu/1/55/seed_vance/
In the description, there are no hyphens in SEED-Vance. Yet, everywhere else the name is used, it's hyphenated.
http://www.pso-world.com/beastiary/psu/1/10/shagreece/ also in http://www.pso-world.com/beastiary/psu/1/32/zoona/
"It can also breath fire." Typo/misspelling?
http://www.pso-world.com/beastiary/psu/1/52/volfu/
"The Volfu is a medium-sized creature that likes to circles it prey." S in the wrong word?
http://www.pso-world.com/beastiary/psu/1/14/omnagoug/
This page has two different spellings for the same enemy. Is it "Onmagoug" or "Omnagoug"?
http://www.pso-world.com/beastiary/psu/1/34/bil_de_vear/
Once again, two spellings for the same enemy. "Bil De Vear" or "Bil De Bear"?
http://www.pso-world.com/beastiary/psu/1/40/galvapas/
"It possesses a rushing, stomping, and tail swipe attacks." Perhaps this can be reworded?
http://www.pso-world.com/beastiary/psu/1/76/grinna_bete_s/
"It also possesses a rushing attacking."
http://www.pso-world.com/beastiary/psu/1/31/jishagara/
"A medium-sized monster that prefers to charge an opponents." Simple rewording.
http://www.pso-world.com/beastiary/psu/1/51/lutus_jigga/
"Lutus Jigga" or "Lutus Jiggia"?
http://www.pso-world.com/beastiary/psu/1/88/magas_maggahna/
"The core can be left intact for the duration of the fight if players focus soley on attacking the arms." Typo/misspelling.
http://www.pso-world.com/beastiary/psu/1/55/seed_vance/
In the description, there are no hyphens in SEED-Vance. Yet, everywhere else the name is used, it's hyphenated.
http://www.pso-world.com/beastiary/psu/1/10/shagreece/ also in http://www.pso-world.com/beastiary/psu/1/32/zoona/
"It can also breath fire." Typo/misspelling?
http://www.pso-world.com/beastiary/psu/1/52/volfu/
"The Volfu is a medium-sized creature that likes to circles it prey." S in the wrong word?